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Home»Star Plus»Dil Bole Oberoi»Pyaaar ka rishta (shivika,gaurika,rumya) Part-3
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Pyaaar ka rishta (shivika,gaurika,rumya) Part-3

Sanskriti120By Sanskriti120March 25, 201713 Comments3 Mins Read
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heyyyy guys this is sanskriti back with another update I’m telling it first this update is really short…..plz maaf kardo I’m sorry ………….guys if u don’t like my ff please do inform me I will stop it here
and guys sorry as my English is really bad lets move towards update now
avoid grammatical and typo errors

SOUMYA:

Walking down the hospital I remember how Aai used to take care of me whenever I used to feel sick she herself became a doctor for me but what did I do I just can’t even take care of her . I know I was crying which my Aai doesnot like but she left me too …No No..she can’t leave me like that. Moving away from that creepy hospital which didn’t save my Aai I heard someone calling me …..who might be that……

Ya she is my Aai she is calling me…… the sweetness in her tone when she call my name is just precious for me. But the thought that I can’t hear her voice again made me feel worse than ever. Moving down the streets of Mumbai I realized this stupid pollution Ahh…!! This is one of the reason my Aai left me …At last I reached my place….in Mumbai which my Aai secretly builted for me without my knowledge. She want me to have a place in Mumbai of my name after her death. I went inside controlling my stupid tears which are not even stopping. Once entered my house thats it….tears of mine took control over me. I was crying …….

Sorry Aai I was crying which you didn’t like……..I broke my promise which I made u when papa passed away that I would never cry in any situation……But u were the one who broke the promise by leaving me ……… Now in this stupid world I’m single no one is their whom I can tell mine……..All my family members left me alone in this creepy world and they went away to have a peaceful life in paradise(heaven)……..Suddenly my eyes when on fruit basket which one of my stupid relatives brought for Aai when she was in hospital……..Now its of no use for me ….All my frustation came on that basket I just threw that basket on floor ………Then their I saw something useful for me at this moment……..KNIFE…….Yes!!!! it is really useful for me now …………Now I can’t really tolerate my sucking life………

I took the knife in my hand and their I saw my Aai ,papa,bhaiyaa near the door I thought they were waiting for me ………..Yes bhaiyaa ,Aai, papa I’m coming ……….saying this I CUT my wrist ……..I didn’t feel pain……..but I’m happy that I’m gonna meet my Dad and brother after a long time ……….Then I heard someone calling me again “SOUMYA…” who is this guy I thought ……..Then I got it’s my bhaiyaa who is calling me to come near him……Yes bhaiyaa I’m coming….. with that thought I closed my eyes
…….. ……….. .. END OF POV………….. ……..
PRECAP: soumya: bhaiyaa..!!
voice: yes soumya
What do you think did soumya die????

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okay guys I know this is really a short update and if u like it please drop ur comments……….And I’m writing POV for the first time so really wanna know did it come good…And I promise to give any shivika and gaurika scene in next epi… please comment guys I really want ur suggestions for my ff

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    Wish me on 29th march??. Music freak??. When you are a shivika fan you find them everywhere. Even I find them in my name(a real one???) Shiv-Ani{shivani?}. Hyderabadian?

    13 Comments

    1. Lilly on March 25, 2017 5:03 pm

      Amazing

    2. Sweta on March 25, 2017 5:04 pm

      I bet she is hallucinating

    3. Uf on March 25, 2017 5:38 pm

      VERY INTERSTING.you are a GOOD FF WRITTER Sanskrit.DON’T STOP WRITTING FF.I LIKE YOUR FF.

      PLEASE POST NEXT EPISODE FAST.

    4. Surbhi Sharma on March 25, 2017 5:48 pm

      Awesome . Waiting for next. But emotional too .

    5. Sharmini on March 25, 2017 6:47 pm

      Waiting for the nxt update

    6. nikitajai on March 25, 2017 7:57 pm

      Good one dear waiting for the next update.. To know about soumya..

    7. alekhika20 on March 25, 2017 8:09 pm

      Nyc

    8. Kripa on March 25, 2017 8:24 pm

      Don’t stop dear it’s awesome

    9. b.k.maha on March 25, 2017 10:15 pm

      Superrrrrrrrrrr….. Pls continue dr…. Don’t stopt it…. Waiting for next episode…..

    10. Charitha on March 25, 2017 10:16 pm

      Nyc

    11. shivika on March 26, 2017 2:22 am

      Nyc

    12. ruksy on March 27, 2017 11:13 am

      Loved itv

    13. Fffan1234 on March 27, 2017 3:31 pm

      Emotional.. Hope Shunya is alright…

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