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Home»Fan Fiction»Pehredaar Piya Ki- 12 years later (episode 5)
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Pehredaar Piya Ki- 12 years later (episode 5)

Vivian20By Vivian20August 1, 201732 Comments4 Mins Read
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(The interview finishes as kesar mahal approaches, Ratan walks out his vintage Mercedes)

There is pomp and music everywhere in the kesar mahal, the entire palace is decorated as a new bride. Ratan sees his kaki maa saa, shivani bai saa and her daughter vidhisha bai saa, Sakshi bai saa ,Yash banna, and ayush bhai saa at the entrance gates. He is surrounded by royal guards holding chhatri, which is considered to be a mark of respect for the royal family. He walks as his heart starts beating even more.

” Janamdhin ki dhero shubhkamnaaye, Ratan banna….” kaki saa says.

“Dhanyavad Kaki saa”

Kaki saa performs the aarti and does tilak on his forehead. Ratan bows down to take her blessings, kaki saa stops him abruptly.

“Kya kar rahe hain aap banna? Aap daata hukum hain aap yeh nahi kar sakte hain.” She said.

“Kyu nahi kaki saa? Hum honge daata hukum but aapke liye hum aapke chote se Ratan banna hain aur hamesha rahenge.”and takes her blessings.

They go inside the palace with the entire procession. He wonders where Diya is. They go the their rajmandir where an aarti is performed and then to Maharani Bagh, the venue for today’s function. Most of the guests have arrived, which include royalty, politicians, actors, his friends from boarding school, his fellow archers and coaches, Diya’s family is also present.

There is music and dance everywhere. “Ghoomar ramva mein jya saa…” song plays.

Kaki maa takes him to Diya’s family first. He takes Sajjan saa’s blessings, Sajjan is very happy today as finally his daughter will settle down. He meets Diya’s bhai saa and bhabhi saa. He kneels down and greets their children who are 7 year old twins (a boy and a girl) .

“Kaise he aap dono?”Ratan asked.

“We’re good fufa saa but we won’t be good if you forgot to bring us chocolates from Bangkok…” Piya says.

“Yes fufa saa, pia is right….” Piyansh said.

“Of course I got you your chocolates, aap dono ko kaise bhul sakte hain hum? Roop singhji yaha aaiye….”

“Ji, hukum.” Roop Singh says.

” Hamare bag se inhe inki chocolates laakar dijiye…..”

“Ji, hukum abhi laaye.” Roop Singh goes.

“Thank you, fufa saa.” Piya says as she kisses his cheek and runs away. Piyansh follows her.

His bonding with the twins was adored by the whole family.
He went to meet the rest of the guests and while talking to one of them he saw a glimpse of Diya. She was instructing one of the catering department person. He remembered Aarav’s words and went to meet Diya.

Diya saw him coming to towards her, she too mustered up her courage to talk to him. He went to her.

“Hi.” That was all Diya could say to him.
“Hi Diya ” This is getting awkward Ratan thought.
“Actually I wanted to talk to you……” Ratan was saying as he noticed something behind her back. He was sure of it being a gun. Just as the person pushed the trigger, ” Diyaaaa….” he screamed while he pulled her out and they rolled out in the grass. Everyone started coming towards them and the gunman ran away. The guards were chasing the man.

He started to stand ” Diya aap thik….?” “Diya?”….His eyes were shocked to see that the bullet had hit her hand. She was bleeding profusely and was semiconscious…..He screamed…” Diya uthiye….Diya”. She was losing her consciousness. Tears flew through his eyes as he was continuously shaking her. In that state Diya spoke, “aap think hai na Ratan saa?”

“Diya hum thik hai, Diya aakhein khuli rakhiye diya…..” she lost her consciousness. By now people had gathered there.
“Oh my god, Diya wake up….” “Doctor……get a doctor quick..”
“Someone call the doctor damn it…” Ratan screams. Yash quickly called the doctor. They took her to the room. Ratan holding her hand all the way….

