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Home»Fan Fiction»PERFECT DATE (TWINJ) BY AAMNA
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PERFECT DATE (TWINJ) BY AAMNA

Aamna_2690By Aamna_2690April 22, 201715 Comments8 Mins Read
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Hey Friend’s!
Aamna here☺
So Friend’s it’s my last post?
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Let’s start with a Smile☺

A girl is seen standing in front of Mirror getting ready… She is wearing beautiful Floor length gown… It had small flower bunches near her waist and at the End of gown… She was wearing white high heels… She wore beautiful Diamond Earrings… A diamond bracelet in her hand and in other hand a watch… She did minimal makeup and Applied pink lip gloss… Her beautiful Eyes are shown…then her lips and she is revealed to be our Twinkle… She looked at her watch it was 7:45 and he will be here by 8:00…She thought something and Smiled… The gift she is going to give him would be the best gift of his life…
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Her phone beeped… She saw the caller I’d and a Smile appeared on her face… She took her clutch and went down… She came back and took her Mangalsutra with her…
She quickly weared it… n went downstairs…
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She came down and saw him standing facing his back to her… He was wearing white t-shirt with a pair of blue faded jeans… She came towards him silently and back hugged him… A smile appeared on his lips… He kept his hands on hers and turned back… He was revealed to be our Kunj… He looked at her and complimented her making her Blush…
K:U r looking Stunning Mrs Sarna…
T:Thank u Mr Sarna…(Blushing)U too are looking Handsome…
K:Shall we go Mrs Sarna…
Twinkle nodded her head in yes… Kunj like a gentleman opened the door of Car… Twinkle smiled at his gesture n sat in… Kunj closed the door and took his driving seat next to her… He started driving the car towards the outskirts of the city… Twinkle rested her head on his shoulder…Kunj smiled and placed a loving kiss on her head…
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They were in love since college… Their parent’s were family friend’s… They were childhood friend’s turned lover’s… They got married to eachother 6 month’s ago… Their parent’s readily agreed cause they to want them to got married… Since they were in love Kunj used to plan perfect dates for her each time suprisng her with different idea’s n still after their marriage he used to do this for her…
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Her thoughts came to an End when Car stopped with jerk infront of A Farmhouse … Kunj came out of the car and opened the door for her… As soon as she came out of the car he blind folded her…
T:Kunj… where are we… Yeh kya kar rahe ho… why a blindfold…
K:Twinkle u trust me…
T:More than my self…
K:Than be quiet n walk…
Without uttering a single word… He took her inside their New Farmhouse he buied for her… He took her to their backyard lawn… It was quiet big…

He opened her Blindfold… She was awestruck to see the scenario… It was yet another beautiful date setup for her… Lawn was beautifully light up with colourful lanterns… Under a tree was placed soft floor cushions with small cushions with it… Small paper lanterns and paper Art work flowers were hanging on tree…At other corner was placed table covered with white cloth… and two chairs opposite to eachother… A champagne was placed on the table… She turned back to found Kunj on his Knees with bouquet of Red Roses…
K:For this beautiful lady on our 6 Month’s Anniversary…
She took the Roses from his hands while blushing at his statement… He took her hand in his and lead her towards the Table… He pulled the chair for her n made her sit… He then took the place infront of her… He served her Food that too her favourites… They talked to with eachother about random thing’s… Something Funny… Sometimes having Romantic talks… After dinner… He served her favourite desert… They both shared it feeding eachother… They shared Romantic Eyelocks in between… He then asked her for a dance…
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Baarish from half girlfriend plays…
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Chehre mein tere…
Khud ko main dhundun…
Aankhon ke darmiyaan…
Tu ab hai iss tarah…
Khwabon ko bhi jagah na mile…
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(He took pulls her closer by her waist… Her hands rested on his chest… They started moving according to the beats of Music… )
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Yeh mausam ki baarish…
Yeh baarish ka paani…
Yeh paani ki boondien…
Tujhe hi toh dhundien…
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(He twirled her around and pulled her more closer… leaving no distance between them… )
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Yeh Milne ki khwaahish…
Yeh khwaahish purani…
Ho puri tujhi se meri yeh kahani…
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(He again twirled her… )
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Kabhi tujhme uttru…
Toh saanson se guzru…
Toh aaye dil ko Rahat…
Main hoon bethikana…
Panaah mujhko paana…
Hai tujhme de ijazat…
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(This time he pulled her in a back hug… His hot breathing fanning her nape… They moving according to the Rythm of the song… )
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Na koi darmiyaan…
Hum dono hai yahan…
Phir kyun hai tu bata faasle…
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Yeh mausam ki baarish…
Yeh baarish ka paani…
Yeh paani ki boondien…
Tujhe hi toh dhundien…
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(Na… na… na… la… la… la… )
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(He twirled her again pulling her this time closer with a jerk… He held her by waist whilst she bend backward slowly… )

