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Home»Fan Fiction»THE PAST & THE PRESENT – ISHQBAAZ FF -EPISODE 25 – UNION OF OBEROIS
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THE PAST & THE PRESENT – ISHQBAAZ FF -EPISODE 25 – UNION OF OBEROIS

VHMBy VHMMay 25, 2017132 Comments11 Mins Read
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Hello this is VHM back with an FF on IB…I will deal with all the three pairs of IB ….please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes….

Tej, Om, Rudra, Shivaay , Mahi rushed towards CITY HOSPITAL, where Gauri was sitting worried for Anika……..
They all reached and
Shivaay looked at Gauri……Gauri nodded her head in NO with tears falling down….Shivaay sat down not willing to see her Anika in such a state……….
OmRu ran to him and lift him up……..
Shivaay ‘’this is all because of me…I shouldn’t have been so harsh to her…she too knows me Om…she knows I cannot live without her….she knows I cannot be angry with her for a long time…then why did she go into trauma…I am very bad husband….i couldn’t take care of my wife properly…what will I answer Sahil now……these days my fate is not going good…if I am getting something I am loosing much precious thing…..’’ he cried hugging Om……
Shivaay went inside the room , sat beside Anika , while holding her hands spoke …
Shivaay ‘’Anika your wish is fulfilled …you wanted to give my family back..but how can you forget you are my family too….…I got proved today that I am an Oberoi…son of Pinky and Shakti Singh Oberoi……we got to know the truth…your plan was successful……wake up please …wake up…….’’ He pressed her hand while crying.……
Mahi came in and held Shivaay, while Tej, OmRu stepped in ………..
Mahi ‘’Shivaay…Anika will be back with her usual antics……I couldn’t inform her or OmRu while I was in Ohri’s …otherwise this mishap wouldn’t have happened’’
Shivaay looked at Mahi ……..
Om ‘’what do you mean Mahi? What could you not inform?’’
Tej ‘’I will explain’’

Everyone looked towards Tej……….
Before Tej could explain………Pinky, Dadi, Jhanvi, Shakti , Sumo and Sahil came there……
Shivaay looked at Pinky with teary eyes…..Pinky too looked at him with no expressions though her motherhood awakened , she wanted to just hug his son and keep him near her…….
Shivaay moved towards her …but she sat beside Anika’s bed on the other side and gave a galance at Shivaay and looked at Anika……Shivaay was shocked so were others…….
Shivaay tried to speak but stopped as he didn’t understand where to start from and what to speak…..
Pinky held Anika’s hand…….
Pinky ‘’Anika …tu aise soo rahi hain woh bhi aankehin khula kar ke…..tu ne yehi chaha na ki ham sab ek saath rahe …fir jab woh waqt aa gaya tho tu kyun hamara saath nahi de rahi…chal ab bahut ho gaya uth jaa……’’ she shaked her hands……….
Shivaay ‘’mom’’ his inner voice screamed…..
Pinky ‘’Anika …I have to apologise to you for numerous deeds of mine…..until you accept my apologies and forgive me …my son… no both my son’s wouldn’t come back to me…..so please forgive me….wake up …wake up……I promise I wouldn’t ever come between you and Shivaay …I have learnt my lesson….so wake up Anika …….’’ She spoke rolling out her tears……
Shivaay was crying seeing the state of his mother and Anika……OmRuHi were trying to calm him….
He couldn’t control anymore…tears were overflowing………
On the other hand Pinky couldn’t bear seeing her heera beta crying badly……..
Pinky ‘’Once I wished and prayed that you should be out of my family but today I truly want you to be part of my family…..not as my daughter-in-law but as my daughter…you fulfil everyone’s wish ..wouldn’t you fulfil mine…..speak out Anika…….please’’
Pinky stood up and bent towards Anika…….. her tears travelled towards Anika’s eyes while her lips touched Anika’s forehead……..
Anika had movement then ….tears came out flowing…..
Shivaay was ecstatic……He couldn’t believe what he saw………
Doctors came and checked her and assessed she was out of danger…they were trying to bring out her emotions but she stopped her emotions and went into a sort of trauma ……..she was asked to rest and was injected sedative in the saline …..Anika soon slept peacefully….while Pinky and Shivaay waited at either side of Anika and taking care…..No words were spoken between them still…….

After sometime Anika woke up and saw both of them sitting by her either side …a smile crept on her face…….slowly the entire family came to her and stood infront of her……her happiness knew no bounds……she looked at Shivaay and he too looked at her and smiled but she didn’t reciprocate the smile……….
Pinky hugged her immediately…….Anika too reciprocated the hug happily…….they both cried….Pinky kissed Anika’s forehead again and wiping her and Anika’s tears spoke
Pinky ‘’Anika ab kaisi hain tu? ‘’
Anika ‘’mein theek hoon aunty ji’’
Pinky ‘’Aunty ji nahi Mummy ji…ya tu bhi MOM bula le’’ she smiled
Rudra ‘’haan Bhabhi Mom bulana bada cool rahega’’
OmHi ‘’Shut up Rudra’’
Anika ‘’Aunty ji…mera matlab mummy ji aapko MOM keh kar bulane kaa theka sirf aapka heera bheta ne hi utha ke rakha hain’’ she spoke seeing Shivaay……
Pinky looked at Shivaay giving a fake smile…….
Pinky ‘’par ab shayad main waise bulava kabhi sun bhi na paaoon …tere saath jo kiya uski wazah se maine hamesha keliye shayad woh haq kho diya ….’’ She fake smiled and said while her tears did not stop….
Anika looked at Shivaay expressionless…Shivaay was not able to speak anything…
Anika ‘’mummy ji….par’’
Pinky looked towards Shivaay but spoke to Anika ……

