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Pavitra Rishta -SS By AngelAshu (Part-4) Last Part

Pavitra Rishta SS Part-4(last part)

 

Hello My Dear Friends..

 

Am really very happy with ur all compliments..

 

Friends this is the last(ending) part of my SS

 

Am feeling very much happy with Part-3 comments

 

Thnx for all supporting me..

 

I know u all are very interesting and exited to read Part-4 ..

 

I thought u all are thinking about itni choti baat ke liye swara apna palm cut q kar di..

 

But friends.. one small misunderstanding can breaks any relationship..

 

In any relationship trust is very much important..

 

But swara apni majbhuri ki wajah se sanskar se baat chupayi..

 

So she apne aap ko hi maaf nahi kar paa rahi hai..

 

Hope u all understanding this topic..

 

I saw in my life many relationship bonding cuts by only one small misunderstanding..

 

It’s not a topic to fight.. but try to understand situations in ur life..

 

Pyaar karne se bhi mushkil usko nibhana hai..

 

Recap: swasan romance..

 

Swasan meets raglak..

 

Rubi’s call..

 

Swasan ki dooriyaan..

 

Swara cuts her palm…

 

So, let’s starts Part-4(ending episode) of #Pavitra_Rishta

 

Sanskar shouts…

 

Sanskar: nhi swara.. tum mje akele chodkar nhi jaa sakti ho.. nhi aisa nahi ho sakte..

 

Swara.. swara plz uto.. tu aise nhi jaa sakti ho..

 

Sanskar hugs swara tightly..and crying badly..

 

Suddenly swara takes a long breath.. (I donno much about treatments.. but I notice in many film.. when koi behosh hojate hai.. unke left chest par deep press karne se unko breath aajate hai.. I mean wo hosh me aata hai.. so sanskar hugs tightly na.. sanky ki chest swara ki chest ko press karne se.. swara hosh me aajaati hai..)

 

Sanskar.. A little curve visible on his lips..

 

Sanskar: swara.. swara tumhe kuch nahi hoga.. jab tak teri sanskar jinda hai.. tumhe kuch nahi hosakte.. thank god

 

At that time Dr. sulekha came there..

 

Dr.sulekha: sanskar.. swara ko bed par letao..

 

She cleans all blood.. she tied some bandage..

 

She gave some injection to swara..

 

Sanskar crying badly.. sat beside swara..

 

Dr: sanskaar .. she is out of danger..

 

Sanskar: thank you so much aunty..

 

Dr: sanskaar I donno y she did like that.. I doono what’s problem.. as ur aunty im suggesting one thing..

 

Sanskar: ji aunty tell..

 

Dr: sanskar.. jitna jaldi ho sake.. problem suljao.. koi bhi relationship me problems common hai.. but we wanna solve that fastly.. situation apni haat se gir gayi to.. dekha aaj kya hua.. swara ki life and death situation ti.. agar my time par nahi aayi to.. aj kuch bhi ho sakte ty..

 

Sanskar: thank you soo much for coming aunty.. haa I ll manage..

 

Dr: okk sanskar.. swara ko todi der me hosh aajaati hai..

 

Sanskar nodes as yes..

 

Dr: okk beta.. I have to leave now..

 

Sanskar: chaliye aunty my bahar tak chodta hu..

 

Dr: nhi beta.. tu swara ke paas rahna.. my jati hu..

 

Dr. sulekha leaves..

 

Sanskar sat beside swara.. remembers some moments and crying badly..

 

After 30 min..

 

Some girl ran towards swasan room..

 

Girl: swara(tensionly).. swara..

 

She reached swasan room..

 

She saw swara situation..

Sanskar turns his face..

 

Sanskar: ragini.. tum.. crying..

 

Ragini hugs swara tightly (swara in unconscious stage..)

 

Ragini: (burst in tears) swara.. yeh kya kar diya tune.. ye tu teek nahi kiya.. agar tuje kuch ho jaata to..ham sab ki kya hota.. swara..