To be continued….

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    32 Comments

    1. meer@ on August 1, 2017 9:18 pm

      awesome

      • Vivian20 on August 1, 2017 10:56 pm

        Thanks a lot meera…..?

    2. Pranavi on August 1, 2017 9:26 pm

      Awesome update.Didn’t expect such a twist at the very beginning of the story.Loving this story.Wish to see Diya and Ratan’s bonding.Waiting for the next…

      • Vivian20 on August 1, 2017 10:58 pm

        Thanks pranavi……….u will love the next part as well….

      • Pranavi on August 2, 2017 9:19 pm

        Plzzz upload the next part soon?

      • Vivian20 on August 3, 2017 8:35 am

        Hi….pranavi the update is in review….it is taking a long time to get posted…but you will see it today! Hope you like it.

    3. Varshni on August 1, 2017 9:36 pm

      Superb !!!

      • Vivian20 on August 1, 2017 11:01 pm

        Thanks varshni……. hope you liked the update?☺

      • Varshni on August 2, 2017 4:41 pm

        Yeah I loved it !!! Update soon please !!!

      • Vivian20 on August 2, 2017 5:28 pm

        Will update soon…..

    4. fenil on August 1, 2017 11:42 pm

      Superb…..
      I have to rush bro…

      • Vivian20 on August 2, 2017 8:45 am

        That’s not a problem bro…….anyways thanks a lot

    5. shrilatha on August 2, 2017 5:27 am

      Superb bhai. But bhai if it’s continuation of the show then diya does not have a brother she has a sister…I am sorry if I hurt u…

      • Vivian20 on August 2, 2017 8:44 am

        She does have a brother…..that jiji is her bhabhi and not her sister….I’m sure..

      • shrilatha on August 2, 2017 10:10 am

        Oh OK I am sorry

      • Vivian20 on August 2, 2017 3:55 pm

        It’s ok….actually even in the written updates they write sister and not sister in law

    6. Risha on August 2, 2017 9:01 am

      Awesome…… just loved it to the core……
      It’s great…

      • Vivian20 on August 2, 2017 9:18 am

        Thanks risha, Hope u like the next part as well

    7. jhansi on August 2, 2017 10:05 am

      Awesome..vivian

      • Vivian20 on August 2, 2017 3:46 pm

        Thanks…….glad that u liked it…..

    8. Jyoti on August 2, 2017 11:32 am

      Is this upcoming twisty after 12 years that will be superub

      • Vivian20 on August 2, 2017 3:48 pm

        Thanks Jyoti….and yes if this twist happens after 12 years actually, I’ll be the happiest person..

    9. ishuyamjha on August 2, 2017 12:25 pm

      it was awesome love it post next part soon bhai

      • Vivian20 on August 2, 2017 3:47 pm

        Thanks ishu….will post next part soon

    10. asra on August 2, 2017 2:04 pm

      again am doing the same mistake na…sry bhai…now onwards am comment on ur ff pinky promise bhai….
      it’s awesome bhai…loved it alot..eagerly waiting for nxt one…tkcr bhai

      • Vivian20 on August 2, 2017 5:13 pm

        Thanks a lot asra….and it’s ok, u don’t need to say sorry dear…….

    11. Frozengirl16 on August 2, 2017 4:18 pm

      Awesome as usual

      • Vivian20 on August 2, 2017 4:27 pm

        Thanks a lot dear…??

    12. Kashu on August 2, 2017 4:37 pm

      It was awesome as always..Post next part soon! And plz do share the link..

      • Vivian20 on August 2, 2017 5:29 pm

        Thanks a lot kashu….and yes will share the link or pm you..

    13. lovely7 on August 5, 2017 9:35 am

      Nice

      • Vivian20 on August 5, 2017 10:16 am

        Thanks a lot…

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