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Home»Fan Fiction»Promise me..You won’t Fall in Love with me (Chapter 3)~Shreya
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Promise me..You won’t Fall in Love with me (Chapter 3)~Shreya

Jiya_AniBy Jiya_AniMarch 26, 2017Updated:March 27, 201715 Comments6 Mins Read
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PROMISE ME….YOU’LL NEVER FALL IN LOVE WITH ME
[The ff will be in Kunj’s voice or in narrator’s voice..when I’d need to show both of their perspectives]

Chapter 4# Oh L❤ve! love!

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It has been more than a month ..with me and Twinkle waking back till her home…she mostly never allows mW to drop her by car.
Our walks are always filled with my questions… but I swear ..She rarely replies.. She is just a MISSION IMPOSSIBLE GIRL!!
~❤~
I am giving a party for my birthday..yup..its my b’day!

I saw twinkle going.. “Hey Twinkle..”
“Hmm..”
“You r coming for the party naa?”
“Umm..Kunj …I am…sorry..”

“What!!….Twinkle… C’mon..its my birthday.. Don’t break my heart ..today yaar… Can’t you do this much for me?…”I tried convincing her with my magic wand…Cute expressioms on handsome face..?..I know my angel can’t deny now..
“But… Kunj..I’ve never attended such parties..I don’t have proper clothes…leave it naa..you all enjoy..” …she said trying to convince me…But I am more stubborn than she thinks.
“Come…I have solutions .”.. I dragged her to my car…”sit”
But she’s too Miss.Mission Impossible.. “Sit naa…”..I requested..and she sat.

~❤~
@Shopping Complex
“Choose whatever you like..”.. I said..she looked at me innocently..” Kunj…leave it naa…”..
“Go Twinkle”..she agreed

I saw her not able to deny..
“May I help?..any confusions? “
“Kunj..what type of dresses do all wear in parties?”… She asked innocently
“ show me what you’ve chosen “…she showed me a white- blue frockdress with a black belt…I looked at her clothes..a white shirt along with a black&white skirt with horizontal straps… Though she looks gorgeous in every attire..
“Twinkle… What’s this?”..
“ what Kunj?”
“Why don’t you ever wear colours?… Why only Greys, blues, blacks & whites?”
“Why shall somebody have colours in Life Kunj?”… Ahh!..she’s so innocent
“ Colours make life beautiful.. And you know…every colour will look so very pretty on you”..
“Why Kunj?”
“Coz you are Beautiful Twinkle… More than any angel”..I tried not to let our gazes meet but can’t resist to drown in those brown oceans..
We were lost in each others eyes when ….she took her gaze away.
“Come…I’ll get something for you”..saying… I started to choose…

I took out a glossy , emerald green jumpsuit…and gave it to her..she just passed a small curve on her lips…I smiled.

We payed for the dress and I dropped her till her house.

I am really glad that she’ll come.

~❤~
At the Venue~

I am ready in a white shirt with pants with a dark burgandy type of blazer.
Guests were enjoying.. Sia ..like always is standing beside me.
I know she must have a complain that I am not giving her attention …buy I’d never given my attention to her…she knows that ours is just a so called relationship.

My eyes are searching for her..Just then I felt some boys staring at the entrance!…. I looked on and saw my Beautiful angel coming.
She was looking just so gorgeous…She didn’t applied much makeup …but still was able to took my breaths away…
“Abe..bro I never thought yaar ki Twinkle itni kamaal ki cheez h yaar..haye..”…a guy said to his friend.
“Ya dude..she’s so hot “.. His friend replied…

My blood is boiling… I really want to beat these 〽〽 …but right now I am not in mood to spoil this party …bohot mushkil se twinkle aayi h…I don’t want to see any forrow on her face..

I motioned towards her ..she smiled looking at me a bit..Just then Samar reached Twinkle…
“Hi Twinkle…”
“Hi”.. She replied.
“.. How are you?…I must say..you are looking extremely gorgeous”.. He admired…

‘Samar…move away..or else I’ll forget that we are chuddy buddies… Hat…bhabhi h Teri..’..I said to myself
“She’s fine bro…thanks for attending”.. I said and signaled him to go…

“Thanks for coming Twinkle”… I said.
She smiled ..
“Congratulations”.. She said…I felt she’s Hiding something.
“ where’s my gift “ I said trying to see what’s she’s hiding.
“Oh…I ..forgot”.. She said looking here and there.
“Hey …you know what…you are too innocent to lie…c’mon give me my gift”.. I said
“ vo..I don’t know ..what to give as a gift in such parties..”..saying she forwarded a small box…I opened it an found a wooden beaded broad bracelet with a short hang.
“I know it isn’t expensive or like that…but…”…I shhshed her..”Twinkle.. This is priceless you know..this is special.. Thank you “…I said…and wore it.

