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PEHLI MOHABBAT (OS) Kanchi

RishikaBy RishikaDecember 12, 201737 Comments4 Mins Read
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Hey guys!!!??????
This is Rishika here.. I know u all but none know me?? kyu, sahi kaha na maine?? Ha ha ha ???? mein bhi na ekdum jhalli hu bolna hi bhool gayi..
You know what I’m a silent reader (rather say was till now)
I have read almost all of urs articles.
Must say u guys are really amazing.????????
Ok toh now some of my favyy writers are riya, ruwani, ashnita, riru, rushi, prachi, anita, anee, etc. etc. etc…… (not gonna mention every ones name coz i can’t remember right now.???
Sooo….. Sorry for that???)
But i read all the articles from the starting itself
Phir se ek baar kaan pakadke sorry?itni saari bak bak ke liye
Its my first writing kaise hai bolna zarror plisss it’s a humble request.
Aacha chalo ab story start karti hoon bina kisi bakwass ke

So here i start..
PEHLI MOHABBAT??? (OS) Kanchi

The scene starts with a school

VR International School
In one of the classroom as usual two students were arguing
They are blaming each other for some reasons their face is shown these are none other than our kabir and sanchi.
They both are brilliant students and even competitors. They always argue about who will be first.
Sanchi : kabir you did wrong by keeping my notes with you, you cheater??…(she was stooped in middle)
“Oh!! hello madam it’s the payback for the last time what you did”? said Kabir
They were fighting when veer came to stop kabir and isha came to stop sanchi
( veer and kabir are besties n sanchi and isha are also besties)
Both kabir and sanchi loves to argue with each other. They doesn’t know which force pulls them closer to each other
After some days while their constant fights they both started developing feelings for each other ?
Whenever their eyes meet they used to get lost in them leading to a loving eyelock??
They wanted to confess their feeling bit none could gather enogh courage with a fear that if they confess they may loose them forever
However isha and veer always try to make them close to each other?( they knew as they use to share everything happens with them to their frnds)?
With the passing time love of kanchi for each other grew immense??
Now the time came to the farewell party of them
Kabir finally decided to propose Sanchi
In between of the programmes kabir took sanchi to the corridor of the school
Sanchi : kabir!!! what happened? Why did u bring me here☺
Just then kabir bent on his knees and took out a rose ?
Sanchi : kabir…..
Kabir : sanchi I don’t know how you will take it, but know I can’t hide my feelings any more.
You are like a addiction to me
Medicine to my pains
Your smile is Happiness in all my sorrows
I LOVE YOU SANCHI!!!?? I LOVE YOU!! Tum hi ho meri PEHLI MOHABBAT
Sanchi was in mixed emotions listening to his confession made her teary eyes
Seeing tears dwell up in her eyes kabir stood up and hug her.
Sanchi came out of shock and said ” I LOVE YOU TOO KABIR!!!
You are my heartbeat
You are the reason for me to live
Tum hi meri PEHLI MOHABBAT ho Kabir
I LOVE YOU SOOO MUCH” and responded to the hug
Unaware of the two people watching them from behind kanchi was lost in each other
They came back to senses by the clapping sounds ???? made by veer and isha
After completing their studies and gaining a better carrer
They both got married and
lived happily ever after.☺

THE END
——————

Sorry for boring you guys. It is the first time I’m writing something
So please forgive me for my mistakes
And haan plzzz do tell kaisa hai yeh
And
Thanks for bearing me and reading this

With regards
Your
One and ONLY
Rishika

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    37 Comments

    1. Priyanshipp on December 12, 2017 10:06 am

      Welcome to TU dear sis. I’m happy again we got a new writer for our fav couple kaanchi. Now we will get ur articles too. Nd I think u didn’t commented also. But happy u came with articles. Infact I too was a silent reader then I started commenting and then tried in writing ???.
      And about this OS. Awesome start sis. Amazing os dear. I hope soon u will start an ff. And about your bak bak don’t worry we too r of same category. We love blabbering ???. Luv u loads sissy ???

      • Rishika on December 12, 2017 1:53 pm

        It means alot to me dear
        N haan u will get to see my articles too par not regularly
        Studies k saath time kam milta but koshish poori karungi
        I’m really happy that u liked my post
        Thanku sooooo much
        N haa love you too babes

    2. Prachi on December 12, 2017 10:42 am

      Welcome dear to our kanchi gang that is tu the os was fantastic u know I was really happy when I got to know u read my ff thank you a lot love you take care???

      • Rishika on December 12, 2017 1:55 pm

        Thanks alot dear
        N im happy that i can also write something nice thanks for ur appreciation
        Love you too babes…

    3. Anee on December 12, 2017 11:01 am

      welcome dear Rishika…..How beautifull your name Rishika……Your updates was dammm good…but yarr it was very chhotu sa article….I want to say you can you plzz write FF/Fs Or Long wala Os…Coz you have brilient talent of writing…..Bye tc..

      • Rishika on December 12, 2017 1:59 pm

        Awww sooo…. sweet of you coz my name is really nice i know that
        I’m really happy that u find my post worth of reading
        Aur haan i know yeh ekdum chinnu sa hai
        But I’ll try to write a big one also
        N thanks coz i didn’t think anyone would like it. Love you dear

    4. Risu on December 12, 2017 11:31 am

      Awsm

      • Rishika on December 12, 2017 2:00 pm

        Thanks dear

    5. swethaa on December 12, 2017 12:42 pm

      its wonderful dear
      hope you will start ff or fs or long os

      • Rishika on December 12, 2017 2:02 pm

        Thanks dear
        N yaa for sure I’ll try
        Love you

    6. Ashnita on December 12, 2017 12:48 pm

      firstly welcome to TU dear. os was awesome amazing and many more. Thanks for coming as writer or else hame itna acha writter kese milta.Keep rocking dear and if you can then comment on articles. bye take care. love you

      • Rishika on December 12, 2017 2:04 pm

        Thanks alot dear for appreciating my writings n haan mein itni bhi aachi nahi hoon when it comes to writings
        Love you too babes

    7. RuCh23 on December 12, 2017 1:12 pm

      Welcome to TU and Kanchi family Rishi (can I call you that?) ???. It’s good to see a new writer joining us when lots of old ones are leaving ???. I’m very happy to know I’m one of your favourite writers ???. It really means a lot!!! And coming to the os, it was totally awesome for a first attempt. If you can start a ff or fs, it would be so great ???

