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Promise me..You won’t Fall in Love with me (Chapter 2)~Shreya

Jiya_AniBy Jiya_AniMarch 24, 2017Updated:March 24, 201725 Comments6 Mins Read
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PROMISE ME……… YOU’LL NEVER FALL IN LOVE WITH ME

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Chapter 2# A walk with Her….
haye..She’s BEAUTIFUL!

Kunj’s POV-
“Hey Twinkle… Wait girl.. “…I didn’t had to run much to catch her…Twinkle walks slow with her head hanging.. Most of the times!..
We were walking REALLY SLOW!…down a maple and cherry lane…I’ll get bored …yup…but she looks fine!
And you know what thing is quite irritating me….’IS LADKI KO KOI FARK NAHI PADTA KI THE KUNJ SARNA IS HAVING A WALK WITH HER!!!’…meri tohkoi value hi nahi h…but that’s not actually bothering… I don’t know who she is…
“So… Where do you live Twinkle..? “
“In Darjeeling “…huh…that was rude…
“You are too practical”.. I said..And I too was rude…I shouldn’t have said that…but she is still not effected!
“You don’t care…what people think About you?…what they say about you?…”…I asked
“No”… She said apparently?
Strange!… I have noticed….I haven’t seen her face properly.. Mainly because of her habit…she doesn’t lifts her head up anyway!
“..Why don’t you lift your eyes up?”.. I walked forward…
”why should I?”
“Just look up…to the life…to this beautiful sunset…”..I said feeling the breeze touching my face.
“..Here We are….come..”..she said motioning towards a small but beautiful villa …I read the nameplate… It read ‘Taneja’s’….So Nice to meet you Miss. Twinkle Taneja….OK…I know I am not going to get any reply… Introduction ab ho gya….I followed her….she is the only girl ..Kunj jiske peeche peeche ghoom raha hai..??

We were standing at her garden…”wow”…I sighed..and started to click photographs from my camera..I heard some noise of falling water..
“Twinkle ..where’s this noise from?”
“..Vo..there’s a waterfall nearby..”
“..
really… Can you take me there?”
“Why?”..
“ plz plz pzl”..I said with the cuttest expression I could make on my handsome face..?
“Ohh..k”.. She said with a smily voice..

~❤Next Scene❤~

Me and Twinkle were sitting on a rock watching the beautiful waterfall under the shining night sky…
“..Taare kitne khoobsurat hote hai na”.. I said looking at the Stars.
“…Lekin toot ke gir jaate hain….toh khubsoorat hone ka kya fayeda…”..She said..looking up..
“Khoobsurati k fayede ya nuksaan nahi hote…vo toh bad khubsoorat hoti h…Don’t you like stars?”
I turned to her
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Hoon!..I forget to breathe once!…”beautiful “..I sighed looking at her constantly…
Her big brown eyes.. Milky complexion ..pulpy lips..perfect…her hair were flying due to night breeze.. she is just Beautiful.!!..It was just …numb!…
I …I just want to beat myself …for noticing her now!….

Just a clear glimpse of her was making me take long breaths….she is..just ..I feel much more beautiful than any angel.. I donno how do an angel look…but I can bet ..cannot be more Beautiful that this girl sitting beside me!..
???????????????????????????

I regret that I never realized that Twinkle is really …Gorgeousl..
“…Is it important for every Twinkle to love stars??..Is it important that every Ragini loves music…??”..she said…

But I was…lost…just lost!…in her ..I wasn’t in senses… she took them away…I was lost in her eyes… I wished I could take her in my embrace and kiss those eyes and tell her how beautiful she is!…

“Tumhe ab kuch nahi kehna..I felt you to be THE Question Bank”.. She said taking me out of my thoughts.
“ haan..vo vo….haa ya yaad aya ….tum keh rahi thi ki taare toot jaate hain…but dekho..taara toot ke bhi bohot khoobsurat hota h..kyunki zab vo toot ta h..usmai alag hi kashish hoti h…vo kashish..sapne ..kwahishe ..aashayein de jaati h..asli khubsoorati toh taare main tootne k baad aati h..”

She smiled at me…may be..I wasn’t able yo catch up right thing!….”Saare taare itne khushnaseeb nahi hote Kunj”..Her smiled vanished…”..Its quite late..Papa wait kar rahe honge ..main chalti hoon”..she said getting up…as she turned I caught hold of her wrist….She turned to me …apparently.. I felt her eyes were saying something in this silence.. But I wasn’t able to understand.. I was just lost in her eyes…
“Kya hua?”..her sweet voice brought me out of my chain of fantasies.