Pinky ‘’Anika let me speak today…I know I have done very much wrong with you …I hated you…I donno why…but I forgot that I was also a wife and my mother-in-law never did when I claimed my rights on her son……I died the same day when my son left my house without even looking at me, when he did not believe me I was his mother…… and from then on I have been dying everyday …because the moment I failed as a mother I failed as wife…as a daughter-in-law I failed …I failed in every relation…..and if I don’t apologise to you today I will fail as a human being too….so please forgive me…..’’
Pinky cried………Anika too had tears…..and she was nodding her head not to say so……..Shivaay reached threshold and walked to his mother………..
He sat on his knees and put her head in Pinky’s lap and cried ……..he cried vigorously……..Pinky put her hand finally on Shivaay’s hair and started brushing his hair….
After a while Shivaay lifted his head up and spoke
Shivaay ‘’Mom……I am sorry……I am really sorry….i was too harsh on you……..so harsh that I forgot what all you did to bring me up…..i was angry…I was annoyed…but I never forgot you…..i always remembered you…and I remembered you only as my mom…..however I could not forget what you did with Anika……but today…today you brought my Anika back…you brought my Anika back to me and with that you gave me back my life…you gave me everything….you have not failed mom…you won everything…..i always loved you Mom…I loved you….i tried to balance you and Anika but somewhere I failed and created insecurities within you….i am sorry for that…please forgive me Mom…….please’’
Everyone were very happy and happily teary eyed…..
Pinky lifted her son up and hugged him……….she did not want to say anything as saying anything is meaningless when she has her son with her, once again as her strength……
Everyone clapped out of excitement…….
She turned towards Mahi and said ‘’Oyee…tu kya waha khada hain…apni maa ke paas aayega nahi…gale nahi lagayega mujhe’’
Mahi ran to her and hugged her …………she hugged him tight and later kissed him……
Pinky then took Shivaay to Anika and said
Pinky ‘’Shivaay dekh ab tujhe mein itna pyaar nahi de sakoongi…… naahi tu mera heera beta banke rahega…..ab teri zimmedari mein Anika ko saump rahi hoon …mujhe yakeen hain ki woh ye kaam jaise abhi tak nibhathe aayi hain, waise hi aagey bhi nibhayegi ‘’

Shivaay ‘’Not fair Mom…’’
Pinky ‘’aree kya not fair…34 saal se jo pyaar maine apne Mahi ko nahi diya woh mujhe acche se poora karne de…samjha tu…..’’
Shakthi ‘’what about me Pinky? Will you not take care of me ?’’
Pinky blushed and hugged her husband….they apologised to each other…..later on Pinky went to Tej
Pinky folded her hands infront of Tej and said ‘’Jeth ji…I always thought you were selfish and doesn’t understand the meaning of relations…..i troubled you a lot and spoke very bad about you specially in the last one year …yet you helped to get both of our sons back……….i cannot thank you enough for that…..thank you so much….i will never forget this help of yours……..’’
Shakthi, Mahi, Shivaay, Anika joined Pinky folded their hands and thanked Tej………
Tej smiled happily and hugged Shakthi, Mahi and Shivaay…….
OmRu , Jhanvi, Gauri and Sumo were very happy……….
Sahil ‘’What’s happening here? Why did everyone forget me?’’
Tej went near Sahil, lifted him up and said ‘’Sahil , I have decided something and I am letting you know first…….i decided to take rest and relax now……….so very soon I will be retiring from business and then I will spend time with you letting you learn business from this age’’
Sahil ‘’Uncle….i am too small to learn business …so I guess in your free time I will make you learn how to play games like……’’ he was thinking ……..
Everyone smiled at Sahil’s words……
Sahil ‘’I will let you know what games I will teach you later…’’
Tej ‘’ok deal sealed then’’
Everyone smiled……..

Om went near Tej and said ‘’PAPA ‘’
Tej put Sahil carefully down and looked at Om in disbelief…….
Om ‘’Papa……..thank you……thank you so much …I don’t know what you did …how you did…..but you did …you brought back everyone’s happiness and I cannot thank you enough for that….i promised mom that I will accept you as my father forgetting whatever glitches are between us …on the day you make everything right, by bringing Shivaay and Anika Bhabhi back………and today I will keep my word…..i promise papa I will not hurt you anymore and try to be as you expect me to be….as Shivaay is to chote papa and choti maa …I will try to be like that to you and Mom…..’’
Tej hugged Om and om reciprocated …a moment everyone longed to see for so many years…….
Jhanvi was the most happiest of all…….
Tej ‘’I am sorry Om…I have never cared about any of you …but it was you who made me realise what family means to a person…and coming to you being like Shivaay…I don’t want you to be so…For me now I have no difference between all my sons and daughters…..Om you are good as you are…..live your interests…Shivaay is back, Mahi is back ….they can look after everything’’
He turned towards Shivaay and Mahi and they both smiled approvingly
Tej ‘’Om do what your heart says and I will support you in everything……I will not insist you ….because I know when there is need you will stand by’’
Tej called Rudra and Rudra neared him
Tej ‘’I am sorry Rudra….i was trying to kill your innocence and making you get matured …but I never knew how much innocent and childish you are but from inside you are matured…I have no worries about you too because you have your GREAT WALL OF SHIVAAY beside you and until he is there no one can touch you….so as I said to Om do whatever you want to….live your life happily….’’
All three OmRu & Tej hugged together tightly……and Jhanvi prinku joined and finally Jhanvi’s family was looking completed and happy….
Here Shakti, Pinky, Shivaay and Mahi hugged eachother……
Dadi, Anika, Gauri, Sumo and Sahil stood beside each other and looked at all of them happily…….
Later everyone stood together to do DIL BOLE OBEROI ……

