I m really disappointed guys now its been more than enough.
I cant tolerate it…..
I was not about to come …….
I was leaving tu but I m here due to ramya, purvi, thanmy and my cupcake my baby’s request….
These four frnds of mine stooped me bt I tild to dem also dis is ladt post now I wont continue cos now its been really unbearable. ……
. It really hurts wen I write sooo much long episodes for u all but u people dun give hell to that…
Srry if I seem rude but dis has to happen u guys dun even see hw I m taking out time and writing des fr u all bt no none cares…..
And ya sm blo*dy person msgd me on tu pm and abused me and my writings….I mean wat d hell is dis wat I m getting out of wat I did…
Its really untolerable guys…luk guys I m soo hurtened by being abused fr doing nthng wrong….
Just 14 commnts huhhh look guys dus is my last post and I f u all want me to continue u have to tell ur opinions about dat I want at least 20 cmmnts guys….
Nw I wont waste my energy ams will give short yodate of os I wont write so long if u guys dun five it utmost hell.
.
And mind it if I ll get less dan 20 cmmnta I ll leave all my wrtings like dis and gonna leave tu
PEHLI NAZAR MEIN KAISA JAADU KAR DIYA…
…
All were sitting in hall.
Kunj baby shivi misha and manish but nt twinkle….
Misha:ty kunj beta hamari twinkle ki help karne ke liye pagal ladki jar wakt siyappa karti rehti hai….
Manish: misha ji meri princess ko aise mat kahiye plss…
Misha:acha manish ji par sach mein P oe gayi hai siyappa
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Manish:misha ji
Misha:acha bas
Kunj’s eyes welled up as he smiled….
Misha noticed and went towards him..
Sat wid him and kept her hand over his…..
Misha:beta kya hua tum .. tum ro kyun rahe ho……
Kunj clears hus eyes and says:nthng aunty…
Misha:pls batao beta mujhe apni mom samjho
Kunj:anti kuch mahi bas wo ap dono ke beech ki nok jhok mein jo oyar tha use dekh kar aankhein bhar ayi…. mere mom dad bhi boht pyar karte the ek dusre ko bt…. leave chodiye ap…
Misha:btao pls beta …
Kunj:my mom is nw dead anti and kunj cries…
Misha consoles him …
He hugs her…. musha smiles and guves him modetly love….
Misha:waise toh kunj beta tum J hi humse mile hi par tumne aj hi hamari madad ki pehle manish ji ki file ke liye(guys dus u dun mentioned earlier waisd hi I added) and den twinkle ki tum boht ache ho aisa kagta hai jaise humata tumse janmon ka rishta ho….. mujhe yeh toh nhi oata tumhari mom ke saath kya hua par aj se tum mujhe maa kahoge……
Kunj brks hug and dats:ty MA.. MAA (dis wrd echoes)he smile ty soo much ao bhi bilkul neti maa jaisi ho caring…
Shivi sensing it emotional says loud:bas ab kunj bhayia bas bhi bff bas maa kitne rote ho ap log huhhhh acha waise kunj bhayia srry bff
Kunj clears eyes and smiles….
Kunj:yess pretty lady….
Shivi: bhayia apki koi gf hai ya u love smone?,?
Kunj:pretty ladu srry to say I dun love smone or I dun have any gf… koi itni oretty lady mili hi nahi jisne mere dil ko ypuch kia ho…. ao se zyada koi pretty lady mili hi nahi ap agar badi hoti na toh ap hi hoti meri gf and he winks…
All laugh.
Jst den dey listen a voice….
Ahhh chsss sss ahhh huhh
All look towards stairs and der mouths left opened……
Kunj pov
Yeh ladki hot model se seedha sansjari mode pe kaise aa gayi waise kitni cute lag rahi hai sambhal nahi raha usse suit deho toh salwar se hi fight kr rahi hai or duppatta drkho khan js raha hai….
Manish:princesss
Misha:meri hot twinkle yeh kya hua tujhe yeh sanskari kabse ban gayi meri beti
Twi:ahhh chup raho sab pehle mujhe usss world war ko complete karne do….
Huhhh
Yss world war hi thi…
She was struggling wid her peach colour simple salwar suit wid simple yellow duppatta and open hair wid glossss…..
Wid one hand she was holding her salwar and again and again she was doing it here der as if she has wore some heavy material… and her dupaata was again and again falling dwn she was picking it uo… dhe was frustrated. …
(Same happnd wid me wen in skool on our annual finc I had to wear salwar duit I was hrll frustrated as I never wear I hate suits and all)
Twi managed to look hot ij dat suit also…..
