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The Princess swan Four shots swasan shot 3 by Mars ( last shot)

Mars_By Mars_August 4, 201729 Comments7 Mins Read
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hii.. mars back.. didnt got much responses on the last part…. i think that it is boring so ending it today itself
She: sanskaar think…. go in your past birth…think…
san: i am not the rebirth cant you understand…
she: think sanskaar think
and she steps back….
she goes towards a sword which was lying near the potrait…
the old woman picks it up and throws towards sanskaar……

Sanskaar catches it angrily…
 old w: sanskaar's granny…. look…. he is only the king sanskaar…. swara' s sanskaar…. look at his style of holding the sword… look at his demons…. isnt he king sanskaar ..
granny: yaaa…. you are right…
old woman: sanskaar pls trust me once…. and think… think… what happpened next… think… think before you entered your new body… think think….
sans: i am seeing myself in royal look…. it seems like something is hidden…. potrait… whats there at back of the potrait….

sanskaar points towards the potrait …..
granny: this potarit was hanged by sanskaar himself before his death…
sanskaar moves towards that and takes it off the wall…
at the back side of the potrait there was an envelope……
in the envelope there was a letter…

letter: hii sanskaar….if you are reading this that means you have met swara ….. while reading this you know or dont know but i know that because i am myself reading it and written it… i wrote it to remember myself that how my princess is still trapped in the swan….
everyday i visited the lake to meet swara…. but one day i came to know that the doctor was a cheat… he was with my dad… he could save my princess but intentionally didn't…. he didnt saved swara but trapped her in swan… this made me so angry that i killed my dad n that doctor and thrown them off the cliff…

 now i was on the hunt for finding a way to set my princess free… i travelled many places… i met many saints …. but all felt to tell the way to set my princess free… but one day… there was a ray of light in the darkness…. i got to know about a group of agoris who performs very powerful magic n black magic…
i met them.. i told their chief the who story…. and asked the way to free my princess

he: yaa there is a way…

me: way… tell me THE Way … where is the way… tell me
he: you are the way..
me: me??
he: yes you are the way…… you need to die….. you need to wait 100 years… but you Cant wait as one who is on the earth need to leave it …. the swan can only hold her soul for 100 yrs… but on the last the you need to stab the swan..with a dragger which would be soaked in your blood…
me: if i died then how i will save my swara..and if i will stab the swan then she would also die..

he: death is of body n not soul.. for both the questions you asked… is the answer…. you will take birth again in your family…. and set swara free…
me: if till then she died because of ageing then…
he: she is trapped inside… she would age at all… go break all your bonds with family…
and come back…
i left..
i returned home and said" i am not gonna return… after me …. give my name to the first boy born in this family.. give him the same royal care…. give him the same love n respect"…. all became sad and i left ….

the last line written on that was " the rest story is only known by the agoris"….

san: damn it …. what happened next… and where these agori live…
old women: the agoris mentioned in it lives far away from devgarh…. it takes atleast 2 days to go there n comeback… also we need to cross a dangerous path too….
san: i dont care… and before doing any tries we cant conclude the result… i will save my princess …
 the old lady n granny gets happy…

sanskaar and old lady leaves…

sanskaar takes the car and drives it in the full speed…
after almost 6 hrs of journey.. the old lady said" stop and park the car here only… the car will not go forward from this spot… we need to cross the dense jungle " sanskaar obyed…

it was getting dark and nothing was visible…. still the old lady and sanskaar reached the area of that

agory tribe….. the cheif who told sanskaar the way was still alive but was not in the condition to sit also.. identified sanskaar…
he: you came sanskaar….
san: pls tell me the rest of the story…. and tell me where is the dragger…
he: first let me tell the story…

soon sanskaar came to us and said…
" give me the worst painful death…. pls give me  that much pain with which i die… and that pain will always remind me that i failed to save my princess"…. and he nodded in yes…
one of my man bought a big bowl and a coconut…. he started beathing sanskaar with that…. after some time the blood started flowing through his head and it was collect in the bowl…. with the 25 th shot he died……..
even after his death we kept beating him for collecting his blood…. he face was not identified…..

the dagger is still with us…

sanskaar gets tears in his eyes…. the cheif sighs and a bowl was bought…. that bowl still contained the marks of dried blood and dagger was inside it even the dagger to had the patches…
cheif: son ..
 just go .. you dont have much time left.. go.. my wor..k…kkkk haa..s.ssss been done..eeeeee
and dies..

soon sanskaar left… and crossed the jungle and got into the car…..
sanskaar was driving at the jet speed…
suddenly he saw that two puppies crossing the road..
he pressed the breaks but the car got out of control… it was going towards…the cliff…. seeing this … the old lady pushed sanskaar with dagger out of the car and fallen off the cliff.. but sanskaar hit his head with a stone and gone unconscious….