 

Sanskaar not able to listen anything.. he was totally lost in swara’s situation..(crying badly)

 

Afer some time.. ragini consoles herself..

 

She wipes her tears..

 

Ragini: sanskar..

 

Sanky silence..

 

Ragini sat beside sanskar..

 

She places her hand on his shoulder..

 

Ragini: sanskaar.. swara ko kuch nahi hoga.. don’t worry..

 

Sanskar can’t control his tears..he places her head on ragini’s shoulder crying..(ragini is like sanskar’s sister)

 

Ragini: sanskar.. kuch nahi hosakte swara ko.. ham sab hai na.. wo todi der me hosh me aajaati hai.. control ur self sanskar.. swara teek hai abhi..

 

Sanskar: ragini.. yeh sab hamare saath hi q ho rahi hai..

 

Ragini hardly control her tears..

 

Ragini: sab teek hojayega sanskar.. trust me..

 

Sanskar controls himself..

and he removes his head from her shoulder..

 

At time Ragini got a phone call..

 

Ragini: ji.. ji.. my abhi aarahi hu..

 

She cuts call

 

Ragini: sanskar.. now I have to go.. swara ki kyal rakna..

 

Sanskaar nodes as yes..

 

After some time swara hosh me aajaati hai..

 

She slowly opens her eyes..

 

Sanskar(with lots of care): swara.. swara tum teek hona..

 

Swara: not able to tell anyting.. she was crying badly..

 

Sanskar: swara y r u crying.. r u okk..

 

Swara is about to sit..

 

Sanskar makes swara to sit..

 

Swara: (she staring sanskar’s caring) sanskaar..

 

Sanskar can’t control himself

 

He hugs swara tightly.. crying

 

BG plays..

 

Dard dilon ki kam ho jaate..

 

My aur tum agar ham ho jaate..

 

My aur tum agar ham ho jaate..

 

Sanskar(with teary voice): tuje kya laga.. tu mje chodkar chali jaogi.. and my tuje jaane dunga.. haa..?

 

Swara still crying.. not able to say anyting..

 

Sanskar: tumhari bina my adhura hu swara.. how can u did like that.. agar tumhe kuch ho jaate to..

 

SwaraL (breaks hug wipes her tears): sanskar.. pata hai dadaji hamesha kahta ta.. agar hamse koi galti hojaye to ham punishment leni chahiye.. nahi to god will punish us..

 

Agar ham punishment nahi liya toh.. god hamse hamre life ki sab se badi important thing ko hamse chenlega..

 

Swara: sanskar.. meri life me tum bahut imp ho.. sab se zyada.. agar god ne tum ko..

 

Sanskar: aisa kuch nahi hoga swara..

 

Swara: sanskar meri jeete hue agar tumhe kuch hogaye to my jeete hi marjaungi..

 

He places his palm on her mouth..

 

Swara(with teary eyes): am sorry sanskar.. am sooooo sorry..

 

Sankar: swara.. am sorry.. my tumse apni fake sleep ke bare me bata dena chahiye ta.. am sorry swara..

 

Swara: nahi sanskar..

 

Sanskar: and haa.. tu aisa kaisa soch sakti ho.. mje teri job se kya problem hoga..

 

Swara hugs sanskar tightly..

 

Sanskaar: wo tumhari haq hai.. teri mehnat hai.. how can I.. no swara.. never.. u can join.. but one condition…

 

Swara: kya..

 

Sanskar: tum aisi kadam kabhi nahi utaaogi.. and mjse tum sab kuch share kar sakti ho.. my kabhi tumhe kuch nahi kahunga..

 

Swara(little smiles): thank you so much sanskar..

 

Sanskar: ragini tum se bahut naraz hai.. my usko phone karta hu..

 

Swara: koi nahi.. my mana lungi use..

 

Sanskaar calls ragini..

 

Ragini: haa sanskar..

 

Sanskar: ragini.. swara ko hosh aagayi hai..