She and priya has designed dat suit and it was fully backkess salwar suit tied with dori on her back … the suit was nt full backless it was upto her back in middle of stomach its back side…….
Like spinals more dan half part…..
(Bio students got it)
Misha:dekho meri princess apni elegancy and hotness carry karna nahi bjoolti jst like u misha
He says slowly to misha making her blush….
Twi was taking rounds on the stair setying her dupatta was frustrated wen she was abt to fall frm last second stair…
But kunj caught her in nick of time……
Kunj runs fast saying twinkle…
And holds her ….
Kunj was leaning over her as she was falling doen bt was saved….
Both shared eyelock….
Twinkles hairs flies and twinkle feels do happy in his atms
Twi pov
Ty babaji…… mujhe fir se mere pyar ki bahon mein girane ke liye…
I love his touch his cologne…
Kunj senses awkwardness and makes her stand and asks her if shes ok
She nods and says ty to him
He smiles…..
Misha and manish smiles…..
While baby and shivi also smiles….
Twi runs to her hero her gather amd hugs himm
He smiles amd hugs her…
Manish:meri hot ftnd aa gai tune toh misha ji ko bhi fail kr dia
Misha foes haww expression
Manish and twi hi gi wid each oder…
Twi: dun wrry my jealous mom my superhero ap pe hi marte hain aj bhi tensiin naji lene ka ok… amd she hugs her…
Misha smiles amd manish hugs misha
Misha:manish ji bacje hain chodiye
Manish:pyar kia toh darna kya
Shivi:fad bas bas apna romane ao bad mein krna
Manish:cjup kr shivi ki bachi
Shivi :dad fr ur kind info meri koi bachi nhi hai haha
Manish:pulls her ears bataun tujhe bas ab chup….
Look my princess looking so cute and beautiful
Baby:hot too twinkle tu kabhi hot dikhna nahi chodti na ismein bhi hot lag rahi hai backless suit par tujhse dambhal toh raha nahi hai….
Waise aj tune suit kaise pehan liya skirts or shots chod kr….
Twi stammerrs says:wo kuch mhi water lily aur maine design kia tha toh I thot to give it a try
Baby:mujhe toh dal mein kuch kaala lag raha hai
Kunj smile seeing der lovely bond and wen listen babys talks he cough
Kunj pov
Waise yeh ladki whes so difff and looks cute beautiful hot rrally so diff apne mom dad ko frnd bnaya hai interesting waise agar isne kabhi siit mhi pehne toh kya isne mete kehne oar pehma hai!!!!!
Epi ends on his astonished face…..
I dun know wether I ll give nxt part it depends on u all so no recap bye…..
49 Comments
Hi. I really enjoyed it thoroughly. Still, what’s wrong with your words, like I wasn’t able to understand most of the words, like MOTHERLY as MODERLY, BREAK as BRK. Also, I’m sorry for sounding somewhat rude, but don’t you think that it wasn’t important to blackmail your readers by saying something like this is my last post, and all. Thank you.
Also, whatever I wrote was just for your betterment! 🙂
sasha it was not a black mail dear…….
i too dont wanna sound rude…..bt i must tell u she have really thought to exit the site if she doesn’t get comments i wish u would have also been writing and then u wuld hv understood dat y she told that she need comments………….am glad that u enjoyed it thoughroly……..and also we all use short forms k LIKE as LYK…..or THAT as DAT………..sooooooo she is best she doesnt need any improvement she is a topper and is masters in english……..☺
and yeah….most importantly i was not getting here rude to you it was just for ur kind information…………n ur kindness……n alsa ur betterment!!! 😀
Sasha I feel tht u r encouraging her more nd more to end her writings… Here she is not in the mood to write anything but still doing so nd there u r pointing out mistakes of everyone… If u find this job tht easy…y don’t u write one of yr own? So tht we can also point out yr flaws
Yes dear, sasha if u can not encourage her than u have no right to discourage her
hayeeeeeeeeeee………….☺meriiii jaan…….my muffin………..ufff……….☺
sooooooo shoooooooooo shoooooooooo cute n lovely episode…….
hahahahhaaa twinkle in suit………..like srsly………………….