granny was with swan swara…. granny  says very less time is left and sanskaar is still not here ….

sanskaar was still unconscious and then he gets a dream of swara…. and he wakes up….
he sees down the cliff but only sees ashes of burning car….
and he starts running. he runs …. and runs and runs … only a few minutes are left but he had still a long distance to cover….suddenly he sees a truck passing by… and asks for the lift.. he agrees… now only 5 mins are left and sanskaar asks the driver to move fastly..

now only 1 min is left and sanskaar reaches the lake… he starts to find swara but she was now where finally he moves towards the temple….
Now only 10 secs are left when sanskaar sees his swara n granny…. he throws the dagger from a distance…. at o.oo1 the dagger hits swan and the swan dies… but swara was seen no where ….

san: granny i think i am late…..
and starts crying… when suddenly he gets a patt on his right shoulder… he turns… and she a beautiful… gorgeous… stunning ethereal beauty….
he asks in happiness:  are you swara..
she nods..
sanskaar gets up and hugs her..
swara: you know from 100 years i was waiting for you n cries..

san: shhhhh swara dont cry now… your wait has ended ….
and gives her a sweet peck on her forehead  ….

and they lived happily ever after

The End

i finished my first work The Princess swan Four shots…..
pls comment and tell me howzz it..
can i reveal a secret..
okk i reveal it…
this idea was been in my mind after watching a South Indian film ARUNDHATI… and many things are common between my four shots and film…
okk
bye
gm
love you all
tkcr
❤❤❤❤❤❤❤??????????????

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    29 Comments

    1. gennie on August 4, 2017 7:56 pm

      awesome….

    2. sandra on August 4, 2017 7:57 pm

      amazing

    3. shravani on August 4, 2017 7:58 pm

      awesome

    4. anu on August 4, 2017 7:59 pm

      suprb

    5. Stg on August 4, 2017 8:02 pm

      awesome ????

    6. independent on August 4, 2017 8:07 pm

      I was just imagining that film while reading the story and was about to ask u awesome dear

    7. AnuAnn on August 4, 2017 8:07 pm

      AWesome dear

    8. Soujanya on August 4, 2017 8:12 pm

      Awesome….

    9. Mars on August 4, 2017 8:16 pm

      Firstly sister u should have given four shots as its name says but it was beautiful just awesome.Once again I m requesting pllzzzz don’t disappear I will be waiting for your next story.
      Take care.

    10. Sweety on August 4, 2017 8:21 pm

      Ammazin dear…. But y 3 shots??….sry I dint commented on ur previous updates….

    11. phoniex on August 4, 2017 8:41 pm

      loved itdear. it was nice story.

    12. sneha on August 4, 2017 9:16 pm

      Awesome

    13. Vidhi on August 4, 2017 9:16 pm

      Loved it ❤❤❤

    14. Vanisha on August 4, 2017 10:07 pm

      Awesome…loved it

    15. Kumu on August 4, 2017 10:07 pm

      Awesome..liked it a lot..plz don’t leave TU and do come back with a new swasan ff..
      tc..

    16. NDSG on August 4, 2017 10:08 pm

      Awesome story yrr… Don’t feel bad for response…

    17. Praneetha on August 4, 2017 10:15 pm

      It is same like arundathi movie in telugu movie it is nice

    18. sus on August 4, 2017 10:22 pm

      well its nyc dear

    19. SHAN on August 4, 2017 11:30 pm

      Awesome!!! Well i found out when i read the first shot!!

    20. anu on August 5, 2017 9:00 am

      awesome

    21. Tamil on August 5, 2017 10:24 am

      Amazing….

    22. rini on August 5, 2017 11:17 am

      awesome

    23. Simi on August 5, 2017 1:05 pm

      Awesome dear.. I was thinking about arundhathi film while reading.. Good job ☺️

    24. raina on August 5, 2017 2:29 pm

      read all the shots together..
      amazing and a different story!!
      even i thought its mars..

    25. veena on August 5, 2017 6:38 pm

      nice.

    26. Milestone on August 5, 2017 11:32 pm

      Are u told it’s of four shots but ended it in three only……. awesome dear……come with another story if possible….

    27. Tani on August 6, 2017 9:43 am

      Nice

    28. scooby on August 6, 2017 4:04 pm

      Yup while reading this part i thought its like remodelling of the film… but it was amazing in ur style…???

    29. gayathri.visu on August 7, 2017 12:50 pm

      Amazing dear… Loved it. I love Arunthathi movie especially its bg score!! And u mentioned that this 4shot, but u ended it within 3shots???

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