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Home»Fan Fiction»Power of Love- One shot OS -Ishqbaaz
Fan Fiction Ishqbaaz

Power of Love- One shot OS -Ishqbaaz

VHMBy VHMApril 13, 201795 Comments14 Mins Read
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And finally the bullet was taken by Anika….Shivaay and all the Oberoi family members freezed while Mahi, Ranveer and Kamini got shocked….Khanna came with Police and they took the Mahi Ranveer and Kamini trio……

Shivaay came into senses and screamed take the car out and rushed to Hospital………they were oberois and so were the priority …the best of doctors attended Anika ……….

Shivaay was roaming here and there before the operation theatre and rest of the Oberoi family members sat equally tensed…….

The operation was done indicating the green bulb out of the OT…Shivaay rushed as soon as doctor came out of OT and asked
‘’How is she? She is fine right ? I know nothing will happen to her..can I meet her ? ‘’

Doctor held Shivaay’s shoulder while OmRu rushed and stood beside him…………Doctor was scared to tell the truth as Shivaay wouldn’t spare if him if he doesn’t listen what he expects to listen………

Doctor was in thoughts …Rudra impatiently asked ‘’ why don’t you speak doctor ?‘’

He looked towards Rudra and said ‘’ We have tried our level best and took the bullet out , but ‘’

Shivaay ‘’ but…but what ?’’

Doctor ‘’But she has slipped into Coma… I am sorry …now nothing is left in our hands ‘’

Shivaay ‘’ what? How can she go into coma? Why did you not treat her properly…I want her back in normal state…do you understand …she cannot be sleeping in the hospital room half dead…I will not spare you if she doesn’t get normal…you know me very well…’’

Doctor ‘’ Relax Mr.Oberoi…I already said we did our best …now it depends on her …’’

Om ‘’ when will she be out of Coma then ?’’

Doctor ‘’ that’s a difficult question to answer may be in a day or months or years or never ‘’

Shivaay fell on the ground ……..Doctor rushed to him and called the nurse and ward boy to take him to room and make him rest

Pinky, Dadi and Jhanvi were crying uncontrollably seeing the state of Shivaay and Listening to the state of Anika…….

Shivaay was taken to a room and Anika was brought out on OT………..

Om requested the doctor to shift Anika to the same room where Shivaay is…Doctor obliged understanding the situation and ordered the same to his subordinates and excused himself……..

Everyone were terriblky sad and were in a crux who to see first Shivaay or Anika………..

Rudra didn’t enter the room and sat outside crying vigorously….Looking at him Soumya came to him and held him by his shoulder…Rudra couldn’t control and hugged at her waist and cried…Soumya was also crying……..

Om was the only one to show courage because he knew the power of Shivaay and Anika’s love……….

All the Oberoi members waited patiently outside the room for Shivaay to gain consciousness and final he gained …….

Shivaay turned to see Anika lying ina bed next to him and sleeping …may be sleeping peacefully for the first time …………….

He got down while nurse ran to him and asked him to lie in the bed….Shivaay glared at her angrily and nurse left the room without uttering a word……..

He slowly went to Anika and held her hand ………….

Nurse came out of the room and Pinky asked her how is Shivaay …Nurse replied he gained consciousness but he went to his wife…….Pinky was about to rush inside when Om stopped her

Pinky looked at him angrily , Om ‘’ Not now choti maa…I am sure Shivaay is fine and I also know he wants to be alone now…………he needs time and we are supposed to give him the time……..Shivaay will never allow his tears to come out in front of us…let him cry his heart out….he feel lite…please understand…their relation is not so weak to leave each other abruptly….’’

Dadi seconed Om’s words and Pinky peeped through the window and saw his son holding Anika’s hand and sitting there ……..

Pinky cried seeing state of Shivaay…Jahnvi and Dadi consoled her and asked her to go home….

Pinky nodded No but Om asked her to go and bring food for Shivaay , he also insisted Dadi and Jhanvi to accompany Pinky …all the ladies left…Shakti and Tej had already left owing to their work …however the work couldn’t be postponed for all good reasons…after all it was about Ranveer – Mahi and Kamini….

Om sat beside Rudra and Soumya while Chulbul came……

Shivaay was looking into void …………..he was reminiscing his moments with Anika…..the first being the pain he gave her ……..

