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Pyaar ka Afsana ~~ Qubool Hai – (Episode 12)

Hey guys , from now on I will be updating less episodes for few weeks as Iam busy with some urgent works. Hope you enjoy this episode and please do comment your views over this episode. 

Episode 12:-

Sanam and Aahil meets in real!

Afeeza is laughing after hearing Sanam explainer the story when she managed to conceal her identity before Aahil.

 

Afeeza (while laughing) – “ Sanam , you are warrior ! So my words helped you “. Sanam (irritated tone) – “ I was helpless, otherwise I would shown him who Iam”. Afeeza- “ Still you hold grudge against him? But Iam thinking .. why are you both meeting frequently? First at Punjab, when you came to Bhopal.. even then your meeting.. There is something behind !“.  Sanam – “ Yes, the reason is Iam going to teach him a lesson “. Afeeza’s face changes and looks at her with pity. Afeeza – “ You only think about teaching lessons nothing else?” Sanam – “ What else should I think about?” Sanam goes to take plates for having dinner. Afeeza goes behind Sanam and keeps hand on her shoulder. Afeeza- “ What if it’s something else? Like some eternal connection.. like soulmates “. Sanam gives her a serious look and takes her hand off from her shoulder. Sanam – “ That cheap guy can’t be my soulmate. He is cheap, arrogant , flirt.., I hate him. Iam sure that he can’t be that one “. Afeeza – “ Then how should be your man? “ Sanam becomes speechless. Sanam thinks and say – “ I haven’t thought about it”. Afeeza (surprised) – “ What ? You haven’t thought about it yet! Really strange!  “ Sanam – “ I had many things other than this to think about”. Afeeza- “ Life isn’t easy everytime. Many people think that once I solve my life issues I will enjoy my life then. But it isn’t right way, according to me we should enjoy without bothering our situations”. Sanam smiles.

Next day, Morning, Punjab.

Seher is trying to cook. Haya  is looking at clumsy kitchen. Haya tries to help but Seher stops her. Seher- “ I can do it Haya. Afterall Iam smart in every area. You can do your work . Just chill“. Seher continues to cook.

Just then Dilshad comes there. Dilshad gets shocked seeing the condition of kitchen. Dilshad- “ What is this Seher? If Sanam comes and see this . She won’t.. “. Dilshad remembers that she away from them. Tears fill in her eyes.

Seher comes to her. Seher – “ Badi Ammi, Sanam has gone there for dreams . Don’t if you miss her, I will wear her dress and get her infront of you”. Dilshad looks at her. Seher goes inside. She comes in Sanam’s get up. Seher as Sanam says – “ Badi Ammi, This Seher doesn’t know to keep things clean. What a mess she has created in name of cooking?” Haya takes video of Seher imitating Sanam. Seher imitates Sanam further and this makes Dilshad laugh. Haya smiles too. Dilshad – “ Enough, Iam Okay. Let’s clear this mess”. Seher – “ Promise me, you won’t get sad”. Dilshad- “ Okay. I won’t”.

As they cleans the kitchen Haya sends video to Sanam .

Bhopal, Roadside.

Sanam checks her phone and sees the video. Sanam is surprised and says – “ Seher, you are just impossible. Anyway you made Badi Ammi happy, that’s nice. I miss you all”.

Sanam looks out and see 2 children with their parents having ice cream. She gets emotional and remembers her parents.  Sanam – “ It would have been really nice which we had you Ammi and Abbu. I use to imagine , how happy our life would have been if you were here with us. I miss you Ammi –  Abbu. Why did you left us so soon?” Sanam wipes her tears. She looks at her family pic. She smiles. She drives off.

After few days,

Now Sanam is use to the her schedule. Afeeza’s company has influenced her greatly. Afeeza is teaching her many things, she is helping her without expecting anything else in return. Now they have turned into best friends. Afeeza is showing her a new world. Sanam feels comfortable around her. Dilshad , Seher and Haya feels happy that Sanam is doing good at Bhopal. They use to talk to eachother every night. Afeeza and Sanam went out for outing on Sunday. This was new for her.

She sends money to her home but still tries to find happiness in her new life.

Sanam started to see life in a new perspective. She started to adapt herself into the city slowly.

Night, Bhopal.

She was coming back to home after dropping someone.  While driving, she saw 2 boys disturbing a girl . The girl is Nazia. An old man is trying to stop them. There is a car near her and bike . Sanam stops there.

That Guys – “ Come on , don’t be shy darling? We will drop you home..  Come with us we will have nice time “. Nazia – “ I don’t need your help , please leave..” Driver of Nazia – “ Please,Leave us “. Nazia tried to call. But one of them snatch her phone. Guy – “ What is the need of calling?” Nazia starts to cry. Driver tries to move those guys. But one of them push him and driver fall down.

Sanam gets down. She walks towards them.

A guy was about to hold Nazia , but Sanam stops him. Sanam – “Just saw a girl in trouble and ready to take advantage?” That guy – “ See bro, another girl has come. Now it is a balance”. He looks at her and gets impressed.  Sanam – “ It isn’t, I am going to balance”. They gets confused. Nazia doesn’t understand what is happening. Sanam stands between that guy and Nazia .

