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Pyaar dosti hai a shraman ff part 23 “ONE MOTH GAP AND A SAD NEWS FOR U ALL” (ek duje ke vaaste)

Hey guys….
Ur sis maria here hope u all didn’t forget me ………….
Frst of all toH…………

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I know I promised to all that I will be available fr this week but I m hell busy n it’s was so SO so hard fr me….to take tym n write this but it’s fr u all my sisters or brother or di’s……,,,,,,
I m really sorry if I did somthing to hurt u……cause I have an important msg in last please read it……hope it will not hurt u all………
N guys I m really not happy today cause as u all heard our beloved show
“EK DUJE KE VAASTE IS GOING OFF AIR ON 7 OCT 2016”

PLEASE READ THE MSG AT THE END………….
Noe enough of my talks let’s come to ep……….
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Prev:Previously: shraman alliance fixed….they are shocked but said yes……
Recap: khush confession of doing everything, sumo heard everything before engagement…..later….sumo n shr r standing on stange in front go eachother with rings in their hands……she luks at shr…….n makes him wear rings all claps…..

Today:Precap: sumo to have a fight with shr n he gets angry….she gets shocked Hear that he didn’t do anything….later she finds out….about Preeti’s prob….n gets tensed

Continue:
Preeti comes on stage n announces that it’s tym for a romantic dance of our couple……
Sumo feels awkward…..a bit but dances with shr…….on song tere sang yaara….
They dance so romantically….
Shr: sumo………..r u oky……
S: hmmmm
Shr: well I don’t think so………
S: if u don’t think so then y r u asking….???
Shr surprised: wat happened to u…?? R u oky…??
S tearly eyed: m I looking???
Shr shocked: come with me……
(He takes her to n empty room)

Shr wat happened…..
He comes near her but she pushes him
S: don’t come near me…..u liar u cheater….!!!
(She gets a big shock )
Shr: wat r u saying wat sis I do???
S: ooohhhh wow!!!!! Really u r asking me!!!????? Wat did u do????!!!!!
(She claps)
S: wow mr shr malhotra don’t know wat he has done…!!!
Shr: enough sumo tell me frst what did I do…!!
S: ask ur Mind…!!!
(She strts to go but he holds her hand frm back n pins her to the wall)
Shr: enough is enough u said I heard but I won’t let u leave until u tell me wat did I do???!
S: Oooh really then hear….!!!
(She tells him everything wat she heard in the room)
Shr: god!!!!!! Really n u think I did this all??!!!!
S: no no….!!!! U r not alsone even my frnds are with u wow!!!!!! It was all ur plan shr…!!!!
Shr: u knw that I will never ever break ur trust !!!! N still u r..!!!
S: Han still I m!!! Cause u lied!!
Shr: listen to me now!!! U only heard half things let me tell u full!!
(He tells her everything n she gets shocked)

S: wat…!??? U didn’t………..?
Shr: yes I also got to know when she told me before ENGAGMENT !! I decided to tell u but Priya aunty didn’t let me go to ur room!!!
Khush along with the gang enters in the room…..
K: wat happened y did u two leave the dance in bw…??
S: y did u do that….??
K: what…??
Shr: no need to do dis drama anymore I told her everything…….
All gets shocked…..
K: sumo listen to me…….
S: SHUT THE HELL UP!!!!!!!!!!!
(Khush gets scared)
S: NO NO NO…!!!!!!!! I WARNED U SO MANY TYMS…. Not to do did all but u !!! U NEVER LISTNED TO ME!!!!!! U ALWAYS DO WAT U WANT…!!! Y DID U INTERFERE IN MY LIFE!!!!! U GET ME ENGAGED TO SHR…..U KNEW THAT I DONT HAVE FEELINGS FR HIM BUT U DID THIS!!!!!!
(Sumo was shouting)
K also shouts : no u r wrong!!!!!! WAT I DID WAS RI8 FR U!!!! SHR IS THE ONLY BOY WHO CAN UNDERSTAND U MORE THAN ANYONE WHO CAN TOLERATE U!! UR ANGER!!!! UR CHILDISH DEEDS!!!!!!!!!! HE IS BEST FOR U AND WAT WERE U SAYING ABOUT LOVE???? IT WILL DEFINATELY HAPPENS AFTER MARRIAGE!!!

S was about to slp khush but stopped
S: I can’t even also u!!!! Ahhhhhhhh
K: sumo wat I did was just for ur best….!!!!
S: no u didn’t!!!!
K: u will realize one day
(Saying this she left from there all followed her…..)
Now it’s only shr n sumo in the room…….
S: I….I m sorry….for not believing u…..
Shr: no need……
(He takes off his ring n goes…..leaving sumo totally shocked)
…..she breaks down n cries……….