 

Ragini(feeling happy): sanskar plz phone swara ko dijiye..

 

Sanskar phone speaker me lagata hai.. coz swara’s hand was injured..

 

Swara: ragini…

 

Ragini: swara.. swara tu kaisi ho..(tears falling from her eyes)..

 

Swara: my teek hu ragini..

 

Ragini: (with raised voice): swara aisi kadam kaise le sakti ho.. thank god tum teek ho.. agar tumhe kuch hojaata toh.. ham sab ki kya hoga.. haa

 

Swara: (swara places her head on his chest) mje kuch kyu hoga ragini.. tum sab logo ki pyaar meri saath hai.. mje kabhi kuch nahi hosakti.. kabhi nahi..

 

Swaragini smiles..

 

BG plays..

 

Swaragini… swaragini…

 

Swaragini.. swaragini..

 

Swara: tum laksh ko kuch mat batao ragini..

 

Ragini: par swara..

 

Swara: tujhe meri kasam hai ragini..

 

Ragini(with tension face): hmm.. bye swara.. take care..

 

Swara: bye ragini..

 

Sanskar cuts call…

 

Sanksar taking more care of swara..

 

At afternoon.. (lunch time)

 

Sanskar feeding lunch to swara..

 

Swara staring him with lots of love..

 

The day passed..

The next day morning..

 

Swara came from washroom.. she sits in front of mirror..

 

Taking her bangles..

 

She failed to wear.. coz her palm was injured..

 

Bangles wear karne ke liye palm ko fold karna padti hai na..

 

When she tries to fold her palm.. bahut pain aajaati hai.. she closes her eyes tightly..

 

She slowly opens her eyes..

 

She surprised.. to see sanskar in mirror..

 

She about to stand..

 

Sanskar places his hands on her shoulders.. he makes her to sit..

 

Sanskar: tum yhi ruko.. I just come..

 

She nodes as yes..

 

He goes and bring some box..

 

Swara: sanskar ye kya hai..

 

Sanskar opened that box..

 

It was pair of open kada’s..

 

She staring him Surprisingly..

 

Sanskar kada’s swara ko pehnata hai..

 

He takes jewellery of her and makes ready..

 

Sanskar: itni dard se bangles pehanne ki kya jaroorat ti swara..

 

I can’t bear ur pain..

 

She smiles.. she hugs him

 

Swara: I love u sanskar.. u r the world’s best husband… I love u..

 

Sanskar breaks hug and kisses her forehead..

 

Sanskar: I love u tooo swara..

 

Two days passed..

 

Ragini calls sanskar..

 

Sanskar: haa ragini..

 

Ragini: sanskar I want to talk u.. r u free today evening..

 

Sanskar: haa.. okk

 

Ragini: main FRIENDS REASTURANT me apka wait karti hu..

 

Sanskar: okk

 

At evening..

 

Sanskar and ragini at restaurant..

 

Sanskar: haa bolo ragini.. kya baat hai

 

Ragini: ab swara ki tabiyat kaisi hai..

 

Sanskar: pahle se behtar hai..

 

Ragini: sanskar aaj my aapko swara ke bare me batane ke liye bulayi..

 

Sanskar looking surprisingly..

 

Ragini: sanskaar aap jante hai na swara and me bachpan se bestfriends hai..

 

Ham ek doosre ke bagay nahi jee sakte hai..

 

He nodes as yes..

 

Ragini: she said some moments of her bachpan.. how swara saves ragini from death.. etc etc..

 

Sanskar(feeling happy): tum dono jaise bff ko my aaj tak kahi nahi dekhi.. am feeling really happy..

 

Ragini: sanskar aap really very lucky ho.. swara jaisi ladki is dunia me kahi nahi hai..

 

She love her family a lot.. she never hurts her family.. she have a lovely nature.. and finely swara aapse bahut pyaar karti hai..

 

And she also very lucky she have a husband like u..

 

Sanskar smilies..