SO PLEASE LET ME KNOW WHETHER YOU ALL WANT ME TO CONTINUE THIS FF OR END IT HERE …….
IF YOU ALL WANT ME TO END IT HERE I WILL JUST UPLOAD ONE MORE EPISODE WITH LEFT OVER REVELATION, AND FIRST HALF OF PRECAP BELOW NEEDS TO BE IGNORED…….LET ME KNOW YOUR DECISION BY POSTING IT IN COMMENTS SECTION ALONG WITH THE OPINION ON THE EPISODE…THANK YOU FOR YOUR PATIENCE AND SUPPORT

Precap : A major twist in IIRO event and Further revelations !!!

So this was the twenty fifth part …please let me know how you felt after reading this…any comments good or bad are welcome…I will try to respond as soon as possible…….

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    132 Comments

    1. sri on May 25, 2017 10:05 am

      sorry akka i could not comment as i was busy but please continue the ff plz
      it is mind blowing and emotional too super akka

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 2:25 am

        Thank you so much chelli….yes i will continue to end it in a logical way ….donno how many episodes it will take but i will try my level best

    2. fffan1234 on May 25, 2017 10:11 am

      This was superb awesome. But please continue… I would love to see Roop’s punishment for separating Mahi and Shivaay and Prinku’s and Mahi’s life partners, romantic scenes between all the pairs nd Sahil’s cute antics.

      Also what punishment did Kamini and Ranveer got??

      So please please please continue…

      • fffan1234 on May 25, 2017 2:21 pm

        BTW congrats on 25th part

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 2:26 am

        Thank you so much fffan1234…i don’t think i will touch Roop’s punishment, but the three pairs bonding and cute moments will be planned….

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 2:27 am

        Thank you so much for the wishes

    3. Ashwinee on May 25, 2017 10:16 am

      Di bang on power packed emotional update. As I told in the earlier update I couldn’t find new words but these are the first words which came to my mind . And thank you for your lovely update. Hope to see the further updates.

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 2:28 am

        Thank you so much Ashwinee…thanks a lot…hope i will write further episodes much to the expectations of the readers

    4. Arya? on May 25, 2017 10:20 am

      Nyc1..very emotional.. Plz continues this ff..??

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 2:29 am

        Thank you so much Arya…will continue the ff for few more episodes…

    5. Harshita on May 25, 2017 10:21 am

      Hie it was awesome
      post soon and plz continue
      love u

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 2:31 am

        Thank you so much Harshita…will continue for few episodes but will not drag it

    6. shivika on May 25, 2017 10:21 am

      Plzzzzzz don’t end this continue plzzz more shivika and omri scenes luved it

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 2:32 am

        Thank you so much Shivika…will try to continue for few episodes more but will not drag it….all three pairs bonding will come up very soon

    7. Jannat on May 25, 2017 10:23 am

      Plzz…. Continue. This ff is really khidkitor amazing.. So don’t end it so soon….

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 2:32 am

        Thank you so much Jannat….will cotinue for few more episodes but will not drag it….

    8. anujohnson on May 25, 2017 10:25 am

      Its out of the world..so emotional…and I will kill you if you end this ff now..how can you even think so…no no you cannot end this ff OK…anyways this episode is as awesome and creative as you..so emotional..

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 2:33 am

        Thank you so much Anu…don’t kill me drar will continue for few more episodes but will not drag it ….one day it has to end but right now got extension…lol….

    9. Vishnusri on May 25, 2017 10:27 am

      Awesome awesome akka chala chala chala chala chala bagundi superb waiting for the next..??
      Akka nuvvu cheppave last ff lo fb gurinchi adi naa fb be pls. Friend request pampiva akka nenu accept chesthanu..

      • Pallavi on May 25, 2017 10:58 am

        Hey r u Telugu….BTW I am pallavi I belong to Hyderabad..I speak Telugu well but my mother tongue is Kannada…and VHM Di which place do u belong..??but Di u r the best in writing episodes ….I eagerly wait for ur episode to be posted just like I wait for 10 pm …I hope u write further and complete golden jubilee, platinum jublie also

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 2:44 am

        Hey Pallavi…yeah i am from Andhra pradesh and Telangana ….thank you so much Dear…i stayed in Bangalore for 2.5 years…but it’s nice to know you understand Telugu and can speak goo too…that’s awesome…awee so sweet of you …i will continue the FF for some more time but will end it in a good way

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 2:36 am

        Thank you so much Vishnu…i have sent a message to your FB id…and regarding this ff it has got extension for now…but will not drag it ….

    10. Arwa Qutubuddin on May 25, 2017 10:28 am

      Sorry not able to comment earlier but plzz continue fantastic update

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 2:37 am

        Thank you so much Arwa Qutubuddin….thanks a lot…will continue but will not drag it too much

    11. Viji on May 25, 2017 10:33 am

      Excellent one…ND plz continue..

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 2:37 am

        Thank you so much Viji

    12. Viji on May 25, 2017 10:34 am

      Excellent one…ND plz continue…??

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 2:38 am

        yeah dear will continue …but will not drag it

    13. Arpita on May 25, 2017 10:41 am

      VHM dear, happy silver jubilee. ……25th episode. ….???..love it….

