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Home»Fan Fiction»Pyaar ishq aur mohabbat (Part 13)
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Pyaar ishq aur mohabbat (Part 13)

Anuradha123By Anuradha123September 29, 2017Updated:September 29, 201732 Comments13 Mins Read
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Hello friends! Anu is back with the remaining part of the story.. Firstly wish u all a happy “Mahanavami”…i m sad due to rain not able to visit durga pandals… Did you all enjoyed the puja? In Assam, we wear “mekhela chador ” with all the necessary ornaments and give “horaye” to God…. Hope in your place rain is not spoiling the mood to enjoy… Thanks for bearing my bakbak and sorry couldn’t update fast as I was unwell. My leg was paining since two days not able to sleep properly… Now, I m fine after eating the medicines.. Thanks to everyone for supporting me and also for your lovely comments… Its like I have made a goal…. Lastly I would like to congratulate our queen of OS (Trisha) for hitting century… Let’s cheers for her “Hip Hip Hooray “may God bless u our dear Trisha…
OK my bakbak ka quota is over now.. So let’s start the next episode
Scene 1
Malhotra mansion
Doctors are checking the heartbeat of gayatri… Oxygenmask is also put on her nose… Anand is tensed and unable to sit at one place… He blames himself for the situation.. (oh someone is running and rushing quickly towards gayatri.. He is Rahul who loves his mother dearly)
Rahul : Mom! Please wake up! Open your eyes mom! What happened to you? U have to wake up… See your son is calling u..(tears rolled down his cheeks).. He asked anand, “why gayatri is in this situation and for whom? ”
Anand tries to pacify : beta! Nothing happened to gayatri.. She will be alright.. Don’t worry
Rahul : no Dad! I won’t leave my mom alone.. I will be there itself..
Doctors comes out of the room and informs everyone that gayatri suffered from heart attack.. It’s God’s grace that now she is alright… But u have to take extra care of hers… She shouldn’t be given any mental tension otherwise she can suffer from major attack…
Anand : oh God! What have I done? This is all bcoz of jaya.. I am not going to spare her…..
First I have to find my daughter… After that, I will do something of this jaya(thinking deeply)
Rahul : Dad! I will stay here tonight.. U go and take rest…
Anand :ok beta… If anything is needed then please inform me..
He leaves thinking about Jaya…

Scene 2
Jaya’s house
The door bell rings… Isha opens the door and is happy to see Jaya.. She hugs her….
Jaya : ishu! Is everything fine?
Isha : yes maa!
Jaya: good! I m going to freshen up… I’m very tired too so I will eat afterwards..
Isha : ok
Here, sanchi is imagining kabir with her.. Pragya throws a paper ball and it hits sanchi..
Kamaal ka nishaana hai hamara!! Where r you lost? Hmm jaroor uss vidheshi ghode k bare mein soch rahi hogi?
Sanchi blushes : hmm…. Oops nahi.. Why should I think about him?
Pragya (teasingly) : yeh toh bhagwaan jaane
Sanchi pouts
Pragya : waise bhi I forgot to tell u isha had invited veer and Ajay at our home for lunch..
Suddenly, sanchi’s phone rang… It was of kabir
Kabir : I want to meet u right now at sunshine hotel as some of my investors want to meet u..
Sanchi :ok I m coming
Sanchi informs pragya that she had to go to meet kabir for some work..
Isha (from behind) : chori chori chupke chupke…
Sanchi : shut up isha…
Isha : sorry meri mithai ki dukaan …you go and get ready… We will handle everything…
Sanchi immediately wore a Blue Saree with pink and silver colored blouse… Pink color earrings with silver bracelet… Hmmmm now I am ready… She hugs ishagya and left for the destination..

