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Pyaar dosti hai a shraman ff part 6 ( ek duje ke vaaste )

MarieBy MarieJuly 25, 201634 Comments6 Mins Read
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Hello guys !!
Sorry fr late update……
I want to post it after 24….
Thank u soo much fr cmmnting on prev prt…..!!
I m again wid prt 6.. 🙂 🙂 🙂
Hope u lyk it…..!

——–PART 6———-

Bottle spins n stops on adi……
Sumo: truth or dare?
Adi: dare….
Shr: ok ur dare is sing n dance wid Khush….romantic wala
——Khush blushes——
Adi strts singing……

Har lamha dekhne ko,
Tujhe intzaar karna,
Tujhe yaad karke aksar,
Raaton mein roz jagna,

He takes Khush along with him

Badla hua hai kuch toh,
Dil in dino ye apna,

He cms near Khush….

Kaash wo pal paida hi na ho,
Jis pal mein nazar tu na aaye,
Kaash wo pal paida hi na ho,
Jis pal mein nazar tu na aaye,

He spins her n taker her into his arms

Agar kahin aisa pal ho,
Toh iss pal mein mar jaayen,

He sits on his knees n kisses Khush’s hand

Mar jaayen..mar jaayen,
Mar jaayen..ho mar jaayen,(x2)

——-everyone claps———
Ayesh spins bottle n it stops on sumo…..
—-everyone cheers—–
K: so sumo truth or dare??
S: dare…..
K: ahhhhh why didn’t u choose truth…
S: aahaaaaa so u can ask me abt my secrets chal beta……
K: hahahah ok beta…..
Rohit: so ur dare is ja beta…..make tea fr all of us…
(Everyone laughs)
S: wat???
Shr: no yr it’s tooo easy…,
S: u shut up or u adi!! I will not make tea fr 6 peoples
Adi: who said 6 only 5….. R u counting urself too??
(She n Khush give high5 to eaChOther)
S hits shr….
Shr: ouch….
S: don’t laugh….
She goes……
(sumo us making tea in kitchen shr cms frm behind)
Shr: so how much tym it will take….
S: bauk kar hi rehna hamesha….bs khana peene ki lagi rehti hai…,
(Shr laughs)
Shr: aww sumo baby is sad cause she have to make tea fr 6 oh no..no 5 people…hahah lagi reh beta….
He leaves……
—sumo gets angry—-
S cms wid tea—everybody shouts waiter has cm….n then laughs…sumo too laughs….everyone stops laughing….n Luk at eaChOther…
Adi laughs: ooy why did u all stop laughing….
(He takes tea n drinks it he throws all tea fr his mouth)
Adi: yuck!!!!! Cheeee!!!!!!
Sumo laughs: hahahah ab Hans
Adi: sumo ki bacchi ooh god itni karwi chai..!!!
—-all laughs—–
S: aww u only told me to make tea not to make good tea….

Sumo spins Bottle n it stops on shr
Ayesh:truth or dare?
Adi: plzz truth everybody is saying dare…
Shr: hahahah ok then truth…..I don’t want to make anything disgusting (he luks at sumo)
Khush:yay!!!! Now ur ques is do u ever loved smone
Adi: nt dosti wala saccha wala ishq??
Shr: wat type of question is this yr…….hmmmmmm
Adi:really?!
Khush: kab
Ayesh: kahan?
Rohi: kaise?
Sumo excitedly : kisse??
Shr: I will not ans anyothr ques…..(everyone gets sad) acha acha…..emotional blackmailers she WS…..my eng miss…..
——evry1 laughs——-
Adi: hahhahah teri eng miss uff….