He spoke ‘’ Anika I know why you are doing this to me…I know I gave you so much pain so you……. you decided to return the same amount of pain with interest……..how can you be such ………….if you really want to hurt me ..get up and fight with me…don’t talk with me…irritate me….but don’t be silent…………I will bear whatever you do to me but I cannot bear seeing you like this ……get up Anika…get up ….’’

Anika was still

Shivaay got up and left her hand and walked ……………he again came back and started saying
‘’ you want to show Tadi right ? but I already said when it comes to showing Tadi no one can beat Shivaay Singh Oberoi … so enough of your drama…you know I have so much to talk to you…we have to tackle many more things…so don’t show Tadi ….get up….Anika are you listening get up damn it…’’

He pauses for a while and says
‘’ok fine…you want me to accept…I accept you are the greatest Tadibaaz…yes see I accepted you’re the only greatest tadibaaz…I have agreed now …so please get up Anika…I need you …wake up Panika.or…or ‘’

His voice was choking with every sentence he was speaking and tears coming out……

Though OmRu Soumya and Chulbul couldn’t hear what he was speaking they were seeing Shivaay restless and trying to get her Anika back…

Now this scenario made even Om to loose his composure…..tears also started running through his eyes… chulbul saw that said ‘’No Om ji you cannot loose…it’s time you have to be rock hard and stand as a wall and hold your brothers….have trust nothing will go wrong’’

Om looked into Chulbul’s eyes and hugged him….Chulbul reciprocated…………..

Back in room …Shivaay cleared his voice assuring himself that Anika will not leave him and goes back to her and says
‘’ ok fine …you don’t care about me ..but think about Sahil ..he will be alone …how will he be able to handle if you keep lying here in this bed…I did mistake you are punishing me but Sahil didn’t do any mistake why are you punishing him ? don’t you any responsibility towards him ? you made so many big promises infront of me to him that you will take care and now how can you back off ?’come on speak out ? ‘’

Shivaay cried ‘’ Anika speak something …wake up…I am scolding you and angry …throw water on me as I am much angry on you …throw it Anika..throw it ‘’
Saying this he sat down …………

Nothing was working on Anika ……..

He wiped his tears and shouted ‘’ enough is enough …why did you take bullet when you don’t have the courage to survive? did I ask you to put yourself in trouble for me? Don’t you know what will will be my state seeing you like this? What sort of revenge are you taking from me ? is this a joke? Why don’t you reply ? I am asking you something? You know I need an answer so speak out now !!! ‘’

His scream of ‘’speak out now ‘’came outside the room and Om Ru rushed inside

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Shivaay glared at them and sat on his bed with his head down and hands rubbing against each other……………

Om Ru came and sat beside him on either side and held his shoulder………..

Om ‘’ Shivaay relax…she will come back …you and we , we all know this……….it will take time’’’

Rudra said ‘’yes bhayya…Bhabhi will be alright….’’

Shivaay smiled sadly and looked at om and Rudra and said ‘’ OmRu I need your help …will you both help me ?’’

OmRu ‘’ yes Shivaay/Bhayya say what help do you want…we are ready to give our lives to do what you wish for ‘’

Shivaay ‘’ see her…she is stubborn…..she is punishing me because I have hurt her innumerable number of times….she in angry with me………….but she is your best friend right…tell me she is your best friend right ?’’

Om and Rudra nodded in positive

Shivaay ‘’ you both never hurt her , you both are her best friends ……….will you both talk to her and ask her to come back …no no..not for me…atleast for you …. Say to her that I will be away from her …and it’s …it’s a pinky promise ‘’

OmRu were shocked listening Shivaay saying like this and hugged him and Shivaay hugged back and cried saying
‘’ I can’t live without her…ask her to come back…for me …for you both …for all of us……..talk to her ….OmRu talk to her…’’

Om pacified Shivaay saying ‘’ Shivaay , Anika Bhabhi will come back not only for us or Oberoi family but also for you ………you both are a team ..the best team to fight against anyone who is behind our family…..you cannot loose at this stage …you cannot loose’’

Saying this Om left the room…………..

Rudra went near Anika and said ‘’ Bhabhi…what happened to you…see I came and if you don’t get up ..i will not talk to anyone, will not go to gym, will fight with soumya for no reason and will not drink my protein shake also……….who will protect me from my big brothers who will support me Bhabhi…wake up Bhabhi …please ………’’

Soumya entered and took Rudra out and consoled him…………

Shivaay went near her and sat silently and later rested on her chest and listened her heart beat………….

