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Home»Fan Fiction»our love story RAGSAN part 5
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our love story RAGSAN part 5

vinuBy vinuNovember 8, 201734 Comments3 Mins Read
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Next day @library

San is crying and sitting in the library. …

Rag who just come …..
Rag: sanskar
San:feels extreme happy by seeing her and goes towards to hug her but stopped himself (by thinking of the incident) ….
By lowering his head murmured in low voice “SORRY”…I don’t know y I did like that but I’m not in my sense And (he left in middle not able to complete it)
I promise I’ll never touch u,, being with you is enough for me but i can’t able to see u going away from me…..plz forgive me…

Rag:eyes him lovingly (who is standing in front of him with bowed head)
San:ragi…
Rag:(before he says) y do u love me this much???
San:shook his head up and see her.. Ragini i…..
Rag:before he completes Ragini hugged him tightly (but doesn’t respond the hug)
She breaks the hug..
San looks at her confusingly.. .
Rag:at that time.. At the time she stammers (not getting words)
San:plzzz
Rag:closed her eyes ,,,,I allowed u to kiss me,, I didn’t stop u so I feel,, (pause) Wat u will think of me,, u think u think (again stammers)
San:holds her hand, look into my eyes.. Do you know which place u r in my heart? ?I’ll never think abt u like that
Rag:i know sanskar but my stupid mind confused me,,that’s y I didn’t attend ur call at first,, after I realized I called u but it was not reachable becaz I went to my hometown na… .
San:thanks for accepting ur mind is stupid. .
Rag:glares him and turns opposite side
San:kk sry he goes in front of her..
Rag:im not angry for that..
San:then
Rag:u thought that I’ll leave you na
San:then Wat will I think,, u ran away after I kissed you,, not even ran away disappeared for one day,, first time without informing me (he feels bad)
Rag:actually uncle(shekar) called me yesterday that swara(shekars daughter)
College (where she is studying is closed because of some approval problem),, and she is scared of her future that’s y I went immediately.. ..
San:is problem solved now
Rag:yes sanskar,, government announced that students studied there will get seats in other colleges shortly,,
San:thats great news… Now she is fine
Rag:sry
San:no I only should tell sorry becaz I’m only always misunderstanding u
Rag:no sanskar becaz I’m only the cause of our misunderstanding
…san:no
Rag”:i know sanskar how much you will be worried yesterday… Her ? eyes became moist

San:plz by saying he went to touch her cheek.. But stopped his action,changed the topic by saying ..smile ragu plz

Rag:who senses it… Goes close towards him and kissed him on his lips…(showing her love but sanskar doesn’t respond it he widened his eyes )after they break it

Rag:little angrily I’m sorry for that day but if u behave like this.. I don’t know Wat I’ll do,,, u have all rights on me…. Before she completes sanskar pulled her and kissed her passionately….

After few minutes
San is sleeping in Ragini’s lap
Rag is carcasseing his hair…

Rag:did u meet ria
San:with closed eyes,, yes v three met but I was lost in u so didn’t talk to her properly…
Rag::kk in low voice shall v leave
San:no
Rag:time is 4.50
San:twisted his lips y time is not stopping in 4.00 itself
Rag:blushses and hits him playfully….

Guys do u people really like it or shall I end it… Becax comments are low that’s y asking… Plz say the truth..

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    34 Comments

    1. Satya on November 8, 2017 11:50 pm

      Awesomme,please dont end it,its really superb please continew.

      • vinu on November 9, 2017 2:02 pm

        Thanks satya

    2. vini on November 9, 2017 5:51 am

      awesome

      • vinu on November 9, 2017 2:03 pm

        Thanks vini. ..

    3. aditi on November 9, 2017 6:48 am

      Fabulous yaar. Don’t dare to think about stopping. I’m the second commenter 2day.

      • vinu on November 9, 2017 2:04 pm

        Thank u aditi. .i

    4. mk on November 9, 2017 7:33 am

      Amazing dr ragsan loves for eachother is beautiful. Don’t say am gonna ending. Now exam time. All are busy with their exams. Even I’m also busy I’m taking 9, 10,11,12 classes but also want to respect my dearie writer’s that y I commenting regularly. And most importantly love my RAGSAN to the core of my heart so I should spend my time for my RAGSAN. Whenever u people saying we got low comments so gonna end its hurting us dr. Plsssssssssss don’t say like that. Sorry if talk anything wrong.

      • vinu on November 9, 2017 2:09 pm

        Sry mk I thought u people didn’t like it that’s y I asked like that.. Sry for that.. I understood ur situation. .

        Thanks alot for commenting to my ff regularly..

    5. dharani on November 9, 2017 8:27 am

      Awesome

      • vinu on November 9, 2017 2:00 pm

        Thank u dharani

    6. aleeza on November 9, 2017 12:12 pm

      Awesome

      • vinu on November 9, 2017 1:58 pm

        Thank u aleeza

    7. Suma123 on November 9, 2017 12:12 pm

      It’s awesome Yaar …don’t end it …

      • vinu on November 9, 2017 1:37 pm

        Thank you suma123…i won’t end it

    8. Asw on November 9, 2017 12:28 pm

      Amazing yaar don’t end it keep going

      • vinu on November 9, 2017 2:10 pm

        Thanks asw

    9. lovely7 on November 9, 2017 12:47 pm

      Awesome

      • vinu on November 9, 2017 2:13 pm

        Thanks lovely7

    10. Suma123 on November 9, 2017 2:53 pm

      Look at the likes for FF and say dear….most liked FF so don’t stop it yaaaaaaar

    11. Ammy on November 9, 2017 3:49 pm

      Awesome.plz don’t end this dear

    12. manu on November 9, 2017 4:15 pm

      Nyc

    13. moni on November 9, 2017 4:52 pm

      Superb. Don’t end this story. Update I’m only your’s

    14. sug on November 9, 2017 5:25 pm

      Ossommmmmm. Poor sanskar how much he scared??

    15. RAGSANIAN on November 9, 2017 5:39 pm

      Amazinggggggggg. Don’t end this

    16. nive on November 9, 2017 6:14 pm

      Aww cute update sissy. Don’t break my heart by saying ending

    17. vani on November 9, 2017 6:30 pm

      Superb dear

    18. shalini on November 9, 2017 6:50 pm

      Beautiful awesome chappy. Waiting for I’m only your’s

    19. maha on November 9, 2017 7:11 pm

      Awesome

    20. keerthi on November 9, 2017 7:57 pm

      Awesomeee

    21. PriyaS on November 9, 2017 8:16 pm

      Nice

    22. raguzz01 on November 9, 2017 8:19 pm

      superb….plz don’t stop it…

    23. geet on November 9, 2017 9:01 pm

      Superb

    24. Rikashini on November 9, 2017 9:27 pm

      Awesome

    25. Rehna on November 11, 2017 5:06 pm

      Superb dear

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