wowowooaoaaaaaaaaa………n kunjs astonishment…………wooaaa……
lovely episode……….srsly m in love wid ur dis lovestory as well………..♥
hahhahahahahahahahaaaaaa………….n tune bhi aiseee hahahahaaa suit phenke kia tha……….hahahahahaaaa terko kisne bachaya tha akke haan………….hehehehhee……….
ohk but srsly it was too good…………..soooo lovely soooo adorable……..soooo amazing……..
such n marvalleous beautiful episode………..it was soooo alluring………..♥
n jaan my baby my muffin……….u r not leaving us……..m sure u ll get uncountable comments……..pakka bt please………..and yeah…….m waiting for ur ff ohk i want it asap i cant wait…………….☺
yaar m waitng or ur ff…….i know we have discussed on this topic of u leaving tu but u wont yaar……………….i can t……….
well srsly luvd d episode………..♥♥♥♥♥
n my role in today’s episode as well………
hahahahaaa such mein bhai daal puri hi kaali hai twinkle n suits door door tak nahi koi rishta naataa…………..
well u nailed it darling………
love u soooooooooo mch……………..☺☺
awsm..lovly..cute..chappy
tusi..tu..chor..k..mat..jao..plzzzzzzzzzzzzdo..
do..write
Hey paavu butter cup don’t u dare end it ok …. Waise bhi we discussed abt it earlier also so no more discussion nd abt the epi it was as always a blast lovely epi…… Just loved it pretty lady
Paavu why r u doing this yaar pls don’t quit I love ur writings pls continue yaar I’m very upset now u know that we all here love you so much then y r u doing this pls pls pls continue and coming to the episode it was Mindblowing I loved it to the core pls continue if you consider me as ur friend then pls continue
Hey paavu dare you leave tu
It’s nothing to be sad
Infact now a days all the readers are having exams and me too so they are not able to comment
Plz try to understand
And the one who abused you is big idiot and fool
So don’t feel hurt
Do continue
Hey paavu its awesome just loved it
Awesome dear
Amazing
Fabulous
Marvelous
Marvelous amazing
Phele Nazar mein aisaa jaduu kardiyaa ……tere bin baithaaa hai meraa jiyaaa…..?????paavu dii for youuuu.,….
Luvvv you’re…..FF …..I couldn’t comment as I am having exaamsss ??? please bear with meeee….And post soonn?
Awesome!! Pls pls don’t end it yaar I love yr os nd ffs
My goodness! Wht an blasting episode! Loved it pavu…I hv been a silent reader of yr ff nd os but today yr decision took shit out of me…pls don’t do so…look its exam time so everyone will ofcource be busy na! This is the time where writers should keep patience… As soon as the exams get over…u will again be getting more comments don’t worry darling
Hey paavi! Its me ritzi only! Sorry I hv not logged in my account so writing like this…but hey…pls don’t be discouraged girl! We all need u…pls don’t do this to all of us…I m literally in love with yr ff too…nd this fs…its just mindblowing dear…look bcus of exams its difficult to manage everything na! If u hv noticed….there r very fews ffs being posted on tei page in last few days…it clearly indicates tht everyone is hell busy ..mee too yaar! But tht doesn’t mean tht we don’t like yr writings na…nd if u hv a look at other ff.. There too the amount of comments hv decreased rapidly… Still u hv majority
It was fabulous and don’t quit tu purvi
Paaavvvuuuuuu plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz TU mast chod plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz n jaan mene cmnt kia tha tere previous epi pe……Plzzzzzzzzz meri request sunle plzzzzzzzzz TU maat chod….n jaan dnt take those cheapsters words on ur heart….they r jealous of ur writing skill jaan coz u r amazing writer n i had already said dat I lov ur writing so much….so plz plz plz TU maat chodchod….n coming to the epi yeeaahh my gusse become true….n the was just fantabulous yaar……every time u use to make meme speechless by ur writing skills jaan…..dekh jaan plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzplzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz TU maat chod its my request yaar….n Han me tujhe pahele se bats deti hun agar tu epi 22feb ke andar degi toh cmnt kar paungi or agar uske baad dia toh shayad me cmnt nehi kar paungi coz mere xams arahe hen toh me mera phn mama ko dedungi 22feb ko so plzzzzzzzzz uske andar dedena epi….I can understand ur feeling dat u r hurt coz u gave such a long epi n got 16 cmnt bt don’t b hurt yaar as sohi said many witters r busy rin xams na……so jaan plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz TU mast chod its my humble request dear….n post the next epi soon k I ll b waiting…….n TU chodne ka soch na v mast samjhi……..I m waiting for ur next epi……..lov u dear????????????????
