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Home»Fan Fiction»The precious gift of love (kaanchi) Episode 13
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The precious gift of love (kaanchi) Episode 13

JessiccaBy JessiccaOctober 3, 201722 Comments7 Mins Read
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Hey guys.. Hope you all are fine… I was thinking to end this ff of mine as I thought it is getting boring.. But on getting positive comments and requests, I’m dropping this idea.. Love you all.. Keep supporting…

Recap:- Kanchi return from their Shimla trip.. Kabir took Sanchi to his house to make her meet Kusum. Riya was there already.. She saw Kanchi together and got jealous.. She tried to kill Sanchi by mixing poison in her good but fortunately she go caught and Kusum slapped her and she was kicked out the house. Kanchi got engaged..

Now let’s start ….

The engagement party was over… Sanchi and Jaya leave Kapoor mansion..

Next Day…..

Kaanchi and the whole gang who went to the trip were granted a one day leave to take rest… An old lady along with her pregnant daughter in law visited Kapoor Mansion… Kusum was busy in helping her maid at the house and Kabir was working on his laptop in his room…

Now at the hostel..

Sanchi was bored.. She got a message from her friend to come to the hospital if possible as one of her old patient was not eating her medicine.. She went to the hostel..

Sanchi met her patient and convinced her to eat food and take her medicine… While she was busy with her patient, Riya saw her as she was passing by.. She thought to take revenge as she was slapped by Kusum bcz of her.. She opens her bad and takes out her water bottle and adds something alcoholic in her water and puts her bad at her place and leaves smirking

Sanchi take her bag and leaves the ward.. She was in the corridor while Kusum calls her.. She attends her call…

Kusum: Hello beta how are you..?

Sanchi: Hello aunty namaste.. I’m fine..

Kusum: Beta.. Actually my guests wanted to meet you… I guess you are on leave… Can you come home..?

Sanchi: Of course aunty .. I am coming…

Kusum: Sanchi.. Wait . send Kabir to pick you..

Sanchi: No no maa.. I am at the hospital.. I’ll come by myself.. Don’t worry..

Kusum: Ok beta..

Call ends..

Sanchi leaves… She was in rickshaw when she drinks that water…

She reaches Kapoor Mansion…

She was behaving normally as she was not affected by the alcohol yet…

Kusum greets her and makes her meet the guests.. Guests praise Sanchi..

They were sitting and taking..

Kusum: Sanchi.. You sit and talk with them.. I’ll go and make the make the food.

Sanchi: No Maa…. You sit I’ll make food..

Kabir was also sitting there.. Kabir got a call from his neighbour to come and check their child as he was in fever..

Kabir excused as went….

Sanchi prepares the food.. Sudddenly she saw someone screaming… She came inside and saw the pregnant lady was shouting in pain…

Kusum: Sanchi she is getting labour pain.. I’m taking her to the hospital… To plz stay here until Kabir comes…

Sanchi: Ohk maa.. Plz take care of her..

Kusum left with the guests….

Now the alcohol starting showing its reaction.. Sanchi turns on the music on started dancing… Kabir came and knocked at the door.. Maid opens the door…

Kabir: Malti… Who is listening to this loud music..?

Malti: Sahab, Wo Sanchi madam is listening the songs and dancing..

Kabir: What..? Where is maa.?

Malti: The guest lady got labour pain and Kusum madam took her to hospital… Sahab, i have completed my work and I’m going now..

Kabir: Ohk….

She leaves.. Kabir goes inside and saw Sanchi dancing weirdly on the sofa…

Kabir smiles seeing her…

She stumbles and falls from the sofa but Kabir saves her… They have an intense eye lock…

Sanchi: Kabiiiiirrrr… Look there monkey…

Kabir: Monkey..?

Sanchi: Yeah over there..

Kabir looks at the position where Sanchi was pointing ?…. There was a mirror and he saw himself in it..

