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Home»Fan Fiction»Pyaar (Ragsan) Part 1 by Aliya
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Pyaar (Ragsan) Part 1 by Aliya

A12345By A12345January 1, 201823 Comments7 Mins Read
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New year surprise by me! Hope you will like it!

Let’s begin….

2011
A girl enters the college it was her first day!
A wide smile assists in her face..
Shree is revealed to RAGINI

(RAGINI IS A SIMPLE MIDDLE CLASS GIRL..she hv reached to the Delhi’s most famous excel college by her scholarship and also a traditional girl)

She was abt to step in….a girl stops her
She looks at the girl from the top to bottom bcs she is wearing a mini skirt and crop top…

Girl:before you enter the college you hv to give your intro and salute the most famous girl in the college..
She points to the direction
Rag looks at the direction
A girl was sitting and was ragging few students

She is revealed to SWARA…SWARA MALHOTRA..a spoilt brat…

Swara looks at rag..:hey you.. Come here

Rag moves to her

Sw: by your dressing only can understand that you are a low class…
She said with a attitude

Rag smiles: thankyou…
Sw:i didn’t praised you
Rag: i know that.. Bt ppl like you will understand by this language only
This hurted swara’s ego…

Sw:soniya..see my shoes hv got mud.. she is off that level infront of me
Sw smirks
Rag just smiles
Sw: so clean..now
Rag just stands there
Sw:i did clean…you..

A girl comes to rag:do watever she says..she wont leave the person who hurts her ego

Rag:is that so?then look Ms i won’t do that… Even if you beg infront of me!
Sw:you… Do you think you are a princess
Rag:no no i don’t think..bcs i m…of my parents…
Sw and her gang laughs

Rag:now excuse me!
She was abt to go….
Sw held her hand:clean my shoes now!
Rag:i won’t… Wat vl u do?
This girl was getting into swara’s nerves
Soniya: do you know whom you are taking to? She is the daughter of the College MD
Rag: so wat??

Sw:so you r not going to do
Rag:no!
Swara slaps Ragini hard!
Rag was shocked!
Sw:if you didn’t budge to swara’s orders then.. You vl get the same type of treatment!
Rag just keeps on looking at her
While everyone are laughing at Ragini

Soniya:aww..baby ko bura laga!
Sw smriks: ofcourse bura lagega..bcs she has faced swara on her first day of college…
Soniya: these cheap trying to compete with swara..bt end up with….

Rag:yes you r ryte..i shouldnt compete with..S.. Watever..
She turns!

All laughs

Rag turns and scratches her forehead
Rag:bt i forgot to give you a return gift which u gave me

She slaps Swara..the force so hard that swara stumbled

Everyone who were laughing a sec back..their eyes hv come out of the socket due to shock!

Soniya has opened her mouth due to shock

Rag smiles:aww..baby ko bura laga!wn someone tries to compete with Ragini na.. They end up with…. She smiles
She blows her which were near her eyes and smiles.. And goes from there

Sw bangs a wall… In frustration…

Rag goes to class..
A girl comes to her

Everyone are avoiding her

That girl goes to Rag
Girl:u were same girl ryte who slapped that girl..senior
Rag doesn’t know wat to say..
Girl:no need to worry..i m on your side only….i m avni
(Played by kanchi singh)
Rag smiles: Ragini
Avni:i was so happy seeing that girls face…
SHE LAUGHS remembering swara’s face! Wn ragini slapped her

Soon the class fills…

A peon comes there and calls ragini
Avni:i think that girl is behind this!
Rag: let me see wat she vl do!

She goes to Dean’s office!

There she sees swara and her gang

Rag enters there
Principal: so Ms.Ragini..
Rag:yes sir!
P:u tried to misbehave with SWARA MALHOTRA…
Rag: bt sir…
P:u r a merit student…and if you continue to misbehave with other students then i would be forced to cancel your scholarship!
Rag:bt sir i….
P:so now…say sorry to SWARA
Rag tries to defend bt principal isn’t listening to her.. She looks at swara.. Who was smirking at her

Rag:i m sorry!
P:u may go now..

Both goes out
Sw:ch ch ch…dekho dekho jungli billi ab bheegi billi ban gayi!
Rag doesn’t say anything bt she was abt to go
Sw lil loudly: today i hv to clean my hand properly..dont know from which chawl she belongs to… Her gems will affect me
Rag stops she didn’t turn: one advice Ms…clean your cheeks carefully..bcs i hv slapped there..may be it would hurt there!
She goes

Sw:ahhh…just wait and watch!Ms.behen ji..wat i m gonna do..

