Hello every one, hope u remember me…..i am samuktha………..Back to bore u all
Yeh shivay aur anika ki “PEHALI NAZAR” hei
This is the story of shivay
Story of anika…..
Story of shivika……
Every one needs a girl /boy with whom we can share everything…..
The story has fiction of ishqbaaz…..the characters are the same……only change is sundari bua is gonna be anikas own bua……..
Shivay a dashing young bachelor….and same kadoos ,akudoistic …..bla…bla…..bla……
What might be the reason behind shivay marring a normal girl like anika………
What happens when anika comes to know about the truth behind her marriage…..
What will be the tias reaction when she come across the news of her bf s marriage with anika…..
……with these questions …lets starts the story……..and pray to the almighty that shivay aur anika ki phehali nazar shanty se ho…………………..plzplzplz…..
Here goes pehali nazar ka pehela shot………….
Its wonder full morning…………
Oberoi mansion
A guy with the soup rushes to a room….
He hand over the soup to shivay…….every one around with a sad face looks at the person lying……….
Shivay caresses the persons hair….eyes gets open….
Shivay: thoda soup peelijiye…..plz dadi………..
Dadi sees every one , and says no….i wont…..
Shivay: dadi plz….
Dadi: thu meri sharth manle me phelungi………..
Shivay: its not a business dadi ….plz meri kasam….u need have this
Dadi:…billu before u , i was handling the business …so koon re range hue a deal ,so kasam nahi chalega……sharth manle…..mein kalungi….varna hey din be meri akri din ho saktha hai…….
She takes a deep breath, omru shouts dadi………tej and shakthi says shivay this not fare……pinky and janavi see shivay…..
Pinky drags shivay out…..
Shivay: mom u know how much i love tia…i am quite comfortable with her….she can manage me and our business too…..
Pinky: ya i understand…but dadi s jaan ko kuch hua tho……..
Shivay: kuch nahi hoga…and u know how much do i love dadi….but this think i cant tia be ab india me nahi hai…..
Pinky: i know it takes 2 years more …but think about dadi….if any thing happens to her will you be able to forgive urself,
Shivay: mom plz i can t imagine…….
Pinky : ok then accept …then we will do something, and i assure u that ur tia will be back to u…..
Shivay see her and turns back to come to dadi s……
Rudra who was all the way peeping their conversation comes back and stands like a innocent guy,
Shivay says i need some time dadi….
Dadi : ok beta take 2 hours and say …then i will take this soup…..dadi closes her eyes…..
Shivay says just 2 hours……
Omru come and pat shivay : u have 222222222222 full hours shivay think fully…..but we wont forgive u if any thing happens to dadi…….
Every one leave……..
Scene shift to anikas residence…..
Anika , a brave girl as u know she is running a small time business..of food.
Bua shouts at anika for giving small amount of money…,,,she ask to take his brother with her as she cant feed him with this money…..
Anika sees like burning her…. shails says leave didi…i will bite her nose during her sleep…
Anika: sahil chup…if bua hears then it will be a mess…
Bua: what the hell are u murmuring there…. i knew u got a big contract, i need half the amount in profit verna thum dono ko bhar phekthun ga……
Anika see the papers…..
Its the contract of desai group of companies…she is working under a cater…pandey…..
(Pandey tho dil ki bahut ache hai…..he cant see girls crying ..he runs to help them…thus he as two wifes , and 3 ,4 illegal……and tries to get anika in any way…..adding to that …bua to knows this)
Sahil : lets go and stay some where else didi…..
Anika: ya thats a good idea but….how can i leave u alone in home….and i know pandey will start planning some other thing ….u are my only hold sahil …i dont want to lose u rather i want u concentrate on studies hey bua ki bath mujpar jodtho……..she smiles seeing him……
Anika thinks regarding the contract work and see the money.
Scene shift oberoi mansion
Shivay tries calling tia , but unable to connect…..
2 hours fully over…..
Shivay see the time and goes to dadi s room…dadi mourns …janavi and prinku sit nest to dadi holding her hands….she takes the deep breath …doctor checks her …he call shivay separately…he says its better u full fill the dadis last wish……
Shivay sees dadi with pain full eyes….omru hold dadi….prinku starts crying…..
Shivay comes and says i ready to get married dadi…..u chose the girl …its ok whom ever it is……
Shivay goes …pinky follows…..
.dadi eats…….
Its been three days
Dadi ask pinky to go the given address…u will find my bahu …get her soon…..
Pinky meets and speaks to bua….bua who first denies then accepts with the cheque…..of 30 lakhs……pinky says the condition and bua says kam ho jayega……
Pinky calls dadi and says ok….. and then call shivay and says the girl accepted…..bua smiles…..
That night
Anika comes home…and was full of temper as pandey tried to misbehave with her….though she is brave…..she feels michmichi seeing pandey…..she is about to cancel the order but sees sahil and leaves it…..
