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Home»Fan Fiction»THE PAST & THE PRESENT – ISHQBAAZ FF -EPISODE 28 – THE DECISIONS OF LIFE
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THE PAST & THE PRESENT – ISHQBAAZ FF -EPISODE 28 – THE DECISIONS OF LIFE

VHMBy VHMMay 28, 201783 Comments16 Mins Read
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Hello this is VHM back with an FF on IB…I will deal with all the three pairs of IB ….please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes….

Mr.Bajaj saw pinky and Pinky too saw Mr.Bajaj….both at the same time said ‘’AAP?’’
Pinky ‘’You here? ‘’
Shivaay ‘’how do you know him Mom?’’
Pinky ‘’woh…woh…’’ she became nervous
Mr.Bajaj ‘’I will say….’’
Everyone looked towards Mr.Bajaj ….while he spoke
Mr.Bajaj ‘’actually more than an year ago….she came to my house to know about a girl…..’’
Shivaay looked at Pinky……..Pinky looked down…….
Mr.Bajaj ‘’she was asking me the same question as you asked then Shivaay…she enquired me about the gals whom I left at the temple…..i said her that I found them near temple and joined them in Orphanage …she thanked me for saying the truth and left from there…this is how we knew each other’’
Shivaay ‘’ohh okay….i am sure she was anxious to know about Anika’’
Mr.Bajaj ‘’Anika…….’’ He was in thoughts
Shivaay ‘’yeah Anika…my wife….i came to you to enquire about her….’’
Mr.Bajaj ‘’where is she…I mean who is she ?’’
Shivaay pointed towards Anika standing a bit far ……..Mr.Bajaj looked at her and she smiled at him….a smile appeared on his face…

Mr.Bajaj ‘’okay fine then…I will take your leave’’
Shakthi ‘’But you didn’t say anything about the alliance’’
Mr.Bajaj ‘’I am not in a position to take any decision right now…..so I think we both need time’’
Shivaay ‘’perfect…it’s matter of life …so we need to take time’’
Mr.Bajaj smiled and left while Pinky looked nervous and confused……..
Everyone settled in the living room just reminding what happened and Mahi sat back too…….
Pinky went to Shivaay and looked at him………Shivaay smiled and said ‘’Don’t worry mom…we had already went through all these …so I am not at all angry on you …so relax’’
Pinky hugged her son and took a breath of relief………She went near Anika and was about to apologise when
Anika ‘’nahi mummy ji ab hamare rishthey mein ye maafi kabhi nahi aayegi…I am fine and I don’t want to know anything why you did, what you did, it will only spoil our present’’
Pinky ‘’are you sure? Yes mummy ji…I am 100% sure’’
Pinky kissed her on her forehead…Anika smiled and hugged her………
Rudra ‘’Choti maa…you have an awesome news to know …I mean I am sure you will jump with joy…finally one of your dreams will soon be going to get fulfilled’’
Pinky ‘’one…one minute…what are you trying to say…and by the way will someone let me know why did Mr.Bajaj come home today? And why is every family member happy and sad both?’’
Shakthi ‘’will you please take a pause from your questions ?’’
Pinky ‘’Ohh my mata…now you have complaints if I ask questions too’’
Gauri ‘’choti maaji …I will tell…….actually Mr.bajaj liked your heera beta Mahi and came here to get him married to his granddaughter……I forgot her name…what was it’’
Om ‘’shreya…her name is Shreya………’’
Gauri ‘’haan Maaji Shreya….’’

Pinky ‘’oh my mata…are you saying truth ? did he really come for the same?’’
Om ‘’haan choti maa he came for the same …but…’’
Pinky ‘’but …’’
Om ‘’Mahi has said truth…truth of how was he ..in short he spoke everything about himself ‘’
Pinky ‘’Mahi …have you lost sense? Why did you say everything…why can’t you forget your past and be what you are now…an Oberoi…’’
Anika ‘’nahi maaji…what Mahi did was right…because after marriage if they get to know this then it would be cheating and their relation will not stand for longer period’’
Pinky looked at Anika……..
Anika ‘’I am sorry maaji…my intention was not that, I don’t want this relation to happen…I was trying to say it is good if truth is told before joining a relation’’
Pinky ‘’you are right….don’t worry …I am changed now…now NKK doesn’t matter to me too’’
She smiled and everyone relaxed………Sahil came to Shivaay and said
Sahil ‘’Shivaay jiju……I think that dada ji left his mobile here……’’
Shivaay ‘’ohh …give it to me I will send it to him with our driver’’
Sumo winked at Gauri and Anika and said ‘’Shivaay bhayya , me , Anika bhabhi and Gauri bhabhi are going that way tomorrow…we will personally return’’
Shivaay ‘’Sumo what are you upto?’’
Mahi ‘’Sumo …I understand you are excited for this relation…you can go and definitely return the mobile but please don’t try to mend anything…take it as my request or take it as my order…’’

