Hey guys, thanks to all for commenting on my ffs previous parts and am really grateful to all of you because you accepted this pridev pair and show patience to comment on my ff. Thanks a lot ishqies….
Continuation from part 9 [Loyola college canteen]
[Dev screamed “prinku”…. But she didn’t reacted….All the people whoever presented @ canteen surrounded dev and prinku……Rajesh came there and dev looked @ him with sadness}
Dev : Uncle…..prinku….
Rajesh : Dev…take her to hospital right now….. I will inform oberois…Hurry up….
Dev : Uncle…prinku….just now I attend the call and when I turned I find prinku @ this state…..I don’t understand what had happen to her ? Uncle…blood is still clotting and am scared…..
Rajesh : Dev…..we don’t have time to talk much…. Just go…..dev….
Dev : {dev is ready to leave….}uncle…. You??
Rajesh : I have to make an urgent call…I will reach there within few minutes…..
{Dev take prinku in his arms and leaves the spot in rush…. Rajesh calls some one and @ phone he says “ I have done what you told to me” and cuts the call….}
Scene- 14 [ @ City Hospital]
{Dev was sitting beside Prinku….His eyes were filled with tears….. He recollected the first moment of their meeting and just stared @ her face…..He was unable to lost in thoughts as he heard some one has opened the door and dev found his uncle with prinku’s brothers….shivaay, rudy and om….three of them moved to prinku’s bed and shivaay burst into tears….}
Dev : Shivaay bhaiya….please control yourselves…. Prinku will be alright……
Shivaay : How it happened ?
Dev : Bhaiya….even I don’t know….when I saw her unconscious on floor I just take her here…..And i…
{ Suddenly doctor interrupted their conversation by saying “Excuse me …Mr.Shivaay Singh Oberoi…I want to talk to you….please….”}
Shivaay : Prinku…..{he placed his hand on her forehead}
Rudra : Bhaiya…we will take care of prinku…..
Shivaay : Om….
Omkara : Shivaay….prinku will be fine…..
Shivaay : Yeah….I know….let me see what doctor will say…..{he leaves and rajesh stares shivaay}
Rajesh : Dev….I think we have to go now….
Dev : Uncle…..its not possible…..i can’t leave prinku….
Rajesh : Dev…..you know why am saying this….. won’t you ?{anger}
Dev : Uncle….i know…but I can’t come with you…. Am sorry….
Rajesh : So you have decided it ?
Dev : Yes uncle…..
Rajesh : But I have to leave….
Dev : Uncle….your wish…do whatever you want…
{Rajesh is shocked….With much anger he stares dev and leave the room in rush….}
Omkara : Dev…thanks a lot…..
Dev : Om bhaiya…no need of thanks….whatever I did it because prinku is my…..my…..friend….. and a friend in need is a friend indeed….
Omkara {smiles}: Yes, you’re right…..
Rudra : Om…..paapa, dadi and mom have not reached yet…..I will call them….{he leaves}
Omkara : Choti maa and chote paapa….i mean shivaay has sent the driver to pick them from maata rani’s temple….{omkara gets the call from pinky….@ phone- Pinky : oh my maata!! Omkara we have stuck in the traffic jam….beta…its raining also…and…..beta how is prinku ?
Omkara : Choti maa….relax…prinku will be alright
Pinky : I want to say…hello…hello….{the lines got cut as battery was low}]
Omkara : Hello…hello….oh god!
Dev : What happened om bhaiya…
Omkara : I think it’s a network problem…. I have to make a call….. dev please….take care of prinku….i will be back….{leaves}
{Dev stares prinku’s face…..He just holded her hand and a drop of tear from his eye slowly falls on her hand…..Dev was literally crying…..Prinku still was unable to regain the consciousness….@ mind dev was saying ….”prinku…..please look @ me…..please talk to me….prinku….you asked me so many things and still you didn’t get answers…. Please prinku….wake up…..please…..prinku…..”}
PRECAP : Shivaay-Siddharth Raana clash…..
So….ishqies….that much for this part….and guys… am submitting this one in rush……so you may find many mistakes in it….but guys please comment on it….and sorry for making it short again and request all to comment on it….please ishqies…..
5 Comments
Nyce dear…too emotional
please any one write a ff on astha and shlok
U should stop the ff..this pridev pair is just worst n boring.n ur writing makes it more bad
Thanks to all for commenting…..
Ridhima no need to worry as am not able to continue this ff as i got job transfer……to kalburgi.. yaar…and sorry for making a worst ff….really sorry
Sry for not commented on your previous update renima di…Coming to the epi…it’s nice and I loved it…don’t say you made a bad ff…actually it was good…almost everyone liked priveer more than pridev but you started it when they showed pridev in ib…so you continued with it…and it’s really a wonderful attempt…sometimes our attempt may not work properly but that doesn’t mean we did it bad…You gave us amazing ffs with different phase…I really loved it when you wrote for tejvi…you loved ib and every single character in ib…so you gave us different ffs…don’t feel sry di…I’m expecting new ffs from you…hope you make this wish of you sissy true…