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Hawaaon se tera pata puchta hun…
Ab toh aaja tu kahin se…
Paarindon ki tarah…
Yeh dil hai safar mein…
Th aake ik dafa…
Jo dil ne na kaha…
Jaan le…
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(He pulled her up back slowly… He pulled her closer by her waist… )
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Bas itni si iltija…
Tu aake ik dafa…
Jo dil ne na kaha…
Jaan le…
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Yeh Mausam ki baarish…
Yeh baarish ka paani…
Yeh paani ki boondien…
Tujhe hi toh dhundien…
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(Both looked into Eachothers eye’s intensely… Twinkle hugged kunj tightly… )
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Yeh Milne ki khwaahish …
Yeh khwaahish purani…
Ho puri tujhi se meri yeh kahani…
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Song Ends…
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They broke the Hug … He turned her confusing her… moved her hair to one shoulder… He made her wear a beautiful pendant… It was heart shape pendant having TWINJ engraved with diamondsbetween it…
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Then kunj took her to place where lanterns were placed and a movie setup was made… (Exactly like in the dp )
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They both settled them selves on a single cushion… Twinkle’s head resting on Kunj’s chest and her hands wrapped around his waist…Twinkle was watching movie whilst Kunj was looking at her… Her hair strands were disturbing his site… So he tucked her hair strands behind her hair making her look at him… His gaze felt on her pink lips n he bend down to capture them in his… Twinkle to closed her Eye’s giving him positive response… Their lips met in a soothing… soft yet passionate liplock… Both lost in eachother… There tongues fighting for dominance… They broke there kiss after 10 minutes being out of breath… They joined there Forheads together… They were both lost in their moment when twinkle broke the silence…
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T:Kunj… (watching him… His eye’s closed)
K:Hmmm… (Eye’s still closed)
T:I have a gift for u…
K:(confused)Gift?
T:Hmmm… (near his Ears)It’s our 6 Month’s Anniversary Gift… U r going to be a Father Kunj…
Kunj looked at her with happiness filled in his Eye’s… Like his Ears didn’t believing what she said… Twinkle nodded her head in yes… He hugged her and kissed her Forhead… He was the most happiest person right know in the world…
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Indeed it was the best gift for him and her both… They both layed down there on the cushion looking at sky in Eachothers Embrace…
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So here it End’s…
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Don’t know how it was posted half… But here I have it full… Hope u all will like it☺
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So Friends it is My last post till 20 May… cause my board’s date is Finally here… It will be starting from 3 May.. N due to illness has missed alot of studies so have cover up with it… So I am quitting TU till then… won’t be able to comment or post anything till 20 May…
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Do comment wether +’ve or -‘ve…
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See u all after 20 May… love u all???
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Love u all ??
Loads of love ??
Take care ☺☺
Keep Smiling ??
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Supporting ☺☺
Bye bye lovelies ??

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    15 Comments

    1. SidMin23 on April 22, 2017 9:35 pm

      It damn cute and kunj surprises was superb but twinkle surprises was mind blowing as he is going to be father.

    2. Presha on April 22, 2017 10:17 pm

      Hey aamna…
      Its awesome yaar…
      Just loved it..
      Too cute nd sweet…
      All the best…. For ur exam…
      U will rock…
      Love u…
      ?????

    3. Nisha on April 22, 2017 11:02 pm

      Wow Lilly it was awesome dear
      I loved it

    4. twinjfan.tamanna on April 22, 2017 11:11 pm

      awesome se bhi zyaada awesome cutie! so cute… just loved it! the way u described was amazing! just loved it! keep writing!?

      With Love,
      Urs Tamanna

    5. mia12 on April 22, 2017 11:24 pm

      ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

      JAAAAAAAAAAAN,,??????
      M surprised and also m soooooo happy ki bata nai sakti tuje,,??????
      Mene to yeh bilkul bhi expect hi nai kia tha jaan,,??????
      Infect mene to socha tha ki tu ab xm se pehle or nai likhegi,,???