Scene 2:
Shr n sumo r in the living area…..
S: soo who is that girl???
Shr: wat girl???
S: whome u luv duffer…
Shr: don’t u believe me I already told u guys….. 😀
S: I knw u lied……

—–shr turns back—-
Shr: really?? U think?? –he cms closer to her– u knw me very well huh??
…….Sumo steps backward in nervousness shr keeps coming forward to her……
Sumo: Han toh…..u lied n I knw…….
—–Shr cms more close to her….n she loses balance n both falls on couch——
….Shr is on top of her….
Sumo slowly: who is she??
Shr: she is…….I will nt tell u …..
S: y??
Shr:cause u haven’t give me my reward yet….
—–sumo pushes him——he fells frm couch—–
Shr: ouch!
S: go to hell! –
—she goes n shr laughs—-

Sumo cms to Khush…..
K: yrrr sumo can u plzz go to shr room actually I just forgot my mob there…..
S: yes yes 🙂 no prob…
K: thanks dear..
S: thanks kis ko bola??
( actually guys there is no thak u n no sorry in their dosti so that’s y)

—sumo goes to shr room—-
S: uffff so messy duffer……he can’t even clean his room books everywhere ahh mana ke parhti hai pr……..
(She strts picking books)
she saw smthing…..it’s a diary…..
🙂 🙂 (Lovely di u were right) 🙂 🙂
Sumo:wow beautiful…hmm 2010 ?? Wow 2010…. Let’s open
(she WS abt to open it.)…
.nai yr sumo bad manners …..widout permission I can’t open his diary….bt wat to do I want to knw….khair hai …..waise Bhi is ka kya personal ho ga…
(She laughs n opens)

She laughs n then gets serious n more serious……
She WS left shock when she reads sm more pages d diary…..due to shock she collides with a table…

—–she WS passing nearby he hears sm sound n goes to him room—-
Shr: ye awaz kaisi…..
(He opens d door)
Shr: ahhhh sumo u..? Wat r u……………….
(His eyes stuck on d diary in sumo hands)
—-Shr gets shock—-
——n sumo ws nt able to say smthing due to deep shock——
Shr slowly: sumo…………..
—-she luks at him——
Sumo: u………….
( tears rolls down frm her face)
——-SCREEN FREEZES ON BOTH SHOCKED FACES——-
To be continued…………..

Precap: abhi bata dia toh surprise kaisa?? ?????

So guys how WS d ep…??? Is it good or bad??
Did u lyk it….??
Plzz if yes then plz plz cmmnt…. I really need it…
N silent readers u tooo cmmnt

Now tym fr the ques….
Wat do u think wat happened ?? Wat did sumo read….?
I hope some of u knw that wat she read……bt phir Bhi 😉
Give ur ans n feedbacks via cmmnts …..

N guys my classes has been started frm today so It’s nt possible fr me to update regular…..bt I will try my best….. 🙂 prt 7 ,8 n an OS had already written….I will try to post ASAP…… 🙂

Till then by by !
Love u all..!! 😀

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    34 Comments

    1. Ruchi on July 25, 2016 11:25 am

      Hey Marie
      How r u?
      Not done yr… Ek to late epi… Upar se itna suspence…
      Anyways… Awsum epi… 🙂
      When we r going to get nxt epi…?
      Lots of Love
      Ruchi… 🙂

      • Marie on July 25, 2016 3:03 pm

        Hy Ruchi di..!
        M fyn..! 🙂
        How r u..?? 😀
        Aww soo sorry di……
        Hehe suspense nxt ep Mai khul jai ga don’t worry….
        Thank u soooo soo much fr cmmnting di.! 😀
        I will post nxt ep maybe tomorrow or d day after tomorrow…..cause nxt ep has already written so post ASAP… 🙂

        Love u tooooooo di….!!
        Wid lots of luv….
        —-Maria—–

      • Ruchi on July 25, 2016 4:39 pm

        M also Fine Marie…
        will wait for nxt epi…
        No need to say srry yr… 🙂

    2. Fatimagulesarfraz on July 25, 2016 11:53 am

      Ohhhhhh God yr … ye kya baat hui .. end kiya b to itny suspence pr … ufffff ab kya hy ye suspense … this ep was fantabulous …. plzzzz plzzzz try to update very sooooooon .. now I can’t wait more … plzzzz plzzzz it’s a request .. nd I think k diary me likha hoga k sharavan suman ko luv krta hy .. ummmmmm may b ..
      Stay blessed !!!