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 2:38 am

        Thank you so much Arpita….thanks a lot

    14. Shreyanvi on May 25, 2017 10:42 am

      Noo di…dont end it here…plz continue….ur ff is just amazing.. .nd I m addicted to it???.so plzz plz don’t end it…..
      Di here is a request.. ..can u plz show some romantic moments amid couples..
      Coming to episode it was heart touching…pinky ani moments made me cry..??…overall episode was mindblowing..keep it up..nd post nxt part soon…

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 2:39 am

        Hey shreyanvi …thank you so much dear ….and about your request …why to request …i will add few cute moments between all the couples in upcoming episodes

    15. Sravnthi on May 25, 2017 10:51 am

      Please continue this ff
      Episosde was awesome

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 2:40 am

        Thank you so much Sravanthi …thanks a lot and will continue dear for some more time

    16. dwet on May 25, 2017 10:55 am

      It was awesome di. Please don’t end it. ? and congratulations for your 25th part of this ff.

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 2:43 am

        Thank you so much dwet…will continue for some time but will not drag it too much dear…

    17. Niriha on May 25, 2017 11:00 am

      Fabulous part di and emotional too plz continue this ff di I’m really addicted to this ff plz don’t end this ff di and I want mahi love story di.I loved this ff to the core????if you end this ff then I will cry?????? you want to see ur sister crying????
      I know I’m little bit dramabaze but pls don’t end this ff I want this ff to reach minimum 60,70 episodes I know you to have many responsibility in ur life take ur own time and post this ff di I will wait whenever you post it but plz don’t end this ff
      I think I’m talking too much if I’m saying anything wrong pls forgive me di I LOVE YOU SO MUCH DI????????Take care

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 2:47 am

        Thank you so much Niriha…thanks a lot…yeah i will continue this FF for some more time though will give a good ending without dragging it ….

        Ohh No please don’t cry ….i want my sissy to be smiling and happy always….yeah i have too much to do these days but this writing is the only stress relief and i enjoy writing….

        No worries dear…whatever you wrote is something i felt very happy to read …so it’s okay why sorry……

        Love you too dear…and take care

    18. Ahanna on May 25, 2017 11:06 am

      Wow dii ….totally khirdkitod……loved it to the core…bt aaj pinky ne rula diya???…and rudra toh kahin bhi strt ho skta hai ???…pls continue it di…..

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 2:48 am

        Thank you so much Ahanna…thanks alot…yeah i wanted Pinky to bring back Anika to normal so that patching up of Shivaay and Pinky seems more realistic….Rudy is such a cutie pie……will continue for few more episodes and end it dear

    19. bhuvi regina on May 25, 2017 11:06 am

      Hai guys……
      Well i am new to u all but u guys don’t know that i am a regular viewer of this telly updates…..ok coming to the point..
      REALLY U GUYS R DOING AN AWESOME JOB
      and please continue this ff plzz

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 2:50 am

        Hey Bhivi Regina…welcome …thanks a lot for posting your opinion and thank you for the wishes too….yes will continue the ff for some more episodes and will end it in a good way

    20. Pritika on May 25, 2017 11:10 am

      as always fantastic, awesome and khidkitode episode…..
      u write brilliantly..
      continue your FF don’t let end it here

      Glad to read further episodes of this FF

      With Lots of Love Di

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 2:51 am

        Thank you so much Pritika…thanks alot…too may compliments are making me overwhelmed…will continue the ff for some more episodes before ending it on a good note

      • Pritika on May 26, 2017 11:07 am

        thanku you so much di to continue ur FF, i too want u end it on a good note but don’t drag it like our daily soaps

    21. sanjana on May 25, 2017 11:15 am

      noo dii……………plzz dont end it.I really liked a lot.plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz dont end this ff.

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 2:52 am

        Thank you so much Sanjana….thank you for posting your opinion…yes dear will continue the ff to end it soon in a more logical way

    22. Ayissha on May 25, 2017 11:23 am

      Plz continue with ur ff…..I loved it…..Plz plz continue….

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 2:53 am

        Thank you so much Ayissha ….will continue for few more episodes …….

    23. Girija on May 25, 2017 11:31 am

      Till now I haven’t commented on your ff….but this is the best one when compared to real serial….because u showed everything……the pain of shivika…the pain of Gauri..the one which I could feel it…it’s really an amazing story…please do continue it….please show some romance..pregnancy of all the couples…their kids …. everything….but please don’t end it soon…..this is an amazing fanfiction when compared to all…..I regularly read all the ff….but this will remain in my heart forever????????

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 2:55 am

        First of all thank you so much Girija for the beautiful lines you wrote…i am extremely happy to know that you felt the emotions while reading…that’s something huge for me….will defintiely continue for few more episodes but will not drag it….as it would be pointless…will show some cute moments between all the couples…..in upcoming episodes…awee the last line stole my heart

    24. Sagithya on May 25, 2017 11:39 am

      don’t stop tis ff pls continue tis……. Today’s reunion was awesome….. I loved it…. Pinky anika shivaay movements was heart touching….. Excited for the next twist…. Waiting for the next one… Post it as soon as possible

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 2:56 am

        Thank you so much Sagithya…thanks a lot…will continue this few more episodes but will not drag it as i cannot write episodes which doesn’t make sense to me ….so since there are few things i left loose i will join them to give a good ending

