“Hey Ragini” said a boy whose back only could be seen. Ragini turned and her hair flew and settled at one side. She smiled a bit but her face expression changed. “What is this Karan?” asked Ragini making weird face. Karan(Karan Wahi) smiled and forwarded the rose in his hand and said “I Love you” Ragini looked at him shocked and her expression changed to anger. “Are you out of your mind?” asked Ragini. “No yar Ragini I’m serious trust me” said Karan serious. “What is wrong with you. I only thought you as a good friend. Uff. I was right all men are same” said Ragini holding her head. “Yar seriously don’t take me wrong I thought you will be impressed by this rose and direct proposal” said Karan nervous. “And who gave you this idea that idiot?” asked Ragini folding her hands and raising an eyebrow. Karan nodded his head. Ragini screamed “HK…….”
“Oh baby you are so hot and I really cannot control myself around you. Ah your soft lips drives me crazy” said a boy whose back was visible approaching a girl who was wearing a mini. His hands traveled from her waist to down to touch her bare skin. And his face moved close to the girl’s face. As his lips were just a centimeter away from the girls lip he jerked due to a voice “HK……. Abeey HK bahar aaa……” shouted Ragini. The boy stopped his approach annoyed and turned. It is revealed to be Laksh. “Ab kya hua iss chudail ko. Hamesha galat timing Gosh” said Laksh annoyed and headed out of the class.
“Gosh I’m late again” said a guy driving his car. His eyes are covered with goggles. He looked at the watch again and hit the steering wheel.
A girl is walking beside the road with headphones in her ears and enjoying the music. “Wow my fav song. Tere sang yaara…. hmmmm” sang the girl with her shiny soft lips. She looked at the road and walked carefully.
“Ahh from where does these people come” said the guy and turned his steering wheel suddenly as a two wheeler approached his car. He saw a girl walking in front of his car and he stopped the car making a creepy noise to avoid colliding to the girl.
The boy is Rajbeer(Karan Tacker). He closed his eyes scared and held his racing heart. He slowly opened his eyes and found the girl standing unaffected. His eyes stuck on her angelic face. Her cute attitude took his heart away just in a second. Love at first sight? Thought Raj. He came back to his sense and glared the girl angry. He lowered his car glass and shouted at the girl “Are you blind? Can’t you see?” The girl still with the same cool attitude removed her head phone from one ear and shouted back “I’m not blind Mr. But you surely are” and put her head phone back and walked with calmly. Raj looked at her confused then he looked at the road and realized that mistake was his only he had crossed the lane and she was right on her way. But still his ego did not let him to accept his mistake. Her unaffected cold reaction made it worse.
He saw the girl walking facing her back. The girl picked the call when her phone ringed and spoke “Hello” The girl on other side screeched “Ragini….” (Yes the girl is Ragini)
Raj turned to his steering wheel and started his car again and said “Nakchadi” He nodded his head in disbelief and drove off
So this is my little surprise. My two new ffs. I have no idea when will I post it. So just bear with me guys. “Rishtey” is gonna finish soon so after that I will start one of the above ffs. Just tell me which one should I start first. Or may be I will publish one episode a week. I haven’t planned anything about the timings. One thing I would like to say is that one ff is kind of cheesy and the other close to reality. There might be some negativity also but it was demand of the story. Sometimes you might feel it is depressive. And Ragini here is completely different not innocent like in Rishtey and not selfless like in Guilt. Hope you will like these shades also. Romance will be very slow not as you people expected. So tell me guys shall I continue. Sometimes you will feel the ff is not positive as my other ffs but I don’t know whether you people will like so close to reality stories. Please feel free to give any suggestion but please guys sorry I cannot be regular
54 Comments
Loved it dear
Thank you my sweethearts.
hey sally. Superb dr. I thought u ll not write these two new ff. But thanks dr. Entirely different concept different pair. Continue ur writing. it’s great to read ur ff. Take care dr. Waiting for these ff too…
Thank you so much Kutty. That means a lot
aww this is amazing…..