 

Ragini: u both MADE FOR EACH OTHER

 

At time ragini listen some girls voice..

 

Girls: hiii ragini..

 

Ragini turns her face..

 

Ragini: areyy rubi.. tum log..

 

They hugs each other..

 

Ragini: aao baito..

 

Ragini: sanskar… ye swara ki colleagues hai..

 

Rubi.. nikki.. meet sanskar.. he is swara’s husband..

 

Rubi and nikki with excitement voice..

 

Rubi: hello sanskar..

 

Sanskar: hello..

 

Nikki: hii sanskar..

 

Sanskar: hii

 

Nice to meet u both..

 

Nikki and rubi Smiles..

 

Rubi: am sorry sanskar.. wo hamare wajah se..

 

Sanskar: no no rubi.. is me tum log ki koi galti nahi hai..

 

Nikki: agar usdin ham swara ki resignation change nahi kiya hota to.. ab sabkuch teek hota..

 

Sanskaar: no nikki..rubi.. aplog ki wajah se hi ab swara apni aim se door nahi hue.. swara ko tum log hi realise karvaya ta na.. am soo happy ki aplog jaisi friends meri wife ko hai.. and am happy with swara’s job..

 

Nikki and rubi became happy..

 

Rubi: thank you so much sanskar..

 

Nikki: haa sanskaar.. thnk u situation ko samajne ke liye..

 

Now all became happy..

 

The day passes..

 

That night..

 

Swara wears a little diamond worked red saree and litte diamond worked silver coloured blouse with simple diamond jewellery.. her hairs was leaving openly.. (long straight hair)

 

She also wear that kada’s also..(which was given by sanskar)

 

She looking sooooo amazing..

 

Sanskar wears full white and white blazer..

 

He looking dashing.. he looking hot also..

 

Romantic whether..

 

Sanskar folds swara’s eyes from back side..

 

Swara: sanskar.. kaha le jaaraha ho..

 

Sanskar: kitna bolti ho swara tu.. todi der silent raho..

 

Swara: bataao na..

 

Sanskaar: nahi swara.. u have to wait.. mjhpar trust hai na..

 

Swara: apne se zyada..

 

Both smiles..

 

He removes her hands from her eyes..

 

She slowly opens

 

Swara watching all decoration with exiting eyes..

 

Its swasan bed room

 

The full decoration was with red and white coloured combination (awwww my fav)

 

Swara: (with lovely face) sanskaaaar ye sab..

 

Sanskar: ye sab.. kyu.. pasand nahi aayi..

 

Swara hugs sanskar with love..

 

Swara: bahut pasand aayi hai..

 

Sanskar smiles..

 

Sanskar: swara.. aaj my tumko punishment dena chahunga..

 

Swara breaks hug..

 

Swara: haa sanskar u can..

 

Sanskaar: puchogi nahi ki kyu..

 

Swara: nahi sanskaar(with tears).. u have rite..

 

He wiping her tears..

 

Sanskar: teri punishment yeh hai ki.. in pyaari pyaari ankho me kabhi meim asu(tears) nahi aani chaiye..

 

She smiling with teary eyes..

 

He again wipes her tears..

 

Swara nodes as yes..

 

He hugs her..

 

Both smiles..

 

After some time they broke hug.. and feeding dinner to each other…

 

Swara: sanskar meri life me saari kushiyaa.. wapas aagayi hai.. am soo happy..

 

He stood up.. she also..

 

He goes near swara.. he holds her waist with his arms..

 

Sanskar(romanticaly): really..

 

(with eye expression)

 

Swara: haa..

 

Sanskar: so

 

Swara: so (asking questionably)

 

Sanskar about to kiss..

 

She pushed him and runs..

 

He follows her..

 

He catches her.. she helpless..

 

They both lost in each other eyes..

 

BG plays..

 

Pee loon.. tere nele nele naino se shabram

 

Pee loon.. tere ghele ghele hoto ki sargam

 

Pee loon..yeh peen aka mousam..

