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Pyaar dosti hai a shraman ff part 13 ( ek duje ke vaaste )

Hello guys…..!!
Frst of all toh thank u so so much fr cmmnting on prev part n loving it…!!!
N also fr ur prayers……!!! Result aagaya tests ka n I got highest mark in all subject so thank u soooooo much fr ur wishes love u all to d core really thank u so much….!!
M so happy….!!!
Well here is d part 13….
Hope u lyk this also….. 🙂

———PART 13———–
Continue frm prev part……
Shraman share an eye lock which break by shr…..
Shr: sumo………
(Sumo is still lost in his eyes)
Shr: sumo..!!!
S cms to her senses: ye…yes….wat happened….
Shr: stand straight…..everybody is watching…..
(Sumo then realizes dat she is still in shr arms….she stands n both feels little bit awkward)

Khush..announces—-
So guys if dance completed so let’s start engagement ceremony….. 😀
All claps…
(Ayesh n rohit goes to stage n stand infront of EACHOTHR)
Both makes EACHOTHR wears ring…..
(Everyone claps)
Adi notices rohit is still holding ayesh hand…..
Adi slowly in his ears: beta engagement ho gai……
Rohit: Han toh……
—shr slaps his hand—
Toh bhabi ji ka hath chor de…..
(Everyone laughs….n ayesha blushes)
Sumo luks at shr who is smiling…..(she remembers how he saved her frm falling)

ITS NI8…..n everyone r in their respective rooms…..
Sumo is in room working on laptop….
Smone knocks at d door….
S sees d tym….
S: is tym kon..?? Aahhhh dam shr toh nai…
(She goes n opens d door bt it’s preeti sumo sighs in relief)
P: wat happened di..??
S: nothin nothin cm in……
(They both cm in)
S: smthin impor…..this tym…?
P: yeah di…(she shows sm papers to sumo) actually I want to give u these….
(Sumo takes d papers n reads)
(She gets shocks while reading it)
Sumo: wat d…….shr ke……Yort papers…???
(She luks at preeti)
Who give u these…???
P: shr bhaiya….
S: when….????
P: he gave them to me…ahh……days ago…may be months..he came to me n said to give u these…u won sm bet….
(S left shock hearing this….she again reads it….)
P: acha di m going to sleep (she yawns) byy good ni8….
S: good ni8…
(She reads d papers)
S: ye date toh us din ki hai jab hum ne bet lagai thi…..but shr ko toh pata Bhi nai tha kon jeene ga….??
(She remembers how he said to her dat “why didn’t she tell him before” n she replied “so kya tum mere naam kardete…??”)
(These words continuously echoes in her mind)
S: he named his Yort to me that day……..then why this kiss thing….?? Uffff wat he is upto now….!!! This boy…!!!

Morning:
Everybody gather in restaurant fr breakfast……
Shr notices dat sumo is yawning……
(He sees d tym)
Shr in mind: she slept 10 hours still yawning ???

After d breakfast…..
Kartik is sitting near window while everybody is busy in selecting photos of engagement…..
S: no this one….
P: no……!!!!! This one
S: acha wat so special in this…..
P: mom n dad r both in this…….
Kartik luks at Priya who has tears in her eyes…….
(Priya gets up n goes)
(Kartik luks sad)

Sumo is walking wid sm photos when she dhamm collides wid shr….
(All pics fall on floor)
S: sor…..(she sees shr is standing) u…!!!
Shr: ooooo bheee dekh kar chalo…..
S: u….!! (She luks down) c all d pics fall just cause of u…
(Shr sees d pics one pis WS of him n sumo only….he picks it up….)
(But sumo snatches it frm him)
Shr: sumo….!
S: ek toh pics gira di n ghor ghor kar dekh rai ho…!
Shr: wat d ??? U were nt luking while walking….
S: so don’t u have eyes also……????
(Sumo yawns again)
Shr: didn’t u take sleep ????
S irked: no I WS reading sm papers whole ni8……
Shr gets confused: watever now….complete wat u said…
S: wat..???
Shr: wahi….
S: Kia..??
Shr: sorry…..
S: hah it’s okyyyy….jao maaf Kia
Shr: ooooo hello I m nt saying sorry I want u to say sorry….!!
S: konsi khushi Mai…???
Shr: u collide wid me….!!
S: so mistake is frm both sides…
Shr: so…??
S: so u should also say…..that.,..
Shr: wat d…….I already said …..
S: no it WS by mistake….
Shr: uuffff no u Frst then I will…
S: no I will not….
Shr: then I will also not…
S: ok no prob waise Bhi u already said that……(she smiles n goes)

