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Pyaar ka Afsana ~~ Qubool Hai – ( Episode 5)

Sorry guys , I got busy in some important works and thus couldn’t update  episode. It’s similar to original one but with some modifications. From next episode it will be different from the original. Hope you enjoy this . Please do give me your suggestions in the comments section.

Episode 5:-

Aahil Vs Sanam!

It’s night , Dilshad’s house.

Dilshad talks to Haya – “ Iam worried for Sanam’s short tempered nature. I wish she don’t fall into any problem “. Haya enquirers about the reason why she telling this now by using signs. Dilshad replies – “ I got to hear that Sanam had a fight with someone today”. Haya ask her not to worry. Dilshad takes out her phone .

Sanam’s Dhabba,

Sanam is closing her dhabba . Other employees have already left . She is just keeping the bench and cots to a side. She gets a call from Dilshad. Sanam – “ Badi Ammi, Iam just coming. It was a busy day”. Dilshad – “ I heard you fought with someone”. Sanam – “ It wasn’t my mistake. Don’t worry “. Dilshad – “Ok. Come soon”. Sanam – “ Ok . Did she came back? Our tv star”.  Dilshad – “ Yes , She is busy watching TV”. While they are talking, Aahil comes there with Kerosene and pours it around the Dhabba. Sanam is walking forward but she gets smell of kerosene and hear some sound . As Aahil throws away the can. Sanam – “ Ok. I will reach within sometime “. Sanam cuts the call immediately and turns. Dilshad – “ Why did she cut the phone in a hurry?” Sanam tries smell it properly. Sanam – “ Kerosene smell… “. She walk back to check . Aahil comes infront of her with a smile. Sanam is surprised to see him there.

Aahil – “ No one ever insulted me like this before, better to say that none had courage to do so .But you did it “. Sanam – “ So.. you came to talk about that ? See I don’t have time to waste upon you. So leave”.  Aahil – “ I came to do complete some work, don’t worry even Iam not interested in wasting time “.  Sanam gets confused

He  lights a match stick . Sanam is shocked to see that. Aahil gives a smile. He throws it into her dhabba. She gets a shock . Sanam – “ My Dhabba!! “ She runs towards it but Aahil stops her . He takes her away from the fire and pins her to his car .  Sanam – “ Leave me, Leave ..”

Aahil – “ So that you go inside the fire , it’s only for watching. Now there is no use of going”. Sanam pushes him hardly and catches his collar.  Sanam ( angrily)  – “ How dare you? “. Aahil gets surprised . They look eachother. She then pushes him and runs  towards the burning Dhabba. She picks some soil and tries extinguish the fire. Aahil – “ There is no use and Dhabbewali “. Sanam is watching her Dhabba getting burned . She is remembering the memories related to her Dhabba . He goes near to her and threw a bundle of money. Sanam turns . Aahil – “ It was just to teach you a lesson . When you mess up with wrong person result will be bad. Take this money and buy a new dhabba for yourself “. Sanam is completely angry .

He goes back and sits on his car’s bonnet.

Suddenly, Sanam comes there with a rod. She comes to hit. Aahil gets shocked. Before rod comes near to him , he gets down.  She angrily hits it on the glass and it breaks . Aahil – “ Are you mad ?” Sanam gives him a serious look. Sanam- “ You will witness my madness now “. Sanam lits a match stick and throws it inside. Aahil opens his mouth in shock . Sanam holds his hand and drags him far from the car. Car explodes. Aahil – “ You !”  Sanam – “ Result of messing up with wrong person at wrong place and time. Pick up the money from ground and buy a new car for yourself. I haven’t touched it“. Aahil is angry. Sanam looks him angrily. Sanam leaves. Aahil – “ I haven’t seen such Mad, Daring and egoistic girl in my life , but I assure you if we meet again I will show you who Iam ?” .

Dilshad’s house .

Dilshad is standing near the front door of the house . Sanam comes . Dilshad – “ Sanam ! What happened? Why are you looking like this? “. Sanam doesn’t answer and gets in . Haya looks Sanam. Seher – “ Sanam, Badi Ammi was calling you and you weren’t picking her calls. What is this? It is you who usually scolds me for such things and see today ..” Sanam doesn’t respond and locks herself in the room. Seher – “ What happened to her? There is something serious”. Dilshad gets a call .

