FS – shot 4
Hey guys …it’s alia here …thanks for the beautiful comments …u all have gave …
So here is the shot ,
The next day
Everyone were relaxing In lounge
Suddenly a girl comes and hugs avni
Girl : hi …di
Avni also hugs her back …
Avni : aww ..mica at last u came to my wedding ..
(Yes the girl is mica avni’s sister )
Everyone looks at her
Mica : oh hi …I am mics avni’s younger sister ..I am staying in Mumbai
Suddenly she sees sanskar ….she goes to him and hugs him shocking everyone
Swara was eyeing her angrily
Sanskar : hey mica …u are bhabhi’s sister huh
Mica : haan sanky
Swara fumes in anger ….
Shravan ; but how do u both know each other …
Sanskar : vo …. during party we met and we became friend’s instantly …she was so cool ….
Swara gets more jealous …. everyone were enjoying seeing swara jealous ..
Mica ; sanky you are still handsome …very cute
Sanskar smiles ….swara leaves from there …
Laksh : abb tu gaya sanskar
Sanskar smiles and goes ..
Mica : who is she …
Nikhil ; she is swara …the princess of this kingdom and our sister
Mica : oh …but these many brothers for her
Kavya : except sanskar
Mica : why ?
Adharsh ; because she is sanskar lover ….going to be hubby
Mica was shocked ….everyone chuckles seeing her expressions
Sanskar goes towards swara who was in the balcony
Sanskar back hugs …swara takes his hand
Sanskar : oh my princess is angry
Swara (angry) : yes
Sanskar : but why …
Swara : you said u love me but it looks different
Sanskar smiles and turns her towards him …
Sanskar : swara a mother is always the first person who every human loves …I already said you are my mother right …
Swara smiles ….
Sanskar : at last I saw this smile from my princess …
Swara hugs him
Swara : I feel good now sanskar ..
Sanskar : you complete me swara
Swara : even u ….
Both hugs for a long time
Later that evening
The girls were sitting in a row ….while the mehandhi designers were applying mehandhi on their hands …
While the boys were sitting and talking on the opposite lounge
MD (mehandhi designers) I will address them as MD OK …
MD : ma’am what’s your husbands name
Avni (blushing) : shravan
MD smiles and writes shravan name on her hand ….
Kavya : for me you write swara because I don’t have anyone other than her … (tears)
Swara felt very bad …she goes and hugs Kavya ….Kavya cries ….swara consoles her
Swara : shhh baby …do u want to spoil your make up and make me cry …
Kavya nods no and smiles , swara also smiles ..
Swara ; never say u have no one …my family is yours ..my dad and mom are your mom and dad too …OK …
Kavya nds …
Everyone admirers their friendship …
Nikhil (diverts the topic) : oyyee senti wali mental
Kavya gives death glare to him …Ebryeone laughs ….
MD : ma’am who’s name should I apply
Pari : hmm rajat (teases)
Adharsh spits the juice which he was drinking …
All the boys laughs ….
Pari : write Adharsh name …
MD smiles and applies ..
MD : princess whose name should I write ..
Swara smiles … sanskar was eager he was looking at swara ….
Swara : hmm sanskar
MD ; nice name princess …
She applies Sanskar name in a very beautiful manner …swara smiles and looks at sanskar ….sanskar also smiles and gives her flying kiss
Swara blushes …
Kavitha : oh oh blushing huh ….swara
Swara blushes more ….
Ragini : mine should have sanskar’s name …
MD was about to apply suddenly laksh winks at Ragini…ragini blushes …
Ragini : OK right laksh name
Boys all tease laksh ..while girls tease ragini..
After everyone finishes applying mehandhi ….
MD : it’s said that the more the darker the mehandhi becomes ..it shows how much u love the partner name written in your hand
All the girls smile …
Shekar : now could we have dinner
All nods but then
Mishti : but we all have applied mehandhi na …then how will we eat .
All girls pouts ….
Sujatha : haan right !!
All the boys looks on puzzled ..
Swara goes to shravan
Swara : why don’t u boys all feed us …huh ??
All girls : yes you all should feed us today
The boys smiles ….
Shekar : OK my queens …
All the boys keeps the food in plates and stands …
Shravan goes and feeds swara instead of avni …this makes avni fume in anger …
All smiles seeing their bond
Swara : bhai…go make bhabhi eat ..
Shravan : after marriage ..she will be with me only …but u will go to Mumbai na (tears)
Swara also smiles with tears …
Everyone were admiring their bond
Laksh : ya so even I will feed my princess …
Swara smiles ….
They both swara sit in middle and feeds her ….
All smiles ….but avni and sujatha were jealous …
Mshti (tears) : see na Shekar how caring our children’s are …
Shekar hugs her
Nikhil ; OK OK now let everyone have food too ….
All agrees and feeds their respective partner …
Kavya (pouts) : who will feed me
Shravan : laksh u feed swara ….I will feed her ..
Kavya smiles ….shravan feeds her …shravan felt very happy while he was feeding kavya …even kavya was happy ….
Swara was seeing a different shravan …
Swara (whispers to kavya) : if this marriage breaks na …don’t worry …u will be his bride ..
Kavya hits her slightly
Avni fumes in anger ….she leaves from there ….
Sanskar comes and sits next to swara ….
Laksh ; abbay yaar …swara open your mouth properly I can’t keep food in your mouth …
Swara doesn’t …she teases him
Swara : bhai I guess one is waiting for u more then me
Laksh ; who …
Sanskar points towards ragini…laksh smiles ..
Swasan : oh oh ….love is in the air
Laksh hits them and goes towards her …
Swara looks at sanskar ….he takes the plate and feeds swara …
Sanskar ; already I am doing all the post rituals of dhamad
Swara smiles …and bites his finger
Sanskar : ouchhhh…..