Sanam hits on his knee with her leg. He fall down .  Sanam – “ Now see you aren’t fit. I don’t like unfit ones”. The other guy gets angry and comes to her. Other guy – “ How dare you?” Sanam – “ Yes Iam daring , but you haven’t witnessed it now “.  Other guy – “ What will you do ?” Sanam hits him under his jaw . He falls aside upon the car because of the pain.

Sanam – “ Hope you are happy with chocolates received for your cheap deed”. Sanam turns towards Nazia . Nazia is grateful towards. She smiles .

Sanam – “ Be courageous, don’t wait for anyone to help you. We have to do it ourselves “. Nazia – “ Thank you so much”.

The guys get up . Sanam – “ You want more chocolates or will you leave now “. They leaves .

Sanam – “ What happened to your car?” Driver – “ 2 Tires punctured. I got down to see that Nazia Beti came out as there is no range in her phone . That’s when those boys stopped here and started doing this “.  Sanam – “ I drive taxi, it’s vacant . If you want I can drop you home “. Nazia – “ Uncle , I think we should go by taxi. Bhai Jaan will take care of this car “.

Driver agrees. Nazia takes out some shopping bags .

They get into Sanam’s car. Sanam drives off.

Nazia – “ I feel that god send you there at that time. Otherwise it would have been a big problem. By the way, I completely forgot.. what’s your name?” Sanam – “ Sanam . What is yours?” Nazia – “ Nazia ..   Your name is really sweet but you are really tough!” Sanam – “ Time demands to be tough!” .

They smiles.

They reach Nazia’s house. Sanam stops at the gate. Nazia and driver gets down. They take out the bags. Nazia – “ How much is the taxi fare?” Sanam – “ 250 rupees”. Nazia gives it. Sanam takes it. Nazia – “ Would you mind to have a dinner with me?” Sanam – “ Why?” Nazia – “ You helped me, thus you are special to me. I don’t know how to thank you in any other way. I can’t return your by anything else. So please let me serve you something for my satisfaction “. Sanam – “ I haven’t done any favor upon you. I have 2 sisters, I would have done same if they were in your place. My Friend would be waiting for me in home. So.. ”.  Nazia – “ Okay, atleast  a Tea? Please don’t refuse”. Sanam – “ But.. “. Nazia – “ Please.. consider it as a request of your sister”.

Sanam reluctantly agrees to Nazia . Driver smiles. Sanam gets down.

As Sanam enters the through gate she feels like the house is familiar to her unknown to the fact that it is the same house which was once her family’s. Sanam looks around.

Sanam thinks – “ There is something special about this house for sure.. It’s first time Iam feeling like Iam somewhere familiar.. This feel of being at place which belongs to me.. It’s strange but still there is something!”

Sanam stops at doorstep. Nazia goes in and turn back. She see Sanam standing outside by looking around. Nazia – “ What are you looking for ? Please come inside”. Sanam steps in. Nazia keeps her shopping bags on  the table.

Aahil is inside his room. He is working on his laptop.

Nazia welcomes Sanam and makes her seated on the couch.

Nazia – “ What would you like to have tea , coffee or juice?” Sanam – “ Anything, I just came because you insisted.. that’s it. Just give me a glass of water that’s enough”. Nazia – “Not all , just a glass of water! One second, Lateef !! “.

Lateef responses – “ Yeah coming .. “ She comes . Lateef – “ Nazia Beti, you came.. who is she ?” Lateef points towards Sanam. Nazia – “  Ek Farishta ( An angel) , who is send by god. Lateef , bring some sharbat , and some snacks . Sanam – “ No need of any snacks , please “. Nazia – “ Guest shouldn’t refuse to host! Lateef , please bring fast she has to leave”. Lateef smiles at Sanam and say – “ Okay”. Sanam smiles at Lateef.

Nazia sits near Sanam . Nazia – “ Your house is here?” Sanam – “ No, Iam from Punjab.. I do job here “. Nazia – “ Oho, Punjab! That’s reason why you are brave! I have heard that Punjabi girls are brave”. Sanam – “ Don’t mind me saying this, you should take some training for some self defense.. It’s really important “. Nazia – “ Yes, you are right!” Nazia’s phone rings. Nazia looks at phone and sees. Nazia – “ Sanam , please excuse me for some seconds .. I will come back .. I need to attend this call , it’s urgent!” Sanam – “ Yeah sure , please “.

Nazia goes to a room nearby. Sanam takes out her phone and messages Afeeza – ‘ I would be little late.. If you are feeling hungry, please have dinner.. Don’t wait for me ‘.

Sanam sits there. Suddenly electricity goes off. Everyone looks around. Aahil gets angry and shouts – “ How did light gone off.. this electricity.. Lateef !!!  Just ask someone to check the inverter !” He calls out Lateef again.