Few days passed like this…
SwaRag used to hv fight…
Swara used her status while Ragini used her smartness…

Swara’s ego hurted her a lot! She doesn’t know how to take her revenge on ragini.. She didn’t forget the slap…

Rag goes to library…
Sw silently comes and send everyone out from there…. And locks the library
Rag after getting the book.. Was shocked to find the door locked!
She bangs the door

Everyone hv left…
Rag starts to cry…. She isn’t hvng her phone

It was 6

She listens someone walking
Voice:Ragini u there!
Rag: avni..avni….
Avni:ragini!
Watchman opens the door..
Rag was crying… She was breathing heavily…
Avni hugs her: don’t worry nthng.. Hpnd.. By how you got lock
Rag: i..i..i.. don’t know…..i..i was…
Avni cups her face: it’s ok..lets go…i think its that swara’s plan

Rag was scared of being alone..

A new day..

Rag and avni comes to the college…

Soniya comes there… She is having something in her hand
She suddenly comes infront of Rag and applies it on her face… Rag held her hand..
Soniya smirks

Rag Twists her hand…
Soniya screams in pain
Rag leaves her hand sensing Everyone who are taking Ragini’s photo
Avni: ragini… She tries to wipe bt it isnt going from her face…
Avni:lets go to washroom…
They moves
Sw comes there and pushes rag from behind…
Rag falls…
Sw faces Rag
She bends…
Sw: wn you vl play with sw na..u vl fall like this..and now tho..i hv to make your life a living hell..just wait and watch…
Avni: listen swara….
Sw: I didn’t gave permission for you to speak…
Sw goes

Avni glares her… She makes Ragini stand
Some bits try to take her photo..
Avni throws their phone..
They goes to washroom

Rag cleans her face..
She remembers swara’s words….

Avni: don’t think of her Rag!
Rag doesn’t speak anything
She moves outside

Avni follows her!

Rag was moving without seeing… She dashes to someone!
Rag: i m sorry…
Voice: it’s ok…can you tell me wr is dean’s office? Actually i hv lost the way?
Finding no reply
That guy: hey..miss u there…
Avni comes there
Rag who was frustrated: yes… Just to get insulted everywhere.. Now even you want to……
Avni:Ragini…sorry..she was lil frustrated!
And the guy looks at Ragini
He is revealed to be Sanskar
Avni:go straight and take left!
San still looking at Ragini: ok thanks..
He goes

Avni: ragini why r u taking out your frustration on him …
Rag: i don’t know avni…bt today..
She goes

To be continued…..

I couldn’t give any spcl for new year..
I thought to write this story as os..bt couldn’t….

 

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A12345

    Fan of drashti&gurmeet and obviously tevar my ragsan???i get new story on them everyday bt too busy to write?

    23 Comments

    1. manu on January 1, 2018 6:30 pm

      Nyc. Happy new year.

    2. Rikashini on January 1, 2018 6:35 pm

      Awesome. Omg what an attitude rags.

    3. vini on January 1, 2018 6:37 pm

      awesome. Wishing you a very happy new year.

    4. mk on January 1, 2018 7:08 pm

      Amazing dr. Fabulous concept.

    5. RAGSANIAN on January 1, 2018 7:15 pm

      Amazingggg this is the best new gift which that chipkali is negative in our couple story.

    6. nive on January 1, 2018 7:33 pm

      Sissssssy damn interesting plot. Looking forward to it. Have a great year ahead.

    7. PriyaS on January 1, 2018 7:58 pm

      Awesome start

    8. geet on January 1, 2018 8:24 pm

      Fab concept aliya. Plsssssssssss update na pyaar ki daastan.

    9. sug on January 1, 2018 9:07 pm

      Nice start.

    10. asra on January 1, 2018 9:57 pm

      fabulous dear….loved it alot…eagerly waiting for nxt one…
      Happy New year dear….tkcr

    11. Neethu on January 1, 2018 9:57 pm

      Awesome. Wish you a very happy new year.

    12. aditi on January 1, 2018 10:21 pm

      Awesome yaar. Rags u should have slap more . She deserves more slap. Disgusting swara??????

    13. Ria on January 1, 2018 10:56 pm

      Awesome di….. Update complicated…

    14. moni on January 1, 2018 11:30 pm

      Nice

    15. chandana on January 1, 2018 11:51 pm

      Awsome buddy…happy new year…where is new year gift fr me???plss post complicated ff plzzzz plzzzzz

    16. Ammy on January 2, 2018 12:32 am

      Nice

    17. Ishu on January 2, 2018 8:55 am

      Nice

    18. maha on January 2, 2018 11:22 am

      Superb.

    19. keerthi on January 2, 2018 12:13 pm

      Awesomeee. Even I’m also waiting for complicated ff.

    20. shalini on January 2, 2018 2:16 pm

      Nice

    21. vani on January 2, 2018 3:43 pm

      Superb dear

    22. Bela on January 2, 2018 10:38 pm

      Wow, interesting to see how it will turn out??

    23. Rehna on January 9, 2018 11:53 pm

      Superb

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