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Pyaar dosti hai a shraman ff part 11 ( ek duje ke vaaste )

Hello guys..! How r u all??
Frst of all toh I want to say sooooo sooo sorry fr this late update or also I didn’t cmmnt on any ff frm days…but guys net prob…..hah….!!! But…finally problem got solved…!!
Hahah n now u tell me…missed me…??? Cause I missed u all so much….!!
Well thank u soo much fr cmmnting on prev prt m so happy…n obliged…
So here is prt 11…..
Hope u lyk it….

——–PART 11———-
—-sumo reaches at hotel wid family——
Priya n kartik ignores EACHOTHR…..
Preeti: wow finally!!!!! (Excitedly)
(She luks at sumo who WS glaring wt her)
P: wat???
S: cm wid me…..
(She grabs preeti by shoulder n takes her a side wid her)
S: Frst tell me wat is this drama u r creating…..??
P: wat have I done now??
S: really u don’t knw…! Luk at mom n dad…they’ve just cm here fr u bcz u were crazy…..why did u forced them by ur nerve cutting drama….
P: oo hello I WS nt doing drama di…….. (Sumo stares at her angrily)
P: di!!! I want us to spent tym together….
S: peeti!! U have gone crazy dont u knw abt mom n dad?? Why did u bring us here??
P: plzzz di ab Aagai hain na! Plzzzz let’s enjoy..!!
S: khaak enjoy…!!
(Sumo goes)

Preeti calls Khush n ayesh..
P: badtameezon !! Just bcz of all u my family thinks m mad…..mental !
K: hahah acha acha sorry…..pr tell me one thing that u want ur sis happiness or……
P: ok ok…..don’t emotional blackmail me….
A: then stick to d plan..!!
(Both hangs up)
P: uffff these all….in sab chakkaroan Mai I will be declared mental….
(She goes)

Preeti booked one room fr both Priya n kartik…..
(They entered d room)
P: kartik ap bed pr so Jana….I knw it’s hard fr us to stay in one room….
K: bt fr preeti’s sake….
(Priya nods)
K: I don’t knw how this happened ? How preeti involved in a mental prob…..?? Us ne kis cheez ka depression lia hai??
P: yes same though…! Pr if we want her to become normal again we gave to do that drama….of being a family…
(Both looks down in sadness after hear d word ‘family’)

Note: guys here I want to tell u all smthing…that preeti isn’t mental doctor told them (Priya n kartik) that she has gone mental…. N they have to do family drama in order to keep her happy…..if they want her back..n it’s d only way….
(N guys I guess I don’t need to u all that how preeti n gang (Khush ,adi,ayesh,rohit)
Got mental certificate n doc drama…. (Nothin is impossible fr them) hahah
N sumo don’t knw abt this at all….

Sumo cms to her room…….
S: Aah (she jumps on bed) wat a relief………..
Uff I don’t knw how mom n dad agreed to cm here….they live separate ….never c each othr…n now a trip??? (She thinks) smthing is fishyyy…..
She goes n stands infront of mirror…….
Sumo luks at her locket..
So much drama happened…
——She remembers everything—-

“How u confessed that u loved me…how I ask fr sm tym bt can’t get away fr u even fr a day……(she remembers how she cared fr him) n then…..(she embers the farmhouse scene) how u changes so sudden (she remembers how he pins her to d wall ,how he got closer to her) bt u kept saying that u don’t love me…..(she remembers his words that he want a chance) I gave u that chance shr……..just bcz u r my best FRND……n frnds r lyf……..”
—-she sighs——-

—NXT DAY—-
Everyone planned to visit Eiffel Tower…..
Both sis gets ready n compliments EACHOTHR….
Priya n kartik cms….
K : preeti beta tomorrow u have n appointment….
P: with who???
K: dr.barry..???
P: doc bt why…?????!!!
Priya: sawal nai…bs Jana hai….
K: we r waiting in car cm soon both of u…..
S: chal preeti….
—preeti nods in sad way—-
Preeti in mind: zaroor psychiatrist ho ga…..cause Mai toh mental ho na…uff di apke liay Kia Kia Karna pad raha hai….!
Both sis in car n they reach their destination,…….
——Preeti n sumo click pics near Eiffel Tower—–