    25. zaveesha on May 25, 2017 11:47 am

      Emotional nd wonderful episode…i again fell in love with ur ff…finally oberois reunited…
      Well I want to read further ur amazing ff…so if u can continue u should….want to see more of obros nd Shivika Gaurika nd Rumya monents…

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 2:58 am

        Thank you so much Zaveesha…thanks a lot…yeah cute moments between all the couples will be written in upcoming episodes…..will continue with the ff for few more episodes

    26. Bhuvana on May 25, 2017 11:56 am

      Mind blowing episode….???
      The Obro’s hug
      Especially tej-om convo….etc…
      Pls continue this…..
      Waiting for next episode

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 2:59 am

        Thank you so much Bhuvana…will continue for sure dear but for few more episodes only…..next episode very soon

    27. Anitaaa3 on May 25, 2017 11:56 am

      The episode was Awsomeee anf Post ASAP and Plzz Continue

      • Anitaaa3 on May 25, 2017 5:23 pm

        Also Congrats for completing 25 epis

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 3:00 am

        Thank you so much Anitaa3….thanks a lot for Silver Jubilee wishes…will continue for sure

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 3:00 am

        Thank you so much Anitaa3….thanks a lot for Silver Jubilee wishes…will continue for sure for few more episodes

    28. Sam on May 25, 2017 11:57 am

      Its mind blowing fabulous.. Pls pls pls dont end it.. We r hoping to read more of this..

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 3:01 am

        Thank you so much Sam…will continue for sure dear …i am hoping you will like the upcoming episodes too

    29. Shraddha-DBO on May 25, 2017 11:57 am

      Please continue dear with some lovey dovey moments if rikars, shivika and some good family moments.

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 3:03 am

        Thank you so much Shraddha-DBO ….yeh cute moments of all three couples will be included …and this ff will continue for few more episodes

    30. Kanika on May 25, 2017 11:57 am

      Continue this ff

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 3:04 am

        Thank you for letting me know your opinion…i will continue for few more episodes…

    31. Ananya on May 25, 2017 12:18 pm

      Plz continue… this story is one of the best story which I have read till now…so keep continuing

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 3:08 am

        Thank you so much Ananya…will continue the ff for few more episodes ….thank a lot once again

    32. Haridhra on May 25, 2017 12:40 pm

      Akka How can u even tnk of ending this ff haan… N again Congo for the Silver Jubilee. U r fabulous, it was a emotional one n abt Pinky I liked the way u portrayed her realization hope this happens soon on IB also (but that’s never gonna happen becoz of these stupid CVS) . N ka plz plz plz Continue this ff the precap too sounds interesting so plz continue with the flow n unfold the mystery to us…

      With Love
      Hari ??

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 3:12 am

        Haridhra-the author …everything has to come to an end dear…this ff will also end but for now got extension ….yeah this was always in my mind when i completed writing the Kamini-Ranveer exposure part…precap is interesting ? thanks a lot dear

    33. SHONA on May 25, 2017 12:56 pm

      This was superb awesome. But please continue… I would love to see Roop’s punishment for separating Mahi and Shivaay and Prinku’s and Mahi’s life partners, romantic scenes between all the pairs nd Sahil’s cute antics.

      Also what punishment did Kamini and Ranveer got??

      So please please please continue…
      in this episode i cried but tears of happiness

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 3:19 am

        Thank you so much Shona will continue for sure for few more episodes…probably may not touch Roop’s version but all cute couples scenes will be written…next episodes expect some happy moments is all i can say ….. awee thank you so much

    34. Katz on May 25, 2017 1:09 pm

      Hi my favourite writer…..! Of course I don’t want to end it here. In fact I am sad because this amazing story is going to end. One of the most emotional episode so far..this one…. Waiting for the next best episode and expect some good news….. bye… take care….

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 3:25 am

        Awee my dear Katz…your wish my command …will continue for few more episodes…thank you so much for the compliments dear..and i will read your writing too and post my opinion too…

    35. Shrusvri on May 25, 2017 1:17 pm

      I think aapko shivika ki fight ka bhi scene daalna chahiye tha jisme anika sso se annoyed hoti bcoz he talked to her very badly. Lleasepleaseplease i would love it??????????please

      • Katz on May 25, 2017 8:46 pm

        Hi vhm ….. this is katz again … inspired by you and some other writers I too tried to write a ff… pls read my story LOVE IS BLIND and do comment…. bye

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 3:29 am

        Hey Shrusri….yeah i remember…i this episode i have not included conversation of Anika with Shivaay…….she was annoyed and i just wrote it with gestures…my coming episodes will answer your questions………thank you dear i will continue for sure for few more episodes

    36. Anitaaa3 on May 25, 2017 2:21 pm

      Congrats…VHM for completing 25 episodes

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 3:30 am

        Thank you so much Anitaa3

    37. Dhar on May 25, 2017 2:23 pm

      The way u express is just wow !!! Di plzzz plzzz don’t end it , i ALWAYS wait for ur ff to be posted, i am a bigggggggg se bhi bada wala fan of urs plzz do continue

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 3:35 am

        Hey Dhar..thank you so much for the awesome lines dear….i will continue the ff for few more episodes until in feel that it’s not getting dragged….awee so sweet of you dear to say so but i am just yoour dii not a celeb…so let us keep it a sisterly relation

    38. Sofiya. S. on May 25, 2017 2:36 pm

      Hello my dearest Harika di ?….
      That was a fantabulous bang on chapter ? . Loved it to the core ?. Atlast the whole family is together ??…
      And the best and most lovable part, ofcourse we all know was, “Dil Bole Oberoi” moment. ?
      And a Big Wala Sorry to you for not giving any response to your previous chapter di.
      Due to lack of time I was not able to read and comment. I am really sorry ? ?..
      But I read it now, it was really awesome, khidkitod one.. ??

