Fan Fiction

Pyaar dosti hai a shraman ff part 7 (ek duje ke vaaste)

Hello guys….!! 😀

M again wid prt 7 of my ff……
Thanks a lot fr ur precious cmmnts on prev prt….
Keep cmmnting n loving… <3
Hope u lyk this also….!
Well so sorry fr late update actually net prob in my iPad or ep Bhi iPad Mai hi tha…thank fully….I can post it today…. 🙂

Prev: truth n dare game sm masti, romance…sumo goes to shr room…
Shr cms in his room n is shocked to c sumo…
——-PART 7———–
Continue….

Sumo is standing in shocked….shr is also shocked bcz he sees diary in her hand…
Tears rolls down frm her face…
Shr slightly: sumo………….
—she luks at him in deep shock—-
S: u……….love me??

(SUSPENSE KHUL GAYA 😉 )

(Smone of u were correct) 😀 😀

Shr: no…..no…..I.,,I…..
S: how can u……love…….u knw I……..hate love……u….(she remembers abt game)
In game…..u said….abt love…..it WS me…….ri8?
Shr nods…….
(She realizes smthing)
I understand ……….Ooh that's y…..u…made d bet…
—-Shr gets a double shock bcz she is misunderstanding him—–
Shr: no….no
S: that's y u….asked abt kiss….u want to take this frndship on dat level…
Shr: no….no….yr u r misunderstanding me….that's not lyk it…..
S: how can u love…..(she cries) u knw my parents separated bcz of this….
Shr: no sumo…..I knw……I don't love u…
S: how can u lie…!! (She shows him diary) I have this proof….n u r still lying??
Shr: look sumo……it it's 2010 diary see….when we were 18…..I came to u…that day……..

FLASHBACK:
2010:
It's sumo's 18 birthday…
Shr: today I will tell her how much I love her I knw……she will accept me after all I m her childhood FRND…..
—he takes out a diary (same diary) n a red rose—-
Shr: I will give her this diary….this special diary…n this red rose after I propose her…
—he happily reaches her home—
Bt he finds her sitting on couch in shock n sadness…..
—-he gets shock—- n goes to her…
Shr: sumo!! Wat happend???
S: I got my bday gift…..
Shr: wat happend….
S: mom got preeti's custody n dad got mine……….mom is leaving tonight….
—shr gets shocked—-
(She cries)
S: shr!!!!!! I got my bday gift!!! (She cries hard)…….
Shr: it's okyyy (he consoles her) shhh….everything's gonna be okyy
S: no…nothin is gonna be okyy……
—-she coldly says—-
Love ki koi value nai hoti………(she luks at her parents wedding pic) sirf ego ki value hoti hai………Frm now on now I hate love….I hate…..love….I….
(she strts cry again)
—shr gets a double shock—-
—he hugs her—
Sumo plzz don't cry…….
S: I do t want to lose a best FRND lyk u…….
Shr is very sad bt try to control his sadness:
Shr: yes……..I will be always there fr u……………..as a FRND..
S: thank u……
—he crushes d red rose n puts it into his pocket—

PRESENT:
S: why didn't u tell me???
Shr: I came to tell u….bt u….were nt in ur senses…..u were keep saying u hate love….how can I…….
Sumo picks up the same rose frm diary……..
S: this WS d rose u want to give me ri8???
—shr sadly nods…..
—–she puts it back—-
S: u should told me y u kept it a secret in all these years…..
Shr: cause I don't want to lose a FRND lyk u…….
S: FRND or luv…..??
Shr: plzz believe me I've moved on…..all these years I treated u as my best FRND u tell…me……kabhi tumhe aisa LAGA Mai tumse pyaar karta hoon…??
S: u said u loved me….saccha pyaar itni aasani se nahi bhula ya jata shr…
Shr: I m sorry………plzzzz I don't want to lose u I already lost my love once now I don't want to lose my bestie also………
S: no……u doesn't lose ur bestie………
(a smile papers on shr face)
S: u…r my best….FRND…..n will always be….I will not end my relationship wid u bcz u had help me a lot in my hard days…..
.bt maybe frm now on our relationship Won't be lyk before……..
Shr: plzz don't say this……
S: plz don't meet me fr sm days I don't want to c u…..
Shr: plzzz……..
S: shr I need tym……plzzz stay away fr sm days…….
—-shr don't want her to go—–
S: good by shr………
—she leaves n he breaks down n sits on knees—-

Here all frnds (Khush,adi,ayesh,rohit are listening this)
——they all r shocked—–
They cm inside……
Adi: shr………
Shr: I want smtym alone…..plzzz
—Khush sign everyone to leave—-
—-Khush pats on shr shoulder—-
Ro: we will cm tommorow bro…..
They all leave include Khush….
OUTSIDE…
Ayesh: so as we all knw abt d situation here….
K: we must help them…..
Ro: bt how????
Adi thinks smthing……
A: hey Khush give me ur phone….
(He takes her phone n dials preeti's num)
Ayesh: y r u dialling preeti's num…
—Khush understands smthing—-
K: cause prob ki jarrrr theek Karna zaroori hai…..
(She smiles)

—all r confused except Khush n adi—

—-preeti picks up call——
Preeti in shock: wat..?? Shr n di..!!?? How ??

Sumo cms home…she straight goes to her room sits on bed n cries…..
S: y didn't u told me once……u lied to me all these 6 years….(she holds her head)
Whenever I want to get rid of love….it cms again n stands in front of me…..
She remembers all her moments wid shr…..
How they used to fight wid eaChOther on small things……
(She smiles)

Then she remembers d bet abt kiss…..
—-she gets into thinking—–
S: y kiss…?? If u don't love me……anymore..