Scene3
Sunshine hotel
Kabir was waiting for the investors and saanchi… God knows “why all are late”..sanchi also not arrived till now.. After 10 minutes, investors arrived and kabir welcomed them.
Investor Mitra : kabir! Where is the singer? u told us that she is the new face of the Music Industry… Where is she?
Sanchi runs faster and reaches room no 118.. Sorry sir! May I come in?
Kabir after hearing her voice looks at her.. He was mesmerized by her beauty… “she is so beautiful not less than an angel ”
Investors asked sanchi to sing a song… Sanchi sang a melodious song(thodha sa pyaar huwa hai thoda hai baaki)… They praised sanchi for her excellent singing and finalized the deal with kabir… After the investors gone, kabir too praised sanchi for her pretty voice..
Kabir : I m so lucky that you’re singing for my company.. Thanks sanchi..
Sanchi : no need to thank… I can do anything for u.. I mean it’s my luck that I got such a golden opportunity…
Note : there’s no one in the room except kanchi.. suddenly sanchi screams by seeing a cockroach and started jumping… Bachao bachao..
Kabir : what happened sanchi? Why are u screaming?
Sanchi : kabir please save me from this cockroach.. I’m scared of that.. By saying she jumped in the bed…
The cockroach flew and sat on her back… She felt something and started to scream louder… She ran here and there and suddenly she slipped.. Our handsome hunk had saved her from falling… Both had an intense eye lock… Kabir was lost in her beauty and slowly moved his hands towards her back… Sanchi’s heart start to beat faster…. She can feel the touch of his fingers and quickly hugged him… (oho cockroach has gone, it brought both the lovers closer)
Kabir unable to control his emotions , hugged her tightly…
Sanchi : kabir! I want to say something to you it’s very important… I can’t wait anymore…
Kabir : hmm bolo! What u like to say?
Sanchi : actually I……. I love u kabir… I love u very much… Don’t know how and when it happened? But I can’t control my emotions now…
Kabir quickly broke the hug and turned in opposite direction… In his mind ” I can’t love u sanchi ” I can’t….. I m stuck between past and present… I can’t stoop so low to hurt your sentiments sanchi…. I like u but…… I can’t love u…
Sanchi : kabir what happened? Please say something… Do you love me ? You love someone? Please look into my eyes and say
Kabir (frustrated) : listen sanchi! We are friends but I can’t love u..
Sanchi (tears rolling down) : why?
Kabir : I love someone else… I loved her very much but now she’s not with me anymore… She betrayed me… So I hate her.. I hate love.. I will never love anyone…
Sanchi ( wiping her tears) : sorry kabir! Please forgive me I didn’t knew that… But I will love you… Chahe tum mujhse pyaar Karo ya na Karo…. I will wait for you….
Saying this, she immediately left the place…
Kabir bent down on his knees : why God? Why me? Why?

