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Piya Rangrezz, Love Destiny Continues…..part 25

Recap: Shanaya arrives at Bhavri’s haveli where she gets a weird feeling of being there before. She falls unconscious.

TODAY:
Everybody takes Shanaya to a room upstairs….
Shamsher makes her lie on the bed…..
Munna: Kaa hua bhai! Jijji ko dekha nahi aur behosh ho gayi….
Bhavri eyes him angrily……he keeps quiet…..
Bhavri: Call the doctor.
Shamsher and Arjun go out….

Munna is still feared from Shanaya….
Munna: Jijji, ye bhoot hai!…..ye kahan se aa gayi??
Bhavri: Munna, Isne hi hamari jaan bachayi…
Munna: Lekin ye laundhiya toh….
Bhavri: Bus! Ijjat se baat karo…..ye sirf Shraddha jaisi dikhti hai….itna daro mat….
( While deep inside she knew her Shraddha was back. But she hides her true feelings.)

Bhavri: Ye baat sirf hum dono tak hi reheni chhahiye….kisi se bhi iska zikr mat karna….
Munna: Are baap re baap! Humko bahut darr lag raha hai…..hum toh chale yaha se….
Saying so he goes off….

Shamsher arrives with the doctor.
Shamsher: Here is the patient.
Doctor: Hmm, let me see.
He approaches Shanaya and checks her….. Bhavri stands there.

Doc: She has just fallen unconscious due to some stress…..don’t worry, she will wake up soon….
Bhavri : Hmm….
Shamsher reminisces Shanaya asking him that had she been there before, before falling unconscious….
Shamsher: Before this she was completely fine…..god knows what happened after she entered the house?
Bhavri gets alarmed.
Bhavri : Shamsher, go and drop the doctor.
Shamsher nods and takes the doctor….

Bhavri then sits on the bed by Shanaya…..
A soft tune is played in bg….

She looks Shanaya closely with a faint smile on her face….a smile which flashes back to the past….
Bhavri looks at Shanaya’s confident and fearless face and reminisces Shraddha’s innocent face…

She holds Shanaya’s palm and remembers Shraddha’s hand….
She feels Shanaya’s hair, touches her cheek…..and reminisces Shraddha’s each and every feature….
She recollects Shraddha’s voice, her smile, her looks, her times spent with Bhavri…..
She sees Shanaya’s necklace and remembers Shraddha’s mangal sutra…..
Bhavri smiles,

Bhavri: Wahi chehera, haath, chaal chalan…..Tum toh sahi mein yahan aa gayi Shraddha…..Ab bhi yakeen nahi hota….. kudarat ka ye karishma hai ki tum dusra janam lekar aa gayi…..wo bhi theek usi tarah, jaise pehele aayi thi…..hamare paas, isi haveli mein…..apne ghar….
Bhavri rolls some tears….
Bhavri pleads emotionally: Ab jaag jao beta! Tumhaari jarurat hai hame….ab hum tumhe jaane nahi dege….
She places her hand on her forehead….

Scene 2:
Shanaya wakes up after half an hour….the room is empty….
She holds her forehead in pain…..looks around the room, tries to recollect whatever had happened….
She is still a bit worried, when Bhavri comes to her room…..
Shanaya innocently looks up to Bhavri……upon seeing this innoc3nt face, Bhavri again remembers her Shraddha….

Shanaya: S-Sorry, I was….
Bhavri: Koi baat nahi beti…. Eisa ho jaata hai kabhi…..
Shanaya: Have I ……seen u somwhere…..other than saving u?
Bhavri: No, u r in vain….
Shanaya: Ok…..must be…

Shanaya looks down….
Bhavri: Ye lo, kuch khaa lo….
She hands over the food plate to her…..
Shanaya: Nahi, shukriya, ab hame yaha se jaana chhahiye…..
She hurriedly tries to get out of the bed…..but her head pains….she clutches her head…..

Bhavri: Dekho, tumhaari haalat theek nahi hai…..kuch khaa lo….phir chali jaana….
She gives the food thaali to her….
Shanaya slowly starts having….
Bhavri: Tum Shanaya ho na?
Shanaya: Ha…
Bhavri: Tumhe Shamsher ne kidnapp kiya tha and u acted dumb?
Shanaya is lost for words…
Bhavri: Koi baat nahi, hamari jaan bachane ke kiye shukriya …..
Shanaya: Koi baat nahi aaji amma….
Bhavri feels uneasy…..
Bhavri: Call me amma ji….
Shanaya just stares at her….
Bhavri: I’m tired hearing aaji amma from everyone, that’s y….
Shanaya smiles: Ok amma ji….

These words ‘amma ji’ makes Bhavri go in a bliss…..she reminisces Shraddha saying the same name for her……the same voice, the utter of ‘amma ji’, gives her peace……

Bhavri: Whith whom u stay?
Shanaya: With my…..
And so they talk for sometime….

Scene 3:
Shamsher now takes Shanaya to drop her home….
Shamsher: U okay now?
Shanaya: Yeah…..
Shamsher: Come…..
Shanaya approaches Bhavri….she joins her hands….

Shanaya: thank u soo much for the hospitality. Bye….
Bhavri: Wait a minute….
She hands out her ring to her…..takes her hand and puts it on Shanaya’s finger…..
Bhavri: A gift for saving Bhavri devi…..
Shanaya: Thank u….

Munna and Munmun get irked….
Shernaya leave the place….

Munna: Jijji…..ab to wo ladki chali gayi….
Bhavri: Abhi abhi toh aayi hai, aise kaise jaane denge??
Munna: Kya?
Bhavri smiles secretly…..

Scene 4:
Shamsher and Shanaya are in the car….
Shanaya: Ur aaji amma is very nice..
Shamsher smiles: Had told u….
Shanaya: Then why people are scared of her?
Shamsher is vexed: Umm….they just fear her for no reason…..leave it. U tell me, did u enjoy?
Shanaya: Enjoy? Ha…..I fainted…..it’s soo embarrassing…..
Shamsher: It’s ok. Don’t take tension…..
Shanaya: But it was a bad impression….
Shamsher: ladkiya bhi naa…..
Shanaya looks at him with crossed eyes…..

Scene 5:
Shanaya gets home and narrates the incident to her Bhabhi maa….
Bhabhi maa: Shaani, r u okay now?
Shanaya: Yes maa, that Bhavri devi is actually nice….she took well care of me…
Bhabhi maa: Is it?
Shanaya: Hmm…..
Shanaya goes in the wide balcony….
Shanaya: U know maa, when I entered the haveli…..I felt something strange…
Bhavri: Kya?
Shanaya: I don’t know……it a feeling…..a feeling of…..Umm……belonging…..as if I had been there not for days, but years…..long back…..I had the feeling of seeing Bhavri Devi even before, long back…..as if I was a part of that house, as if I had waken up from a deep sleep……a sleep which is only meant for me……
Bhavri maa just hears her….

Shanaya: I felt as if something was faintly calling me, as if it’s where I’m supposed to be…..as if it is a part of me, my life…..my soul….
Shanaya just keeps wondering……
Shanaya: Whenever I think of it I still feel that fear,…

Bhabhi maa: Deja vu in short…..whatever it is…..now u sleep….
Shanaya: Ok…..gn….
Bhabhi maa: Take care…..bye….
Shanaya then goes to sleep……

Recap: Bhavri hires Shanaya……..as her own goon!!

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