Sumo ‘’sure bhayya’’ she smiled and took the mobile…….
Tej ‘’wait a minute …Sumo I remember Mr.Bajaj said he will be attending the event even tomorrow so we will return it to him tomorrow’’
Sumo nodded and sadly retuned the mobile back to Tej……..
Everyone returned to their rooms
———————–
Shivaay too went to his room and found Anika packing her luggage ……..
Shivaay saw that and became angry…he went towards the bed side and threw the bag away in which Anika was packing her clothes………
Anika looked at him but did not utter any word………..she silently went and picked up the bag and started setting it again……….Shivaay again threw the bag away…………..this time Anika gave him a deadly glare and left from the room………Anika went to Sahil’s room and slept there with tears rolling …she slipped into sleep……
Shivaay POV ‘’ how to explain her, whatever I did was unintentional………why doesn’t she trust me……I know I did wrong but when she understands everything why not this……this is getting over my head now and I need to control things before she goes away’’ he moved towards Kitchen to make a black coffee
———————–OM Kitchen
He was stressed and went to Kitchen………..Om , Gauri, Sumo and Rudra were there giggling on some conversation
Shivaay ‘’you all at this time …what are you doing here?’’
Rudra ‘’we weren’t getting sleep so thought to have coffee together…by the way what are you doing here?’’
Om looked at Shivaay
Om ‘’did you fight with Anika Bhabhi again’’
Rudra ‘’I am sure ‘’
Shivaay ‘’what do you mean Rudra …you are sure?’’
Rudra ‘’I am sure you might have fought with Bhabhi…because my Bhabhi is so sweet she wouldn’t have done anything and I know your anger too’’
Shivaay ‘’you are right Rudra…..’’
Om ‘’that means you fought with bhabhi’’
Shivaay ‘’no…no…I did not fight..but she is angry’’
Rudra ‘’what…she is angry because you did not fight with her…bhayya I am saying you both are mad’’
ShivOm ‘’shut up Rudra’’
Rudra ‘’now Shivaay bhayya is normal …no more mad’’
Gauri and Sumo giggled
Gauri ‘’Jiju…what’s the problem’’
Shivaay ‘’your Anika Bhabhi is leaving for Shillong tomorrow…she decided not to stay with me anymore’’
Everyone except shivaay screamed ‘’WHAT?’’
Om ‘’I mean you are saying this so coolly? Are you serious Shivaay?’’
Shivaay ‘’do you think I will joke….i explained her but she is not ready to listen…I am stressed now…I tell you OmRu…we can handle any problem in life, except the problem called wife’’
Rudra ‘’wow bhayya what a rhyming…life wife…wah wah..’’
GaMya ‘’shut up Rudra’’
Rudra ‘’bhabhi you too and Sumo you also…I am very happy…ha ha ha’’
Om’’Rudra grow up…this is serious’’
Om ‘’Shivaay why does she want to leave…everything is normal …what’s the problem now’’
Shivaay ‘’she has problem with me…I mean she is not able to forget what I spoke to her on the day when Mahi was kidnapped and before she went into trauma’’
Gauri ‘’ek…ek minute…what happened then’’
Om ‘’I will explain ‘’ Om explained what happened that day and what Shivaay spoke
Gauri looked at Shivaay and said
Gauri ‘’Shivaay jiju…….please don’t mind…but your words were too harsh’’
Shivaay ‘’I know Gauri and I apologised her and ever since then… I have been apologising whenever I see her…it’s like I am habituated to say SORRY everytime before I start a conversation with her or I see her…I mean it’s similar to my staff greeting me good morning, good afternoon, good evening, good night, hello… before they start speaking’’
Rudra ‘’ha ha ha ha….i am liking this version of Anika bhabhi’s SSO’’
Sumo ‘’stop it Rudra’’