He got up and sat straight holding her hands and reminisced all the lovely moments he spent with Anika ………he finally spoke up
‘’you cannot be like this for so much time Anika ……..you still didn’t say me if it pains when I am around you, when I look at you, when I hold you, when I come closer to you, when I touch you, when I kiss you ……..you haven’t said yet……..’’

‘’How will I live without you Anika…….i cannot see you in this state …please wake up Anika……….please……..he again rest on her chest and holds her hands and cries saying ‘’I LOVE YOU ANIKA and I CANNOT LIVE WITHOUT YOU’’ … I have never said this to you but now I cannot control myself from saying this ‘’Í LOVE YOU ANIKA …I LOVE YOU SO MUCH ‘’

He gets up to see a lone tear coming out of Anika’s eyes……….he wipes the tear and in sudden shock he remembers that she is coming back ….

He shouts ‘’ Yes Anika wake up…I said truth that I LOVE YOU and this is the only thing I didn’t say you till now…for the sake of my LOVE wake up……’’

Finally Anika opens her eye and looks at him………..he hugs her and cries and shouts for Doctor running out…………

OmRu sees him and tries to stop but he runs as a mad man towards doctor room….

Meanwhile OmRu Soumy and Chulbul rush into the room and see Anika …Anika looked at them and smiled weakly…Rudra ran to her and hugged …….

Om said with his voice choking ‘’ You have scared us like hell…………does anyone behave as such ?’’

Doctor asked everyone to wait outside Shivaay resisted Doctors insisted and OmRu held him saying he has to be outside…………….

Om informed all the Oberoi Family members and they immediately rushed to hospital…….

Doctors did check up of Anika and came out ……….

Shivaay impatiently asked them ‘’ How is she? My wife how is she? ‘’

Doctor with a wide smile ‘’ it’s a miracle ………You did it Mr.Shivaay…she has came back…she is trong enough to fight back against all odds and now she is good ..but she is weak…she has to be in hospital for a week to gain her strength to minimum…don’t give her stress …..’’

Shivaay thanked him happily and also apologised for his earlier behaviour…………

Shivaay looked at her from outside while all the Oberoi family members went to her and were chatting with her ………..

Dadi came to Shivaay and said ‘’ Billu why don’t you go inside and stay by her ? she did so much for you …now take care of her ‘’

Shivaay smiled happily and said ‘’ yes dadi she did so much for me and now I will always stay by her…I promise ‘’

Anika was in room searching for Shivaay …everyone was speaking to her…Om observed her and understood her …..

Om ‘’ I think we should all leave now…Doctor asked her to rest and so we should allow her to take rest ‘’

Rudra ‘’ O you all leave …I have many things to tell Anika Bhabhi…I will be here ‘’

Om ‘’ Rudra grow up..you too have got married…it’s time she should be with her husband..’’

Everyone laughed shyly and Anika in her weakness blushed which didn’t go unnoticed by her husband……..

Finally rest all family members left and Shivaay entered folding his hands setting them at his chest….

Anika smiled…her smile was sunshine to him he too smiled but was teary eyed ….Seeing him she too became teary eyed

He went near her and asked ‘’ how..how are you feeling now ?’’
Anika ‘’ much better’’

They both stayed silent for a while and Anika broke the silence

Anika ‘’ don’t you want to scold me now?’’
Shivaay ‘’ no…’’

Anika ‘’ why? ‘’
Shivaay ‘’ because you gave me a punishment to remember for lifetime in these few hours ‘’

Anika ‘’ what did I do? ‘’
Shivaay ‘’ you didn’t speak to me…you didn’t hear me…you didn’t respond to me…you didn’t pacify me…in total you were not with me’’

Anika ‘’ this can never happen…I …I cannot stay away from you for much time ‘’’
Shivaay ‘’ I know…but this few hours were equal to some decades for me ‘’

Anika ‘’ I am sorry Shivaay ‘’
Shivaay ‘’ for what…for saving me once again ‘’

Anika ‘’ no I would always prefer to give away my life before some even attempts to take you away from me ‘’
Shivaay ‘’ why ?’’

