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Home»Fan Fiction»PYAAR KI DAASTHAN (RAGSAN AND SWALAK FF) pt 1 by Aliya
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PYAAR KI DAASTHAN (RAGSAN AND SWALAK FF) pt 1 by Aliya

A12345By A12345September 9, 201722 Comments9 Mins Read
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Let’s begin…… With first part of pyaar ki daasthan

Canada…..
We can see a board “reunion celebrations”

It was fully dark… Spot light falls on one guy.. He was holding guitar
His back was faced… Slowly he turns……… And his face is revealed to be SANSKAR
he smiles widely…..

San:Haan aa…

He remembered a lil girl who laughing
And calling him RAJ

Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye

Another guy comes running there….. He takes a guitar which was placed there.. San smiles at him.. He was revealed to be LAKSH

Lak:Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye

Haan hum badalne lage
Girne sambhalne lage
Jab se hai jaana tumhein
Teri ore chalne lage

SAN:Haan hum badalne lage
Girne sambhalne lage
Jab se hai jaana tumhein
Teri ore chalne lage

Lak:Har safar har jagah
Har kahin ban gaye
Maante thhe Khuda
Aur haan wahi ban gaye

Lak remembers a lil girl who was glaring a lil boy…. He smiles widely

Haan hansi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan 
Meri zameen ban gaye

Both sanlak look at eachother and smiles

San:Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye

Lak:Pehchaante hi nahi ab log tanha mujhe
Meri nigaahon mein bhi hai dhoondte wo tujhe
Lak remembers a lil boy making pranks over a lil girl

San:Pehchaante hi nahi ab log tanha mujhe
Meri nigaahon mein bhi hai dhoondte wo tujhe
San remembers lil girl hugging a lil boy and crying

Sanlak:Hum the dhoondhte jisey wo kami ban gaye
Tum mere ishq ki sar-zameen ban gaye

Both were remembering their childhood

Lak:Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan 
Meri zameen ban gaye

San:Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye

O.. aa…

Everyone claps

Sanlak friends come to them
Omi:in these 18 yrs
Lak:omi.. Dont start it again
Kajal:atleast tell now who r you love
Lak:love no ways
San looks at him with IS IT? Look
San smiles:she’s not only my love bt she’s my life
Omi:finally u said it
San:bcs i m going to her.. She vl be waiting for me
Kajal:aww….
Lak pouting:bt i know that al pacino will not
Ajay:wat wat al pacino
San:ah ah i vl say…. Swara our friend from childhood….
Lak:she’s not swara bhai she’s al pacino
Kajal :bt why
Lak:didnt u know al pacino never left kevin.. He roamed behind him….
Kaj:ha tho
Lak:she’s same like that…. She’s gives lecture to me… She acts as al pacino a devil advocate… Bt……. In these 18 yrs i miss her a lot
All:ohhhh…
Kaj:sanky… Its ur turn
San:Ragini my senorita…..my support my lucky charm my happiness my breath I can only say that…. she’s my everything… Tmrw mrng we r going to them
Lak:and you know the special news… Bhai is going to propose Ragini….
San smiles
All wishes him the best

Next mrng
Sanlak both boards the flight
San takes out a locket from his pocket…it had written Ragini
He sees it…

Fb
Lil rag:Raj this ones for you… She forwards her hand making a fist
San:bt wats this
Rag:first take it
San:hmm
He takes and sees the locket… It was and incomplete heart..Sanskar written in it
He smiles:locket
Rag:its not only jst a locket bt……..
She takes another locket wch had written ragini and joins it was complete heart
San then exchanges the locket
San:now its perfect….
Rag smiles:whenever you vl see this locket u vl find me…..
San:and whenever you vl see this Half locket u vl find me
Rag smiles sadly
San:i vl be back soon…. And now dont cry
Rag smiles
Fb ends