 

He slowly places his rough lips on her soft lips..

 

He holds her tightly..

 

She also holds him tightly..

 

It became a passionate one..

 

BG plays..

 

Pee loon.. tere nele nele naino se shabram

 

Pee loon.. tere ghele ghele hoto ki sargam

 

Pee loon..yeh peen aka mousam..

 

Tere sang ishq taari hai..

 

Tere sang ek kumari hai..

 

Tere sang chain bhi mujko..

 

Tere sang bekaraari hai..

 

Tere bin jee nahi lagtaa..

 

Tere bin jee nahi sakta..

 

They came in sences..

 

She pushes him and turn back take some steps..

 

He came near to her holds from back.. she blushing..

 

He slowly rises his left hand he makes her hair to became onside.. he kisses on neck..

 

She closes her eyes tightly..

 

BG plays(continues song)

 

Hosh me.. rahu kyu aaj my…

 

Tu meri baaho me sulti hai mujme samaye hai yuuu..

 

Jistarah.. ki koi ho nadhi..

 

Tu mere seene me chupte hai saagar tumhare mai hu..

 

She hugs him..

 

He breaks hug and he lifts her by his arms..

 

He places her on bed..

 

He removes his coat..

 

He came near to her..

 

BG plays(continues song)..

 

Pee loon.. tere dheemi dheemi lehron ki cham cham..

 

Pee loon.. tere soundhi soundhi saanso ko hard ham..

 

Pee loon.. yeh peene kaa mousam..

 

Tere sang ishq taari hai..

 

Tere sang ek kumari hai..

 

Tere sang chain bhi mujko..

 

Tere sang bekaraari hai..

 

*** AFTER 3 MONTHS***

 

Sanskar: swara mera office ka time ho raha hai..

 

Swara(from kiction): haa sanskar.. ready hai..

 

She gives lunch box to sanskar..

 

He leaves a peak on her forehead..

 

She smiles..

 

He just turn and about to heave..

 

Swara: ssaannsskkaar..

 

He turns..

 

She falls down(behosh)..

 

Sanskar tensionly..

 

Sanskar: swara kya hua.. swara.. swara..

 

Sanskar calls ragini(tension)

 

At the another hand raglak going somewhere in car..

 

Ragini: haa sanskar boliye..

 

Sanskar: Ragini.. swara behosh hogayi hai.. plz jaldi aao

 

Ragini: Haa sanskar don’t worry.. ham aarahi hai..

 

She cuts call

 

Laksh: kya hua…

 

Ragini: laksh sanskar ke ghar chaliye.. wo swara behosh hogayi hai.. we have to go..

 

Laksh(tensionly): okk..

 

Raglak both reach swasan home..

 

Sanskar swara ko bed par letata hai..

 

Ragini: kya hua sanskar..

 

Sanskar explains everything to ragini..

 

Ragini: okk.. I will check..

 

Sanskar became tensioned..

 

Laksh consoles him..

 

Ragini checks swara..

 

A curve visible on her lips…

 

She kisses on swara’s forehead..

 

Sanskar: kya hua ragini..

 

Ragini: (smiles) sanskar aap bhi na.. daradiya ham ko..

 

Ragini gestures laksh..

 

Laksh understand ans he also became happy..

 

Laksh hugs sanskar..

 

Sanskar (questionably): ho kya gaya hai tum dono ko..??

 

Ragini: congratulations sanskaar.. swara is pregnant..

 

Sanskaar(exited): really..

 

Ragini nodes as yes..

 

At time swara became conscious stage..

 

She slowly opens her eyes..

 

She surprised to saw raglak there..

 

Ragini hugs swara(with happy)

 

Swara little smilies..

 

Ragini explain everything.. they congratulated swara..

 

Swara blushes..

 

Swasan and raglak became more happy..

 

Swara and sanskar staring each other..

 

Suddenly laksh notices swara right was injured..

 

Laksh: swara.. what happen with ur palm.. dikao..