      • Marie on July 25, 2016 3:07 pm

        Aww so so sorry my dear…..
        Bt don’t worry nxt ep Mai u will get to knw everything….. 🙂 🙂
        Thank u soo soo much fr cmmnting yr…!
        Aaha.. 😀 not to worry I will try to post ASAP… 😀 😀
        Ok dear thanks atone fr ur ans………
        We’ll c wat will happen in nxt ep…. 🙂
        Thanks atone fr ur wishes…..
        Keep smiling dear…! 🙂

    3. ufaq on July 25, 2016 11:54 am

      Knock knock mario
      Love not fair
      I think its sypth related to her mom dad may b I don’t know
      Ya epi was full of suspense I really really liked it shr English teacher part was awesome
      Han was it or birthday on 24 July or anything special come on tellme anything special or serious
      R jab likh liye chain to post kro name jaldiiiiii plzzzzzz
      Take care
      Lots of love
      Study well got that study is the most important thing OK????
      Love u

      • Marie on July 25, 2016 3:13 pm

        Opening door……………….
        Aww so sorry… Fr suspense…. 🙂
        Ok API thank u so much fr ur ans
        We’ll c wat will happen in nxt ep…. 🙂 😉
        Hahahah no special reason just that sumo di has come n
        also my classes strt… USI ki khushi Mai ??? 😀
        Awww don’t worry api I will try to post ASAP ASAP cause nxt ep had already written so it will be possible fr me to update soon….. 🙂
        Yes API…..it’s very true study is more important… 🙂 🙂
        Thanks fr ur wishes…!
        U toooo take care…… 🙂
        Love u api..! <3
        Wid lots of luv.
        Maria .!

    4. sumo on July 25, 2016 12:49 pm

      my my maria.. m back finally.. yippieee.. dis was amazing n I read all d earlier parts dey were awesome too.. n now dat m back …. swagat nai kroge hamara????? anyway loved it very very much… post really soon…???

      • Marie on July 25, 2016 3:17 pm

        Yay….!!!! 😀
        M sooo sooo sooo happy to c u back di…..!!!!
        U can’t even imagine my happiness…. 😀
        Thank u sooo much fr reading my prev prts….! N m so glad that u lyked them…! 🙂 🙂
        Hahahahah …………apko swadat ki kya Zaroorat aptoh hamesha se welcome ho …….!
        Phir Bhi……
        ————WELCOME BACK DI SO HAPPY TO C U BACK—————-
        Thank u sooo much fr cmmnting di…..!!
        I will update soon 🙂

    5. Lily on July 25, 2016 2:14 pm

      Sweet epi… Sumo read that shravan loves her….
      ???

      • Marie on July 25, 2016 3:53 pm

        Thanks alot lily…….
        N thanks a tone fr ur ans we’ll c wat will happen in nxt ep……. 🙂

    6. Nikita on July 25, 2016 2:27 pm

      Not fair di.. Ye kya hua?? Pls tell me.. Achha private msg pe hi bata do.. But tell mee..uthe episode was very nice

      • Marie on July 25, 2016 3:58 pm

        Aww choooooo chorryyyyy my nikko.. 🙂
        Haahaha batane ko kuch nai……. lekin agar Pehle se hi bata dia toh suspence kaisa… ?? ??
        bs ek do din ki hi baat hai…….
        Phir ye suspence bhi khatam…. 😀
        thank u soooo much fr cmmnting my dear….!!
        Love u..!!

    7. Nandini aka Nandu on July 25, 2016 2:52 pm

      Err…. kya yaar di fir suspense ko daal diya! I was reading so enthusiastically for wht happens next and was keft khaali haath. Will miss ur regular updates. Study hard. Lots of love.kepp writing.