Rudra ‘’yeah I need to be serious’’
sumo hit her forehead thinking nothing can happen of Rudra….
Gauri ‘’I understand Jiju…but still we can try thing by which you can stop her travel tomorrow’’
Shivaay ‘’what?
Gauri ‘’as of now I don’t have any plan but I will definitely think’’
Shivaay frowned
Gauri ‘’we promise we will try our 100% to stop her’’
Shivaay hugged her and said ‘’you are the best’’
Sumo pouted and said ‘’what about me’’
Shivaay ‘’awee …you too…I mean my siblings are best’’
Shivaay looked towards Rudra and Om and they smiled assuring……….Shivaay too smiled and everyone dispersed towards their rooms………

—————Om’s room
Om ‘’Gauri …thank you’’
Gauri ‘’for what?’’
Om ‘’for everything….for helping Prinku . for pacifying Shivaay and for everything you did all these days’’
Gauri smiled ‘’this is my family too and I never thought anything else than enjoying with my family and helping you all in my own ways’’
Om asked her to sit beside her …she sat and he took her hands in his hands ….she was becoming nervous….
Om ‘’don’t you remember my bad words and actions anymore’’
Gauri looked into his eyes ‘’NO…I don’t remember anything and I don’t want to remember anything too….whatever happened has been corrected so why remembering again’’
Om ‘’what about the after incidents of patch up…’’ he smiled
Gauri ‘’I remember everything’’
Om ‘’really…so tell me what did I do after our patch up’’
Gauri took back her hands and smiled shyly
Om’’Gauri I am asking something’’
Gauri ‘’I don’t know anything…I am getting sleep’’ she was trying to get up ……..
Om ‘’not so soon ‘’ she pulled her and she hit his chest………
Om held her from her shoulder and took her into a hug…she closed her eyes in pleasure……
Om ‘’don’t leave me ever Gauri………’’
Gauri ‘’never Om….’’
Om kissed her hair and started brushing her body from her shoulders…she was moving into pleasure and was holding him tight…her tight grip, her silky hair, her cologne everything was making him crazy…he pulled her away from his chest and looked into her eyes…they had an deep eyelock…..he bent to take her lips ……she closed her eyes and gave in ……they locked their lips in pleasure and for them the time stopped there……..
————————
Next morning ……..
Everyone was busy in their own way…they had to rush to IIRO event……….Anika came back to her room…Shivaay was getting ready……..
Shivaay ‘’good morning Anika’’
Anika no response
Shivaay ‘’so when is your flight?’’
Anika looked at him surprised
Shivaay ‘’don’t worry…you wanted to leave me and go na…..so I was asking you when is your flight?’’