1 st and 2 nd both…
Update soon…
Thank you dear. Glad you liked it
It’s interesting one
I say to continue with raglak
Nd also I don’t mind if u again pair up teja and shaleen
Hehe hehe wat can I do u made me posses of teja and shaleen pair by ur writing
Continue wat ever u want
Nd I’m eagerly waiting to read ur work’s dear
Gosh you are so obsessed with their pair. I cannot immediately think of a story for them but I will surely try something
Awesome loved it
Thank you Niriha
i loved both the stories…its your wish which one you will start first…i always loved to read your ff’s and will always love to read…
Thank you so much my mystery queen. Love you so much
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Your two new ffs
It’s an amazing news for me
Love u
Ummmma
Awww yar Abi thanks a ton for your so much love. Love you too. Hope to entertain you.
I love both stories
Thank you so much Sindhu. Again I give credit to you for RagBeer pair as it came in my mind when you suggested Karan Tackar for Yohan character. I almost had finalized him only then I thought let me write a different story for them so that I can see them together. Thanks a ton
Welcome sissy
Cute story of karan & raglak ,karan tracker is good u continue 1st one
Thank you dear. Glad you liked it
i like both stories and quite interesting too….. i want raglak story first, why dont you update both stories simultaneously. i know, i am sounding like selfish person but what to do i love your stories. one more thing i am so excited to see ragini and karan Tacker as a couple. so update soon.
Thank you so much Akshata. Yup I’m thinking the same. Let me see if I could handle the transition quickly then I will write simultaneously. Thank you for liking the new pair.
1st one w aise do not hi achi hai
Thank you Anchal. Glad you liked it
hey sally sooo this is the surprise u r talking about???? wowww it is amazing lived it yaar and i know u will write ut amazingly as ur other ff waiting for all ur ff ????
u know i forgot to tell by reading the title i thought it can be ur ff and i m right
ouos one more thing both r amazing i would like to read both
How can you not recognize it is my post just reading the title. That’s why I call you my soul sister right. Thank you for your confidence on me. I hope I wont disappoint you. Love you
Amazing
Thank you lovely. Glad you liked it sissy
awesome
Thank you dear
Both stories are Interesting dear and waiting for first episode
Thank you Ammu
awesome sissy! it’s really interesting. Am so excited to read both of these ff’s. And it is your wish sissy. U can post any ff first. I am ok with it. All the best sisso. Keep rocking!
Awww Deeshu. Thanks a ton. Love you
Interesting
Thank you Ammu
Rendu Prologue um nalla irukku….but first write that second one…ragbeer…. different pair….oru change ah irukkum
Romba nandri dear. Let’s see. Thank you for suggestion
Awesome
Thank you yar
Interesting. I loved it dii… Plz make it fast. And upload guilt too
Thank you so much Ima. Tomorrow I will update sweetheart
Superb
Thank you Sherin
Woaaah woaaahhhh….2 new ff’s ..dats sounds awesome bt am upset dt my rishtey is gona end..yes..mine…*tears*..
Bt equally excited abt dis 2 ff’s….nachkadi and casanova…nachkadi name is hilarious my rockstar…so d mashup was amazing…. i wss a bit confused in d beginning bt when i read it again i understood…u knw wht am a born confused..hehe…cant help it….
So my ragini is not d boli bali one..seems to b strong…nd y wudnt v accept d story which is realistic…aftr all who is writing it..am wid u..infact v all r wid u…its ur choice which one to update first….
Wohooo..am so damn excited my sisy…muaaaaahhhh..cant wait..bhalle bhalle..*dancing*
Awww Achu. still time is there it to end ok. Yup with all rights it is yours only. I’m damn sure you will Nakchadi more than Casanova initially. Thank you for your trust sweetheart. Love you so much.
Fab loved it ???
Thank you dear
Awesome
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Thank you
amazing dear….omg omg omg omg u r going to write a new 2 ff Sally dear….Ohhh MY GOD….i can’t believe thz….pinch me Sally….karan tacker and ragini….am excited to read dear….waiting for ur update….u r going to finish risthey…oh no am crying….am going to miss nithin and senior ji siyappa fun…..sry for late comment dear….i have xam dear….love u lot dear…tkcr dear….
Thank you Asru. That’s ok dear. You take your own time. Love you too