Sanchi started laughing

Kabir: You want to say I’m a monkey…

Sanchi: yeah you are… My cute monkey…

Saying this she kissed his cheeks…

Kabir was surprised. He was thinking what was wrong with her..

He turns the music off…

Kabir: Enough Sanchi… What is this..?

Sanchi pouts…

Sanchi: You stupid Khadoos Hitler… Saru kahi ke…?

Kabir was shocked…

Kabir: Sanchi… I think you are tired.. You need rest..

Sanchi ran and hugged him…

Sanchi: My teddy bear… My teddy bear… But what is this.. ? Teddys don’t wear clothes.. Take them off..

She started opening his buttons.. He jerks her away..

Kabir: Sanchi. What is wrong with you..?

Sanchi started crying and hitting him..

Sanchi: You pushed me .. I hate you…

Kabir: Sanchi… Sanchi listen.. Acha I’m sorry..

Sanchi: No.. I want something now..

Kabir: What…?

Sanchi: You need to fulfill my wish..

Kabir: Ok tell..

Sanchi: I want to dance in rain..

Kabir: Sanchi… It’s a sunny day ?…. How could I bring rain now..

Sanchi: No.. I want to go in rain….

Kabir: Ok ok.. Come with me.. Upstairs..

Sanchi: You take me in your arms then ..

He carried her in his arms.. And took her upstairs..

He takes her to washroom and starts the shower.. She gets drenched.She started laughing dancing…

Sannchi: Yipeee…!!! Rain .. Rainnn…..

Kabir was standing in a corner with his back resting against the wall and his hands were folded… He was mesmerized seeing her… She couldn’t take his eyes off her…

She saw him and pulled him under shower…

Kabir: S-Sanchi … Wait.. Aaa.. Ouchhh…

Sanchi laughed… She started clapping..

Sanchi: Teddy got wet… Teddy got wet…

Kabir smiled at her…

She hugged him tightly…

He responded tho the hug…

As he puts his hand on her back, he found her back zip open… Her bare back was visible…

He tried to zip it up but she pushed him…

Sanchi: Kabir… Kiss mee…

Kabir in mind ” She is not in her senses.. I can’t touch her… It would be wrong… ”

Kabir: No.. No Sanchi….

Sanchi: You are so unromantic.. You don’t love me na… ?

Kabir caressed her face…

Kabir: No Sanchi… I love up a lot…

Sanchi: My taking teddy loves me.. My taking teddy loves me…

Kabir: Sanchi let me zip your dress first..

Sanchi: At once cost only…

Kabir: Now what…?

Sanchi: Close your eyes tightly.. No cheating…

Kabir: Fine..

He closes his eyes…

Sanchi came nearer and kissed his lips..
Kabir responded to the kiss… He holds her waist and pulls her closer.. They parted…

Sanchi: Once more.. Once more…

Kabir: Enough Sanchi…

Sanchi pretends to cry and starts jumping..

Sanchi: No … I want my teddy to kiss me…

Kabir: But Sanchi….

Sanchi: Plz… Plz…

Kabir stopped the shower and carried her in his arms… He placed her on his bed.. He kissed her forehead.

Kabir: She needs to change these wet clothes or else she’ll get ill…

He calls his maid and remembers that she’s not home… He brought a saree for her..

Kabir: Sanchi, change these clothes..

Sanchi: No.. You change my clothes..

Kabir blindfolds his eyes with a cloth and started undressing her… He makes her change the clothes..

He opens his eyes…

Sanchi: Kabir you don’t love me naa..?

Kabir: I love you Sanchi..

Sanchi: Then prove it…

Kabir: You want me to prove it.. I’ll.. But not now…

Sanchi: Then when..?

Kabir: When you’ll close your eyes..

Sanchi closes her eyes…

Kabir injects her.. She sleeps..