Hahahaa twinkle cracked me up ???I love the way u right boo student will understand in the middle of the romance ???❤️
Butter cup tu na seriously mein kuch kerwana chah rahi hai…!! Please don’t do this yarrrrr ..! How dare you even think of quitting TU..
Tu jaanti hai how much I love your writings nd I can’t live without them..! Please don’t quit. Nd mere ffs pe bhi aesay hi comments aarahy hain..! Bht kam…!
But dekh na tu sad na ho..! Plsss or apni oreo ki bat maan lay …! Is fs ko continue ker or apna ff bhi..! Uske liye toh me paglon ki tarah wait ker rahi hun…!
I m in love wid ur writings nd don’t pay any heed to basher’s words. All they know is how to criticize people. Do’t feel bad as you know you have many fans and all loves ur writing nd you..!
So just think once about your oreo and please don’t quit. We have also talked before on this topic so pleae…!
So coming to this part. It was seriously mind blowing. I couldn’t stop laughing throughout the epi…! It was so amazing!
Loved it. Haaayeee twinkle bechari, kunj ke kehny per salwaar suit pehen liya hehehehehe ?????????
Seriously your this fs is amazing. Tere pass bht hi ideas hote hain..! Kahan se laati hai itny achy ideas..
Chal bye..! Take care and don’t you dare quit TU..!
With my alllllllll love ❤❤❤???????????????
My butter cup
hey paavu…..
am a silent reader of your ffs plss dont end it i love ur ffs and os you write beautifully please its a request as i read you are going to stop i decided that i would comment today i am nervous to comment on social sites that is why i don’t….and it was not the reason that you are ending that is why i am commenting but please dont end it….☺
love you….it was a beautiful and funny episode twinkle wearing salwar suit and doing ouch shh ahh hehhee….please dont stop……
Hey dear paavu, please don’t quit TU. I love your writings. This is just awesome.
I loved it .. plss don’t end.
Hi dear. I m commenting first time. Please don’t be disheartened. Everyone here love ur writings and you! You will get 20+ comments but please don’t quit.
U r simply amazing. This is so cute. Twinkle wearing suit. Hahaha so sweet.
Do continue
Hey dear plsss don’t pay any heed to the bashers and that sia too..! Plssss don’t quit ..
Its my request.., i seriously love ur writings..! I m having exams thats why can’t comment but when i saw that u r quitting TU so i decided to comment nd here i m ..
Plsss don’t quit.
This epi was amazing.. twinkle in suit… hehehe
jaan tu in 2 se 3 ghatiya logon ki vajah se hum sab jo 15 20 log hain na unhe nahi chod sakti tu meri sherni hai……….m telling u i ll gt d shit out of dese people bt u wont do anything……….u wont cry……..pleaseeeee………..love u yr…….
ohhh god paavu srsly beautiful…….sooo lovely and sooo cute episode it was…..
am loving it the way kunj was doing push ups in previous ones……and twinkle acting hurt…..and now twinkle wearing suit……eveerything is fabulous….
please dont stop writing because of these stupid bashers…..ignore them we all are with you as baby told 2 se 3 ghtiya log ke vja se hum sabka dil mat dukhana pls…..we all are with you paavu….sorry isse phele mene comment nahi kiya but i love your writings and am waiting for ur ffs espically that star bracelete wala please post soon……….love you……
awesome amazing fabulous cute marvelous lovely epi
ishu my jaan actually main bzy hun toh thoda late comment kr rhi hun…vaise bhi yeh sab bashers mein dhyaad mt dena i suggest koi reaction hi mat dena especially that sia u r a amazing writer keep it up shona…aur han i know comments bht zaroori hote h lekin uske liye tu mujhe chod degi i mean TU pagli…apne sister ke saath aisa kuch krne ka soachna bhi nhi toh toh toh…main bhi chod dungi samjhi jaaneman…aur yeh os muh…muh…ab yrr itne saare comments mil rhe khush hoja jaan…aur jo bhi bashes h they r bl**dy nonsense….luv u my bachaa…ab sad na hona dekh kal mera final exam h phirbhi tujhe comment kr rhi hun….toh plz promise me that tu aisa nhi karegi…
bye…
Awesome yaar
Butter cup, baby is right. You won’t cry becoz u r my strong girl na..! In 2 se 3 ghatiya logo ko sirf bolna aata hai khud to likhty nahi hain or dosron ko boltey hain …! I swear if they were in front me .. i would have kill them but my bad luck..!
