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Home»Fan Fiction»Promise me..You won’t Fall in Love with me (Chapter 4)~Shreya
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Promise me..You won’t Fall in Love with me (Chapter 4)~Shreya

Jiya_AniBy Jiya_AniMarch 27, 201721 Comments3 Mins Read
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PROMISE ME….YOU’LL NEVER FALL IN LOVE WITH ME
[The ff will be in Kunj’s voice or in narrator’s voice..when I’d need to show both of their perspectives]

Chapter 4(Part2)# We kissed!!
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I found twinkle sitting on a big rock at the lake side..and the back of my farmhouse.
I sat beside her..
“What happened?”..
“Why are you sitting here?”
“Tum naraaz ho kya?”..
.
.
.
She Didn’t answered..
“Twinkle tum mujhse baat kyu nahi kar rahi”..I pulled her towards me.
She landed near my face..she looked at me with big-big eyes …my eyes slowly fell on her lips…we came closer.. She held my nape and closed her eyes …our breaths started to mingle… I no time…our lips met…

My lips on her soft, pulpy,sweet and sugary lips …I slowly sucked her lips…we were having a passionate and soft liplock…I was happy that she too repropricated..We were just lost in each other’s warmth.
We parted being out of breath…but were still closed..I opened my eyes.. And saw her smiling.. holding her face ,I pecked her forehead and pecked her till her chin..slowly with all my love ..
‘I love You Twinkle..’..I confessed.

She suddenly opened her eyes.. She had a shocked expression.. A tear fell down her cheek…she pushed me…and ran away …CRYING!…

“Twinkle”… I called her …but she didn’t listened.. And ran away ….my heart was piercing watching her go away!..

My vision blurred.. I had tears in my eyes.

?Kunj’s POV ends?
Narrator’s Voice?

Twinkle came running yo her house..and locked herself in her room…her father came calling..
“cookie..Cookie.. open the door !”..he said knocking the door.
“I’m fine Papa..”..she said in a choked voice..he understood and returned.

Inside Twinkle’s room~

Twinkle was crying hard sitting along the door..
After sometime..she felt someone jumping into the balcony… She got up wiping her tears…but was shocked to see Kunj…he rushed to her..
“Twinkle…”
Twinkle kept looking at him…her eyes turned glassy…
“Twinkle.. please… Don’t cry.. I hate the tears..”
“And… I …hate.. you “…she said breaking Kunj’s heart..
“ But…”

“..Go Away Kunj….I don’t want yo talk to you…I don’t want to see you….Go away…I hate You..”…saying she swung a bit due to dizziness.. But that was unnoticed.
“But I Love you Twinkle… And I am not sorry for what happened… Coz it was directly from heart.”..Kunj said..
“I hate you…didn’t you heard that ….go away…I don’t want to see your face..”..Twinkle said in anger pushing him ..
He held her shoulders.. “You hate me right… Say that again…look into my eyes… Say damn it”…Kunj shouted sternly..
Twinkle looked into his eyes… “I….I…I..ha..ha..I..ha…”…she wasn’t able to complete..he left her..”you can’t Twinkle… I know Twinkle… You can’t….why are you doing this to us?…you are
my life..my love…You can’t hate me…nor can lie to me..I’ll never go away…I PROMISE “…saying Kunj went…
“Don’t you Understand..I..”…Twinkle cried out…but suddenly she fell unconscious..

~❤~

Kunj was in office…he saw Twinkle hurrying out…

“Twinkle..wait…”…but she didn’t stopped.. Kunj ran and caught her..
“Tumhe sunai nahi deta?”..he said…he noticed her eyes.. They were swollen and were a bit dark..as if she was too weak and sleepless.
“Tumhe samajh nahi aata kya… Door chale jao…”..she ran away..
“Wada kiya h….hamesha saath rahunga…kitna jhoot bologi ..aur kitna door bhagogi?”…He yelled…
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Hope this was good enough..
Drop down your views..
Thanks to allllllll for commenting..??i am sorry for not being able to reply all personally…

Many of you want me to extend this ff…but I could do that a bit only…?

Next soon…stay tuned
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    21 Comments

    1. Sohi on March 27, 2017 3:58 pm

      It was sweet lovely and emotional
      I think twinkle has some health problems
      Felt bad for kunj
      But I’m sure he will do everything alright
      Do continue and post soon
      Bye

    2. Nisha on March 27, 2017 4:02 pm

      Shreya it was marvelous dear
      Really Kunj’s way of confession was superb?????
      I loved it
      Plz post soon
      Love u
      Bye

    3. AKA on March 27, 2017 6:02 pm

      Really good episode
      What happened to twinkle?

    4. Aafi on March 27, 2017 6:03 pm

      Marvelous episode
      But why twinkle said like that
      Do continue

    5. SAF on March 27, 2017 6:04 pm

      Amazing episode

    6. Tushi on March 27, 2017 6:10 pm

      Fabulous episode
      Post soon

    7. AF on March 27, 2017 6:12 pm

      It was very cute episode
      But why did twinkle behave like that
      Happy that kunj loves twinkle
      Do continue

    8. SidMin23 on March 27, 2017 6:18 pm

      It was nice and kunj confess and I think twinkle has some problems or sickness that why she is sending him aways do make twinj together in happy note.

    9. Fatimaa. on March 27, 2017 6:53 pm

      Heyy jiya..
      It was amazing…
      Lovedd it…confession was soo good..
      Love u..post soon

    10. Presha on March 27, 2017 7:17 pm

      Hey shreya…
      Its just awesome…
      The emotions r well shown…
      Post soon

    11. Cp on March 27, 2017 7:41 pm

      Ammazingg episode ?????kisss wasss????….
      And I also think ki twinkle has some health problems??btw post next soon???
      …..

    12. Ramya on March 27, 2017 8:38 pm

      Awesome shreya
      Do twinkle have any health problem
      Amazing awesome
      Love u keep smiling

    13. Simiyy on March 27, 2017 9:29 pm

      Hey Shreya
      I really loved it
      I want to know why Twinkle is saying no
      Post soon
      Loads of love

    14. maha on March 27, 2017 11:31 pm

      awsm…fablous..marvelous..epi
      post..soon

    15. Purnima.agrawal30 on March 28, 2017 12:17 am

      Amazing interesting….bt y twinkle is saying that

    16. Sana785 on March 28, 2017 1:11 am

      Lovely

    17. dreamer...arundhati on March 28, 2017 8:57 am

      Shreyu…. Im in love with this story…. Luv it gurl…. ? ❤️ ❤️ ? ?

    18. Anayaali on March 28, 2017 11:29 am

      Hey awesome epi and superb story i was silent reader of ur ff i have read each and every part of it …..post nxt asap….

    19. Sushmitha on March 28, 2017 12:50 pm

      Marvellous episode dear I’m so desperate for the next pls post asap

    20. SidMin on March 31, 2017 7:47 pm

      Just Loved it awesome …. I really enjoyed it feeling sad for Twinj …
      Love you post soon 🙂

    21. baby on April 1, 2017 6:35 am

      Ohhhh god shreyoo…..wat to say sch an emotional update……I mean romantic n emotional why dizzy n why unconscious…..well srsly beautiful n osm speechless too cute….. 🙂

      Loved d beauty n d pain which u portrayed…… 🙂

      Lods of love…. 🙂
      Post nxt asap……. 🙂

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