On a request of my best buddy and sissy JeenaKhanna…surprise for you…
An idea just popped my mind.. I dont know wn vl i update…. Bt vl try soon…
This promo and intro will be an assurance that i vl write the ff…
Here we begin with promo
One lil girl was crying….
Lil boy:dont cry plzzz… I vl be back soon
Lil girl 2 to lil boy 2:i m feeling bad for them… Bt i m the most happiest person in the world finally the devil is leaving from here atleast i vl be free
Lil boy 2:correction al pacino… Kevin is getting free from al pacino…
Lil girl 2:i hate you
Lil boy 2:wat’s the new thing…. I hate you too
Lil boy:plzzz u both…senorita plzzz dont cry…
Lil girl wipes her tears and smiles:sorry Raj….
Lil boy hugs her and all 4 has a group hug….
While lil boy & girl 1 are sad… Here lil boy girl 2 were making faces to eachother
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After 18 yrs
Guy1:wr r u….? senorita i m back…………..
He was shocked……
Guy2:no this can’t hpn…. Why we r not informed
A middle aged man:i know it would hurt you… Last yr wn we came here to meet them… We got to know that their family had accident 10 yrs before that’s why we had no news
Guy2:bt dad……
Guy1 was utterly shocked:no no no………
He burst into tears
Guy2 he was remembering the same 2 lil girls…….. He had tears in his eyes….
He wipes it and hugs his broken brother…..
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Middle aged man:we hv fixed your marriage… From how many days u vl stay like this… They r not going to return
Guy1 rudely:i m not interested
Woman:beta plzz… Try to understand…. We hv fixed your marriage with her cousin.. You may find her in her cousin
Guy:no….
Guy2:plzz bhai they hv left us….
Guy1 smiles:can u see me alive
Guy 2 looks on
Guy1:i know nthng hpnd to them…
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Guy 2:al pacino i m missing you today.. I need you.. I dont know why i m feeling that bhai is ryte………
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A girl:they r just for money.. Mom don’t worry i vl act like sati savitri
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Two girls are shown dancing…….
Guy 1 & 2 sees them…….
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Guy1:i dont want to marry her… I want to marry this girl
He points to one girl who was half hiding
Guy2:bhaiyya
Guy1:i hv decided……
Man:no u cant… She is a maid here…
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Hey frnds tell me howz it……? M waiting?
Done with the promo…
And ya i vl update ek nayi kahani soon…
Dont worry this ff will not be in the middle of my other ff…. I vl update this weekly once wn i m fully free….
So lets go to intro…..
Sanskar Maheshwari:a kind hearted person.. Loves his senorita a lot…he is back after 18 yrs only for her… Loves his brother laksh a lot.. And has one more friend laksh’s al pacino???
Laksh Maheshwari:a big flirt….. Tells he hates al pacino bt actually not… His motive of being back is to see her stay with her…. Loves his brother a lot and also loves (freindly one) sanskar’s senorita
I know you ppl would hv guessed who is al pacino and senorita….
Bt still i would love to see in comments….
Do tell me your review m confused should i continue this?
44 Comments
Interesting
Thanks dear
Ragini is senorita. Interesting dr now onwards I will call u sweety b’coz of u only i got happiness through ur ragsan stories. So I will call u sweety hope can I call u like that☺☺.
Once you said..u r teacher….
Happy Teachers Day….if u r not sry akka…
Thanks a lot dr.
Thanks dr for remembering this. I know ur tamil girl . Where is your native place? Amp also tamilian
Heheh you can call me anything u wish.. Nowadays i m getting lot of names u know…
And happy teachers day… Can you tell me your name if u r ok with it
And today is my birthday too?
Asra thankyou for telling mk is teacher i didnt knew…. Bcs of you i could wish her..
awesome change that pic I can’t see sanky with another girl
Actually i didnt put any pic…. From next part i vl make sure and sorry
Change that cover pic upload RAGSAN pictures.
Actually I didnt put any pic… From next part i vl make sure… And sorry
Nice
Thanks dear
Nice
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its awesome dear…. to b loyal it was u who made me love ragsan…. I m raglak fan from beginning….. do post soon…
Hey… That’s so sweet of you… Ya will try to update soon for you…
Amazingggg intro
Thanks dear
Awesome sissy another ragsan story superb
Thanks dear glad u like it….
Dont worry i vl try to give romantic scenes of ragsan in all my ff
I couldn’t rply u at that time bt today i m in celebration mode so replied… I wanted to tell you this before itself… Bt as usual i m lazy??
Seems interesting post soon
Thanks dear
awesome dear…loved it alot…senorita s ragu na…eagerly waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear…
Thanks a ton
Superb
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Awesome
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Interesting
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Awesomeeeeeeeeeee….
Thanks dear
nice epi
Thanks dear
awesome aliya
Thanks shri
My name uthra dr. Thanks a lot dr
Wlcm
Yayyyyyyy aliya u r again back with a bang !!! Although a different try but I love it ???
That’s called my craziness ??
Aliya di awesome , back with a bang
I want ek nayi kahani n rashke qamar soon
Ek nayi kahani i hv posted… And thankyou