San:now i can’t live without you ragini… Now i want US to be together forever
Lak:wr r u lost bhai..
San:no i m thinking…. Ragini will be changed now….
Lak:woh tho hai… After 18 she vl be a lady
San:ha.. How she would be looking
Lak:m sure she vl be beautiful…. Bt al pacino will be like witch
San glares him:dont forget swara is my friend
Lak:i know i know
San:bt i know one thing that u cant live talking abt her…
Lak:no ways
San:hmm… I want to jst see ur reaction wn u vl see swara
Lak:ok..see.. There vl be no changes
San:dekhte hai
Lak:dekhlena

San closes his eyes and sleeps
Bt laksh was lost

Fb
Laksh pranks on swara
Sw;i hate you devil
Lak:ohhh… So sweet
Sw:u vl not know my value until i leave you
Lak laughs:u and leaving me… I know u vl haunt me in my dreams too
Sw:uuuu… Huh
Lak:thank God m going to be free
Sw:u vl know the value of me wn u vl miss me…. I vl not come to u after this
Lak:thankyou so much
Sw:i hate you
She goes from there angrily
Fb ends

Lak:this is true that i m missing you.. Al pacino.. Bt one thing u cant is… That you can’t leave me… I vl not leave you to leave me
He smiles

Later sanlak reach India
Dp rp ap suji were waiting for them…
Sanlak takes their blessings

San:papa…. We r going to swaragini
Lak:ha… U ppl go.. V vl come after meeting them

All their faces goes pale
Sanlak notices….
Suji:woh… Swaragini

San:we vl talk to you later

They goes to taxi and leaves from there
Dp rp suji ap were worried
Dp:how to say them the truth…
Suji:we should tell them the truth….
They follows them

Sanlak looks around
Lak:after 18 yrs we r here bhai.. Our India
San smiles:nthng has changed….

After a one hr they goes to one of the village…

They goes to swaragini’s house

San:we vl meet them as in the same way as childhood
Lak smiles

Sanlak looks at eachother
They getset and runs they scream:SWARAGINI
they runs they reach the door together and opens the door

They smiles and gets in
San:senorita….. Senorita… See i m back…….
Lak smiles seeing his brthrs excitement… Bt he was too not less excited…. The thing is he couldn’t express

A lady comes:excuse me who r u both?
Sanlak:can u call swaragini
Lady looks confused
Dp:sanskar… Laksh….. Thry r not here
Sanlak confused:wat do u mean they r not here
San:u mean to say that they changed the house
Lak:then tell us the address… Dad

All feels sad
Dp:woh….. Swaragini with her family………..
San:wat bade papa….
Dp:they had accident 10 yrs back…. And all…. All r no more
Sanlak were shocked
Rp:now its not their house
Ap:we got to know this few days back beta.. Wn v came here
Suji:honi ko kaun taal sakta hai

San:no no no….. This cant hpn….
He burst in tears
Lak controls himself:why we r not informed
Suji:we thought to tell u here itself……
They feels bad
San wipes his tears:no…. I know that nthng hpnd to them….
He goes followed by laksh………

Few days passed
Sanlak were broken……
All elders come to sanlak
San was sitting holding the locket
Dp:we hv fixed your marriage sanskar… From how many days u vl stay like this… They r not going to return
San rudely:i m not interested
Suji:beta plzz… Try to understand…. We hv fixed your marriage with her cousin.. You may find her in her cousin
san:no…

Lak felt that elders are ryte
Lak:plzz bhai they hv left us….
San smiles:can u see me alive
Lak looks on
San:i know nthng hpnd to them…

He gets up and goes from there….