Sanam could hear his shouting. Sanam thinks – “ If he really has a problem , why don’t he do himself”.  Nazia (over the phone) – “ I will call you back”.  Nazia thinks to go to the hall to accompany Sanam . Nazia cuts the call and tries to go. But her leg hits on the table and it hurts her. Nazia – “ Sanam , please wait. Iam coming “. Lateef is looking for torch but she is not getting it. Lateef – “ Aahil Baba is on one side and Nazia Beti’s Farishta is waiting in hall .. Where will I go now.. So much of pressure! Mein toh hui chui Mui !”.

Aahil lose his patience and comes out with his phone. Aahil – “ She will be busy looking for torch, I should look out for the problem”. Sanam gets up to see Nazia . She looks out for Nazia .

Nazia is rubbing her legs due to pain. Aahil switch on his phone torch and he is coming towards the hall. Sanam gets a message from Afeeza and she checks her phone. She turns towards the door and checks the message. Aahil is approaching towards the hall. Sanam gives reply to Afeeza .

Aahil’s torch light gets off in between and stops . He is near to her. He checks his phone and switch it on. Sanam switch on her phone torch and turns. (Junoon tere ishq ka song played)

They  see eachother in that light. They gets shocked. They looks at eachother with shock. They remember their last meet at Sanam’s Dhabba. They stands still in shock and anger conquers their mind.

Suddenly light turns on . Their moment gets break. They are in shock to see each other unexpectedly.

Aahil – “ You!” Sanam – “ You!” . Aahil – “So Miss Dhabbewali came to Bhopal following me !  What the hell are doing here?” Sanam –  “ Following you? Not even my pet would that . You aren’t worth of being followed “. Aahil – “Really ? Then what should I assume.. it’s a coincidence “. Sanam – “ Yes it is ! “ Aahil – “ Then , it is your bad luck that you came infront of again after that incident.. you don’t how much loss did you made that day ?” Sanam – “ What loss? You don’t how much loss you did to me. You are the one who started.. Not me”. Aahil – “ Really, you started by insulting me and you dared to challenge me “.

Nazia comes there and says – “ Bhaijaan , you were here. Sanam , Iam Sorry. I made you wait”. Sanam gets surprised hearing that. Sanam – “ Bhaijaan! This is your brother ?“.  Aahil – “ You know this girl?” Nazia gets confused hearing them and says – “ Sanam , this is my brother. Yes Bhaijaan, I know her”.  Aahil and Sanam together says  – “ What ?”  They look eachother. Nazia gets more confused. Nazia – “ What’s the problem?” Sanam – “ Nazia , Iam Sorry, I must leave. That would be better”. Aahil – “ You are right, You must leave. There is no place for low standard people like you here“. Sanam gets angry upon that remark.

Sanam  – “ Iam low standard? Really? No one becomes of high standard by just being rich, character shows your class. And your character is low class “. Aahil feels insulted. Aahil – “ How dare you? You people don’t have money or class, that’s the problem. You just blur out anything that comes into your mind, that shows you are low class”.  Sanam – “ You are just sick. Money power has got into your mind that you lost your brain. Iam not interested to talk to people like you. It’s just waste of time . Didn’t your parents taught you some manners? ”.  Aahil gets more angry. Aahil shouts – “ Just , Get out”. Sanam – “ Even I don’t have any intention to stay here forever”.  Aahil – “ Even you wish , you aren’t worth of it”. Sanam – “ I know Iam worth for better things “.

Nazia – “ What’s happening? Do you both know each other?” Sanam looks at Aahil and says – “ Yes, we had a terrible meet once. Ask him, he will explain to you. Nazia , don’t mind me saying this . You are so down to earth and see how your brother is .. just ill mannered, arrogant! I wonder  siblings can be so different like earth and sky ”.

Sanam turns and walks away. Nazia stands sadly. Aahil is angry.

Rehaan enters seeing this . Rehaan looks at her as she walks out .

Lateef brings a tray with sharbat and snacks . Lateef – “ Nazia Beti, Sorry for being late. It’s all because of the electricity.. Here is the sharbat and snacks for your Farishta”.  Lateef doesn’t know about the happening. Rehaan haven’t heard their conversation. Aahil – “ She isn’t any Farishta, just a stupid and ill mannered girl”.  Nazia – “ Bhaijaan, how do you know her?” Aahil – “ It doesn’t matter. Tell me , how do you know her?” Nazia explains whole incident. Aahil gets surprised. Rehaan gets impressed.

Nazia – “ I don’t know what is the problem between you both , but this wasn’t right way to behave . I invited her , she was my guest. Insulting my guest is equal as insulting me“.

Nazia gets upset and leaves . Aahil feels bad . Aahil – “ Nazia !!” Rehaan – “Aahil Bhai, what happened? Who  is she ?” Aahil – “ The girl who challenged me for first time ! First she burned my car, then now she insulted me in my own house, my sister got upset on me because of her . Iam won’t leave her . Just wait and watch Miss Dhabbewali!”

Adhu

Passionate towards Story telling . Every story teller lives different life in the same lifetime , I feel blessed Iam one among. Every opportunity brings out best in you.❤️???

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