Anika ‘’20:30 hrs evening’’
Shivaay ‘’ok fine …pack your bags and Sahil’s too…I will ‘’
Anika ‘’you will not come with me…I have already said this’’
Shivaay ‘’relax Anika ..let me complete…don’t jump into conclusions before I complete my sentence…I very well remember you asked me not to come along with you…fine I agree …I was just saying I will be coming to drop you till airport………it is your decision and I have till date accepted your decision…so why did you think I will not accept this time’’
Anika was now shocked to core listening to Shivaay’s words……….she felt much hurt that he is not making attempts to stop her instead he is speaking of letting her go………she was getting irritated….
Shivaay ‘’ok fine…I will see you in the evening…and ya I know you are leaving today..lf you have time come to the event today…because Gauri, Sumo, Prinku are also coming’’
Saying that he turned and left the room smiling and whispering ‘’I will not let you go anywhere leaving me’’
———————————HOTEL GOBE
Everyone gathered and the event started….Shivaay’s speech too started……the event was going on when a beautiful lady entered the venue……
Mahi saw her first while he was passing by …….His heartbeat started getting fast…….she was perfect just perfect for him……her eyes like a fish…a perfect sharp nose…beautiful silky half long hairs…she was modern yet traditional….she wore a half long black skirt paired up with a white cotton top….pair of black heals hugged her delicate soft legs……
Mahi walked towards her……..
Mahi ‘’are you searching for someone…can I help you?’’
Lady ‘’Yeah..i was actually trying to find Conference hall 2, where Mr.Shivaay’s speech is been going on…I am late and I really don’t want to miss it……can you please help me’’
Mahi ‘’yeah sure…please come with me’’
Lady ‘’wait a minute…if I am not wrong you are Mr. Maheswar Singh Oberoi …brother of THE shivaay Singh Oberoi….am I right?
Mahi was about to answer her …but she did not allow him and continued
Lady ‘’ I did watch your interview the other day and I must say you are fabulous….i need to learn a lot from you too regarding Financial dealings….it would be awesome…will you teach me …but before that I want to meet Shivaay Singh Oberoi…will you make him talk to me for some minutes …please…please….i know he is very busy person but if you think you can do it………..
Mahi nodded just listening her words….
She continued
Lady ‘’please don’t mind I talk too much…and I can become friends easily too…..so friends ‘’ she forwarded her hand………
Mahi was looking at her lost in her words and beauty…….
She waved her hands infront of him and he came back to present……
Mahi ‘’yes…thank you …yeah..yeah sure…friends off course …’’ he smiled forwarding hi hand to complete hand shake……
His touch definitely made an impact on her and she looked at him for a while….
Mahi ‘’since we are friends …so you can call me Mahi in short’’
Mahi POV ‘’she is just like Anika and Gauri …sportive , Confident, talkative, lively, smiling and intelligent as Saumya ‘’
Lady ‘’thank you…Mr.Mahi’’ she smiled
Mahi came out of thoughts and smilingly spoke
Mahi ‘’no need of adding Mr….just call me Mahi’’
Lady ‘’sure will try’’
They started walking towards Conference hall 2……..while walking….
Mahi ‘’by the way can I know your name Miss ?’’
Lady ‘’hi I am Shreya….Shreya Bajaj’’
Mahi was shocked and reminisced all the incidents that occurred a day before…….he became sad once again and they reached the conference hall……..
Shreya ‘’Thank you Mr.Mahi…I mean sorry…Thank you Mahi…nice meeting you….’’
Mahi too entered the hall and soon after she entered , he came out and called Anika to come there as soon as possible as he needs to speak something very important……
After sometime Anika reached there and Mahi took her to a cabin and looked at her
Anika ‘’what happened Mahi ? is everything fine? Why did you call me so urgently?’’
Mahi was feeling nervous and his hands were sweating…he was wiping his lips with his tongue…..
Anika ‘’ok Mahi first relax…tell me why are you nervous?’’
Mahi ‘’Anika…woh…woh…’’
Anika ‘’what?’’
Mahi ‘’I am in love…love at first sight’’
Anika ‘’whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat?’’
Mahi ‘’ssshhhhh Anika quiet….i am serious …I met her …she is so beautiful and she knows me too…she is perfect for me but I am tensed after what all happened…. and you know what she speaks so much as you and Gauri …I feel as if she will be a perfect co-sister of you three …….’’
Anika ‘’wait a minute ….what are you saying? Who is she? you said love at first sight and then you are saying she knows you…will you tell me clearly?’’
Mahi ‘’she is Shreya Bajaj………she knows me as I have given interview the other day…she is very beautiful Anika and I am tensed because yesterday I said everything about myself to Mr.Bajaj…but onething I have decided …I will marry her else I will remain as bachelor…and for this you are going to help me….i donno what and how you will do but I just want to marry her…….’’
He spoke in one go and took a deep breath…….
Anika was shocked and sat back in chair……..
Anika ‘’how can I help you……..i mean …I am leaving today for Shillong…..Shivaay also agreed’’
Mahi ‘’what…you are going back and you didn’t bother to let me know?’’
Anika ‘’I am sorry Mahi but I cannot and don’t want to stay with Shivaay after his behaviour few days before…I am very much annoyed and angry with him…’’
Mahi ‘’have you gone mad Anika…I didn’t expect this from you’’
Anika ‘’so you think he was right…I know no one will understand how I felt?’’
Mahi ‘’Anika please…don’t say so….you don’t know… but we know what Shivaay went through those few hours when you were in trauma……he died a hundred times in guilt to see you in such a state….and you are saying he didn’t bother about you…well I don’t want to explain you as Shivaay asked none to speak anything regarding this and I want to respect his orders…..i need not say you or explain what sort of relation you both share …but I think you should rethink about your decision’’
Anika was thinking
Mahi ‘’I don’t know what will you decide about Shivaay …but you are not going anywhere at least for few more days…and this I am saying……..one more thing now I gave you the responsibility of settling my life …so you need to do this…next Prinku’s and Dev relation is also growing day by day…until all these are settled you are not going anywhere’’
Anika was listening everything……
Mahi ‘’I am waiting for your decision Anika’’
Anika ‘’fine …I will not leave today…but regarding the tussle between me and Shivaay ..i would request you to stay away from this’’
Mahi ‘’fair enough and thank you’’
Anika smiled and they both hugged
Anika ‘’by the way congratulations …so we will soon have a wedding in Oberoi Mansion’’
Mahi ‘’yeah …if everything goes fine then’’

Precap : A Major truth to start Unfolding !!!

So this was the twenty Eighth part …please let me know how you felt after reading this…any comments good or bad are welcome…I will try to respond as soon as possible…….