      And a chotu sa request to you di Please don’t end the ff.. Please di…
      You’rs is one of the ff I really look forward to and love to read, so di please don’t end it. Want more happy Oberoi family moments di??
      Post soon di…
      ?

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 3:38 am

        Thank you so much Sofiya…thank you for such a sweet long awesome opinion….no worries dear…today i too had guests and couldn’t write a single word of next episode and had time to reply to the opinions of the readers till now…so i can understand the busy schedules….so no need to say sorry…..

        I will continue this ff for few more episodes that’s a promise……yeah more happy OBro moments will be written for sure…love you too…take care

    39. Aishwarya on May 25, 2017 3:11 pm

      amazing episode….
      please continue ur ff I really love it so please continue….. (we all will love to see romance between 3 couples and some more twists and some happy moments in oberoi mansion)

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 3:39 am

        Thank you so much Aishwarya …will continue this ff for sure for few more episodes…your demand will be completed in upcoming episodes

    40. Ahaana on May 25, 2017 3:16 pm

      Dii plzz continue it and plzz show some couple moments and plzz keep anika annoyed with shivaye as he was really rude plzz

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 3:40 am

        Hey Ahaana …first of all thank you for posting your opinion …i will continue this ff for few more episodes and whatever you have asked for will be written in the upcoming episodes

    41. san on May 25, 2017 3:19 pm

      Awesome epic and continue yaar…?

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 3:41 am

        Thank you so much San…will continue dear for few more episodes…thank you for letting me know

    42. Jerry_36 on May 25, 2017 3:37 pm

      Hey Harika di. It was so emotional. I loved it. Every time you just nail it. Beautifully penned down.
      And yess do continue with this one. I will love to read them. Post soon. Love you?

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 3:43 am

        Thank you so much Jerry…will continue this ff for few more episodes but will not drag t as it will be boring and pointless…so will try to make it interesting…….and i am sorry today i was busy with guests at home…they left an hour back so couldn’t read your FF till now..but will read and post my comment very soon

    43. Shanaya143 on May 25, 2017 4:27 pm

      Hi to please don’t and this or a so emotional..
      I really want the real IB to be like this pura same to same????so emotional so heart touching so much of love so much of anger so so so so of family times.yeah di I really want to countinue it for next 2 tread okay???? i want see prenancy of couples ,their mood swings every
      PLEASE DON’T EVER END YOUR FF DI
      PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEEEEE????? BEFORE THAT I ASLO WANT TO SEE GAURI AND ANNIKA REVELATION OF SISTER…
      And di note it down you are a ossam writer continue it till the real IBconyinues okay?????

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 3:45 am

        Hey Shanaya123 …thank you so much dear…will continue this FF for sure for few more episodes but few of your demands i will try to fulfill…thiugh have no idea of dragging it…

        Coming to original serial being as this …it’s practically not possible right?but i am so happy to know that you like this ff so much …
        And please dear don’t request so much you have every right to demand as you are calling me di…..
        I will try to come up with your demands as soon as possible

    44. Banita on May 25, 2017 4:33 pm

      As always khidkitode epi dii….. Luv it 2 d core…. Nd plzzzzzz don’t stop it…. Congo 4 ur 25th epi…. Waiting 4 nxt plss continue…

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 3:46 am

        Thank you so much Banita…tahnks a lot…will continue this episode for sure for some more time but will not drag it unnecessarily…next episode on 26th may without fail but a bit late as today i was really busy

    45. gayathri.visu on May 25, 2017 4:35 pm

      Good evening di.
      (Plz bear this long comment)

      Very very emotional union di. This is the MOST AWAITED PART for me(I know its 4th part but still I m waiting for this part).. OMG!! Shivika n Pinky scenes…I m literaly crying di! Tej n Shakthi family reunion…..fantastic!! So Mahi n Tej both are together! I think that missed part is that waiter scene n that lid which is Mahi took in his convo with Kamini. But waiting for ur thoughts di!!

      BIG NOOOO….plz don’t end this ff. I know this will end one or other day. But I want to see some happy family moments, Shivika scenes(I love them more than other pairs)…..etc. Plzzz di….

      Now I m better di. U r right di, time changes everything, so I m also waiting for that time!

      Di are u in Fb? If u don’t have problem then can u pm me ur id?? Take care n bye di…. Keep smiling!! And yes, I m also trying to keep smiling.

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 3:50 am

        Hey Gayathri,

        Good evening…thank you so much Gayathri…i am glad you awaited for this union…yes that waiter and lid scene revelation in next episode…

        I will continue for few more episodes not dragging too much…..all couples cute moments and much priority to Shivika will be written…i am sure you will be happy after reading this…
        Good to know you are feeling better now..and continue smiling as that best suits you….

        yes i am in FB i will ping you my id in TU Messages

    46. Tahura on May 25, 2017 4:51 pm

      Awesome episode and emotional too. And I want you to please PLEASE plzzzzz continue this FF plzz don’t end this ff………

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 3:50 am

        Thank you so much Tahura…thanks a lot …yes will continue for few more episodes…

    47. Lulu_Ani on May 25, 2017 4:56 pm

      Plzzzzzz… plzzzz… continue… and bring sm jounir Oberois too … plzzz ?????