Scene 4
In airport, a girl in modern avatar wearing ? walked with her luggage… I’m back Mumbai…
In her mind : I came only for you kabir… I want to rectify my mistakes..
She called someone and asked about kabir…
I m coming kabir… Wait for me…
I was dumb to leave u and your love but now I want to repent my mistakes… I m coming kabir to make u mine….
Scene 5
Ajay and veer came to ishagya’s house…
Ajay : aa toh gaye hai par gift toh laye hi nahi
Veer : u donkey! Can’t u say that before? Idiot..
Ajay : sorry yaar! Totally forgot… Come on let’s ring the doorbell… Aage ki aage dekhenge
They rang the doorbell… Pragya opens the door and welcomed them..
Pragya : please come! This is our home, sweet home
Isha : hi Ajay, hii veer,
Veer : hii!!
Ajay : hii
After a while, veer asked about sanchi… Sanchi ji nahi dikh rahi? Where is she?
Isha : she went for some work.. She will come within a hour.. Till then enjoy..
Pragya n isha both went to the kitchen and cooked delicious lunch… They served them the lunch and started to chat…
Ajay : sorry pragya ji! First time we came to your house and didn’t brought any gift..
Isha : it’s OK… No need guys.. Relax
Pragya : dekho be! Gift sift ki koi jarurat nahi hai samjhe…
Veer : yeh sab ish gadhe k wajah se huwa hai…
Isha : it’s OK veer not an issue… U can also give us treat next time… Don’t be angry… Relax …
Ajay : wow food is so delicious.. Whoever cooked it I want to lick her fingers..
Isha : hahaha! It’s cooked by us… Then u have to lick both of our fingers..
Everyone laughs… After the lunch, ishagya showed all the house to them…
Veer n Ajay : OK we should take a leave now… This veer had some work…
Ishagya waves them bye n both the boys went directly to malhotra mansion…
Scene 6
In the farm house, kabir is drinking wine.. He is totally disturbed by thinking about today’s incidents… Someone touched his head… He turned and found his mother standing… He hugged her…
Kabir : Maa!! Why it happens to me? Why?
Kusum : I know beta u are hurt… Don’t think about your past….. Think about the present… Why u r destroying your life beta n for whom? For that shraddha, ..why don’t u forget her beta? She already moved in her life and I think u should also move on…. Beta saccha pyaar har kisi love nahi milta.. U r lucky that u got that chance… Go and get your true love
Kabir (wiping his tears) : yes maa! U r right… I will move on… I will bring my true love…. Thanks maa! I was stuck in midway… U gave me the direction..
Kusum : pehle yeh toh bata! Who’s that girl?
Kabir : maa! She is sanchi! She is so simple, beautiful and very innocent… Today she confessed her love to me but I rejected her proposal
Kusum : before its too late.. Go and bring my future daughter in law…..
Kabir nodded n drived his car towards sanchi’s house… He is calling sanchi ‘s number but she’s not picking up… He called isha : Hello isha! Is sanchi there?
Isha : no, she didn’t reach till now… She was with you only na… Then why are u asking? Is everything alright?
Kabir told everything to isha… Don’t worry I will bring her back…
Here, sanchi went near by the beach and sat down crying harder… Why I fell in love God? Before, u snatched my mother and now my true love… What crime I have committed that u gave me such a cruel punishment… My whole dream got shattered… I have no right to live.. I should die then everything will be fine…
Kabir here traces her phone’s location and rushed to the spot…. He finds sanchi who was going towards the sea… He shouts “stop sanchi ” “stop ”
But sanchi was lost in her thoughts and didn’t heard kabir’s voice… Kabir runs faster and shouts “stop sanchi ” aage khatra hai, please ruk jao.. Before the waves touched her, kabir dragged her and ran faster to the safer place..
Sanchi : why u save me? I should die bcoz I’m unfortunate for all…
Kabir : what the hell are you saying sanchi! What u were trying to do? U didn’t think about your sisters? U didn’t think about me? If anything happened to you then Mai kese jinda rehta… Bolo
Sanchi unable to believe her ears : what did you say?
Kabir : u heard correct sanchi… I love u… I love u… I love u… Yes, I told u that I can’t love anyone but your simplicity has stolen my heart…. I don’t want to loose u… Already, I had lost many things in my life.. But I don’t want to loose my true love… He shouts ” I love you sanchi ” will u marry me??
Sanchi (happily) : I love you too kabir… Can’t imagine a life without you…
Both hugged each other and they shared a passionate kiss…. They continued till lack of air..
Note : sorry friends… I’m weak in romance.. Don’t know how to describe it…
Someone was clapping from far…they were isha, Pragya…
Flash back
Kabir to isha : I have tracked her phone.. It’s nearby the juhu beach… Come fast, I m going there..
Fb ends
Pragya n isha hugged sanchi n scolded her : u duffer! Didn’t thought about us? Bhalei hi hum sagi nahi hai par behne toh hai na Teri… Next time if u did something like that then u will see our rodra roop..
Sanchi (holding her ears) : sorry sorry! Please forgive me
Pragya : anth bhala toh San bhala…
Everyone laughed …
Kabir : I think we should go now.. I will drop you all home…
Ishagya: hmmmm let’s go… If maa got to know all these then she will not spare us….
In the car, kabir tells sanchi that tomorrow is your recording… Please come on time.. Investors are very happy.. Thank you sanchi it’s all bcoz of u…
Ishagya (teasingly) : ohho ! Jiju it’s not fair… U should give us treat…otherwise we will not send sanchi
Kabir : OK saali sahiba… I will give you a treat tomorrow evening at my farmhouse… Maa has invited u all…
Ishagya nodded happily
Scene 7
In the hospital, gayatri gains conscious ness… She saw Rahul sleeping in the chair… She thought “no I will not say anything to him” he can’t tolerate it…i have to find Jaya at any cost… I have to tell the truth to her that Rahul is her son…
Rahul wakes up : mom r u alright? U take rest… Don’t take any tension mom… Your son is there.. No need to worry…
Gayatri : I know beta! Nothing will happen to me… You are there then why should I worry? She asked about anand
Rahul : I have sent Papa to home… He was also very tensed when he saw you in this position… Mom no more talking, u take rest… I’m just coming…
Gayatri : how to tell u that u r not my son… U love me so much.. I can’t break your heart… I can’t
Scene 8
Shraddha is thinking about kabir… She calls someone.. I want him at any cost… He is mine…
Don’t worry this time I will not let this golden hen go… She laughs evilly
She takes out kabir’s photo ” Darling just wait and watch”
Shraddha is back……
I will kill whoever comes between us… I need money… I want power.. I can achieve all my dreams by marrying you.. You will become my puppet after marriage…