Anika ‘’ because I cannot live without you ‘’
Shivaay ‘’ so do I’’

Anika and Shivaay looked at each other and together said ‘’ I LOVE YOU’’

Both looked at each other and Anika blushed heavily this time Shivaay too blushed ….

They both hugged each other and cried silently…………..

Later Shivaay kissed her forehead and stared at her lovingly ………

Shivaay ‘’ Promise me you will always stay with me no matter what…how much ever we fight…how much ever we sold each other…never leave me…because without you I am also a dead …’’

Anika stopped him from saying anything else and said ‘’PINKY PROMISE’’

Their little fingers crisscrossed each other’s and their hearts united forever and their lips had the happiest curve ……….

Finally their POWER OF LOVE brought the much awaited happiness in their life

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This is VHM signing off ….Please let me know how you felt reading this…any sort of comment good or bad is welcome..i will respond as soon as possible !!!

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    95 Comments

    1. Ahaana on April 13, 2017 5:44 pm

      Awesome

      • VHM on April 13, 2017 10:23 pm

        Thank you so much Ahaana…i am so happy to read your comment

    2. saddy on April 13, 2017 5:45 pm

      wow nice i like it

      • VHM on April 13, 2017 10:22 pm

        Thank you much Saddy….glad you liked it

    3. Hirah on April 13, 2017 5:52 pm

      Awww Beautiful….! ❤

      • VHM on April 13, 2017 10:19 pm

        Thank you Hirah…Hirah jitna priceless comment

    4. Arpita on April 13, 2017 5:56 pm

      Wow VHM !! It is soo good os.thank you sooooo much for entertaining us.?.

      • VHM on April 13, 2017 10:19 pm

        Thank you Arpita…thank you sooooo much for reading this and then appreciating

    5. disha on April 13, 2017 6:10 pm

      Just amazing

      • VHM on April 13, 2017 10:18 pm

        Thank you so much Disha …thanks a lot

    6. Dhar on April 13, 2017 6:30 pm

      Aapne toh sabki ty ty phis kar di ……. It’s Very very good
      ???

      • VHM on April 13, 2017 10:18 pm

        Hayee maine kya kiya ? maine tho bas ek OS likha…thank you so much for the awesome appreciation

    7. Dini on April 13, 2017 6:32 pm

      Awwww…….
      Sooo emotional……
      I felt like crying……
      Amazing writing darling….
      Keep going…..

      • VHM on April 13, 2017 10:17 pm

        Awee thank you so much Dini….i am so happy to read your comment…hope i din’t make you feel like crying for some stupid reason

    8. Nita D on April 13, 2017 6:35 pm

      Wow….this is awesome…..this time I don’t have those long comments to write cause I am unable to find the appropriate words….but I loved it so much….Wish to see this in the show too….

      • Amayaa on April 13, 2017 7:39 pm

        Nita di
        I m 100 % agree with u. …….
        I too feel like this only
        U know what when I came 2 an end after reading this amazing ff
        Only three comments r showing uptil then
        First time I take so much time in commenting
        I didn’t find right words 2 explain my feelings
        Nd when I posted my comment
        I found my comment similar 2 u di

        U STOLE MY WORDS FROM MY CHOTU SA MIND DI
        JUST KIDDING

      • Nita D on April 13, 2017 9:16 pm

        Hey Amayaa….that was so sweet of u to reply to my comment….I can relate to it…cause Even I was not getting what to write….
        Wase, nice meeting you….so friends right?

      • VHM on April 13, 2017 10:02 pm

        Thank you so much Nita …i never expected this huge response when i wrote this OS…i just wrote this OS in 40 minutes that too before leaving for some work….when i came back i looked to see whether you posted your opinion or not …and Bingo i found it….glad that you liked it and found it awesome….

      • VHM on April 13, 2017 10:16 pm

        And i must say Power of love paved way for a new Friendship between Amayaa and Nita ….great going…waise will you join me in your friends list ?

      • Nita D on April 13, 2017 11:08 pm

        What….ain’t we friends already…? I am offended now…..I thought we were friends so with that right only I used to tell u all the things n even scolded u with that right when u decided to stop unbelievable truth in midway….