Later laksh remembers lil swara’s words
“u vl not know my value until i leave you… u vl know the value of me wn u vl miss me…. I vl not come to u after this”

Tears flow in his eyes:al pacino i m missing you today.. I need you.. I dont know why i m feeling that bhai is ryte………u cant leave us…. Ragini u were my best friend u understand my feelings before anyone…. Now no one are there with me… In these yrs in your both’s absence too… I felt you r with me.. Bt now…..
Someone kerps hand on his shoulder
Lak turns its sanskar
Laksh hugs him:bhasi why they left us
San:they didnt laksh…. They didnt…. They vl come to us one day… They r just angry with us that we said to them we vl be back early and wn their anger goes.. They vl come running to us…
Lak nods with tears

After few days
Sanlak engrossed with work…… They had just work work work…
Both were working before

Suji:san plzzz..
San goes:mom i told my decision
Suji:if you didnt marry then i vl die…. I can’t see my son wasting his life for a person who is no more
San angrily :mom….
Suji cries
Ap:sanskar sujatha is ryte…
San:badi maa aap bhi
Ap:try to understand sanskar
San:you r not understanding me
Lak was looking at them… He dont know wat he should do
San was abt to go from there
Suji:sanskar….
She falls unconscious
San turns and was shocked….

Later doctor checks her…. Tells that she has bp problems it may lead to heart attack… She should not be given stress…
Sanskar with no other choice left.. He accepts to get married
Lak was helpless…

Precap:sanlak gets attracted….

Attracted to wat? ?

In first part itself i went too fast.. Jst bcs i dont want to drag… And plzz tell me howz this ff?
I cant promise any updates of any of my ff bcs i m busy with the projects….. So may be i update if i get free time bt i cant promise…
Until then miss me.. And miss you all

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A12345

    Fan of drashti&gurmeet and obviously tevar my ragsan???i get new story on them everyday bt too busy to write?

    22 Comments

    1. nive on September 9, 2017 7:57 am

      Awesome sissy

    2. PriyaS on September 9, 2017 9:17 am

      Nice

    3. Naymaz on September 9, 2017 9:30 am

      it was awesome di , i guess maybe truly sanlak see swaragini in their cousins ??????????don’t know but yes i wanna know , so update soon di

    4. mk on September 9, 2017 9:37 am

      Amazing dr. Waiting for next one. If possible post weekly thrice plzzz

    5. shivu213 on September 9, 2017 10:01 am

      I just love laksh

    6. RAGSANIAN on September 9, 2017 10:28 am

      Amazingggg as always but feeling sad for sanlak

    7. Vk on September 9, 2017 10:31 am

      Awesome

    8. sug on September 9, 2017 10:58 am

      Nice start

    9. Egde Black on September 9, 2017 11:10 am

      Amazing ….

    10. vani on September 9, 2017 11:14 am

      Superb. I think they didn’t die!

    11. Sreevijayan on September 9, 2017 11:35 am

      Awesomme start dear..loved it soo much

    12. shalini on September 9, 2017 12:02 pm

      Awesome

    13. AMkideewani on September 9, 2017 1:31 pm

      Fantabulous I love it❤️❤️❤️❤️

    14. keerthi on September 9, 2017 2:03 pm

      Awesomeee…

    15. geet on September 9, 2017 4:03 pm

      Superb

    16. aditi on September 9, 2017 4:23 pm

      Awesome

    17. shrilatha on September 9, 2017 6:43 pm

      First I hate this new TU page second I love it new ff…so much in love with this…by the way how is Ashfa

      • A12345 on September 9, 2017 10:23 pm

        You know she is doing llb… She’s in hostel… Everyone in our home were teasing her she can never do anything.. She’s an average student… Once she cried so my jeeju and i supported her and protected her from the fun which our siblings were making… Bt she proved wrong everyone in our family wrong she is studying law bt still she calls me and irritates me i m misding her… And she asks abt u
        Actually ashfa is my cousin my uncles daughtr
        They changed their home now it became rare to meet her…

      • shrilatha on September 9, 2017 11:47 pm

        Aww thats so cool..I am happy for her

    18. maha on September 9, 2017 8:13 pm

      Nice

    19. vini on September 9, 2017 8:15 pm

      awesome

    20. Ammy on September 9, 2017 10:01 pm

      nice

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