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 3:52 am

        Thank you so much Lulu_Ani …thanks a lot..junior Sm OMG not thought till that…let’s see where i end this FF……but this will cotinue for few more episodes…

    48. BAVATHARINI BABU on May 25, 2017 5:04 pm

      First of all congratulation to your 25th episode…… Fabulous, very emotional too and as usual loved it…… Plz don’t stop ur ff di…… I don’t want to miss an amazing ff written by an amazing author…… So, plz don’t stop this ff,…. if this ff reach 50th episode no problem di just continue….. It’s a humble request from your sissy…..

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 3:53 am

        Thank you so much Bavatharini babu…Thanks a lot…will continue this ff for few more episodes…i am glad you liked the way i wrote the reunion…no need to request dear you are my little sissy so you can very well demand……

    49. navz on May 25, 2017 6:14 pm

      Dii…Wow..what a twist pinkys tears brought anika back to life…i never ever thought of this dii.
      Many family moments …really really loved them.
      Sahils words..hahhaha…then we can have tej-sahil convo alsoo…reaaly sweet.
      WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART WITH MANY MORE TWISTS AND REVELATIONS. Got my answer dii..????.

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 3:56 am

        Hey Chotii……
        How are you? so enjoying with grandparents…good good…enjoy to the fullest…

        Thank you so much dear i always wanted to write these scenes once the mystery got revealed but wasn;t sure will everyone connect…but to my surprise most of them liked the way Pinky-Shivaay patch up took place,,,,,,

        Sahil’s words…ha ha ha …Sahil si one mischievous yet lovable kiddo…..

        Sure nect episode may 26th but a bit late as i haven’t written a single word of it…today had guests so couldn’t write the next episode till now

    50. nikita_jai29 on May 25, 2017 6:36 pm

      It is awesome dii… Plz continue… Sahi tej little convo is so cute…..

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 3:57 am

        Thank you so much Nikita….thanks a lot…i hope whatever i write will make sense rather than making you all feel dragging…will try my level best to make it interesting

    51. Arthi on May 25, 2017 7:20 pm

      No way didi……how come u can stop this ff and we are ur biggest fans so u can’t stop it…..and just continue di….give some couple moments di…..and Prinku also needs pair so pl fulfill this request of mine and I’m eagerly waiting for Anika and shivay’s children……and even others children too…….di don’t stop di pl……

      And btwn this post was superb awesome and wow and no words sorry di……

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 3:59 am

        Hey Arthi….thank you for letting me know your opinion…yes will continue this FF for few more episodes…Moments between all the couples would be included…will continue but next generation i am not sure….

        Thanks a lot again

    52. Nanda on May 25, 2017 7:39 pm

      Please,please don’t stop.Continue please……I really loved your ff all the episodes.You are a great writer.There was such a turn of events that I didn’t even think of. I thought you would end this ff .If you can continue please continue.And it was really nice of you to ask the readers thoughts to continueSo please don’t stopAnd it you decide to continue update soon pleeease,…..
      Sorry if it was a little over

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 4:00 am

        Thank you so much Nanda…my pleasure to know that you liked this FF…i will continue this ff for few more episodes not dragging it too much…thanks a lot again and it was absolutely fine …so no need to be sorry…

    53. alekhika20 on May 25, 2017 7:58 pm

      Awesome update

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 4:01 am

        Thank you so much Alekhika…thanks a lot

    54. Vishnusri on May 25, 2017 8:29 pm

      Hi pallavi akka nenu from nellore nvu Telugu wow then me,u,sri di and many more members are there pallavi akka I think u live in Bangalore??Am I correct?? Anyways nice to meet u pallavi akka????

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 4:01 am

        hey i am also a telugite ..you did not include my name in the list of telugites

    55. Jhanvi H Patel on May 25, 2017 9:27 pm

      ‌Hello Di! This is Jhanvi from Ahmedabad. I am doing bsc with physics and I AM YOUR BIGGGGGG FAN… From last one and a half year I was a silent reader in this website. I read many ff’s and many OSs’ but I didn’t comment on any, I prefer to be a silent reader always because my English is very tuta – futa 😛 and so by commenting in English I don’t want to spoil my reputation :D, but your writing skill, your story, your way to express emotions were forcing me to comment and finally today I do it… Di I very much addicted by you and I am literally waiting for your ff daily. In the morning my first work after waking up is to check whether your ff update or not and is update then I instantly read it then only I get up from my bed… Please if possible don’t end it here but if you want to stop then do it. But then you have to promise that you will come back with new DHAMAKA… Ok now that’s it for today ;P bye Di and ALL THE VERY BEST FOR YOUR FF And last but not the least I AM YOUR VERYYYYY BIGGGGG FAN…? And as this is my first commnent please ignore grammatical mistake in this comment as u know my English ;P

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 4:06 am

        Hey Jhanvi…first of all thank you for such an awesome post for me…and secondly English is never a hindrance…even i am not so perfect in English when compared to this gen writers……so leave that notion of dear…by the way your english is way far better than me…….

        awee so sweet to know you wait for my FF daily….i am so so happy to know this…thanks a lot dear for saying so…secondly this FF will continue for few more episodes and then end…

        After i end this Ff i will be taking a much needed break to bounce back with something new….

        lastly …please do post your opinion whenever you get time…i will be feeling so very happy …

        Loads of best wishes to you and lots of love to you

    56. Madhuani on May 25, 2017 9:32 pm

      Hey di,first of all congratulations to you for your silver jubilee.
      Today’s episode was full of emotions and I don’t like it but loved it.
      You shouldn’t stop here di plz continue it it’s awesome.