      • VHM on April 14, 2017 12:43 am

        I never said we are not friends so don’t get offended…i just asked you to add in your duo list …so that we become a trio…now i hope i am clear…sorry dear i couldn’t frame my sentence clearly

      • Amayaa on April 14, 2017 12:39 am

        Absolutely from now
        We r not de friends only but also bestest wale friends

      • VHM on April 14, 2017 1:57 am

        Done dana done Amayaa……..

      • Nita D on April 14, 2017 8:27 am

        Chalo ok than deal sealed…..??we r a trio now…

    9. Fffan1234 on April 13, 2017 6:38 pm

      That was so beautiful. Loved it

      • VHM on April 13, 2017 9:59 pm

        Thank you so much Fffan1234 ….glad you liked it

    10. Lilly on April 13, 2017 6:48 pm

      Wow…. what a lovely os…..just amazing…..

      • VHM on April 13, 2017 9:59 pm

        Thank you for such lovely comment Lilly

    11. Sahasra on April 13, 2017 7:01 pm

      Emotional and nice

      • VHM on April 13, 2017 9:58 pm

        Thank you so much Sahasra…thanks a lot

    12. Shivika on April 13, 2017 7:01 pm

      Awesome….. 🙂

      • VHM on April 13, 2017 9:58 pm

        Thank you so much Shivika …thanks a lot

    13. nikitajai on April 13, 2017 7:04 pm

      It is awesome dear… And what about your spy fiction… I am keenly waiting….. Plz make Anika a spy.. I am eagerly wants to see her in a spy character… I am sure that you will come with a superb thrilling fiction….

      • VHM on April 13, 2017 9:57 pm

        Thank you so much Nikita…i am just readying the plot of writing the FF or OS whatsoever…however my next thriller will not include Shivaay or Anika infact not Ishqbaaz…….once it is readied i will ping you a PM and then send it to you….

      • VHM on April 15, 2017 2:50 am

        Hey Nikita…can you please ping me a private message once you see this comment

    14. Amayaa on April 13, 2017 7:26 pm

      What 2 comment ?????
      Please u tell me only as I m unable 2 find words which describes my feelings
      R u a well trained writer ?????
      UR ff shows this only
      Whatever I comment that is very less only 2 show how much I loved this
      U know what I must say
      Gul Mam has to change her writers nd select u only as de new writer of de best ever show ishqbaaz
      Nd if in de case u rejected de proposal u must give some time 2 teach writing skills 2 CVS
      What an amazing plot dr
      I will pray that de show will also go like this only
      Each dialogue is fabulously written
      Keep it up dr
      Nd I hope u came back with a new ff soon
      Until then please give tuition 2 CVS
      Again I m saying
      UR ff is amazing
      I don’t found myself in a state 2 stop me from appreciating u
      I m such overwhelmed by reading ur wonderful

      Hmmmm I realised now that my comment become 2 long
      Nd so I don’t want a chotu sa reply
      Reply soon dr I m waiting

      • VHM on April 13, 2017 9:55 pm

        What 2 reply now ?????
        please u tell me how should i thank you because i am also unable to find suitable words to describe how delighted i am to read your comment…
        To start with i am not at all a trained writer….infact i am the last one to write good FF’s or OS ….
        Gul khan has never approached me ….and i never rejected the proposal …lol…
        i too wish Shivaay shows all his emotions about Anika before confession of his love…….and this wish of my transformed into this OS…this is what i can say……
        Tution to CVS that to me …like seriously…….OMG that’s a huge compliment………
        I too am overwhelmed to read all that wonderful lines you have written as an appreciation to me…….Thank you soooooooooo much

    15. Surbhi Sharma on April 13, 2017 7:27 pm

      I can’t say anything. U left me speechless. Its beautiful. Just beautiful .????

      • VHM on April 13, 2017 9:49 pm

        i am also confused what to type ….thank you so much Surbhi !!!

    16. Arya? on April 13, 2017 7:30 pm

      Nyc1 ha

      • VHM on April 13, 2017 9:48 pm

        Thank you so much Arya !!!

    17. Bhavana on April 13, 2017 7:35 pm

      My instincts were telling that its your os….
      Nd look, I kept my promise.. I told u so that I cannot miss any of your updates..
      Well,coming to the os.. Its really impressive… Loved it… Nd finally tumne Shivaay Singh Oberoi se I❤U bolva hi diya..
      Eagerly waiting for your nxt work…?