Swara : hmm good na ….she laughs
Sanskar was just admiring her …
Sanskar : love u
Swara : love u too ….
Sanskar : next Will be our marriage too
Swara blushes …
Sanskar smiles
Both smiles and eats ….
Later that night
At swara room
Swara was reading a book , shravan comes in
Swara : hi bhai .. come in
Shravan (smiling) : so what are u reading
Swara ; twilight …
Shravan : love stories huh (teases)
Swara smiles
Shravan ; OK leave all that …. do u like avni
Swara : of course I love bhabhi …she is very beautiful , very caring and very helpful and perfect for u
Shravan smile and lays his head on her lap
Swara : what happened huh …
Shravan ; swara don’t go to Mumbai na …
Swara (pout) : but I want to study na
Shravan : but I will miss you so much …because u are my only sis …na …
Swara gets teary eyed …
Swara ; but …
Shravan ; plz ..even your friends …everyone can stay here
Swara smiles ..
Swara : OK I will ask them …
Shravan pecks her forehead …swara smiles ….
Shravan : you know what swara ..whenever I lay on your lap I feel like I am lying on mom’s lap
Swara ; is it …
Shravan nods ….
Just then laksh also comes …
Laksh ; bhai this is cheating …only you are enjoying swara’s lap ..
Shravan smiles ….and moves aside laksh also lays …swara smiles
Swara ; you know what I am the world’s luckiest girl to get u both
Laksh & shravan : even we are lucky to get u as our sister ..
Swara : awww ….
Laksh ; do u remember we trip used to sleep together all hugging abs cuddling …
Shravan : ya I remember …all that toys and all
Swara ; ya ….let’s sleep now …it’s late …bhai …tomorrow is marriage
Shravan smiles …
These trio sleeps together …swara in middle and shravan and laksh on either side ….
Everyone slept ….but avni and sujatha were discussing …
Avni : MA I hate this Swara ..I don’t want her in my life ..
Sujatha : but what can we do …
Avni : ma I will give such a punishment …that she can’t face anyone
Sujatha : what you are going to do ..
Avni smirks and says the plan ….which is muted …
Sujatha : but avni ..this is bad (tensed)
Avni ; I don’t care maaa…
Sujatha wasn’t convinced and was shocked seeing avni like this….
The next day …
All were busy preparing for the marriage which is tomorrow …
Avni wakes up and finds her mehandhi didn’t get red color
Avni (shocked) : what’s this
Sujthaa sees this
Sujatha : what’s this avni
Avni : mom I don’t care …I don’t believe in this shit
Sujatha looks on
Avni goes to swara’s room
Swara : hi bhabhi
Avni (fake smile) : hey swara
Swara (smiling) : hi bhabhi ….anything u want ??
Avni : vo actually I have to take some things from store room …will u come with me
Swara (smiling) : sure bhabhi
Avni smiles evilly …Swara turns and wears her shawl ..but Avni closes her mouth and stabs her with knife
It all happened in a nick of time Swara couldn’t protest ….
Avni gives chloroform and some other medicines to make her forget the memory ….
Avni takes the knife with her and leaves …
Swara tries to shout and go out but her legs didn’t support her ….
She fainted on her bed ….all areas full of blood ….
That afternoon …
Everyone were in dining hall
Shravan : where is swara ?
Avni (covers) : vo …she went to her friend’s house …
Sanskar in mind : but she didn’t inform me
Shekar : oh it’s OK …we will have lunch …
Avni gives a relief sign …Adharsh notices this … but doesn’t understand
After everyone finishes lunch …
Mishti : avni beta take good rest ..tomorrow is marriage right
Avni smiles …she looks at shravan ..but he was in his own thinking ….
Adharsh and pari goes to garden
Adharsh ; I didn’t feel good when avni said about swara
Pari ; cme on adharsh … nothing is In this …just leave it …
Adharsh nods .. but he was Unconvinced …
Sanskar goes towards his room , he looks at swara’s door …
He opens the door ???????????
But there was no one …*how*
Sanskar signs and leaves ….
(Flasbck – avni transferred the body to dressing room)
Later that night …
All the elders have went to another kingdom for function …only the youngsters were there
Sanskar was feeling bad …
Shravan : I feel something bad is gonna happen
Laksh : bhai come on ….don’t be negative OK ..
Shravan nods …
Suddenly they hear a shout from upstairs
“Swaraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa”
They all went up …..and went to swara’s room ….
They went inside the dressing room
And was horrified seeing the scene
Kavya was holding swara in her lap and the place was full of blood ..
Shravan and laksh goes and picks her up
Shravan (cries) : swara ….swara ….what happened swara….u can’t leave me
Saying this he picks her up and keeps her on the bed
Laksh ; call the doctor … (shouts)
Nikhil and adharsh calls the doctor
Sanskar was still sitting in the dressing room ….staring the blood place .
The doctor comes ….and checks swara pulse
Doctor ; I am sorry ….she is no more
Everyone’s heart busted out …..the couldn’t believe …
Shravan moved back …the one whom he talked yesterday … who was happy for him yesterday is dead !
Kavya (cries) : Swaraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa….
Everyone burst out crying ….adharsh and nikhil ….cries holding swara’s hand …
Kavitha was all numb …while first time ragini cries a lot ….
Ragini : swara u …u can’t leave me …u can’t leave me …. (she cries)
All looks at her but no one was In the mood to talk ….
All cries ….while sanskar was still sitting in the dressing room seeing the blood ….
He didn’t cry or didn’t do …but just numb ….
Shravan was standing looking at swara …
Shravan remembers all his moments with his only sister ….
Avni who was seeing this was all smirking
Avni : that’s it …now one is shravan’s prior …. that’s me ….
Prexap : last shot …
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