      • Rishika on December 12, 2017 2:08 pm

        Thanks alot ruwani dear. N haan you can absolutely call me rishi no offence in that coz i love people calling me rishi coz my sweetheart calls me the same
        N im extremely happy that u liked this chootu sa os
        N haan I’ll for sure give a try to ff or fs
        Love you babes
        Take care

    8. Sanjukta on December 12, 2017 1:21 pm

      It’s a cute wala os…loved it…write more nd more…

      • Rishika on December 12, 2017 2:10 pm

        Aww soo sweet of u sanju dear
        Thanks alot
        Love you

    9. cherry on December 12, 2017 4:11 pm

      this was really nice

      • Rishika on December 12, 2017 5:19 pm

        Thanks dear cherry

    10. Amnaa on December 12, 2017 4:47 pm

      Its so sweet and and amazing….. Do conrinue writing

      • Rishika on December 12, 2017 5:20 pm

        Thanks amnaa dear
        N yeah I’ll keep on writing
        Love you

    11. SohanR on December 12, 2017 5:20 pm

      Firstly a very warm welcome in TU dear.??
      We get a new Kaanchi fan….yippee .
      Ur first attempt is really appreciatable…loved Kaanchi’ cute nok-jhok.I just loved it to the core.???
      Hope to read more of ur work …..but next time lamba wala.
      Keep writting dear nd all the best.

      • Rishika on December 12, 2017 5:56 pm

        Thankd Sohan n who doesn’t like cute si nok-jhok
        Glad that u loved it
        N haan I’ll surely write rather try to write big one
        N thanks for ur wishes

      • Negisanyukta on December 13, 2017 1:33 pm

        Mention not dear.And ya i m Sanyukta.Yesterday i commented from my elder brother’s id.

    12. Anu88 on December 12, 2017 7:03 pm

      Welcome rishika……….your first writing is rock yaar……so so amazing and beautiful story yaar……..keep it up rishika……..write some more story yaar……

      • Rishika on December 14, 2017 10:29 pm

        Thanks anu dear I’m happy that u liked my story love you

    13. niyaaa on December 12, 2017 8:39 pm

      Welcome in the kanchi family dear.. Amaz sweet os dear.. Came back asap..??.. Till then tc.. Bye

      • Rishika on December 14, 2017 10:31 pm

        Awwe thanq sooo much dear
        Love you

    14. Dhruti on December 13, 2017 1:55 am

      superb os and welcome in kanchi’s family…………..comeback soon with new story………………tc……….bye

      • Rishika on December 14, 2017 10:32 pm

        Thanks dear

    15. pari on December 13, 2017 3:44 pm

      Wowwwww dear its just sooooo cute sweet sensible amazing this words are less to describe how much I loved ur writing and it doesn’t seem that ur writing for the first time

      • Rishika on December 14, 2017 10:35 pm

        Paru meri jaan tuna apna overdrama mat kar par haan tune kaha tha tu yeh waste tp nai karti phir bhi tune mere ek baar kehne par padha thats alot for me
        Love u shona

    16. rishu on December 13, 2017 3:54 pm

      It is nice to get a new writer and that to such an amazing one and this is really nice but a bit small next time try to write big

      • Rishika on December 14, 2017 10:38 pm

        Rishu tujhe kabse mujhe appreciate karne me maza ane laga par tussi meri life line ho naa love u cuttu

    17. vishaka on December 15, 2017 10:40 am

      Babes this was good story …..
      I loved it ….. Come back with a new story …

      • Rishika on December 15, 2017 1:03 pm

        Awww so sweet vishu…
        I no u would definitely love it shona

    18. riyarocks on December 15, 2017 6:14 pm

      Rishika……..wow……….tum bilkul apni naam ki tarah sweet ho…..now, first of all, Swaagat hai tumhara(wo bhi Swag ke saath…..hehe) hamare TU, especially kanchi family me……but haan, swaagat ke saath meri sorry bhi accept karlo, late cmmnt ke liye……ab koi excuse nhi doongi, coz, ye problem toh common hai, sabka……padhaai & exam naam ka yamraaj……..uff……..pakk gyi ho na meri bak bak se, now, bina tumhe aur tang kiye, I just want to say that, u r simply amaaaaaaaaaaaaazing……..wow boss, maan gye tumhe……..pehli hi ball me ball ko aisa maara ki ball seedhe stadum se bahar……..wow…….osm, ravishing……..just one line to say, boss, I’m already in love with ur writing……..luv u sweetieeeeee & jaldi se hame apne writings ka jalwa dikhaao………apni ff,fs,os ke through……..till then…….bye, tc, luv u…….

    19. Rishika on December 16, 2017 5:02 am

      Awww…… Soooo sweet riya and thanks for the swag ke saath wala swagat… n haan soory happily accepted coz meri khudki yehi problem hai exams and padhai by god yaar too much hai yeh? bak bak se mein kabhi tang nahi meri khudki habit hai start hui toh koi stop hai bhi nai
      N haan thanks alot
      Love you tooo…… janna

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