      • VHM on April 13, 2017 9:48 pm

        Awee thank you so much Bhavana ….yes dear you kept your promise and i too kept my promise to be back with something new and here i have come up with this OS….off course SSO proposal to Anika is something every viewer of Ishqbaaz would be waiting for ….it’s just that i wrote it a bit earlier

    18. Sneha on April 13, 2017 7:43 pm

      Its just amazing

      • VHM on April 13, 2017 9:46 pm

        Thanks a lot Sneha …i am glad you liked it

    19. alekhika20 on April 13, 2017 7:53 pm

      Wonderful os

      • VHM on April 13, 2017 9:45 pm

        Thank you so much Alekhika…Thanks a lot

    20. chikoo on April 13, 2017 7:56 pm

      U made us speechless..
      !!!

      • VHM on April 13, 2017 9:42 pm

        Thank you so much Chikoo…what more can i say i am so very happy

    21. zaveesha on April 13, 2017 8:10 pm

      Jussstttt wonderful….don’t have any other words to explain…. just keep writing..all the very best for ur life ahead..

      • VHM on April 13, 2017 9:41 pm

        Thank you so much Zaveesha for all that you wrote …it made me so happy

    22. Anaya on April 13, 2017 8:13 pm

      Awesome

      • VHM on April 13, 2017 9:41 pm

        Thank you so much Anaya ….glad to read that you felt this awesome

    23. aishu on April 13, 2017 8:22 pm

      U r awesome. ….pls do continue….

      • VHM on April 13, 2017 9:40 pm

        Thank you so much Aishu …i am afraid this was an one shot OS…will come back with something else may be later….Thanks again for your support

    24. Niriha on April 13, 2017 8:32 pm

      Awesome

      • VHM on April 13, 2017 9:40 pm

        Thank you so much Niriha ….thanks for posting your comment

    25. shuklarashi on April 13, 2017 8:37 pm

      Awesome

      • VHM on April 13, 2017 9:39 pm

        Thank you so much Rashi ….pleasure reading your comment

    26. LINCY ARNAV on April 13, 2017 9:58 pm

      awesome update. I just loved it. I m literally in love with your stories and ur writing….

      • VHM on April 14, 2017 12:44 am

        Thank you so much Lincy ….and i love reading your Comment…

    27. Aisha on April 13, 2017 10:04 pm

      I don’t know what to write. But it was just AMAZING, AWESOME, BEAUTIFUL, LOVELY, and HEART TOUCHING.
      HATS OFF TO YOU

      • VHM on April 14, 2017 12:45 am

        Thank you so much Aisha for those beautiful words you wrote…thanks a lot

    28. Banita on April 14, 2017 12:25 am

      FANTASTIC…… & too emotional….. as always i luv ur writing dear….. Eageriy waiting 4 ur nxt work…….

      • VHM on April 14, 2017 1:55 am

        Thanks again Banita

    29. Nida on April 14, 2017 12:26 am

      No words ? absolutely no words ? I don’t know what to say…… beleive me today itself I was remembering u and u came back ….. ??❤️️???????❤️️??????❤️️????❤️️????❤️️?❤️️❤️️The way of your writing is flawless…it’s just amazing ? Just thought ? of writing few words for u ..’ The respect ✊ you give others is a dramatic reflection of the respect ✊ you give to your self ‘

      • VHM on April 14, 2017 1:55 am

        So sweet of you Nida …i too am short of words to say something to you… after every writing of mine i make sure to send you the link …because your opinion matters a lot to me…thank you for such beautiful lines and stay blessed….

    30. Banita on April 14, 2017 12:36 am

      FANTASTIC…… & too emotional….. as always i luv ur writting….. Eagerly waiting 4 ur nxt work…..

    31. VHM on April 14, 2017 1:50 am

      Thank you so much Banita…will come up with something else very soon…thank you again for your comment

    32. Radhakale30 on April 14, 2017 6:39 am

      It was was, fabulous, fantastic ??