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    83 Comments

    1. Sagithya on May 28, 2017 6:23 am

      Wow it was awesome… I loved it….. Excited for the next one…post it as soon as possible….

      • VHM on May 29, 2017 12:31 am

        Thank you so much Sagithya …thanks a lot…will post next episode very soon

    2. Ashwinee on May 28, 2017 6:58 am

      Di mahi se Maheshwar Singh Oberoi. Seriously nailed it . Now all four brothers are Shivji ke ansh and one for all and all for one is missing but still manageable. Waiting for Shreya-Mahi combo , and all couples to be on track. Love you Di . ??

      • VHM on May 29, 2017 12:33 am

        Hey Ashwinee…thank you so much that you liked my naming of Mahi…yeah Maheswar singh oberoi was the only one i thought of to streamline all brothers….i am sorry dear but i didn’t understand the line you wrote ” one for all all for one missing ”……can you explain so that i will improve my writing in that line……

        Love you too dear!!!

    3. Vishnusri on May 28, 2017 7:40 am

      Wow akka superb just loved it akka chala bagundi pls…..post asap..

      • VHM on May 29, 2017 12:33 am

        Thank you so much talli……thanks a lot……next episode very soon

    4. fffan1234 on May 28, 2017 8:24 am

      Super awesome VHM… Loved the update. Looking forward to next part

      • VHM on May 29, 2017 12:34 am

        Thank you so much fffan1234 ………thanks a lot…next episode very soon

    5. dwet on May 28, 2017 8:27 am

      Awesome di please post next ASAP

      • VHM on May 29, 2017 12:34 am

        Thank you so much dwet…thanks a lot…will post next part very soon

    6. JhanviPatel on May 28, 2017 9:01 am

      Omggggg what a part… It was just amazingggggg…. I was just smiling continuously at mahi’s expression ? and even I don’t about that… ?… So soon there is a grand wedding in oberoi mansion… Very excited….
      And wowww superb excited for precape too… Umm what is major truth ?… Can’t wait plzzz post it soonnnnn…… Thanks Di for this excellent ff…. I just love this…???

      • VHM on May 29, 2017 12:36 am

        Thank you Jhanvi Patel…well next episode will be very lite hearted but then i think matter will take serious turn….wedding will end this FF……..

        Thank you so much once again and i promise tomorrow you will read the next episode

    7. san on May 28, 2017 9:12 am

      ????

      • VHM on May 29, 2017 12:36 am

        Thank you so much for Emoji opinion….thanks a lot

    8. Shreyanvi on May 28, 2017 10:05 am

      Amazzinggg diii.. luved it…gaurika moments??????….keep it up…nd as usual post soon?

      • VHM on May 29, 2017 12:37 am

        Thank you shreayanvi ….thanks a lot….will try to keep it up….next episode very soon

    9. Sairan on May 28, 2017 10:36 am

      Fantastic ❤
      Read ur FF after such a long tym…will have to get back to all previous chs too ?

      • VHM on May 29, 2017 12:39 am

        Thank you so much Sairan….

        I read your opinions on many other FF’s and OS’s and i was wondering every now and then that you might not have liked this FF of mine so you are not posting your opinion…….

        But now when i saw your opinion…i was like Okay i passed in your exam ……

        Thank you so much once again

    10. Shivika on May 28, 2017 10:52 am

      Awesome….
      Mahi & Anika’s bonding is amazing….
      Mahi & Shreya~Amazing pair….All d couples r back….
      Shivaay is surely upto something…. 😉
      Precap creating lots of suspense….
      waiting fr d nxt… 🙂

      • VHM on May 29, 2017 12:41 am

        Thank you so much dear…Shivaay will be upto something but Anika manaaooying will happen with the flow of the story……..

        Next episode will also be majority lite hearted but from then on we will move on to some serious things and will eventually end the FF……

        I hope you will keep supporting me as ever

    11. Niriha on May 28, 2017 11:14 am

      Awesome fabulous mind blowing mahi in love at first sight wow??????lovely di u nailed it I don’t know what’s going on in shivay’s mind but I’m sure something will happen interestingly waiting for that
      I loved the epi to the core eagerly waiting for next part update soon di

      • VHM on May 29, 2017 12:43 am

        Thank you so much Niriha…Shivaay will calm Anika for sure …but that will happen with the flow of the story…next episode is an lite hearted episode before the start of something serious…..and then we will proceed to completion of this FF………

        Next episode very soon

    12. UF on May 28, 2017 11:15 am

      AWESOME EXCELENT AMAZING SUPERB??????

