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Pyaar ka Afsana ~~ Qubool Hai – (Episode 11)

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Episode 11:-

Will this meet of Aahil and Sanam be good?

Morning,Bhopal.

Afeeza and Sanam at Wings Cab service Office. After completing official formalities , Afeeza leaves for her work. Sanam gives a test by driving a car with another female driver  sitting beside her to check her. They gets impressed. They gives her a dark blue T-shirt with their company name and cap. She wears it with her black jeans. She ties her hair into bun and wears the cap too.

It’s afternoon.

Sanam starts her job after lunch . Afeeza calls her to know about her condition in her work place. Sanam tells her that she okay with the place. Afeeza feels relived. Sanam messages Seher about the same.

Then she goes goes to pick her first customer. Sanam is excited. Sanam have nice experience with her first customer. She gets few other customers . She deals with them very well.Sanam thanks god for the job. It’s becomes night,it’s nearly 6pm. Sanam is asked to pick her last client for today. Since it’s night , now she will be having female customers only as per their rules. Sanam goes .

Sanam reaches the location. She looks for customer . She spots a young lady looking at her phone. Sanam becomes sure that she is the one. She sees a car nearby and thinks – “ Oho, Maybe her car got punctured”.

Sanam is standing little away from the young lady. The young lady in modern dress see her with cab. Young lady becomes happy and ask – “ Wings Cab Service”. Sanam – “ Yes , Ma’am “. Young lady- “ Thank god !” Sanam smiles. Young lady looks into the car near her and tells – “ Baby, cab has come . Now come out , let’s go “. She sees Aahil coming out of the car and she gets shocked.  As Aahil was about to see her , she turns back. Sanam thinks- “ What if he see me ? What if we end up fighting? Why ? Why did you brought him infront of me now? “. Aahil walks towards the taxi. Sanam see him on rear view mirror. Sanam gets tensed. She doesn’t know how to avoid this situation.Aahil is standing just behind her. Sanam ( prays in mind) – “ Allah Miya, just help me out of this”.

Just then Aahil remembers that he forgot his mobile in his car goes back to take it. She sees a mask inside the car. She suddenly opens the car. She wears it . Sanam – “ Thank you , Allah Miya“. Sanam turns with the mask. Sanam – “ Ma’am , at this time we only take female customers, so he can’t be taken ..” Young lady- “ Oho No! “ Aahil comes back and see her saying that. Aahil – “ Ruby, What happened?” Ruby- “ The driver is saying that you can’t come along with me in this cab.. Since this time it’s exclusive for ladies “. Aahil looks at her. Sanam doesn’t look at him and keeps looking to her left side.Aahil tilt his face a little to see her. Aahil- “ Female driver! I don’t care for such rules, I have to reach my office. By the time , I call another cab , it will be late”. Aahil takes out some money and shows it to Sanam. Sanam gets surprised. Aahil – “ I Hope now you can forget the rules “. Sanam gets angry but controls it .

Sanam talks with different sound so that he doesn’t recognize her from her sound.

Sanam ( with irritation ) – “ Sorry Sir, it’s not about money. It’s about rules”. Aahil – “ Iam traveling with a female isn’t that enough? Is this how you treat your customers when they need your services? Do you want me to rate your service badly?” Aahil looks her.

Sanam thinks – “ If I continue with this argument, he will tempt me to have a fight. I can’t take that risk at this stage. I have to think about my family “. Aahil – “ Why aren’t you answering?” Sanam – “ Ok. It’s fine. Get in”.  Ruby- “ That’s so nice , come on Baby”. Aahil thinks – “ This driver seems to be stubborn “. Sanam gets in. Aahil and Ruby gets in too. Sanam starts to drive. Ruby talks to Aahil and Aahil talks to her. Sanam gets irritated hearing their sugared talks. Sanam sees them sitting close , holding hands in a romantic way through the mirror. Sanam thinks – “ Shameless man ! That time he was with another girl. Flirt , Cheap, Arrogant, Rude, Adamant ! How can man stoop so low ? Maybe he is a casinova, cheap!!!” Aahil to Sanam – “ Hey you , play some music “. Sanam – “ Okay”. Sanam switch on the stereo.

Aahil is saying to Ruby- “ You know … “. Between you his talks song start to play.

‘Main Kahu toh Saala Character deela hain’ song played. Three of them surprised to hear it.