Precap: shraddha comes to kabir’s farmhouse… Kanchi are shocked….

So sorry friends that today also I am not able to post longer… Due to mahanavami I have to wrap up fast… I promised u all that next time I will post a maha episode… Please forgive me… Till then all my lovely readers take care and God bless u all…
With love
Anu

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    32 Comments

    1. anu on September 29, 2017 3:58 pm

      Nice story……. Happy navami

      • Anuradha123 on September 29, 2017 6:50 pm

        Thanks anu sweetie for your lovely comments…

    2. Priyanshi on September 29, 2017 4:10 pm

      Yippie I guessed right the girl was shraddha.
      It was perfect shot. I think I’m in love with ur ff.
      Pls update soon.

      • Anuradha123 on September 29, 2017 6:51 pm

        Thanks priyanshi dear for your sweet comments… Love u dear…

    3. Tumpamoni on September 29, 2017 4:51 pm

      Nice stry,,dear.. Update soon..

      • Anuradha123 on September 29, 2017 6:52 pm

        Thank you tumpamoni dear… I’m so happy that u liked my story…. Keep commenting dear

    4. Amnaa on September 29, 2017 5:42 pm

      Nice

      • Anuradha123 on September 29, 2017 6:53 pm

        Thanks amnaa dear… Lots of love dear

    5. riyarocks on September 29, 2017 6:18 pm

      haha………dekha…..maine sahi pakda tha…………haha…………..btw dear, I’ve a song dedicated to u………teri “story” ki deewani ….deewani(by kailash kher…hehe)………Anu dear……ek dum khidkitod, jhakaas, full on paisa vasool episode tha………..luv u yaar………..

      • Anuradha123 on September 29, 2017 8:15 pm

        Riya yaar love u a lot… Tumne aisa bol mera dil jeet liya… Mujhe toh nachne ka Mann ho raha hai…main toh tumhari ff ki deewani hu… Yeh gaana sirf tumhare liye
        Main toh tere story ki diwani ho Gaye.. Kab post karne waali ho apni story… Paisa wasool agar tha toh kaha gaye mere paise? (hehehe)

      • riyarocks on September 29, 2017 9:45 pm

        haha…….tumhe mila nahi………oops………maine toh bhootu ke haathon bheja tha, shayad tum usse dekh nahi paayi……..oho……….kya karoon ab, ok…….dhoondo bhootu ko, jab miljae uss se le lena………..haha………..

      • Anuradha123 on September 29, 2017 11:21 pm

        Bhootu se kyu loon.. Yaar tumne channel hi change kar diya… Savitri Devi se sidha bhootu.. Tumhi se chahiye mujhe! Bhootu toh dikhi nahi iska matlab mera gift mujhe riya degi (hehehe)

    6. Niyati on September 29, 2017 7:07 pm

      Same to u my lovely friend .Episode is amazing, awesome , mindblowing.Loved it to the coree.Interesting precap .Do update soon. Lots of love & kisses to u .

      With wishes & regards
      Good night & sweet dreamz dear.