Sumo rocked shr shocked hahahah

Kartik cms in room he sees Priya sitting near window…….
He goes near her but she WS crying silently….
Kartik in concern: Priya….??
(He goes near her n sits besides her)
K: hey r u okyy…? Wat happened….??
P: jab se yahan aaai hoon….I feel every moment that it was mt big mistake to leave u…….
K gets shock….,
P: like everyone us trying to make me feel regret….fr my decision….
K rubs her tears: no need to cry….cause m also in d same situation….
(Priya luks at him)
Priya crying: we loved EACHOTHR kartik…..We take promise to live wid EACHOTHR forever…….then wat happened y we strt fough….?? Y we got separated…
(Kartik has now tears in his eyes n he can’t control himself….he hugs Priya tightly…..Priya who is bit shocked frm his dis action….can’t denied cause she feels safe in her husband arms…….hugs him back)
After a moment both realize…..n break d hug….
K: I…I am …sorryyy…..
P: it’s….Oky…
K: m so sorry Priya I shouldn’t have leave u…..
P: it’s my mistake too….
K: all these years I didn’t even realize dat how mush I need u….
P: n I WS also become tooo selfish dat didn’t even think once abt our daughters…..
K: I never moved on……
P: I knw me toooo……
K: our ego….passion of work…won that tym….but now our love will win…
P smiles: ofcourse…..thank u fr coming again in my lyf….
(He kisses on her forhead)
K; finally got my wife back…..
P: should we tell dis good new to sumo n preeti..!??
K: y not…..
(They goes)

Shr is playing games on his phone……
Nir cms to him…..
Nir: uuuuffffff this boy what should I do to u shr….!!!
Shr: wat have I don’t now..??
N: u always plaupy games beta if u r this free then y don’t u join ur dad’s business..??
(On hearing d name business shr strt making faces)
N: god….!! M not asking u tooo cut ur nerve…or to jump frm cliff….
Shr: I think that’s a better idea…(he laughs)
(Nir gets irritated…..bt suddenly sumo cms behind)
S: u said well aunty….(luks at shr) shr….y don’t u join ur dad’s company…I mean why don’t u handle his business…..
(Shr gives her a killer look n signs her to shut up)
(Sumo smirks)
Nir: yes sumo m also saying same but be…….(hips he luks at shr who again gets busy in playing games)
N: haddd hai….sumo plz do smthing ..(she goes)

S sits near him…..
Shr: who told u to cm in bw in put ur nose in my matter…??
S: ohhhh hello….!!! Shut up na…!!! Or Han ur matter..??? Hahaha funny kab se tumhara matter ho Gaya…??
Shr: y don’t u join ur family business…??? U have also completed ur studies na..?
S: I m confused bw my dad’s n mom’s business bt u u r not confused so join…!
(Shr gives a fake smile)
Shr: zaroor……..
S: wat ever…..I came here to talk to u….
Shr: wat….
S: abt papers
Shr: wat papers…??
S: Yort papers……
(Shr luks on)

——SCREEN FREEZES——–

Precap: guys want a promo or ep hi post kardoon……I will go wid d majority….

So guys how was it ???
Was it good…?? Ok ok….ya bad…???
Cmmnt guys cmmnt……n share ur views 🙂 🙂
Wat do u think will be shr reaction…??

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Chalo guys….by by
C u soon….!
Love u all…!

Marie

No BeaUtiY Šhineš BrighteR Thañ a GõŌd HearT....!

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