Dilshad gets shocked receiving the news Dhabba got fire. Dilshad tells it to Haya and Seher. Seher – “ What ?” Dilshad – “ My child, Sanam “. Dilshad goes towards the room and knocks on the door. Dilshad – “ Sanam , my dear! Please open the door. Sanam”. Seher and Haya comes to there. Seher – “ Sanam, yaar ! Open the door”. Haya knocks the door.

Inside the room, Sanam is sitting on the floor. Throws her bag away in anger. Hits on the floor with her fist. Sanam – “ I couldn’t save our Dhabba ! Why ??? “. Tears start to roll down from her eyes . She is angry and sad too.

After a while, Sanam opens the door. They comes in . Dilshad hugs Sanam. ( Sad bgm played ) . Dilshad – “ Don’t worry my dear. We are with you”. Sanam cries. Sanam – “ Badi Ammi, our dhabba !!! I couldn’t.. “. Seher and Haya too consoles her. Dilshad convince Sanam to have dinner. Sanam reluctantly comes over the dinning. Sanam takes piece of chapati and have it. But she isn’t able to swallow due to sorrow. Sanam touches the plate and touches her head. Sanam – “ I can’t have it . Sorry “. Sanam gets up and leaves. Dilshad gets up but Seher stops. Seher – “ Badi Ammi, give her some time. She won’t be able to eat anything today. You have your food since you have medicines after food. Please !“. She makes Dilshad and Haya eat their food. But Seher doesn’t have food properly.

Aahil is walking on the road. He tries to call Rehaan but his phone gets hanged. Aahil – “ This phone ! Errr ..” . Aahil tries to stop vehicles. But none stops . Aahil walks more distance. Aahil is tired now. Aahil – “ It’s all because of her”. Aahil then sees a truck . He shows his hands to stop it. Truck stops near him. Truck driver – “ What?” Aahil – “ Can I get a lift? “. Truck driver agrees. Aahil gets in. Aahil – “ Please get me to my hotel or to a junction from where I can get a taxi”. Truck Driver stops near auto stand. Aahil gets down and thanks him. Aahil takes an auto . But Auto stops at the middle of the road. Aahil gets angry on his situation. Auto driver tries to fix the problem. Aahil’s phone becomes okay. Aahil calls Rehaan. Aahil gets to know that Rehaan has already boarded train. Aahil’s fight tickets were inside his burned car. Auto becomes functional. He then goes to railway station. He gets to know that the next train will be there by tomorrow only. Aahil decides to spend time in a nearby hotel. They ask for ready cash payment but he doesn’t have it since he buyed ticket for rest. He ask their account number so that he can get money transferred. He does so. He gets a room but it isn’t much better.But he was helpless to spend night there. It’s midnight now. He couldn’t sleep well because he wasn’t comfortable on the bed.

Dilshad’s House.

Dilshad is sleeping in her room.

Seher turns and doesn’t see Sanam . Haya is sleeping. Seher gets up without disturbing her and goes to the living room.She see her sitting on the couch . Sanam is lost in thoughts. Seher sits near Sanam. Seher – “ Sanam! Whatever happened wasn’t good. But the fact is that we have to accept it. It was meant to be . Can you get it back if you don’t eat and sleep? “. Seher holds Sanam’s hand . Seher – “ Sanam ! “. Sanam – “ It’s all because of that spoilt brat . I hate him”.  Seher – “ What ?”  Sanam tells her everything. Seher is shocked . Seher – “ Why didn’t you tell us this before ?” Sanam – “ I didn’t want Badi Ammi to be worried “. Seher ( in shock )- “ You broken the glass of his car and burned it? “. Sanam – “ I wished to hit his head! But I didn’t…” . Seher looks on. Seher – “ Sanam, anyway forget it like a nightmare “. Sanam – “ I won’t forget it and will never forgive him”.

Precap:-  Sanam talking to Bank manager about loan but he denied to give as she doesn’t have any collateral to submit. In home , Seher advices Sanam not to give up.Seher assures that she will support her always.

Adhu

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