      And what u wrote was just MARVELOUS, OUT STANDING and what not,,????????????????????
      Everything was just soooooooooo perfect jaan,,????????????
      I Love it to the core jaan,,❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
      Bas I’ll miss ur writing also,,???????????
      But u know its made me so numb plsss don say like this ki its ur last writing,,????? Haan I knw ki tune 20 tak last writing bola but last word’s na Hurt’s me from ur mouth,,???
      U know and right now m also very very upset,,???
      Can u imagen 1 month later I’ll see u again but this 1 month is look like 4 me 1 years,,???????
      Jaan I’ll miss you soooooooo much,,
      Really now also I can’t stop my tears,,??????????????????
      Yeh sochke ki hamare ab bat nai hogi till den 1 month,,??????????????? ohho mai bhi kitni buri hun senty mood mai chali gayi,,???
      But its ok I’ll be wait 4 you Jab tak hai meri jaan,,?????????
      Bas ab tu jaldhi se apni exam ko dede or apni jaan ke pas wapas aja and TU ke pas,,?????? or jab yu wapas ayegi to mai itni happy hongi ki tu soch bhi nai sakti maybe sabse jeyada,,??????

      And BEST OF LUCK 4 ur BESTEST exam Jaan,,???????? And Rock them,,??????? And don wry you’ll pass with best high good score,,??????
      Kyuki Teri PAPA ka wish or teri jaan ki wish hai tere sath,,☺☺☺☺☺☺…

      ?????””Kyuki tu hai to hum hai,
      tu nahi to hum bhi kuch nai””,,?????
      .
      .
      ❤❤?❤❤?❤❤?❤❤?❤❤?❤❤?❤❤?❤❤?❤❤?❤❤?❤❤?❤❤LOAD’S OF LOVE YOU,,❤❤?❤❤?❤❤?❤❤?❤❤?❤❤?❤❤?❤❤?❤❤?❤❤?❤❤?❤❤?❤❤?❤❤?❤❤?❤❤?❤❤
      .
      ????????????????????????????????????? I LOVE TILL THE POWER OF DOUBLE INFINITY MERI JAAN,,???????????????????????????????????????

      MY S*XY AND HOTTI LADY,,????????????? SIRF MERI,,???????? MERI LOVE,,??????? OR KISI KI NAI,,??????

      ?????????????????????????????????MUAAAAAAAAAAAAAHH MERI JAAN, MY EVERYTHING,,???????????????????????????????????..

    6. Sameera on April 22, 2017 11:48 pm

      Wow yaar aamna amazing one loveddddddd it shoooooo much yaar too cute ?????

    7. Loving Angel on April 23, 2017 2:50 pm

      Awesome! It’s wonderful, plz post next episode soon

    8. Diya on April 23, 2017 3:19 pm

      It’s so cute.
      Just loved it.
      Their surprises for each other were beautiful.
      It was Amazing.
      Please post these kind of OS more.
      Best of luck for your exams

    9. Sakhshi on April 23, 2017 3:22 pm

      Sweet and cute
      Marvellous
      Fantastic
      Best of luck for your board’s

    10. Cp on April 23, 2017 4:06 pm

      It’s AMAZING ?????????and I love it……Be back soon….And All The Very best….????

    11. Ramya on April 23, 2017 4:52 pm

      Hii aanu
      It’s awesome amazing Superb
      Just lovely
      N all d best fr exams aur apna dhayaan bhi rak
      Aur koi siyappa nahi
      I’ll miss u
      Love u keep smiling

    12. SidMin on April 24, 2017 11:12 am

      Loved it awesome the os was so sweet .. and I can’t wait till 20th may when is it coming ???
      Love you 🙂
      Will miss you all the best … 🙂

    13. Anayaali on April 24, 2017 11:38 am

      Awesome os …..
      Best of luck for ur exams….
      I will miss u alot??…
      Come back soon….
      Take care of ur self also….
      Luv u….

    14. baby on April 25, 2017 8:33 pm

      ohhhhhhh………aamnaa dii take care……..☺
      it was really beautiful n adorable..really cute……..♥
      loved it……….all d best for ur exams…..get well soon……..♥
      lods of love……….♥♥♥♥♥♥

    15. Sohi on May 4, 2017 2:00 am

      Lovely os dear
      I will miss aamna
      All the best
      And sorry for the late comment

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