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Home»Fan Fiction»Pyaar ishq aur mohabbat (Part 7)
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Pyaar ishq aur mohabbat (Part 7)

Anuradha123By Anuradha123September 22, 201722 Comments6 Mins Read
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Hey everyone! I’m back with one more part of my story… Firstly I want to thank all the readers and your valuable comments.. It’s really matters to me.. Secondly, today I will add some classical songs which r my favorite as I m a trained classical singer… As you all know my story is related to music… Let’s see what happens

Recap: veer n his friends reach malhotra mansion..

Today’s part

Scene 1
Malhotra mansion
Veer and his friends finally reached Rahul malhotra’s house.. It was a very big house(means kisi palace ki Tarah)…
Ajay: kya shandaar ghar hai? I haven’t seen such a house in my life…
Soham: ha yaar!! Maine toh sapne mein bhi nahi dekha.. Hey veer!! Tu kuch bol na!!!
Veer : l don’t want to say anything… Tum sab yaha ghar dekhne aaye ho ya career banane… By the way where is Rahul malhotra???
Suddenly, a man dressed in black suit appears before them…
Ajay: hey Rahul! How r u? After many years yaar…
Rahul : hii everyone! Myself Rahul malhotra… The one n only legal heir of malhotra’s… Hello veer!
Veer : hello Rahul!
Rahul to veer: I heard from Ajay that u want to become a singer… Am I right? Why don’t u try your luck in my dad’s company.. He will be glad.. He is searching a fresh face for the Music Industry…
Veer: thanks Rahul… But it’s not needed… Main apne mehnat ke dam par kuch Karna chahta hoon… Please forgive me but I can’t accept your offer…
Rahul :OK.. I respect your decisions…
Ajay interrupted in between n took veer to a corner n said, veer yeh kya kar raha hai tu? Yaha laxmi tujhe tilak laga rahi hai aur tu mooh dhone ki baat kar raha hai…
Veer: no Ajay… Mujhe bheekh nahi chahiye… I want to earn by own…
Ajay : do whatever u want.. Tu pagal ho gaya hai…
Suddenly Rahul told his servants to open the guest rooms for his friends… Unhe kisi cheez ki sikhayat nahi honi chahiye…

Scene2
Jaya’s house
Early morning, around 6.00 am.. Someone knocked at the door… Jaya came running and opened the door.. A man with white dhoti Kurt’s was standing with a bag outside…
Jaya : pranam ustad ji
Ishagya too bent n touched his feet for blessings..
Jaya : sanchi beta! Ustad ji aaye hai…
Sanchi : aaye maasi maa
Meantime, sanchi came in red patiala suit… She was looking like an angel.. She also took blessings by touhing his feet..
Ustadji : jeete raho!! Chalo beta aaj Main tumhe raag bhairwi ke baare mein sikhaunga… R u ready?
Sanchi nodded in yes… Ustad ji plays the harmonium n started singing
Before the song some swars in classical

Sa pa sa…. Re re re ga ma ga re sa aa re sa sa sa
Ga ma pa re sa re sa sa sa

The song starts
Bhasm aanga gauri sang….
Bhasm aanga gauri sang
Jata mein biraje ganga
Chandrama lalat dhare adhik suhayo hai…
After practicing the raag bhairavi,, ustadji asked her to sing a bhajan
Sanchi by playing harmonium sang the song
Hum ko man kee shakt
Dena man vijay kare
Dusaron kee jay se pahale
Khud ko jay kare
Dusaron kee jay se pahale
Khud ko jay kare
Hum ko man kee shakt
Dena man vijay kare
Dusaron kee jay se pahale
Khud ko jay kare
Hum ko man kee shakt dena

Bhedabhaaw
Bhedabhaaw apane
Dil se saaf kar sake
Bhedabhaaw apane
Dil se saaf kar sake
Doston se bhool ho
To maaf kar sake
Doston se bhool ho
To maaf kar sake
Zoothh se bache rahe
Sach kaa dam bhare
Zoothh se bache rahe
Sach kaa dam bhare
Dusaron kee jay se
Pahale khud ko jay kare
Hum ko man kee shakt
Dena man vijay kare
Dusaron kee jay se pahale
Khud ko jay kare
Hum ko man kee shakt dena

Here kabir reached sanchi’s home to apologize sanchi… In his mind he thought about the slap which sanchi gave… As soon as he stepped inside, he was mesmerized to see sanchi singing so sweetly like a koyal… He thought it’s a good chance I have to anyhow convince sanchi to join my company for my future profit…
Note : kabir has turned negative for few episodes..

Mushkile pade to hum
Pe itanaa karam kar
Mushkile pade to hum
Pe itanaa karam kar
Saath de to dharam kaa
Chale to dharam kar
Saath de to dharam kaa
Chale to dharam kar
Khud pe hausalaa rahe
Badee se naa dare
Khud pe hausalaa rahe
Badee se naa dare
Dusaron kee jay se
Pahale khud ko jay kare
Hum ko man kee shakt
Dena man vijay kare
Dusaron kee jay se
Pahale khud ko jay kare
Hum ko man kee shakt dena.
The song ends