      • Marie on July 25, 2016 4:00 pm

        Hahahahah ?? ??
        so sorryyyy yr nandini……
        Bs thoda wait or n ye suspence bhi khul jana hai…… 😀
        Thank u sooo much fr reading n cmmnting dear….!!
        M so happy that u lyked it <3
        N thanks a tone fr ur wishes my dear……. !!! 😀
        love u toooo……!!
        God bless u 🙂

    8. WeirdSister on July 25, 2016 5:05 pm

      Uff maria….u should not end it on such a point…u told u hve written d next epi…so plz plz post soon…..its a request…. !! Loved it a lot…!
      🙂

      • Marie on July 25, 2016 7:06 pm

        Awww so sorry fr keeping it suspence……..
        Thanks alot fr cmmnting weird sis 😀
        ok dear i will try to post asap…. 🙂 🙂

    9. pretty preeti on July 25, 2016 5:47 pm

      Maro yar tere hatho mei jado hai
      Tea was so tasty
      Isn’t it
      Lovely epi
      Lovely di right nikle
      Coming towards u epi it WS mind blowing awesome blossom super duper
      It was toooo gooood
      U looted my heart
      Ans time
      I think shr might written he loved sumo
      Just a tukka
      Bye
      A lot of love

      • Marie on July 25, 2016 7:20 pm

        Hahahahah 😀
        Awww really tumko tea pasand aai m glad 🙂 🙂
        Thank u
        Thank u
        Thank u
        Sooo much my dear…..!!…….. 🙂
        Ok dear….
        Thanks a tone fr ur ans we’ll c wat will happen in nxt p…! 🙂
        Thanks dear…!
        By …..
        Love u tooooo <3
        Wid lots of luv
        Maria…!

    10. angel_pari on July 25, 2016 5:52 pm

      Hey cutieepie how r u…….

      Missed u guyZ alot

      hahahaha sumo was damn good achi tea pilai 😛

      awwwww sharvu luv sumo kahen yeh secret to nh tha dairy mn!!!!!!! Ufffff cant guess anythng so post soon lov u load and and what else yeah i read ur sm os i dont knw did i miss any but jo parhe that was awsome superb lyk cup if coffee keep writing

      and heehehe schools got open na hehehehe chalo beta ab subah jaldi uthne ki tyari kro 😀 bht maze hogae 😉 stay blessed keep smiling

      • Marie on July 25, 2016 7:24 pm

        Hy my dear api…!!!!!!!!!
        Yay….!!!!!! U came back….!!! 😀
        So happy to c u back…!!!
        M fyn how r u ??? All fyn?

        Hahahah thank u so much di…..!!
        We toooooo missed u a lot se Bhi ziada…!

        Hmmmmmm ye toh pata nai ke kya hai……!! Well thanks a tone fr ur and API…!! We’ll c wat will happen in next ep…. 🙂
        N thank u
        Thank u
        Thank u
        Thank u
        More……………… Ke APNE tym nikal n mere OS parhe…..!
        Thank u so much fr sweet compliment api! 🙂

        Hahahahah Han khul toh gai maze Bhi khatam…… 😀

        U tooooo API…!!
        May god keeps u happy always..!

    11. sona on July 25, 2016 6:24 pm

      Ssooo
      ..interesting…?☺☺???
      Ye suspense..suspense..mujhey nahi raha jaata..dear????
      Pls..jaldhi agli part post kar dhi dear..☺☺???

      • Marie on July 25, 2016 7:26 pm

        Thank u
        Thank u
        Thank u sooo much di..!
        Hahhahah no worries ye suspense nxt ep tak ka hi hai sirf…… 😀 😀 😀
        I will try to update as soon as possible…!

