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Home»Fan Fiction»Pehredaar Piya Ki- 12 years later (episode 1)
Fan Fiction Pehredaar Piya Ki

Pehredaar Piya Ki- 12 years later (episode 1)

Vivian20By Vivian20July 27, 201736 Comments2 Mins Read
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It was finally the day Diya had wished for all these years…it was Ratan’s 21st bday….no no it was HH maharaja Ratan maan singh’s bday…her Ratan saa’s bday. He was finally coming home today. All of 21, ratan had made a mark in archery now. He was selected in the national archery squad. After all he got introduced to the sport by diya. Soon after their marriage when kaka saa’s plan was exposed by her and he was caught she was the most relieved. Ratan could finally attend the most reputed boarding school in the country as now he was out of danger.

He went to a boarding school then in the national archery academy and now he was busy in tournaments that took up all of his time. Their marriage has been kept under wraps as society may not accept it and it would create a lot of issues. Diya had been living a good life in the kesar mahal looking after the family legacy. During the initial years ratan had been his usual chirpy cheerful self but after sometime he started behaving strangely, always avoiding Diya as much as possible. She wouldn’t mind as she knew that in that age it probably happens to everyone. He used to be very awkward and formal while talking to her.

He knew that he couldn’t defy his father’s last wishes but he always felt uncomfortable talking to her. He knew that he will have to accept her today as he officially become 21 today. He doesn’t hate Diya but doesn’t love her as well he has always seen her as his friend and well wisher…..

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    36 Comments

    1. fenil on July 27, 2017 4:06 pm

      nice start

      • Vivian20 on July 27, 2017 5:28 pm

        Thanks bhai..

    2. pavi on July 27, 2017 4:12 pm

      super

      • Vivian20 on July 27, 2017 5:32 pm

        ? thanks

    3. jhansi on July 27, 2017 4:16 pm

      Good ff.Keep on writing……

      • Vivian20 on July 27, 2017 5:32 pm

        ? thanks

    4. Divya on July 27, 2017 5:32 pm

      Very nice . i am keep waiting to watch your next episode

      • Vivian20 on July 27, 2017 8:11 pm

        Thanks divya..

    5. Kashu on July 27, 2017 5:39 pm

      Good start.. But I think u should introduce a new male lead in Diya’s life as Ratan is almost 8-10 yrs small from her. No one will accept this kind of marriage… And sorry if I hurted u….

      • Vivian20 on July 27, 2017 5:49 pm

        Gr8 suggestion…but I already prepared the storyline for the next few updates, maybe I’ll inculcate it after those…this is supposed to be a long ff though…btw what do you think of a jealousy track as 12 years of waiting for a new male lead won’t justify…..

      • Kashu on July 27, 2017 6:34 pm

        Yeah…I would love the jealousy track…and haa u should not change the storyline if u have already prepared.. I would read it anyway. Waiting for the next part. Please update soon…

    6. Anu on July 27, 2017 5:48 pm

      lovely and very well portrayed and looking forward to see whom u r introducing as young ratan all the best update soon

      • Vivian20 on July 27, 2017 8:06 pm

        Thanks anu…u will love the young Ratan…

    7. Sharanya on July 27, 2017 6:10 pm

      Nice…..waiting for the next part

      • Vivian20 on July 27, 2017 8:07 pm

        Thanks… will update soon

    8. shrilatha on July 27, 2017 6:21 pm

      Hey bhai good start and yes ratan’s behaviour is not wrong it’s justified and I loved the fact when u said he doesn’t hate her but he doesn’t love her as well…well it would be fresh start….loved this

      • Vivian20 on July 27, 2017 8:09 pm

        Thanks Shri….would like a suggestion from you….should I include some fb’s or not…

      • shrilatha on July 28, 2017 4:19 am

        I feel you should but not now …include them when ratan realises his love for diya…thanks for asking me

    9. avi_sun on July 27, 2017 7:17 pm

      New ff ✌fabulous start and nice story line ??continue it… ?waiting for next one… Update soon yaar …

      • Vivian20 on July 27, 2017 8:09 pm

        Thank you…..will update soon

    10. Suma123 on July 27, 2017 9:57 pm

      Is it the story really???

      • Vivian20 on July 27, 2017 11:11 pm

        ???

      • Suma123 on July 28, 2017 10:17 am

        Is this the story of serial ???

      • Vivian20 on July 28, 2017 11:14 am

        No no, it’s fanfiction based on the characterisation and the setting of the serial

    11. Astra on July 27, 2017 10:18 pm

      nice idea..

      • Vivian20 on July 27, 2017 11:12 pm

        Thnx Astra…hope u will like the next update as well.

    12. Vivian20 on July 27, 2017 11:53 pm

      i know this one was a lil bit short but it was kinda prologue.. I’ll be posting the new update soon….

    13. Jaanvi on July 27, 2017 11:54 pm

      Nice..

      • Vivian20 on July 28, 2017 12:07 am

        Thank you jaanvi……

    14. IQRA222 on July 28, 2017 4:24 pm

      vivian bhaiya this episode was wonderful and a creative one
      loved it totally
      it is totally unique!!

      • Vivian20 on July 28, 2017 4:49 pm

        Thanks sista…..hope u keep reading further…???

    15. Suma123 on July 28, 2017 10:48 pm

      It’s really awesome keep going ….good luck

      • Vivian20 on July 28, 2017 11:43 pm

        Thanks yaar…

    16. Suma123 on July 28, 2017 10:49 pm

      Very creative ….good luck

    17. nymisha281 on July 30, 2017 6:56 pm

      awesome start….
      keep writing
      all the best.

      • Vivian20 on July 31, 2017 8:33 am

        Thanks nymisha….hope you keep reading further…

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