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 4:06 am

        Thank you so much Maguani…thanks a lot for ketting me know you liked this episode….i will continue for few more episodes before i end this ff……that’s a promise

    57. Komal on May 25, 2017 9:46 pm

      Continue plz??…..i love your ff

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 4:07 am

        Thank you so much Komal…thanks a lot…i will continue this ff for few more episodes…

    58. Nida on May 26, 2017 6:02 am

      Ufff .. amazing ? incredibly amazing ?… dare not to stop … it’s really out of the world ? .. and Thank you ? soo much for just rewinding the memories of ‘ the Great ? Wall Of Shivaay ‘

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 11:48 am

        Ufff…finally saw your response……after you said will i even dare to stop…but will not drag it too much…i have left some loose ends after i join them i will end the ff ………..thank you so much dear…and YOUR SHIVAAY WILL ALWAYS BE GREAT WALL OF SHIVAAY

    59. Shivika on May 26, 2017 8:27 am

      Awesome….Loved it….
      Full of emotions….
      Sahil-Tej convo was cute….
      “The Great Wall of SSO” is back…
      Long awaited reunion…..
      waiting fr d nxt… 🙂
      PS: Sorry fr d late comment

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 11:47 am

        Thank you so much Shivika….thanks a lot…….no worries dear you posted your opinion sooner or later doesn’t matter

    60. Anu16 on May 26, 2017 1:29 pm

      Wow major reunion of pinky n anika n pinky n mahi… just loved it…. of course i would Love to read more from u… sorry for late comment… by the way i read the inseparables n unbelievable truth n the os’s of yours …they r simply awesome… post soon…

      • VHM on May 26, 2017 3:42 pm

        Thank you so much Anu….thanks a lot for posting your opinion…i am so glad to know you liked it…yeah will continue for few more episodes and end it at on a good note rather than dragging…..awee thank you for taking time in reading those FF’s and OS”s …thanks a lot

    61. Nita D on June 8, 2017 12:21 am

      Episode 20
      i knew, yeh Anika shanti se baath hi nahi sakti….but she is doing it for Shivaay’s happiness only….but i hope he doesn’t get angry on her…..kya Khidkitod plan banaya hai usne….

      waah….we have a saying which goes like ‘bhavtu hatu ane ved ee kayu (u like it and the doctor also prescribes the same)’ which means u got that only want u desired for….same is the case with AniHi….cause making shivaay agree to go early that too to was almost impossible….
      the letter….Shivaay, Tej, T V Bajaj, Chabbras, Gogoi….all under one roof…full on hungama ki planning hai aapki aage…..

      Tej bhi ek piece hai…Omrumya ki tarah net pe hi check kar leta….wari milne jana hai hotel…kahi sab saath mein mil gaye toh wapis problem…..aur aap bhi wahin pe episode khatam kar do….chalo Omri n Rumya left before that…typical bollywood….

      thank god that i dont have to wait for u to upload the next epsiode….otherwise mein toh suspense mein mar hi jaati….

      • VHM on June 8, 2017 12:54 am

        Ha ha ha…Anika aur Mahi ka khidkitodh plan implement hone se pehle Shivaay ne chakka maar diya…haan sab milenge aur agey agey sab raita phelayenge jo baaki sametenge…agar Tej aur OmRi , RuMya pehle mil jaathe tho mere plot ka OMM ho jaata….haan bollywood ko credit dena banta hain aur bollywood se jyada Indian Television Serials ko credit bhi dena chahiye…wink wink wink…aree marne warne ki baat mat karo…hamesha khush hi raho aur mere saath dene keliye lamba jiyoo

      • Nita D on June 8, 2017 1:05 am

        ab aap bol rahe ho toh maan leti hu….aapki baat sir aakhon pe….
        yeh 37 episodes mein aap ne bahot se raite phelaey hoge woh toh mein samaj gai hu….par aase aase sameta hoga ke koi soch bhi nahi paaye…..kaha ko kahin se connect karke, koi soch bhi na sake ase…. ekdum khidkitod….

    62. Nita D on June 8, 2017 1:00 am

      Episode 21
      So finally Tej has melted….wow…n he said he will do something so that shivaay permanently stay back….my detective wala antenna is rising n now i feel Anika n Tej’s plan will be something similar….and as much as i know u, u will definitely add some more drama n twists n turn to it…..
      but the best part is everybody knows each other so well….i mean (1) Anika knew that Tej and Shivaay both won’t agree of Shivaay’s return until he is proved to be an Oberoi and that also only through Kamini n not through Pinky….(2) Tej knew Shivaay wont come back…uska zameer nahi manega (his POV in this episode)…(3) Shivaay knows bade papa won’t be able to throw his ideologies away so soon….this itself shows the family’s bonding….
      Shivaay’s dialouges also prove that he’s gonna be very angry on Anika when he comes to know about it….and more if he comes to know between the mission….and that precisely what will happen….cause i know u….

      Kya super planning hai di..aap bhi CID mein apply kar hi do ab….

      Anika my God….this girl knows how to get things done from her husband….(aapne bhi kabhi asa kuch try kiya hai kya Jiju ke saath 😉 😉 )….but her intentions were good only….n her reason is justified….the world should know Mahi as well….

      and ek Teer do Shikar….GOBE bhi promote ho gaya….no doubt why Oberois have such a big business empire….personal relations solve karte karte bhi business badhao….
      Tej’s work made easy with this interview….i have a very gut feeling that Tej is also planning something similar….

      wow….now Ranveer-Kamini will come out of hiding….they took the bait….

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