hi every1 i a back again all i wanna tell u is i need comments to withstand over myself here..n thnks fr loveleen,srija,ria,sayeeda(thnks fr u curiosity dear),sadaf khan,romaisah,hima,zikra,salma(thnks fr compliment on my name)sam.
NOTE:(its a extraa like good words fr u people,if u dont like it i wont add it)
“LIFE LAUGHS AT U WN U R UNHAPPY,LIFE SMILES AT U WN U R HAPPY BT LIFE SALUTES AT U WN U MAKE OTHERS HAPPY”keep smiling n make others to smile
CHAPTER 2 OF PYAAR KI ROSHNI:
Haa..come plz sit in d car..its my car only now uv left we both hv to go home come,let me start my story…as u knw every1 s life starts at schooling,even mine i was a bookworm in my school n even ranked every year all teachers loved me as in d same way i was s o social with my frndss they also liked me a lott in one word i was a pet for my school,my father n mother were business couple they gave me evrything i want all i knw they expect only good name n result from me in return as i told u bfore uv was my neighbour and my frnd since childhood m,any times he helped me a lott like putting on my cycles wheel chain,bringing mr food stuff,guarding me carefully n all…bt no one had a bad intension on us even we also dny hd wrong things in our mind….we had a god given relation which was pure enough.
I am a bookworm i used to spend most of the time as u knw toppers dont hv friends i also didnt had gud frnds to share my things bt though i was good with all of my frnds in schul they used to avoid me smetimes which hurt me a lott though i had uv hw can i share sme prblms with a boy as i am a girl…bt i had a good brain llike i can estimate n judge a person asily bt takes time fr it…i wnt underestimate any1 bt if i judge i will be damn 100%sure…let me guess as u r with me now u r getting more curious to knw abt me right..see how i guessed dats me n by d way u r getting bored smewr right…k…see here my home came come lets go in..
A BIG VILLA IS SHOWN SHE ENTERED THE VILLA BY OPENING THE DOOR IT HAD A LAVISH HALL WITH A TV N SOFA OF BLACK N WHITE N A SMALL KITCHEN WITH DINNING ROOM N 2 ROOMS…1 FOR HER N ONE FOR GUESTS…
(i will use name as roshni coz at present she is roshni roy)
ROSHNI:hey y u stopped thr nly come in plz sit..
(she is calling u nly frnds plz sit)
R:hmm..first let me call uv n inform him..orelse he will be tensed..
she took her phone n called him..
U:hello twinki u alright..any problem?
R:no baba i am fine i reached now u sleep na..
U:k tmrw u hv to leave at 8am u hv a shoot
R:haa k..i will be ready..
she kept the phone n smiles….
u knw how much uv cares for me…bt now i am tired of todays shoot as now u came to know abt my school life na from tommorrow we will start as u r also feeling sleepy na…u go n take rest in guest room i will sleep now….
NEXT DAY MRNG…@8AM
Roshni was ready as she came out she wore a black jeans n red crop top with sleeves n was simply superb as she was little late she hurriedly went with uv who wa waiting fr her they both left in car for shooting spot…..
SAMAR:sry to say this ya i cant do dis
SARA:bt wt abt our love
SAMAR:dnt be stupid i cant cheat my parents i talked to thm they didnt liked u..
SARA:s..nly bcoz i am orphan..
SAMAR:noo nt like dat
SAARA:thn wt..u need a family or money ur parents need a highly paying girl for their son..
SAMAR:STOP IT U IDIOT(at peak anger)
SARA was full of tears as she heard dat for the first time she saw samar s anger for her tears went continously down d cheeks…hamari adhuri kahani..hamari adhuri kahani…plays in bg…
SARA:done…it wnt work out..gud bye MR.samar forever n ever dnt try to come back…
as she was about to continue samar left the plays…she sat their nly crying desperatly…..
CCUUUUUTTTTT……
roshni s shot got over she was fab in acting as she was coming she wiped her tears with tissue…she was searching fr her manager…she sat on a bench alone thr…
(she is speaking to rreaders)
R:oh..hi frndss sry i came early to shooting leaving u in my home sry fr dat…k let me tell u my story now……
****************CHAPTER 2 ENDS HERE***************
PRECAP:TWINKLE S ADHURI KAHANI WITH KUNJ
from next epi we r going into actuall part of the story hope u liked it sry if i wasted ur time…
LOVE..
ROSE
12 Comments
very nice ????
continue asap
Amazing curious to know more about the story
No Rose u didn’t wasted our time in fact it was too good nd writing in the first person is quite difficult as that was my worst in English grammar …hahhhaa….but u made it so awesome that when I read it I can literally feel that Twinkle herself is telling her story to us ….
Waiting for the next one..
Awesome but longer next time
Awsum… 🙂
Amazing… and, I liked your idea of writing it in the first person.
Writing in 1st person is a gr8 idea gr8 start … Nice..
Really fab, loved it to the core
uh added urself in this ff
It’s awesome… i just love it…
Amazing superb eagerly waiting for d nxt update plzzzzz update asap
nice…….. one dear……….. what u have said in the beginning is absolutely right……. that LIFE LAUGHS AT U WHEN U R UNHAPPY…………IT WOULD MAKE FUN OF US WHEN WE CRY……..SO WE SHOULD FACE ALL THE CHALLENGES THAT LIFE PLACES INFRONT OF US WITH A SMILING FACE……. this is the thing that we all should keep in our mind………
any ways lets move on to ur story…. its awesome….. a truely new concept….. loved it…….. post the next one soon……. love u princess………. 🙂