Priya is walking alone…suddenly sm boys cm n strt tease her…..
Kartik cm n places his hands on her shoulder….he deals with d guys in his manner…..
K: Banda dekh kar chalta hai Priya…..
P: sorry……
K: be careful nxt tym har baar bachane nai Aaon ga……
(Both gets sad n kartik leaves)
Priya thinks years ago….
How he saved her frm goons fr the Frst tym it WS the Frst tym she saw him….n fell frm him….
—-she gets sad—-
Tum nai badle kartik…….

Sumo is busy on d phone…suddenly she gets shr call…she picks up….
S: Aah I was thinking ke abhi tak tumhari call nai aai….Lekin dekho.,.
Shr: awww so sweet…..
S: hahaha I think u didn’t understand wat I said….let me say clearly I WS thanking god ke abhi tak tumhari call nai aai mujhe pakana ke liay….
She laughs—–
Shr: hahah very funny….now let me tell u a joke…frm now on I will not call u…
S: really (gets happy)
Shr: g Han..!! Cause ab se hum face to face baat Karen gai..!
S: Han Han theek hai…..(then she realizes) Kia kaha tumne!!!???
Shr: hahahah shocked??
S: hehe bad joke..!!
Shr: ooh so u don’t believe I m here…
S: no…not at all…
Shr: acha wait….(he sends her a pic)
—she saws it—
S: u r looking monkey…(laughs)
Shr: c it clearly…..
–sumo agin sees it n get total shock…there WS Eiffel Tower in the background —-
S: ye pic…..
Shr: Luk at ur back….
—-she luks back n got shocked when she sees kartik talking to ram n nirmala taklking to Priya…..—–
—-they were far frm her—-

She again luks front n find shr standing in front of her—-
—-there faces r inches closer—-
—her eyes widen in shock—–
S: t…….tu….tum…..??!!!!!
—shr smiles—-
Shr mimics her: h…ha..Han,…m..M..mai…..(he laughs)
—she steps backward—
It’s nt possible no…NO…. M DREAMING…..yes ofcourse,.. M dreaming…
(She luks at shr)
Pinch me…
Shr: wat..??
S: pinch me na…!! I knw m dreaming..!!
–she forwards her wrist—
–shr WS abt to pinch her….n she closes her eyes cause she knw that it’s gonna hurt….bt he cups her face—
–she opens her eyes–
Shr: m real…c….I can touch u……

—-guys shr didn’t pinch her cause he don’t want to hurt her—

S: wat r h doing here….?????
Shr: hawwwww at u mean??!!
S: I mean why r u here…!!
Shr: excuse me I already planned my vacation it’s u who came here…n before u were leaving I came…..I came to tell u bt u didn’t listen to me….
(Sumo remembers)
S: aahhhh yeah…..
Shr: hmmm yaad a Gaya….
S: hmmmm
Shr: even we r staying in same hotel….
S: wat the….!!!
Shr: hell!!
Sumo: so r u staying here…?
Shrd no….m staying in hotel…
S: aray!!!! I mean when u r leaving….!!
Shr: mmmmmmmm after one month..!
—he laughs—
S: ahhhhhh!!!!
(She gets irked)

—she goes n meets nir n ram—-
N takes their blessings….

Shr tooo cms n meets everybody….
Shr texts sumo….
She saws…
“Now we play dosti dosti here”
She luks at him while he winks at her….

——-SCREEN FREEZES——-
So guys as u all knw the surprise WS shr is also in paris….kaisa LAGA? Mera surprise?? 😀

Precap: engagement party kis ki…??

So guys how WS d ep..??
Hahah surprising huh??
Now the drama will strt in paris……..

Socho socho…
N plzzz plzzzz give ur feed backs n ans through cmmnts
N silent readers (don’t stay silent)

Till then by byyyyy
Love u all…!!

Marie

No BeaUtiY Šhineš BrighteR Thañ a GõŌd HearT....!

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