      Niyu.

      • Anuradha123 on September 29, 2017 8:59 pm

        Thanks niyu dear… I will try to update fast… Where is your ff update? Please post it soon

      • Niyati on September 29, 2017 11:10 pm

        I am too lazy .Ya, will update tomorrow dear .Glad that u are waiting.

    7. Anonymousaa on September 29, 2017 8:00 pm

      It was wonderful epi.Finally Kabir realized that he loves Sanchi.
      I don’t care what Shraddha tries to do after all the lovebirds have united.
      Waiting for next epi.

      • Anuradha123 on September 29, 2017 9:20 pm

        Thanks dear for your lovely comments.. Yeh shraddha bohot kuch karegi… Dekhte hai woh kya karti hai…

    8. Alia on September 29, 2017 8:54 pm

      Amazing

      • Anuradha123 on September 29, 2017 9:33 pm

        Thanks Alia dear…

    9. Khamoshi on September 29, 2017 8:59 pm

      My little sister… episode was epic… so finally kanchi confessed their love to each other…so happy.. amazing article dear.. and i should give a prize to me..i guessed Shradha’s entry correctly.. whats say…where is my prize?

      And Happy Mahanavmi dear.
      E Haalo GARBA ramiye Re

      • Anuradha123 on September 29, 2017 9:32 pm

        Thank you my sweet cutie pie… Prize k tor par ? de deti hu… Hmm yeh shraddha aa toh gayee hai ab woh kanchi K life mein rayta failayegi… Dekho tumhare wall mei I have posted something..

    10. Trisha139 on September 29, 2017 9:04 pm

      Awwww thanku so much mucb anu for mentioning me in your ff that’s a great pleasure ! Nd coming back to ur ff this was AMAZING ! SUPERB! FABULOUS ! I am just spell bound ! This is going great especially I am happy u did kabeers confession in this episode itself !

      • Anuradha123 on September 29, 2017 9:36 pm

        Thank you Trisha dear.. Main bohot hi khush hu that your century is complete… Ab tum aur jyada ff likho taaki 200 Se bhi upar karo… Once more thank you that you loved the confession part… Lots of love to you

    11. niyaaa on September 29, 2017 10:27 pm

      Awsome epi anu dear happy mahanavami…first of al take care of urself…epi is mindblowing lovvv kanchi scene a lot… And shradha aa gayi seriel me riya kam thi kya..hehehe…jhakkaass ant bhala to sab bhala…post nxt asap..tc

      • Anuradha123 on September 29, 2017 11:26 pm

        Niyaa thank you dear… Itni acchi batein likhogi toh I swear I will go insane(hehehe)…ek saitan ff mei nahi laungi toh demons bura maan jayenge… Aakhir serial inn demon se hi chalta hai..
        Ab kya karu riya toh meri ff mei hai nahi socha issi khalnayika se apne ff ka naam chamka soon.. (hehehe)

    12. Abhilasha on September 29, 2017 10:40 pm

      Anu dear it was really outstanding…. Excellent… An kanchi proposal loved it…..u rocked it!!

      • Anuradha123 on September 30, 2017 10:37 am

        thanks abhilasha for your sweetest comment… Love u too dear

    13. Moonlight25 on September 30, 2017 12:00 am

      Wow Anu dear…i just loved it…it was amazing…you are such an amazing author…love you loads and post ASAP ??❤❤

      • Anuradha123 on September 30, 2017 10:38 am

        Thanks moon dear for your lovely comments… U r just a good writer and my inspiration too… Love u a lot sweetie…

    14. Dhruti on September 30, 2017 3:28 am

      i just loved it…superb, mind blowing, ek dum khidkitod ff tha aaj ka update next one soon…

      • Anuradha123 on September 30, 2017 10:40 am

        Thank you very much dhruti… Main next waala jaldi hi update karungi tab tak k liye dher saara pyaar….

    15. Jessicca on October 7, 2017 10:42 pm

      Wonderful.. Amazing… Outstanding… Marvelous.. Mind blowing epi dear… Finally they confessed their love for each other… Loved the epi… Superb..❤❤

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