Kabir took a deep breath…

Kabir: Thank God… She is such a big disaster…

He makes her wear the blanket… Kabir leaves the room…

Precap:- Sanchi crying in Kapoor’s Mansion.. Kaanchi moments

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    22 Comments

    1. Khamoshi on October 3, 2017 6:26 am

      Jessicca… amazing dear.. such a cute RomCom episode yaar.. i was laughing, smiling and …what say more yaar.. u rocked it yaar.
      Superb episode. Loved the chemistry u created vetween Kanchi… RIYA kuch to kaam aayi.. ??

      • Jessicca on October 3, 2017 7:51 pm

        Thank you so much Khamoshiiiii… Love you so much❤❤

    2. Alia on October 3, 2017 8:00 am

      Amazing

      • Jessicca on October 3, 2017 7:51 pm

        Thanks Alia❤

    3. anu on October 3, 2017 8:05 am

      So so beautiful episode

      • Jessicca on October 3, 2017 7:52 pm

        Thanks Anu

    4. Palak.Sharma on October 3, 2017 8:56 am

      One of the best, if not the BEST RomCom I’ve read on TU. You nailed this Jessicca!! I just loved it so much, words can’t explain how happy this made me. Turned my Monday into a Friday!! Thank you so much!!! Update soon

      • Jessicca on October 3, 2017 7:52 pm

        Awww.. Thank you so much… Glad you liked it❤

    5. Tumpamoni on October 3, 2017 9:42 am

      Hey,, nevr thnk 2 stop it.. Epsd was outstnding as alwys…

      • Jessicca on October 3, 2017 7:53 pm

        Aww.. Never.. I’ll keep writing .. Thanks a lot❤

    6. Dhruti on October 3, 2017 10:21 am

      it was superb ff don’t stop writing……superb, comedy ff………….you nailed it today………….

      • Jessicca on October 3, 2017 7:54 pm

        Thank u so much Dhruti dear❤❤

    7. riyarocks on October 3, 2017 10:22 am

      wow wow wow……………what else can I say?????????tooooooooo good dear…………….bas ek hi kami thi, bg mein, zara sa jhoom loon main song………..but don’t worry, maine ye gaana play karte hue isse padha & dear, I enjoyed reading this along……………luv u yaar…………….

      • Jessicca on October 3, 2017 7:55 pm

        Aww so sorry i was focusing on the dialogues and forgot the bg.. And thanks for compliment.. Glad you liked it❤

    8. niyaaa on October 3, 2017 11:26 am

      Awsome mindblowing epi jessi nd romcom is superb outstanding don’t even think to end it samjhi or ye meri request nahi order h… Lovv u tc post nxt asap

      • Jessicca on October 3, 2017 7:56 pm

        Ahaha Niya ap ka hukam sar aankho par… Thank you so much… Glad you liked it❤

    9. RuCh23 on October 3, 2017 11:34 am

      Oh my god Jess ??? it was so awesome dear ??? I was laughing so hard reading Sanchi’s dialogues!!! And Kabir ??? he’s such a good man!!! Sorry for not commenting on your previous epis dear ??? I was busy studying for an exam. But all the epis were great ???

      • Jessicca on October 3, 2017 7:59 pm

        Aww thank you so much dear… And never mind I’m in the same situation buried under exam pressure… But happy you liked it… Love you❤

    10. Trisha139 on October 3, 2017 3:12 pm

      Oho uff superb chemistry ! Dialogues ! Her behaviour ! Teddy ???! Thanks to riya nd more than that to you !
      Fabulous !
      Love uh loads sweetie keep going

      • Jessicca on October 3, 2017 8:00 pm

        Thanks a lot Trishoo… Love you more,❤ glad you liked it?

    11. Divya on October 3, 2017 5:30 pm

      Really I love ur episode super fabulous fantastic mind blowing episode lovely

      • Jessicca on October 3, 2017 8:00 pm

        Thank you sweetie?❤

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