Bua comes with the khajar ka halwa….and calls….anika as pari…..
Anika: bua ji ki screw loose hogaye kya…wo mujse pari kyn bol rahi hei…..
Bua: i know u wont forgive me ..but the fact is i love u and ur brother a lot ….but i am unable to show that s all…..she gives the halwas and ask her to eat
Anika: (in mind, inme zeher tho nahi hei na) i dont want….
Bua: mein kyn isme zeher millavungi…
Anika: whats the issue bua ji say it straight away….
Bua: i wanto u to get married….,i have chosen the groom to….
Anika : sorry bua ji…i knew what u are heading to but i wont….my priority is sahil…and dont dream that i will leave this house by marriage…..
Next morning….anika packs sahils tiffan,
She see a group of person coming in the house….
Bua makes them sit…..
Bua calls anika, anika see them…..bua says they are the grooms family….
Anika gives a angry look to bua….turns to wards them….she says : nameste…bua said u came for regarding my alliance , but i am not interested in marriage…so u can leave…….plz dont belive in my buas promise as i am not gonna abide by that….plz every one leave the place…..
Dadi gets up ….rudra holds her…..dadi goes near anika….anika see her..
Dadi: puttar , i came here to take you as a bride to my grand son….he his very nice person i knew about u and ur problem is ur brothr….we will arrange him studies…best boarding school mein padega wo…..aur paiso ki jintha thu chod…wo sab mein deklungi…..
Anika: sorry to say this…u r older than me and a stranger so i am not saying anything wrong, but i am not interested in ur very nice son….ya i dont have money to put my brother in a good school…but jho bi ho unn mein hum kush hai …so plz…
Dadi: puttar meri wo matlab nahi hai…..
Anika: kisi bi matlab ho tho no problem…pls dont come here after…..
Dadi says theri marsi….
All leave…bua convinces anika but fails……
Shivay on the other hand happy that she didnt accept..
a week later
Anika gets the news of sahils accident…..she rushes to hospital….they ask her to pay her a huge amount…she ask everyone but it was huge to a lower middle class people …….anika again rushes to hospital…doctor says operation got over and sahil is fine…she says money ..doctor shows omru there……..
Anika says thanks …omru calls her bhabiii.. anika thinks (about the pandey actions…bua will leave sahil on road…..i need to take decision). And takes a deep breath……she smiles……….
Omru say this news to dadi…..
Engagement is fixed in anika s ghar…..the engagement day, its a simple ring ceremony…
Shivay fumes out of sweating and anger… he feels the area unhygienic…..anika comes….ring to be exchanged….shivay and anika see each other for the first time…..
Shivay/anika: u/app they both look at each other….
Fb ( it started 7 months back….
Incident 1 It was a marriage….anika was one of the catering service person…shivay came with dadi and tia. Tia started the argument and ended in fight….tia raised her hand aginst anika….and anika defended…..shivay out of anger shouted at anika and gave the prestigious lecture of koon kandan….anika gives him some rupee and says lecture was good…..go and find some other listeners….i am interested in ur lecture… and turns tia…when u cant clean ur waste then u dont have any rights to comment on other…anika leave…tia and shivay fume in anger…..
Tia leaves in half..shivay could not go as dadi was present…..shivay eats and coughs he see his bottle empty and ask for water…some one keep a glass full of red liquid…shivay sees anika…..she says appko tho koon ki shouakk yena isliye…pelijie….shivay coughs more…she gives water and leaves with a smile…shivay say i wont leave u….
Incident 2 after a month Temple…it was some spl pooja by oberois….anika though she doesn’t have much of religious belief she came for sahil …she ask sahil to stay and leaves to get pooja thali….its full of rush…sahil comes out and stands in end of the step…a man pushes and he slips …shivay holds him and says when u know ur weakness its better to go in that…it will be safe…..anika who comes half a way and hears last half and misunderstands shivay that he is taunting sahil…she shouts …shivay out of anger steps down….anika steps back….she slips and shivay holds her ….they share a hatred moment…..shivay ask her to say sorry else he will leave…anika smiles and say i wont….shivay then i dont have any option and leaves…anika about to fall but shivay holds her and encircles her ….she holds his shoulder out of fear…..she opens her eyes …they see each other … she sees him smriking…as he leaves her….and he says jab uunchaiho se itna dharthi ho …kyn unnche kandhan valo ki sath takrathi ho…he leaves….
Precap Incident 3……..shivay says i wont marry her…….dadi speaks to anika…………………..
Hello every one , thanks for the support……its shivika 4 or 5 shots hope u like this……and hearty thanks to all the reader who read my “adhuri kahani” ff….and i wish u i wll be showered with the same love for the “phehali nazar”
Thank you…. Regards samuktha