But haan tu apni oreo or apny readers ko chod ke nahi jaa sakti ..!
You know na How much I love you…!
Plssssssssssssssss
Your oreo is requesting..!
Love you loads…!❤❤❤????????
Or sunn..! I have posted that os. Tera idea kabhi waste nahi hony dungi.. i told you na..! Or dekh me likh bhi chuki..!
Ab to padh ke batayo kesa laga..!!
Hey anonymius u knw wat its nt any kinda blackmail and all ok got dat jst u try to wrt smthng den speak ok and jst drag dwn see wat deal of shit dey wrote
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You still need words…. to describe how awesome the episode was …. just fab … Twinkle was awesome …. world war and all … bio student got it ?
Loved the parents bond and all with Kunj too
Love you and post soon ❤My emotional queen hope you Don’t mind me calling you that ?
Hey Paavu
It was absolutely amazing
Don’t feed sad and please don’t quit
Post soon
Loads of love
Hwy paavu I was excellent mind blowing…..
Funny twinkle struggling with suil……Loved it…..Don’t pay heeds to word of idiots they’re jealous of your exlnt writing because they can’t write of their own……Do continue
Loveee uuuuu….
This was amazing update girl.. n plz don’t be disheartened.. n leave us all na pyaari si ladki??
Yrr it was awesome yrr
Paavu my angry bird I’m really very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very sorry for not commenting on your previous episodes ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? actually I was too busy so could not read nd when I read it was too late so didn’t comment sorry please maaf kar do ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? nd waise puri galti meri nahi hai tune bhi mujhe nahi bataya ki ye tera ff hai ????????????????? pata nahi kab aati hai nd pata nahi kab chali jati hai bin bataye????? pata hai I’m not your friend na that’s why you never paid any attention to me ??????? well sorry again but I’m really very busy you can ask to baby.
By the way ye hamesha dhamki kya deti rehti hai don’t you dare to leave tu????? if you consider me your friend ??
????. I loved your writing nd ff ????????????
Anyways episode was awesome mind blowing fabulous superb. Kunjs nd twinkle’s scenes were too good. Loved it nd please write long episodes.
Nd I’m not on insta but WhatsApp nd Gmail so it you like you can give me your number nd id by Pm????????????
Nd haan don’t pay attention on bashers just ignore them ye toh unka kaam hai
Well post next asap.
Love you ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤
So sorrryyy for not commenting on ur previous episode because exam are going on……So maama took away my phone…
That’s why I couldn’t comment on or read. Any FF or OS….
Ishuuuu myy suspense queen plsshhh plsnhhhhh
Yeh sari bashers ke baaare mai dhyaan mat de
Bcoz der r more people who loves ur ff much more den anything
So plssss upset na hona aur sad bilkul bhi nahi hona
Bvoz mujhe bata hai tu meri suspense queen ke saath innocent queen bui hai so plsss sad nahi hote
N I always feel ki mai late comment kar rahi hu n always used to feel guilty but today I won’t bcoz of dis I got to know about dat bashers
Yaar bashers ko ignore karde those comment r nthng infront of d comment u got frm ur loved one a
Plssss don’t be ss
N I loved today update
Awesome amazing dwar
Der bond was superb amazing
Loving it
Aur ab achi janu ki tarah smile karde
Karo na plssxss
Thodi di
Choti wali
???
Yeh hui na meri ishu wali baat
Love u keep smiling
Hloo ramyu who saidi deleyed look its here
Pavvu dear I am solly I didn’t commented. Dear I don’t know why I was unable to see your message or send you any message. May be you have blocked me by mistake. Bye. Coming to your writing….
Ga sakun apka nagma wo saaaz kahan se laun,
Suna sakun kuch apko wo andaaz kahan se laun,
Yun to chandani ki tarif karna asaan hai,
Kar sakun aapki tarif wo alfaaz kahan se laun…..
You know what tumne pehli nazar mein aisa jaddu kar diya khota hai bas tere liye…
Love you yaar and don’t pay head to that bashers. They just know these cheap things. Love you to the core. Keep it up…
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hey ishu my jaan i got dem deleted n have asked den nt to post any of these kinda comments…….now just forget it all….please……..
i asked dem why dey r not posting my comments dey told me that they will delete them and now not post these commentss……….☺
thanks babu jaan pls cm on hangouts
ohk m dere u come..☺