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Home»Fan Fiction»Pyaar ishq aur mohabbat (Part 5)
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Pyaar ishq aur mohabbat (Part 5)

Anuradha123By Anuradha123September 19, 201712 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hello guys!!! I m back with another part of the story… I know my story is very boring compared to others… I cannot match up with talented writers…well thanks for beautiful comments by the readers… For some days I will not be able to write ff as I will be busy in exams

OK let’s start the story
Recap: kabir met sanchi in cafeteria…

In India
A small room with spiders web is shown… Everywhere dust particles are surrounded n there a small passage is shown… The passage is narrow n very dark that leads to a room where a female is lying unconscious in the bed .. Doctors r busy in treating her so that she recovers well… A guy is asking the doctor : inhe hosh kab tak aayega?
Doctor : hum puri koshish kar rahei hai but medicines r not working
The guy : I don’t know kuch bhi kijiye but make her alright…
By saying this the guy went..

Outside cafeteria, kabir asked sanchi to wait for a moment..mai abhi car lekar aata hu…
Some girls pointing towards sanchi n said, yaar yeh ladki bohut khushnaseeb hai… Aaj iske liye woh handsome ne saare gundo ko kya punch maara… Kaash mera liye bhi koi aisa karta…
Sanchi was shocked to hear such a thing as she never expected that Hitler has saved her self-esteem…
Just then kabir opened the door n told her to sit in front seat..

In malhotra mansion
Malhotra asking someone to find the details about sanchi… He said, mujhe woh ladki kisi bhi haal mei meri company mein chahiye… Woh ek aisi sone ki chidiya hai jise Main umrabhar apne kabje mein rakhunga…

In the road, suddenly the car stopped… Kabir gadi se Utar kar dekhta hai ki tyre puncture ho chuka hai…
Kabir called sanchi… That moment sanchi was thinking about the girls talking about kabir’s good ness…
Kabir then noticed sanchi who was lost in thoughts n shaked her.. What happen sanchi??
Sanchi : kuch nahi Mr kabir…
He told sanchi tyre is punctured n at this time no mechanic is available… We have to wait here until we get a lift…
Suddenly lightening strikes with strong winds n started raining heavily.. Sanchi by seeing the water droplets was not able to control her emotions n started singing n dancing (bg song is from the movie guru)
The song

No re, na re.. na re, na re..
Nana na re na re
Na re, na re
Nana re, nana re, nana re, na na re
Nana re, nana re, nana re, na na re

Barso re megha megha
Barso re megha megha
Barso re megha barso
Barso re megha megha
Barso re megha megha
Barso re megha barso

Meetha hai kosa hai, barish ka bosa hai
Bosa hai, kosa hai, barish ka bosa hai
Meetha hai kosa hai, barish ka bosa hai
Bosa hai, kosa hai, barish ka bosa hai

Jal jal jal jal jal jal thal jal thal
Chal chal chal chal chal chal chal bheta chal
Nana re, nana re, nana re, na na re
Nana re, nana re, nana re, na na re
Nana re, nana re, nana re, na na re
Nana re, nana re, nana re, na nane re

After watching Sancho dancing, kabir too joined her n enjoyed..sanchi again started singing

Barso re..
Barso re megha
Barso re megha megha
Barso re megha barso..

Gile gile gile haan..
Haan haan haan haan..
Haan haan haan haan..
Geeli geeli maati
Geeli maati ke chal gharonde banyange re

Hari bhari ambi, ambi ki daali
Milke jhule jhulaayenge re haan..
Dhan, baiju, ghaj ne hal jote sabne
Bailon ki ghanti baji
Aur taale lage bharne
Re tair ke chali, main to paar chali
Re tair ke chali, main to paar chali
Paar waale par le ke naar chali re megha

Nana re, nana re, nana re, na na re
Nana re, nana re, nana re, na na re
Nana re, nana re, nana re, na na re
Nana re, nana re, nana re, na na re

Kali kali raatein
Kali raaton mein
Yeh badarwa baras jaayega
Gali gali mujhko megha doondhega
Aur garaj ke palat jaayega
Ghar aagan, aganaa aur pani ka jharna
Bhool na jana mujhe sab poochhenge warna

Re beh ke chali, main to beh ke chali
Re keh ke chali, main to keh ke chali re megha

Nana re, nana re, nana re, na na re
Nana re, nana re, nana re, na na re
Nana re, nana re, nana re, na na re
Nana re, nana re, nana re, na na re

Nana re.. Nana re.. Nana re..
Na re Na re Na re Na re Na re

After the song thunderstorm started n kanchi hugged each other… They were lost in each other…

Well guys now this much only.. About God knows aage Kya likhu..

Precap: kabir kissed sanchi…
A boy is shown wandering in the road with his guitar…

With lots of love
Anu

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Anuradha123

    Myself a software developer and a teacher Great devotee of God bajrangbali .... Wanted to become an ias officer Loved reading, writing n singing ????????

    12 Comments

    1. Khamoshi on September 19, 2017 9:45 pm

      Don’t compare your talent with others dear … in my opinion ..everyone has their own speciality … and u r best at your place.. i too lag behind from all of u. But i still try.
      And don’t repeat it again..u r my inspiration dear..

      And come to ur article.. i just loved the way u create moments of KANCHI between scenes.. i learn from it.
      Keep writing..of course after your exams ??
      Good luck for exams dear

    2. Dhruti on September 19, 2017 10:15 pm

      superb one

    3. niyaaa on September 19, 2017 10:27 pm

      Awsome anu post nxt one dear

    4. Anonymousaa on September 19, 2017 10:28 pm

      It isn’t boring at all dear!It is actually superb while I found today’s epi quite shorter than usual.
      Plz post next epi ASAP.

    5. anu on September 19, 2017 10:57 pm

      Nice and so cute episode yaar…..keep it up yaar……

    6. RuCh23 on September 19, 2017 11:38 pm

      Awww Anu don’t think of yourself like that!!! We love your writing ok? ??? if we didn’t, then we won’t give you comments to encourage you! And btw today’s epi is as amazing as always ???

    7. Ashnita on September 19, 2017 11:52 pm

      amazing superb mindblowing awesome lovely khidki tod and I kill u anu sweetie never say that it was boring or u can’t match with other writer. I think u write better than me. waiting for next part

    8. Moonlight25 on September 20, 2017 3:03 am

      Hey Anu dear…dont compare your talent with others because everyone has their own talents and yours is best at your place…and your ff is amazimg se upar wala….cant wait to read further….post whenever you can….good luck with your exams….wish you all the best….love you loads

    9. Maisarah on September 20, 2017 9:00 am

      Superbly awesome Anu….. Can’t wait for the next ❤ love u

    10. Alia on September 20, 2017 1:48 pm

      Amazing

    11. Abhilasha on September 20, 2017 1:51 pm

      Dear it was marvelous…. Really loving ur story… Musical concept puts 4 moon in story… And don’t compare u with others u have ur individuality and doing perfect!!!

    12. riyarocks on September 20, 2017 7:02 pm

      Anu dear, it was a superrrrr se uparrrrrrr waala episode & yaar, don’t feel that u r less in any way…..like I said, I’m a big music lover so don’t even get these things in ur mind…………I luv ur writings dear……….

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