      • VHM on May 29, 2017 12:44 am

        Thank you so much UF …thanks a lot

    13. Ayissha on May 28, 2017 11:22 am

      ??? Shivaay’s plan is succeeded…Superb part

      • VHM on May 29, 2017 12:44 am

        Thank you so much Ayissha….thanks a lot

    14. Anitaaa3 on May 28, 2017 11:48 am

      Nice episode VHM…What is Pinky’s demream which is gonna be true??….

      • Anitaaa3 on May 28, 2017 11:49 am

        it will be dream not demream

      • VHM on May 29, 2017 12:45 am

        Thank you so much Anitaaa3 ….well Pinky always dreamt of Rich Rayeez intelligent modern bahu so Shreya has all this …that was what referred to……..

    15. Dhar on May 28, 2017 11:57 am

      Shivaays reaction ???Maheshwar Singh Oberoi u just gave him a perfect obro name , aweeeeesooooomeeeee episode plzz post the next update ASAP ??????

      • VHM on May 29, 2017 12:46 am

        Thank you so much Dhar…thanks a lot…i thought it would fit the name in accordance with Shivaay, Om, Rudra……..glad you accepted…….next episode very soon

    16. Viji on May 28, 2017 12:02 pm

      Awesome dii… Waiting for the next part

      • VHM on May 29, 2017 12:47 am

        Thank you so much Viji…next part very soon

    17. Ramya on May 28, 2017 12:43 pm

      U nailed it dear. No words. Wonderful .
      Shivaay baiya need to work more to convince Anika didi.he deserve it.
      San raithaa unke Vachan se phelgaya hey.

      ??

      • VHM on May 29, 2017 12:49 am

        Thank you so much Ramya….thanks a lot…Shivaay convincing Anika will get with the flow of the story and take a back seat after the next episode…..every raita will be sameta jayega……before we complete this FF in some more shots…..

    18. gayathri.visu on May 28, 2017 1:52 pm

      Good afternoon di.

      Fantastic di…. Loved it! Especially Rikara’s scene, kitchen talk, MahIka’s bonding. But why Mr. Bajaj don’t tell Pinky’s full words to Shivaay? And why O’bahus want to meet Mr. Bajaj? Kitchen scene is really awesome di. Again SHUT UP RUDRA….ha ha ha! Hmm….Shivaay is planning something! Interesting. Now Mahi is MAHESHWAR SINGH OBEROI….WOW! Good name di. MSO is in love that too Love at first sight!! Really amazing… Anika-Mahi bonding is very strong na di! Sherya’s description is nice. Eagerly waiting for next part di.

      Yes di, I checked my TU msgs. Ok di, I saw that id. And u can easily identify(no dp pic) my account. If u get my request di, then let me know about that.
      Take care….bye di.

      • VHM on May 29, 2017 12:53 am

        Hey Gayathri,

        Thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…you have liked so many points in this episode…Mr.Bajaj did not say everything…i thought he said everything that was required…no worries i will work on this in next episode….thank you for letting me know…Shivaay have planned something but he will need not to do as …wait you read the next episode to know why….

        I didn’t get any of your request dear….so ping me your id so that i can add you…no force only if you want to add me…

        Take care…love you loads …take care…

    19. Sofiya. S. on May 28, 2017 2:22 pm

      Awesome fantabulous update di ?…
      Loved it!
      MahReya’s conversation was amazing! ???…
      Mahi ‘s full name is Maheshwar Singh Oberoi….
      Now anika is having the responsibility to bring MahReya together ??❤…

      Eagerly waiting for the next update…
      Post soon ?❤

      • VHM on May 29, 2017 12:55 am

        Thank you so much Sofiya…thanks a lot..i hope you liked Mahi’s full name…
        Yes Anika will take help of every Oberoi member….MahiYa’s wedding will take a back seat for few episodes …next is very lite hearted episode…

        Next episode very soon

    20. Jerry_36 on May 28, 2017 3:44 pm

      Hey Harika di. This one is also amazing. Cuteness overloaded.
      I am always searching for words. Maar daala. The episode was killer.
      Post soon. Love yaa very much❤❤

      • VHM on May 29, 2017 12:58 am

        Hey Vedika…

        Thank you so much dear…i am so happy to read your opinion…aapne bhi hame maar daala aapka opinion de ke….next episode very soon…

        love you loads

    21. Shivika4ever on May 28, 2017 3:53 pm

      OMG di u are amazing
      I read ur ff every day n it is sooooooooo amazing

      • VHM on May 29, 2017 12:59 am

        Thank you so much Shivika4ever…thank you for letting me know that you liked this ff….hope you would post your comments for upcoming episodes too