 

(sachhai to zyada din chupte nahi hai)

 

Now laksh knows all truth..

 

He became emotional and angry..

 

He sat beside of her(swara)

 

Laksh: swara.. aghar tuje kuch ho jata to..

 

Swara: laksh my teek hu..

 

Laksh with teary eyes..

 

Laksh: ragini tum bhi inlog se milkar mjse ye baat chupaayi..

 

Ragini: laksh wo my..

 

Laksh: mje kuch nahi sunna hai..(became more emotional)

 

He goes little far from bed..

 

Swara goes near to laksh.. he places her hand on his shoulder..

 

Swara: meri baat bhi nahi sunoga..

 

Laksh: mje kisi ki baat nahi sunna hai..

 

Swara: meri bhi.. teri behan ka bhi..

 

Laksh: tum sab milakar mje akele chod diya..

 

Swara: laksh isme ragini ki koi galti nahi hai..

 

My ne use kasam li ti.. tumse chupaane ki..

 

Laksh: kasammm.. kyu.. mje kabse paraya kar diya tumne swara..

 

Swara: laksh plz aisa mat kaho.. tum aise react karoge.. isliye nahi batayi..

 

Laksh melts..

 

Laksh hugs swara with teary eyes..

 

Laksh: isbaar maaf kardia.. agar aage koi mjse koi bhi baat chupaye to..

 

Swara cuts laksh’s words..

 

Swara: kabhi nahi..

 

Laksh: pahle promise me ki aisi galat kadam kabhi nahi utaogi..

 

Swara promise to laksh..

 

Ragini and sanskar smiles to see swalak convo..

 

They 4 share a group hug..

 

*** AFTER SIX(6) MONTHS ***

 

At Mumbai :

 

Everyone (raglak, maheshwaries and gadodias) are present in hospital

 

They all ware tensioned..

 

Suddenly they listen a crying voice of baby

 

All became happy..

 

Ragini came from operation theatre..

 

Ragini: congratulations all.. (with smiley face)

 

Ladki(baby girl) hue hai..

 

Everyone gets more happy

 

They all entered swara’s room (hospital me)

 

Sab swasan ko congratulate karte hai..

 

Sanskar goes near to swara.. he hugs from side..

 

Swara baby ko apni gond me leti hai..

 

Both swasan kisses baby..

 

AP: thank u soo much swara beta..

 

Swara smilies..

 

AP: swara.. sanskar tum dono aaj tak all responsibilities bahut ache nibhaya ho..

 

Perfect beta-beti

 

Perfect bhaie-bhehan

 

Perfect bahu-daamaad

 

Perfect pati-patni

 

Aaj se naye responsibility bhi nibhani hai..

 

I know u both

 

Perfect maa-baap bhi ho..

 

All smiles..

 

Swasan: if u all agree.. aaj se baby ki name hogi SARA..

 

All gets happy..

 

Its perfect name to swasan’s baby..

 

Swasan looking each other.. smiles..

 

Laksh: bhaie.. is kushi ki mouke me ek capture to banti hai..

 

Laksh captures Swasan with baby(sara)…

 

BG plays..

 

Aasmaan mein jab tak sitaare rahenge..

 

Ham ek doosre ke saahaare rahenge..

 

Nazdeekiyaan.. yah o dooriyaan..

 

Bas pyaar hai..

 

Rahenga dharmiyaan..

 

Raahon mein.. nahi dhoop ka gham..

 

Tandi chaayaa… de har dhamm..

 

PAVITRA RISHTAA….PAVITRA RISHTAA..

 

TERE MERE MAN KA..

 

PAVITRA RISHTAA….PAVITRA RISHTAA..

 

TERE MERE MAN KA..

 

***THE SS ENDS***

 

So, friends how was the last episode I mean ending episode..

 

Hope u all like..

 

Thank you sooooooo much all readers and FARISHTEY TEAM

 

With ur encouragement I completed my first SS.. please leave comments….

 

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