      • VHM on April 14, 2017 1:08 pm

        Thank you so much Radha…i am glad you liked it

    33. sneha(kerala) on April 14, 2017 8:24 am

      I don’t know which word should I use to say that this is sooooooooooo beeauuutiful. How romantic……..
      These Shivika will kill me.. l love it …
      good work…

      • VHM on April 14, 2017 1:09 pm

        Thank you so much Sneha …. i can’t tell you how nice it feels to read such awesome comments

    34. gayathri.visu on April 14, 2017 12:19 pm

      Hey r u professional writer?? Say truth only…. What an imagination yaar..! Its soooo emotional….MARVELLOUS!!! You make me literaly crying dear…. Now what to say…just SPEECHLESS!!
      Big sorry for very late comment dear….

      • VHM on April 14, 2017 1:11 pm

        Thanks a lot Gayathri…Sooner or later doesn’t matter …you posted your opinion and that too a fab one …so it made my day…Pinky promise i am not at all a professional writer…as i said in earlier comment i wrote this OS in a span of 40 minutes before rushing for some other work and did not expect this much response….thanks again

    35. ruksy on April 14, 2017 12:33 pm

      Sooooo cute…??…..loved it….amazing

      • ruksy on April 14, 2017 12:34 pm

        All your work is amazing soffers no surprise there.

      • VHM on April 14, 2017 1:11 pm

        I am actually feeling so good that i can’t tell you

      • VHM on April 14, 2017 1:11 pm

        Thank you so much Rusky…

    36. Jerry_36 on April 14, 2017 4:25 pm

      Beautifully written di !! Was a treat to read. You manage to have so many skills. Mystery emotional romance !! Everything. Loved it. Waiting for more like this☺

      • VHM on April 14, 2017 6:07 pm

        Thank you so much Jerry…not so much of a treat as your ”Cafe coffee Day” one though … thank you so much once again

    37. Snehina (kerala) on April 14, 2017 4:28 pm

      Come on …this is brilliant. I just really don’t how to adulate you yaar… I hope that you will go very high in this purpose… As I’m a huuuuggggeeee fan of Ishqbaaaz , now I’m a fan of yours also..so undoubtedly I’ll always sent my voice to you… keep going………

      • VHM on April 14, 2017 6:10 pm

        Thank you so much Snehina …i can’t thank enough for your beautiful and awesome comment….i will always wait for your comment for my next writing whenever i come up with

    38. aryaraju on April 14, 2017 4:42 pm

      Wonderful…. ???

      • VHM on April 14, 2017 6:11 pm

        Thank you so much Arya ….thanks a lot

    39. Uf on April 14, 2017 8:04 pm

      AWESOME NICE CUTE SWEET BEAUTIFULL GREAT SUPERB???
      Iam all so blushing?????????

      • VHM on April 14, 2017 9:20 pm

        Thank you ..thank you…thank you…thank you …thank you so much

    40. diyas?☺ on April 15, 2017 9:23 am

      Hey….harika did I tumhara ff super hey …….wow what a nice I am a new frnds to u dear……ur ff made me to make this a serial ……like harika ko ishqbaazz….ke naam par……..what an idea…..or VHM ko dil bole ishqbaaz….ke naam par ……and it ‘s great ur ff…….waiting for next soon..,..
      ??????????????✌?

      • VHM on April 15, 2017 2:26 pm

        Hey Diya thank you so much …yes dear you are my new friend …and serial with my name is hilarious …lol …will come back with something else very soon….lots of best wishes to you

    41. Astha_Reddy on April 15, 2017 10:33 am

      I came across this OS now only after reading your cmt. on my OS and I wonder…both our thought matched here just the words are different and I literally jumped on my bed…some one is some where in this world … who thinks like I do….
      Love you my alike thought partner….perhaps this is our telepathy….

      • VHM on April 15, 2017 2:34 pm

        OOhh i am so happy to see your comment on my OS…thank you for posting comment ….i was so surprised to see your comment…if i am not wrong this is the first time you have posted your comment on any of my FF or OS….true partner, this is pure telepathy and our thought process is almost alike

    42. Sneha payal on April 16, 2017 12:22 pm

      It was just awesome..I just loved it.

      • VHM on April 16, 2017 12:41 pm

        Thank you so much Sneha……glad you liked it

    43. Mrunal on April 18, 2017 2:13 pm

      amazing….. ur work is always like a treat…. though i never find time to comment regularly…..
      but i always admire ur work to core…. u r really fantastic writer….
      and this was master piece again…

      • VHM on April 18, 2017 5:06 pm

        Thank you so much Mrunal ….your comment made my day even more better…thanks a lot once again

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