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Pyaar Ki Dastan (Rivanya, Naagin) – Episode 12

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In the morning

Yamini :  I’ve to call Shesha.  Shesha, Shesha

Shesha comes there in snake form.

Shesha :  What happened?  Overacting ki dukaan

Yamini :  Kali Naagin!  How to kill your sister.
That Shivanya.

Shesha : You can’t kill her so can’t I . There is only one person in the world who can kill her half.

Yamini :  Who is that ? Why only half?

Shesha : Donkey minded! Its ritik and half because Ritik saves her all the times. If we’ll expose her then you can kill her .

Yamini :  That’s a good idea!  But how will we do this?

Shesha : You think that, Bye . Okd I mean Overacting ki dukaan. .

In the evening

Yamini gathered everyone in the hall and handed Shivanya a belpatra. She was exposed . 

Ritik : Shivanyaaaa you’re a Naagin.  I hate you . Go out of the house

Shivanya :  Ritik please listen to me .

Shivanya and Ritik parted. Yamini goes to the jungle and sees Shivanya infront od Shiv idol. She goes and stabs her from her back. She stabs her repeatedly.  Then she gets unconscious but does not dies. Yamini thinks she died and goes away from there.

Yamini calls Ritik and tells him to bring the Naagmani.  Ritik brings the Naagmani . Yamini thinks of killing Ritik and stabbed him repeatedly . Ritik falls down the river thinking of Shivanya.

Here Shiv ji changes his flow of Ganga on Shivanya’s wound. When the sacred ganga water fell on Shivanya’s wound it healed and Shivanya got consious.  She saw a image of Ritik and went to save him. She pulled him and made him drink Gangaa water. Ritik got consious and hugged Shivanya.

Ritik : The person who loved me the most , the person who saved my life several times without caring without for her life, How can I hate her. Now I understand why you always got away from me?

Shivanya and Ritik had moments together. They decided to take revenge from Yamini.

Precap : Angad, Divya and Amrita to know about Yamini

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28 Comments

    • alia khan on

      Hii everyone. As you all I also write a ff. But I don’t know what problem occurs. When I give all the details and the security question, and I click the button of submission it gives me the answer “Please do not load this page directly! Thanks!” Does anyone knows the solution to my problem.. plz plz plz reply.
      RS siddhi shreya!

  3. ur hater on

    What is this u don’t have sense writing ?how u write u copied it from nagin serial
    U don’t have your own ideas just use your mind GET LOST now don’t write
    N her supporters now don’t say ” she writes well u go n write then u will know”

    For your kind information I write many ff
    N I have many followers

    • Shreyaa on

      Do not think very high of yourself. We all like what RS has written.And dare you tell all these to RS. First you prove your ability and then comment about others

  5. ur hater on

    Shut up siddhi I have written 25 ff an 26 is still going on n I have written 5 os n will be writing 6 on this wednesday or Thursday I m bit busy so see n talk

    • Siddhi (Rivanya fan) on

      Really but if u can’t appreciate anyone then pls Atleast don’t low there confidence.Read my ff naagin love forever and Naagin Season 2 then u will know why I like this ff.and don’t comment on them.

    • RS on

      Oh hello hater . If you’ve any problem then don’t comment . Be a silent reader. Siddhi writes very nice in fact she writes wonderful .And you’re saying that you wrote 25 or 26 ffs and 5 or 6 Os then I’m sure you would have discontinued all the ffs and os or you wouldn’t have got the response. Siddhi is a very good writer. Don’t dare comment in Siddhi or my ff. #ur hater

  6. RS on

    I really agree with Siddhi ! If you don’t know how to appreciate and moralize ff writer then don’t comment anywhere be a silent reader.

    And give names of your ff , I’ll see how you write , then you can abandon anyone #ur hater

  7. RS on

    Thanks Siddhi! By the way I’m ending this ff! If any of you have problems then comment here.

  9. ur hater on

    Haaa haaa just end it no one reads it n RS how dare u say that I have completed all my ff I never disappointed people except those who disappoint me n u did don’t dare to say that n end your ff

    • Siddhi (Rivanya fan) on

      See i don’t want to fight with you but pls don’t abuse RS see if you will abuse him then you will get punishment as my father is a cluster manager and he can find you easily so mind ur language.

    • RS on

      Siddhi, I’m a girl and you said ‘abuse him ‘
      Ok let it be

      And you mr. Hater could you stop behaving like that and can you give the names of your ff.If you don’t give then we will think that you’ve not written anything . Kindly either gives names of your ffs or stop abusing me and my friend #ur hater

  13. soni on

    Don’t fight with UR HATER she don’t deserve this she don’t know only how to write n abusing others mind your language ur hater NO ONE CAN COMPARE RS she writes very well the way she writes no one can write
    N give the name of your ff n vaise bhi nhi dogi toh accha hi hai vaise bhi tumhare ff padke we don’t have to waste time get it so don’t dare to say a word to RS

    • RS on

      Thanks Soni for your comment. And also thanks for that comment in Ishra, Naagin and kukum bhagya love story