Next day:
Sumo is in her room…….sleeping when Priya comes to her……to wake her up….
P: beta sumo…….wake up it’s 10:00
Sumo wakes up……
Priya gets shocked see her swollen eyes..,..
P: sumo u cried last ni8!!!!
S: no…mom……..!!
P: don’t lie…..
S lies: yes mom I was think after my marriage i will have to leave u all….
(N she says other emotions family stories…../it’s just a lie/)
P hugs her……
P: I love u beta
S: I love u too mom…….
P: ok now get ready…..n come down……
S: acha mom where is Preeti…??
P: I didn’t saw her frm last ni8 maybe in her room…..
S: ok

HALF AN HOUR:
Shr comes to the washroom…….
She sits on the bed…..remebring everything……
She also looks at the ring of shr…………which he took off last ni8…….
Sumo cries………
S: I m sorry shr……..

AFTER SOMETYM:
Sumo comes to Preeti room n finds her sitting on the floor…..
S shouts Preeti!!!!
Yes Preeti is crying badly……but on hearing sumo’s shouts she stops crying….
S: wat happened !!??
P: nothing di……
(She strts to go n gets up but sumo stops her )
S: Preeti plzz bata !!!
Preeti breaks down again…n hugs sumo…….
Sumo thinks that it’s abt last ni8 cause Preeti was also with the gang…..

P while crying badly: di I m doomed!!!!!!! Di save me please…..!!!!!
S: wat happened dear!!! (While caressing her hairs)
P: di he will not leave me…..
(Sumo gets shocked…..)
S: who…..???!!!!
P: Rahul!!
S: who Rahul!!!????
P: my ex friend….!!!….boy friend…..!!
S gets shock: wat?!!?!!!!!!!!
P: he made my mms
S can’t believe p words now: wat the hell r u saying…???!!!!! When did this happened…..!!!!!
P: when we come to Paris I met him in a library….then we strts talking n became friends……n one day he said that he love me….I believed him…..we went for shopping…..he said to me to kiss him I refused……I went to changing room…for trying clothes……n he made my mms…………
S: OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
P hugs sumo: please di do somthing now he is demanding for money !
S: wat…!!!! No no no please don’t cry we will do smthing…….
P: thank u so much di……….I m really scared……..please please forgive ke di…!!!! I didn’t tell u…!!!!!
S hugs her again: shh nothing will happen……..
S: Chalo now sleep……u r looking tired……
P: but di…..
S: nothing will happen…..
P: please do don’t tell mom n dad they will kill me….
S: no no no I will not……..
She makes Preeti sleep………

Sumo comes to her room………
She comes to main hall……..
S: wat to do now….I can’t tell mom and dad that will….kill! Preeti!! So….group no…..!!!
(She checks her mob…..n finds shr name on the top….)
S: shr……………………………

…………SCREEN FREEZES…………

PRECAP: no precap.

Ques: wat u think will shr forgive sumo like u all forgive me….?? Foe not believing him….????
Will he help her…..???

So guys I will not ask how was this cause I know it was bad no it was actually worst……but believe me u tried to put all the charm in it I have ri8 now……
N guys I n mentally not in my senses after listening this devastating news which u all also have heard……
“EDKV IS GOING OFF AIR ON 7 OCTUBAR 2016”
N guys it’s confirmed……by namik Paul the main lead by other cast members producers n directors also……….

My papers have been strting soon….so i will not be able to comment on everyone post……but I wills surely reply u all one last tym….
I will be un available from TOMMOROW to 20 OCTUBAR…….
I know i know it’s a long tym..,…… And I M SO SO SO SORRY FOR THAT GUYS……

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But I have a most important question…..guys WHEN I come back edkv will be ended…..so I want to ask that if u all r liking my ff….??? I Will post my next ep after 20 or on 20 but I want to ask that do u liking it or want me to stop forever…….
Please that important…..no ans means I will stop…….
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THIS DRAMA IS SO CLOSE TO ME I M CRYING RI8 NOW CAUSE ITS GOING TO END VERY SOON…..GUYS THIS DRAMA IS CLOSE TO ME CAUSE IT GAVE ME AMZING SISTERS LIKE U…..I WAS NOT A WRITER N TRUST ME I M WORST WRITER ON THIS PAGE I KNOW THAT…..BIT THANK U SO MUCH FOR ACCPTING MY BAKWASS TOLERATING MY PAGAL PANTI……..ALL…….I LOVE U ALL TO THE CENTER OF MY HEART…..
THANK U SO MUCH FOR ACCEPTING ME AS I M
“GUYS P,EASE PROMISE ME WE WILL NEVER EVER BE SEPERATE”
GONNA MISS U ALL IN THIS ONE MONTH……….
I WILL TRY TO COME FOR SOME TYM OR TRY TO POST IF POSSIBLE BUT 95% CHANCES ARE THAT I WILL NOT COME BACK FOR ONE MONTH……….
LOVE U ALL N WILL MISS U ALL
DONT FOR GET ME …….
UR PAGAL SISTER MARIA……..

Marie

No BeaUtiY Šhineš BrighteR Thañ a GõŌd HearT....!

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