“Nahi…vo ..kya main kal phir yahaan aa sakta hoon?..sirf kal bhinahi… roz”..
“Kunj..ye meri property nahi..tumhaari marzi hai..jab chaho aao..”.. She said
“..nahi..I meant..tumhaare saath…(Twinkle gave him a questioning expression)…I like this place..but mujhe raasta nahi yaad”..I lied..?
…donno why..!!

“Raasta nahi yaad toh ghar kaise jaoge?”..
“.. Vo main dekhlunga…Umm..GPS…yeah..”
“Yahaan door door take network nahi milega..”..
“ toh…ab main kaise jaun?”
“Udhar…(she pointed towards a lane paved between trials of maple trees)… There…its paved ..keep walking where the path takes.. You’ll reach office….from there you can go back home…” .she said.. my eyes TWINKLEd….kya karu aankhon main toh abhi vahi hai…
“Okay…”..I said..
“Can I go now?”..
“Hmm..”.. I said with a gloomy face..
She gave me a weird look and signaled towards me holding her hand…I left ..
“Tum aaogi na?”

“On one condition..”
“Ohkay..say”
“PROMISE ME KUNJ…YOU’LL NEVER FALL IN LOVE WITH ME…AND WILL NEVER MAKE ME FALL IN LOVE WITH YOU”
…I was Blank …!!!..Neither my Mind nor my heart …not even a cell of my body wanted to say a yes!…But I was so lost in her and wanted her company daily… I wanted to be with her for every moment.. every nanosecond of my life…I just lightly moved my head…
“Bye”.. She said.. , went and slowly vanished in the cool dew…JUST LIKE AN ANGEL.??????And I just kept looking at her.

~❤Next Scene❤~
3:00 pm

I was standing in my balcony… I wasn’t able to sleep…because one Angel has taken my amity away with her …
I amn’t able to sleep…I lost so much today…I lost my Concord..I lost may be…my heart…I lost my senses…that girl vanished in dwe with all what was mine!
I just got something…An unknown ..unexplainable feeling…

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Soo..did you guys liked it?…do tell below…
I’ll start Yehi hai Ishq after this ff of 8-9 chapter…as right now I am lacking ideas for quite a part of Season two..

I’ll try to post Next chapter soon lovelies,
Thanks a ton to allll those who are liking my new ff…and thanks for remembering who I am …???

See you ?

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    25 Comments

    1. maha on March 24, 2017 11:14 pm

      awsm..lovly..amazing.chappy
      beautyfully..written…..post..soon

    2. SidMin23 on March 24, 2017 11:15 pm

      Nice keep posting

    3. jasmin on March 24, 2017 11:31 pm

      Hey dii!! Amazing episode..loved it to the core..n yes i know many of us remembered u..n yayyyy!! Kunjis falling for twinkle..or should i say have fallen for her..soo super eli dii..plzz post next one soon..love u!!

    4. Sohi on March 24, 2017 11:33 pm

      Yooo my jiya
      You are full of unique and beautiful ideas
      I’m just loving this ff
      Can’t wait to read more
      Everything that kunj said about twinkle was sooo perfectly and beautifully written
      And ur way of describing everything was superb dear
      But why did twinkle said to kunj that don’t fall in love with her
      Do continue and post soon
      Bye

      • Jiya_Ani on March 25, 2017 2:43 pm

        WO toh sage k chapters main pata chalega…thanks a ton ..❤

        Love you

    5. Purnima.agrawal30 on March 25, 2017 12:44 am

      Amazing awesome fabulous…bt kuch toh suspense h

    6. Roshini125 on March 25, 2017 7:52 am

      Hey lovely hope u remember me
      This story is really awesome as if I am nt wrong u started this story befr bt couldn’t finish it. Bt nw u hv to finish it. It’s lovely just like u

      • Jiya_Ani on March 25, 2017 2:32 pm

        Of course I do remember u roshogullu di ..u r right…thanks…?