~❤~

At the dance floor..

We all were dancing…exchanging partners..
With so many pleadings I convinced Twinkle for a dance…she is now just two partners away from me…

I feel ..she isn’t comfortable with Nitin (the guy)..but she’ll not tell …I know her.

I excused to my dance partner and went to them…
“May I”.. I said..
Nitin backed off… And then I held Twinkle’s hand and kept my hands on her waist.
“Twinkle..”
“Hmm…”
“Were you okay?”
“Hmm..”
“You don’t need to lie angle”
“Hmm..”..
She was just humming with her head down…I lifted her face from her chin with my finger…she has closed her eyes tightly.
“Twinkle..”.. I said smiling at her innocence..
“ what happened.. Am I so horrifying that you have shut your eyes so tightly? “..I said
“.. Electricity… I am feeling snowfall in my stomach Kunj”…she replied…

Awww…this girl is blushing …she is having sensations due to my touch…good job man…but how innocent.. She doesn’t know what she’s telling me..

“Sorry”.. Saying she went away…and I stood there smiling.

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Hope you guys liked this chapter
I know it wasn’t too good.. But still… Hopes are there.

Do comment below…I am really happy that you all are liking my work…thanks to all those who commented ?

Ritzi- Madam…tareef k liye shukriya..and long episodes nahi de paas rahi coz
1- papa is at home..can’t sit with mobile for much time..
2-its a short-term ff…it ‘all end too soon if I give long episodes…???

I request silent readers….plz encourage with your comments… Each comment is valuable for me…
Yaa-….does anybody knows where..Ladoo(ishika) and Sayeeda di are???

Will post next soon…?

Love you ?

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    15 Comments

    1. Ritzi on March 26, 2017 12:57 pm

      Ooooo aisa hai….chal koi nhi short epis se hi kaam chala lenge….but ye epi toh itna sakkhhhaaat tha yaar….I mean…wowowoowwioww….now post the next part today only…..today I mean today….can’t wait yaar….nd ho sake toh iss ff ko jaldi end na karna

    2. Sohi on March 26, 2017 1:35 pm

      Aww it so sweet episode
      Loving this cute and innocent twinkle
      Kunj choice twinkles clothes was amazing
      I’m fan of this ff
      And twinkle telling about snowfall in her stomach was soo cute yaar
      Waiting eagerly for the next update
      Do continue
      Bye

    3. Fatimaa. on March 26, 2017 1:51 pm

      Heyya..
      Thnk u thnk u thnk u thnk u soooooooo muchhhhhh for posting….
      I n soo happy ……dis story is really awesome…loved it
      Love u post soon

    4. Ramya on March 26, 2017 3:10 pm

      Awesome shreya
      Amazing superb twinkle is really innocent
      N loves dis
      N shreya ishu is busy wid exams so she can’t attend tu for some days I don’t remember probably how many days
      But episode was amazing Superb

      Love u keep smiling

    5. anshikajainn on March 26, 2017 3:23 pm

      Nicee

    6. Presha on March 26, 2017 3:27 pm

      Hey shreya….
      Its awesome…
      Just loved it yaar…
      Too good…
      Ishika aka ishu is busy with her exams she will show up after 18 April…
      Post soon…

    7. Simiyy on March 26, 2017 8:19 pm

      Hey Shreya
      It was awesome
      Loved it
      Post soon
      Loads of love

    8. SidMin23 on March 26, 2017 9:47 pm

      Nice and twinkle in innocence here do post soon.

    9. maha on March 27, 2017 12:05 am

      wooooooooooo.very….nice..lovly..epi

    10. Purnima.agrawal30 on March 27, 2017 1:29 am

      Amazing cute lovely epi

    11. Sushmitha on March 27, 2017 8:54 am

      Awesome episode shreya post soon

    12. padu on March 27, 2017 9:28 am

      it was marvelous pleaseeeeeeeeee do not end in few episodes

    13. Nisha on March 27, 2017 12:52 pm

      Shreya it’s fantastic
      Twinkle’s innocence and Kunj’s care for twinkle was mind blowing
      U said it wasn’t good it was toooooo gud
      Post soon dear will be waiting
      Love u
      Bye

    14. SidMin on March 31, 2017 7:10 pm

      Just Loved to awesome … You are an amazing writer I just wanted the episode to go on and on and on 🙂
      Love you Post soon 🙂

    15. baby on April 1, 2017 6:28 am

      Sayeeda dii left sriting n cmnting she sometimes comes here…vaissee ryt now she is busy wid studies n job I suppose n ishika I ll ask her n tell u laddoo se puchke batati hun….
      Well d episode was gorgeous…vry cute..sch an innocence u showed in twinkle as always adorable n beautiful….
      Lods of love…. 🙂

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