    22. Banita on May 28, 2017 4:01 pm

      SUPERB!!! AWESOME!!! FABULOUS!!! FANTASTIC!!! Maheshwar Singh Oberoi #nice name# mahi-sherya wow!!! Again u nailed it…. Luv it di…. Eagerly waiting 4 nxt…

      • VHM on May 29, 2017 12:59 am

        Thank you so much Banita……..thanks a lot for so many compliments…next episode very soon

    23. prithika on May 28, 2017 4:44 pm

      GUYZ I AM FAN OF ABHIGYA AND SHIVIKA ,AND SHIA AND ISHQBAZZ TAMIL FAN I HAVE ONE GOOD NEWS THAT IS ISHQBAZZ IS DUBBING IN TAMIL IN VIJAY TV AS KADHALA KADHALA,SO ALL TAMILIANS DON’T MISS IT

      • VHM on May 29, 2017 1:01 am

        Thank you so much for posting your comment ……i am glad to know Ishqbaaz will be in Tamil…….

    24. prithika on May 28, 2017 4:46 pm

      AND ONE THING I TOLD THIS HERE WAS VHM PLEASE GIVE THISINFORMATION TO YOUR NEXT UPDATES

      • VHM on May 29, 2017 1:01 am

        i will try to add this line in my next episode…however i was curious to know did you like this epsiode or not

    25. Katz on May 28, 2017 4:56 pm

      Hi vhm… thanks for quick updates… finally mahi also had a pair… shivaay’s reverse psychology is damn good…. mahi the way he stopped anika from going from OM is good even though for his personal reason… Waiting for the next one…..

      • VHM on May 29, 2017 1:08 am

        Hey Katz…thank you for posting your opinion….trust me Katz even if Mahi has stopped Anika for personal reason but her stopping would be worth for upcoming episode…….i know many of you wouldn’t like but this was important for me…..because everyone knows Anika cannot stay away from Shivaay as Shivaay cannot stay away from Anika…..well all i can say is keep your trust on me intact and i will try to not disappoint you…..

        Next episode very soon

    26. alekhika20 on May 28, 2017 5:18 pm

      Awesome update & lovely family moments

      • VHM on May 29, 2017 1:10 am

        Thank you so much Alekhika…..thanks a lot and you know the reason

    27. navz on May 28, 2017 5:48 pm

      Awwwww……lovely epi dii ..
      First awwww..for mahi’s feelings for shreya bajaj .soo cutely expressed.
      Second aww …..for omky shomky who is a way better than his elder brother in romance.
      Third aww…for u…who wrote all these aww moments.
      Now another truth!!! Waiting for next part eagerly dii.
      Bye.

      • VHM on May 29, 2017 1:12 am

        Hey Chotii…….
        Awee for you to post such ”AWEE”some comment……..thanks a lot dear….
        You are also awesome dear..

        Keep smiling and love you loads…take care

    28. Arthi on May 28, 2017 6:16 pm

      Di…….superb and post next part today if possible pl………..

      • VHM on May 29, 2017 1:13 am

        Thank you so much Arthi…thanks a lot………will post next episode very soon

    29. Arthi on May 28, 2017 6:20 pm

      What??? Prithika is this true??? Are they gonna remake or dub it……any promo regarding that they telecasted???? I expected this long back but now you are telling it…. anyways dr it ll be treat for us to watch in our language thank u prithika….

      • Haridhra on May 28, 2017 9:14 pm

        Yaa Arthi ka here is the link

        http://www.tellyupdates.com/user/11513/

    30. Nida on May 28, 2017 8:16 pm

      Before commenting something i just wana say please can you become the ib writer??? Seriously your story is far more better than the Ishqbaaz story going on … just nailed it

      • VHM on May 29, 2017 1:18 am

        Hey Nida…how are you ? thanks a lot dear…do you really think i can become IB writer…if you think so then it must be true …thanks a lot for the awesome comments dear….yeah I am not able to bear Pinky these days and they have made Anika an abla naari……..