Kabir clapped for sanchi… Sanchi was shocked to see kabir standing at Her house… She sends ustadji outside.. Jaya n ishagya too went outside to drop ustadji outside
Now only kanchi were alone in the room…
Sanchi : how dare u to come to my house? Nikal jao mere ghar se abhi aur ishi waqt…
Kabir : no, I won’t go… First listen to me.. (he pinned her to the wall and grabbed her hand tightly)… Enough is enough… I’m hearing your lectures since yesterday.. Now u listen to me… Whatever u think about me is wrong… Yesterday we both got carried away…hum apne jajbato par kabu nahi kar paye… I tried to give u support… Waise bhi I was not dying to kiss u…both of us know hamari aapsi rajamandi se huwa.. Agar abhi tumhe lagta hai that I had committed any mistake then sorry… I came here only to apologize u…
By saying this he turned with an evil smile..
Sanchi after a second : wait Mr kabir… I m sorry… Maine aapko galat samjha.. Please forgive me…
After hearing her plea, kabir ne sanchi se kaha, can we become friends?
Sanchi nodded in yes n shaked hands with him..
Kabir(in his mind) : behkuf ladki u don’t know what n which things will happen with u now… Just wait n watch……

Precap: veer singing in a bar… A grand party is thrown in malhotra mansion …

Well friends! Hope u liked it.. Please drop your valuable comments in the box… There are more twists and turns in this ff… Have patience… Till then take care n smile always..????
With love
Anu(tiya)

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    Myself a software developer and a teacher Great devotee of God bajrangbali .... Wanted to become an ias officer Loved reading, writing n singing ????????

    22 Comments

    1. RuCh23 on September 22, 2017 9:43 am

      ??? even though Kabir’s negetive here I hope he’ll soon change his views because of Sanchi ??? great epi Anu

      • Anuradha123 on September 22, 2017 9:53 am

        Thanks ruhani… I will definitely change kabir’s character… Badle aur nafrat ka twist na ho toh majaa kaise aayega

    2. Khamoshi on September 22, 2017 10:21 am

      Anuradha again a superb episode by u.. thought kabir turned negative gr some episodes but hope he will again come up with heroic qualities.. waiting for next update dear…

      • Anuradha123 on September 22, 2017 11:12 am

        Thanks khamoshi for your intense love n support… Ya I will try to make kabir’s part little dhamekedaar… Uska past abhi reveal hona baaki hai…

    3. Ashnita on September 22, 2017 10:31 am

      anu sweetie it’s beyond beyond beyond everything iam just speechless wat to say a grand salute and iam addicted to ur ff and i became ur Jabra fan. it’s this kanchi pair. anyways waiting for next part And lots of huggs and kisses to u and luv u loads

      • Anuradha123 on September 22, 2017 11:09 am

        Thank u ashnita for such lovely words… It’s my honor that an amazing writer like u is giving me so much love… Hope u will like the next part too… Lots of love n kisses to you too..

    4. Mrunmayi on September 22, 2017 12:33 pm

      Amazing episode ashnita it’s really suprb bt plzz yaar can’t see kabir in a negative role.

      • Anuradha123 on September 22, 2017 1:58 pm

        Thanks mrunmayi… Don’t worry kabir is the soul of my story.. Thoda waqt lagega after that u will witness the main love story.. Have patience dear…

    5. Anee on September 22, 2017 1:12 pm

      wow anuradha Amzing dear…keep write more.

      • Anuradha123 on September 22, 2017 2:04 pm

        Omg someone please pinch me.. Great writer anee meri tarif kar rahi hai… I m so happy to read your comments… Khusi ke maare pagal ho jaungi…

    6. riyarocks on September 22, 2017 1:26 pm

      Anu dear, this was a superrrrrrrrrrrr se uparrrrrrrrrrrr waala update………raag bhairavi…wow..(raag bhairav is my fav)….btw dear, Kabir’s character is full of mystery…….just hope waqt ke saath uska character bhi change hojae, from evil to good……….& luv u a lot sweetieeeeee……….

      • Anuradha123 on September 22, 2017 2:06 pm

        Thank u sweetie… I m jumping in excitement after reading your comments.. Yes yaar, kabir ka mystery aane wala episode reveal karega…

    7. Amnaa on September 22, 2017 2:06 pm

      Wow….. Amazing twists and turns the stiry is taking…. Update soon

      • Anuradha123 on September 22, 2017 4:38 pm

        Thanks for liking my story… My story is going to be lengthy with twists n turns… Hope u will like it in the near future… Lots of love to u..

    8. Dhruti on September 22, 2017 4:55 pm

      anu this is superb ff keep writing

      • Anuradha123 on September 22, 2017 6:31 pm

        Thanks dhruti for liking my ff..

    9. Abhilasha on September 22, 2017 5:21 pm

      Wowww amazing …so u r trained singer that why u chose musical background too for story…loved ur concept…..and so excited for next!!

      • Anuradha123 on September 22, 2017 6:32 pm

        Thanks abhilasha for loving my ff

    10. niyaaa on September 22, 2017 8:37 pm

      Hey anu amaz epi dear kabir negative but for few epi its ok then finally our kanchi pair up h naaaa thats it lovely epi and u woderfully used classical song well i’ve no great knowledge about classical song but this looks amaz post nxt asap sweetie..

      • Anuradha123 on September 22, 2017 10:25 pm

        Thanks niyaa…i have already updated and this is the link

        http://www.tellyupdates.com/pyaar-ishq-aur-mohabbat-part-8/

    11. Jessicca on September 23, 2017 3:47 am

      Amazing annu… It was outstanding… Kabir’s negative side will be interesting.. But plz make him good afterwards… Negativity doesn’t suit him..

    12. Alia on September 23, 2017 9:36 pm

      Amazing mind blowing fabulous can’t wait for another chapter plzzz update soon I can’t wait

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