    7. padu on March 25, 2017 9:14 am

      it was really good hope you post soon

    8. Sushmitha on March 25, 2017 12:47 pm

      This episode was out of the world amazing dear pls post soon I’m damn excited for the next part

    9. mia12 on March 25, 2017 1:07 pm

      .
      Ohhooo my buggu baby..??
      My little lovely sweaty sissi..welcm back,,??.. So how are you..?? howz ur exam baby..????.. Did u missed ur didu..????.. But ur didu missed you shooooooooo much,,??.. And u knw i missed ur ff also that to shooooo much,,??
      And now m sooooo much happy to see you back my littel baby,,☺☺☺..
      Well epi was just Marvelous,,???..
      Each n every line kunj has said about twinkle was just sooooooo beautiful,,?????????????????.. but next what twinkle said to kunj was wow yehi toh story ki twist hai r8,,??.. ok but now can’t wait to read next,,??.. and hope now you’ll visit regular and post ur ff,,??..
      So load’s of love 2 u,,?❤?❤?❤?❤?❤?..
      Keep smiling always,,????..
      Muaaaaaaah,,????..

      • Jiya_Ani on March 25, 2017 2:41 pm

        Thanks di…I missed you tooooo ❤❤❤??????..I’ll try being regular…

        Thanks didi?

    10. Cp on March 25, 2017 1:50 pm

      I didn’t like itt at all ??………

      Because I luvedd ittt?????????????….. Amaazzziinggg,..
      Post next soon ??

    11. Cp on March 25, 2017 1:50 pm

      I didn’t like itt at all ??………

      Because I luvedd ittt?????????????….. Amaazzziinggg,..
      Post next soon ??

    12. Aafi on March 25, 2017 3:25 pm

      Beautiful episode ?

    13. AKA on March 25, 2017 3:26 pm

      It was marvelous episode dear
      Just superb

    14. Tushi on March 25, 2017 3:27 pm

      It was splendid and awesome episode
      Liked this silent twinkle
      Do continue

    15. SAF on March 25, 2017 3:28 pm

      Amazing, fabulous and fantastic episode
      Loving it

    16. Ritzi on March 25, 2017 11:34 pm

      Haan haan…ab zyada smile mat kar…ik mera comment padhne ke liye tu taras rhi thi… Hayye….hehe…be yaar…ye chod…yr epi! Saala dhamkedar tha yaar…thoda aur lamba jeene deti na isse ‘sali’ itni jaldi end kyu kiya…itne dono mei itna hi likha? Ki merko chota lag rha hai? Idk….Jo bhi ho…abhi post next soon

    17. Nisha on March 26, 2017 12:17 am

      It’s amazing

    18. Shalini15 on March 26, 2017 10:00 am

      Hi Shreya, this episode was just amazing mind blowing. Loved it’s concept nd plot. Kunjs pov was good nd funny too. Loved it so much. Do continue soon.

      Lots of love ? ?

    19. Fatimaa. on March 26, 2017 11:27 am

      Heyy shreya the episode was awesome..
      I lovedd it yaar….wanted to read more nd more…plzz post soon yaar….ok ok wait i ll say something…
      PROMISE ME YOU WILL POST YOU NEXT PART REALLY SOON…..?????..
      love u

    20. Ramya on March 26, 2017 12:01 pm

      Shreya u know how much I missed ur ff n even u
      It was just amazing lovely superb
      I don’t k ow what’s wrong wid twinkle
      But see conversation was cute n kunj pov was just amazing
      Love u keep smiling

    21. SidMin on March 31, 2017 6:17 pm

      Just Loved it awesome … each word of Twinkle had a deeper meaning … her words made me feel she has some hidden pain … a lot of pain …
      Cant wait for the next episode … Love you post soon 🙂

    22. baby on April 1, 2017 6:14 am

      Hiiii my luvii…. 🙂
      Merko toh pakka se bhool gayi hai naa tu…. 🙁
      Koi nahi yaar jab yaad aungi msg me…
      Still I am missing ur company….n u too….n dis fs I love it sooooo mch yeh kaiseee shart raghdii twinkle ne jo kunj puri ni kar payga or shayad voh bhi nahi yeh kya tha kya koi pyaar ka intehaan le rahi hai…..hehe….
      Kher mein toh emotional hogyii….
      Loss of love dear sis….. 🙂
      U r d 1st 1 whom wid ever I hv written something in combined thing n will always b forever coz voh place toh koi ni le skta no 1 can change d past 🙂
      I miss my frnd my sis my partner…… 🙂

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