Then she remember d last thing abt game..where khushi asked shr did he ever love anyone……..
N shr said yes…..
The ques echoes in her mind…..
(She holds her head)
S: uffffff……….wats happening to me……
She is irritated n lyes on her bed…..
She thinks….
"Shr is my best FRND I shared everything wid him…..bt now…?? "

Shr in the other side is in his room….
Shr: I knw……she will nt forgive me….
(He sits on his bed n takes out a pic frm his drawer)
—-it's his n sumo's pic ——
Shr: I m so sorry sumo………plz forgive me……
.(he remembers the incident)
Or will u break all her relationship wid me??
(He gets concerned n scared)
no…….shr u r fool Jo baat 6 year se chup I hoi thi….Aj usne kaise diary dekhli…….
6 years before I lost my love n now after 6 years I lost my best FRND also……
He gets sad……
Nai Mai aisa nai hone de Sakta…….

Preeti cms near her room she saws sumo…..
She is talking on phone wid Gang (Khush ,adi,rohit,ayesh)
—guys she only came to meet her dad n sumo di other wise she lives separate Wid priya (their mum)—–
P: don't u have to worry abt di….I understand all plan….I can give my lyf fr di….n this is tooo small…..
(she smiles n cuts d call)
P thinks: don't worry di…….u always helped me..fr d Frst tym I get a chance to help u….n trust me I will nt let go this opportunity….
……I will make everything perfect as ever……
(She smiles)

NXT MORNING……

Sumo cms to breakfast table….
Preeti n kartik r already present there……
S: good morning dad….
(she saws preeti)
S: hyyyyy
(they hug eaChOther)
P: hy di!!! 😀
S: tu yahan??
P: haawwww I can't cm??
S: hahaha no buddhu u can its ur house…..
K: sumo madam ko congratulations karo……she finally graduated….
—sumo looks at preeti in surprise n shock—-
S: preeti..??!!!! Wat graduated ho gai tu…???
(sumo is dammmm happy)
P: Hehehehehehehe finally
(They hug eaChOther in happiness..)
P: I came to take u…….(sumo give her a surprised expression) oo hooo di don't u remember u were suppose to cm yesterday….to meet mom….(sumo looks down remembering) bt u didn't…..cm we r going today at mom's house….mom is missing u…….
(Kartik looks on)
(Sumo luks at kartik)
(He again gets busy in reding news paper)
P: ahhh papa u too…..
(kartik luks on surprised)
P: papa u have to cm wid us…..
(sumo signs preeti nt to ask bt preeti is preeti…… 😀 )
P: plzzzz papa plzzzz plzzzz….papa I want I family dinner as my gift plzz (Kartik thinks bt then says yes only fr her daughter sake..,,,n sumo is very much surprised)
K: okkk m going to my room…preeti..?
P: after lunch……..
(N smiles)
—-kartik nods n goes—–
—-sumo is damm surprised——
S: wow preeto must say tu kamal hai yr u forced dad n he agree……wow…..mom n dad face to face…it will be…………(She remembers everything yesterday's incident abt love…..)……..awesome…….
P: woh to Mai hooon….(she notices) di…??? Where have u lost….??
S: aaa Han…??? Nai kuch nai….I think I should take rest…..
P: ok ok…..bt plz be ready…..it will be a grand dinner…..
Sumo smiles n leaves fr her room…..

While stepping on stairs sumo thinks..
'No I should nt thinks abt this shr chap………(she luks at preeti who is busy in mob……n is sooo happy….) I should concentrate on this…..my family…my sis…she is happy…..I m suppose to be happy…….'
—sumo goes—-

Preeti thinks:
'I knw di…..wat r u thinking…..I knw it will be hard fr u to stay away frm ur bestie….to fake a smile fr my……our family sake… Bt trust me di……I will try my best..
(She luks at a pic of her shr n sumo in her mob) ……….of making everything Oky……it's ur sis promise….'

Preeti smiles….

—–SCREEN FREEZES ON PREETI'S SMILING FACE——–

Precap; dinner at priya (sumo's mom house) sumo gets a call frm Khush……n is shocked……
Sumo: wat….???!!! 😮

So guys how WS d ep….?? 😀
Tooo emotional……
I made it little longer cause I posted late…..
sorry if I bored u all……,

Hhaha finally suspense khul Gaya….

So here is d ques: wat do u think wat Khush told sumo That she is sooo shocked??
Wat will be sumo's next move toward's shr after this incident…???

Ok now most important ques…..
Guys plzz plzz tell me now….when I ask abt kiss bw them, toh many of u asked me that they r frnds na…..so they r not frnds now…n m asking again…..

DO U GUYS WANT A KISS SEQUENCE OR NOT…….??

Plzz ans carefully u all knw the situation….so ans is really needed plzz after this I will decide whether to put it in ff or nt….don't forget to give ur ans…
N I will go wid majority…. 😉

Ok guys…agar if u lyk this ep itto sa Bhi then plzz cmmnt n give ur feedbacks…
Silent readers plzzz cmmnts r really needed……

N YES AN "OS" IS ON D WAY………EXCITED…?? 😉 😉

Ok guys till then byyyy byyyy…..
LOVE U ALL…!

Marie

No BeaUtiY Šhineš BrighteR Thañ a GõŌd HearT....!

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