    31. prithika on May 28, 2017 8:44 pm

      yeah arthi only one promo will shown i think its today 3.30 to 4.30.so go and enjoy,but i ddidn’t watch the timeso sorry arthi

    32. Haridhra on May 28, 2017 9:21 pm

      Harika ka ….. U made me speechless n Awwweeeeee Mahi Love at first sight haan u naughty boy par who is Sherya ??.. I’m mean which actress u choose ka .. Anyways That was Fab di n u too in the comepition Omg I tnk its really though one so many Fab writers like u r participating.. kk Anyways all the best ka…

      I loved Anika’s stay back becoz It’s only possible due to Mahi.. I better stop with tis ka else I will mess up with the point for which I commented…

      With Love
      Hari ( Tc )..

      • Haridhra on May 28, 2017 9:25 pm

        N one thing not to Forgot is Rikara scene u killed it man, I tnk Omgot way too naughty haan n Shivaay u need to learn a lot frm ur bro One is a lady Killer n the other Scene killer ..(romantic) wink hahaa…

      • VHM on May 29, 2017 1:24 am

        Hey Haridhra – The author…….first of all thank you for letting me know that you are liked the episode and for the awesome compliments…i am really touched and overwhelmed….Shivaay will also come to his killer avataar very soon…….

        And regarding the competition…..though i have given my name for the competition i don’t think i will be participating as i am really going busy these days…….classes, FF, Family, guests…all at the same time…and in order to upload an episode of this FF everyday i am waking up till late hours……but this is for all of my awesome sisters and readers and i am happy with this……so all the best for the competition dear

    33. Shraddha-DBO on May 28, 2017 10:26 pm

      RIKARA scene was cute.
      Happy that mahi got a heroine…
      Waiting for next …

      • VHM on May 29, 2017 1:28 am

        Thank you so much Shraddha….thanks a lot…next episode very soon

    34. Nithu on May 28, 2017 10:38 pm

      akka……………..super akka nuvvu keka………………………ne ff chadivaka………e pata ne ff ki ankitam chestunna……………..
      BLOCK BUSTER BLOCK BUSTER A ……………………….NE FF ITHE CHALA PEDDA BLOCK BUSTER A……….

      • VHM on May 29, 2017 1:30 am

        Hey Nithu…thank you nanna…thanks a lot….nuvvu chepthuna song maa ammayiki chala istham …a aa song play avvagane lechi dance modaleduthundi…….awee chala chala chala chala thanks dear

    35. Rasika on May 28, 2017 10:44 pm

      Loved gaurika… ? nice epi

      • VHM on May 29, 2017 1:30 am

        Thank you so much Rasika…thanks a lot

    36. Aisha on May 28, 2017 11:59 pm

      nice

      • VHM on May 29, 2017 1:30 am

        Thank you so much Aisha

    37. Madhuani on May 29, 2017 6:57 am

      Awesome…
      First sight love for mahi too good.

      • VHM on May 29, 2017 10:36 am

        Thank you so much Madhuani…thanks a lot

    38. Pritika on May 29, 2017 11:27 am

      no words to say…
      awesome

      • VHM on May 29, 2017 4:35 pm

        Thank you so much…thanks a lot

    39. SHONA on May 29, 2017 12:41 pm

      Anika-Pinky motherly bond
      Again a fab episode
      i am not getting words to say
      The way all siblings supported SSO
      Gaukara’s romance
      Shivay’s normal behaviour towards Anika i think it’s planed by Gauri
      Mahi meeting Shreya Bajaj and his love at first sight (i have a question to ask dear as we know who is playing which role so Mr. Bajaj is not so important but his granddaughter is important cause she will play a role opposite Mahi so if u can tell who shall we consider as Shreya Bajaj so if we read next part we can imagine her face so if u can clear my this doubt)
      Anika-Mahi share a very good bond with each other
      Happy that Anika is not leaving for some time
      All the best VHM

      • VHM on May 29, 2017 4:37 pm

        Thank you so much Shona for such an awesome long comment…..and thank your for letting me know what all you liked in this episode…yes atleast for now ..no more fights between Oberoi family members…..

        Thank you dear

    40. SHONA on May 29, 2017 1:47 pm

      pinky- anika bond
      mahi anika bond
      mahi love at first sight
      shivaay normal behaviour towards anika
      can u let me know who will play role of shreya bajaj

      • VHM on May 29, 2017 4:38 pm

        Thank you once gain dear…

        for Shreya the only faces i can get that will fit for the role are

        KRYSTLE DSOUZ’A
        SANAYA IRANI

        Reason you will know in next episode

    41. nikita_jai29 on May 29, 2017 2:11 pm

      It is awesome dii… Rhyming words life… Wife… Is funny and cute….

      • VHM on May 29, 2017 10:22 pm

        Thank you so much Nikita..thanks a lot

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