Sanam thinks – “ Allah Miya! Even stereo understood that his Character is loose, Perfect song “. Ruby looks Aahil. Aahil gets angry. Aahil – “ What the hell is this ? Instead of Playing something romantic you are playing this?” Sanam – “ Its FM , I didn’t asked them to play that.., They play it according to person ..”  Aahil- “ What you mean?” Sanam realizes that she shouldn’t have said that even though she wish to say more . Sanam- “ I mean , as  per request of audience they play different songs … That’s what I mean”. Aahil- “ Okay , Just change it”. Sanam does as per his instructions.  Aahil caresses Ruby hand. Sanam thinks – “ What else he will show me now ?” Aahil understands that driver is getting disturbed seeing him romancing. Aahil thinks – “ I think should pause for a while, what if she gets disturbed and hit on another vehicle?” Aahil stops flirting with Ruby for a while. Ruby keeps her head over his shoulder by holding his hand.

Sanam thinks – “ It’s over , I guess. Nice”.

After sometime,

Aahil- “ Hey , stop here”. Sanam thinks – “ Maybe he is getting down here. Really good!” Sanam applies brake happily. Ruby gets down and says – “ Okay Baby, I will see you then. Bye!”. Sanam gets surprised. Sanam – “ Ma’am you are getting down here, you given me another destination “. Aahil – “ That’s my destination and now you take me to my destination”. Sanam – “ But..”

Aahil- “ What ? Are you afraid to have male traveler? “ Sanam thinks – “ Afraid of you? Never! I hate you”. Sanam – “ No!” Aahil – “ Then lets go”.

Ruby bids him , Sanam start to drive . Aahil relaxes him over seat. He sees his phone’s charge is over. Aahil- “ Hey, do you have facility to charge mobile”. Sanam – “ Yes “. Aahil gives his mobile and Sanam takes it from him without touching his hand. Sanam plugs it. Aahil notices it and smiles. Aahil – “ Why are you wearing mask?” Sanam thinks and say – “ Because I have cold”. Aahil- “ Oho, What is your name ? “.

Sanam thinks – “ What all he need to know?” Aahil – “ Do you have any hearing problem? You are taking time to answer my every question “. Sanam ( controlling anger) – “ No, Iam perfectly okay. Iam concentrating on driving, afterall that’s my job”. Aahil gets impressed and says – “ Impressive! By the way , it’s really nice to see females driving a cab . I must say that your hands is beautiful “. Sanam gets shocked hearing this. Sanam thinks – “ Few time before he was flirting with that young lady, now he is trying it on me. Cheap!” Aahil – “ When someone gives you a compliment, you should atleast give some response “. Sanam (reluctantly)- “ Thank you !” Aahil – “ That’s cool. I appreciate when I see something good”. Sanam gets irritated. Aahil has a smile over his lips. He relaxes by closing his eyes.

Finally, they reach the place. Sanam stops the car. Sanam – “ We have reached your destination”. Sanam doesn’t hear any response. Sanam turns back and finds Aahil sleeping peacefully. Sanam thinks – “ While sleeping he seems like an innocent person but in reality is absolutely opposite”. Sanam looks him . Sanam ( with medium high volume ) – “ Excuse me, Sir!  We have reached your destination! “. Aahil wakes up hearing her. Aahil opens his eyes and sees her turning back her head. Aahil look out and understand that he reached his office. Aahil gets down.

Aahil – “ How much?” Sanam – “ 500 rupees”. Aahil gives her the money. Sanam takes out 100 rupees to give him balance . Aahil was about to leave. Sanam stops him by saying- “ Excuse me, your balance”. Aahil turns and says with smile – “ Keep it , as a tip”. Sanam doesn’t like that . Sanam – “ I don’t want anything more , I don’t take tip”. Aahil gets amazed . Sanam get down and gives him the balance. Sanam – “ I believe that one should only take the money according to their work, I will get paid for my work. So please take this back”. Aahil thinks – “ It’s rare to see people giving back tips… Strange !” Aahil takes it . He looks her. He gets into thinking. Sanam get into her car and leaves. Aahil thinks – “ I think, I have seen this girl somewhere… Where did I ?” .

Precap :- Its dark , Sanam and Aahil see each other with torch light of their phone in Aahil’s house. Both of them are shocked and have an eyelock. ( Junoon tere ishq ka song played)

Adhu

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