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Home»Fan Fiction»pyaar ki ek kahaani (avneil) Part 1
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pyaar ki ek kahaani (avneil) Part 1

Manishamanasmita003By Manishamanasmita003September 28, 2017Updated:October 1, 20176 Comments3 Mins Read
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Hlw guys this is Manisha n I m writing a ff for the first time n I m very excited so let’s get started

This story is about avneil who always be fighting together but don’t know how they ? love each other

Avni mehta is studying computer science in a college where she meets a new student Neil khanna. They hate each other…

At college
Amol (Avni bro)- dii today z ur very imp class all the best
Avni-Thank u so much………
Rhea(Avni sis)- koi mujhe b toh all d best bolo
Amol-fine yaar all d best
Ali( Avni friend)-chalo let’s go it’s already late
Amol-fine let’s go

Suddenly someone throw a ball ⚽ on Avni and she faint…….. This was Neil who do dis
Neil- oh Teri what I do OMG help me
Sid(Neil friend) -are what u done yaar…. We gone
Neil-stop it yaar let’s go to see what happen

Neil go to Avni n throw water ? on her face then she woke up
Neil- oh hello ma’am get up
Avni – aah!
Neil-r u fine????
Ali-wht the he’ll…. Tumhari himmat kaise hui…
Neil-ohh hello firstly I m helping u n u r behaving me like dis
Rhea -jaisa kaam waisa inaam
Amol-just stop it don’t start taunting each other…. Focus on dii….dii get up
Avni – aah who z d hell who do that
Neil – it’s me
Sid – stop it Neil she will complain to principal ma’am
Neil-i don’t care
Avni- just stop it u have no common sense in ur mind firstly u hit me on football n then u r not saying sorry to me
Neil- Neil don’t say sorry to anyone
Avni- itna tevar I don’t like u
Neil- oh hello ma’am I don’t like u at all..

They go in their opposite direction angrily

At Avni home

Ketan (Avni chachu)- (on phn) ji prakash ji tomorrow z dussehra festival n I m inviting u with ur family come n enjoy……I m not saying dis my mom is saying that so at all u have to come…..jbi bye
Neela (Avni mom)-whom r u inviting?
Ketan- dis is prakash ji we r collaborating our business with him..
Neela-ohh
Daunahanti(Avni grand maa)- chalo yeh bhi ho gaya…. Neela do all the works which z imp..I don’t want to make any problems in festival
Neela- ji maa

Precap- Avni is doing decoration…. Suddenly she fall from tool and Neil catches him…ae dil hai mushkil plays

I knw it is very short…. But from next I will post long….

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    6 Comments

    1. Aisha on September 29, 2017 12:24 am

      Loved it make the episode longer post soon

      • Manishamanasmita003 on September 29, 2017 1:23 pm

        Thank u so much…..i will post the next longer part soon

    2. Sweetgirl7 on September 29, 2017 4:31 pm

      yaar it is too good.but u shuldn’t tell how the story is at start to keep the suspense..this ff was lovely.do post soon unlike some authors who just post the prologue and then leave the story…i wish ur story gets hundreds of comments.friends dear….and manisha was my teacher too.i mean her name was manisha…

      • Manishamanasmita003 on September 29, 2017 4:52 pm

        Thank u…..I will try my level best to make story more interesting

      • Manishamanasmita003 on September 29, 2017 4:53 pm

        Thank u….@ sweetgirl7.I will try my level best to make story more interesting

      • Sweetgirl7 on September 29, 2017 5:41 pm

        call me sami dear

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