    12. sanjana on July 25, 2016 7:18 pm

      noooooooooooooooooooooooooo
      hw cld u do so … mujhe lga tha ki tum bta do gi kya hua h … bt .
      koi ni bt plzzzzzzzzzz post it tmrrw,
      mai suspnse me hi mr jaungi. reallllllyyyyyyy
      wth lots of love
      sanjana

      • Marie on July 25, 2016 7:28 pm

        Hello sanjana how r u dear..?
        Hahahahah so so sooooo sorryyyy yr…! Fr d suspense
        Bt don’t worry sirf nxt ep tak hi hai…. 😀
        Hahah nai yr plzzz marna nai……
        Ok dear If I get itto sa Bhi tym tomorrow then I will post……. 🙂 🙂
        Love u tooooo dear….!
        Wid lots of luv…
        Maria 😀

    13. lovely lady on July 25, 2016 11:27 pm

      i m same lovely lady by mstak sanjana likh diya tha
      pta hai mai ab hostel shift ho gyi hu. ab to bas yahi updates aur ff ka sahara h . entertanmnt k naam pr bs yahi h 🙂
      dekho kaise rahte h. frst tym maa k bina rah rahe h

      • Marie on July 26, 2016 12:27 am

        Oooohhhh hy lovely di…!!!
        How r u…?
        Wow ap shift ho gai hostel mai…
        Hahah dont worry hum apko entertain hi karte rahen gai 😉
        Yeah i knw its difficule to saty widout ur mum…….pr ap fikar na karo we r wid u……m wid u….nt present there bt phir bhi hoon apke saath….koi bhi prob ho just share it wid us we will surley help u………. 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
        Acha di apka real name sanjana hai kya????!.
        Hope maine kuch tassali di ho

    14. Anamika on July 26, 2016 1:21 am

      Maria….
      What an epic epi
      Seriously awesome
      N again suspence created
      Eagly waiting
      Kya hai us diary me
      Love confession??
      Jldiii se post kro ….

      • Marie on July 26, 2016 7:20 am

        Hy anamika ! 😀
        how r u dear….???
        Thank u sooio much fr ur sweet cmmnt dear…..! 🙂
        Hahahha suspence khul jai ga next ep mai………
        N ye toh nxt ep mai hi pata chale ga ke kya hai…. 😉
        Yes dear i will try to post soon….! 🙂

    15. Anjali on July 26, 2016 3:16 am

      Hi Marie…the ff was awsm…i think she will get to knw tht the girl who Shravu loves is none othr thn Sumo…hope i m ryt…at lst u bring thm close in ff cz in serial its like the distance btwn thm is only increasing …n m not able to take it …n ths guy adi…i hate him…
      Keep posting such ff 🙂 atb…?

      • Marie on July 26, 2016 7:23 am

        Hy anjali …..!! 😀
        how r u dear…?? 🙂
        Hmm okyyyy thanks atone fr ur ans…..
        We’ll c wat will happen in nxt ep….. 🙂
        Haaha well said yr serial mai dono bht door hain abhi tak toh i expected sm romance in this shaadi wala track….pr ho kuch or hi gaya hai…n yeah adi ufffff jab tak ye acha hai i lyk him ……bt hopw ye shraman ke beech ki rukawat na bane

    16. Marie on July 26, 2016 7:24 am

      Warna toh i will kill him…..
      Hahah dont wirry dear i will try to post soon……
      Wid lots of luv 🙂
      ……maria…….

    17. Affaa on July 27, 2016 1:17 pm

      Angry on me Chorry my marie kutti…Maafiiii please…how are you princess…
      Suspense wooow amazing episode yaar…what to say mind blowing..
      I promise I may always late definitely I will reader episode and II’ll comment…
      Love you baby take care…mmmmmhhhhhh

      • Marie on July 27, 2016 3:36 pm

        Hyyy my dear n sweeto si API,….!! 🙂
        M fyn how r u?????
        Nah nah absolutely nt m sooooooo happy to read ur cmmnt….
        Thanks fr reading it…
        N fr posting such n amzinggggg cmmnt…. 😉 🙂
        M really glad u commented……
        Love u !!
        U toooo take care !!
        Muahhhhhhh!!

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