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Home»Fan Fiction»OS: I love u – By ayushi
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OS: I love u – By ayushi

ManyaBy ManyaApril 6, 201745 Comments4 Mins Read
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Dev’s PoV
Hi!!!i am Dev!!Dev Dixit!!in love with Sonakshi!!sonakshi Bose!!soon to be Sonakshi Dixit!!as I am going to propose her for marriage!!!we are going to Manali via train with our friends Vicky,Elena and Bunty!!vicky and Elena are in love but Bunty is a player?who is bringing her current gf with him!!the train is tonight!!although I know when I will propose Sonakshi she will say yes but I am hell nervous!!come on Dev!!lets concentrate!!Imagine Kar ke nhi Bol paa raha pata nhi real mein kaise karunga!!
Dev:I love u!!girlfriend ban ja Meri…………arey nhi woh toh pehle se hi girlfriend hai(I love u………will u be my girlfriend!!!no!!!no!!!she is already girlfriend)
Dev:will u marry me Sonakshi????………..no………zyada simple hai(it’s really simple)

Dev:Ms.sonakshi Bose will u be my Mrs Sonakshi Dixit????
Elena:Dev!!c’mon lets go!!
In the train everyone is there except bunty nd his gf!!
After some time Bunty comes with his gf and on other girl
Vicky:Bunty Tu toh Sahi hai hum ek ke sath phase hue hai aur Tu do do lekar ghoom raha hai(Bunty!!we are stuck with one girl since ages!!and u have 2-2)
Elena hits Vicky!!??

Dev comes!!
Dev:so…………Lara(the other girl is Lara)
Lara hugs him immediately
L:Awwww!!!dev baby!!u know how I missed u!!!
Sona’s PoV
Dev BABY???iss Lara wara Shara ki Himmat kaise hui!!(how dare this Lara wara Shara)Lagta hai Andhi hai!!!dikhta nhi hai woh 27 saal ka bada ladka hai baby nhi(I think she is blind!!can’t she see he is a 27 year old big boy not a baby)
Sona:excuse me!!!can I talk to u mr dixit!!!
Dev:mr Dixit!!??

Dev’s PoV
Dev beta Jwalamukhi Phatne wala hai!!??Dev Dixit Tu toh Gayo!!!she is going to kill u!!?taapmaan(temperature)bahut garam Hai!!
Takes her aside
Sona:do u want to explain mr Dixit!!!
Dev:first stop calling me Mr Dixit!!
Sona:fine mr Dev Dixit!!
Dev:Sona!!!
Sona:Dr Bose!!
Dev??

Sona:open ur mouth!!
Dev opens his mouth ??
Sona:URGHHHHH!!!i meant speak up!!!
Dev:we were together in college!!and she has a crush on me!!!!and…….I……….
Sona:AND U WHAT?????
Dev:chottu sa
Sona:what chottu sa??
Dev:chottu sa bhi nhi Ittu sa!!!
Sona:WHAT???
Dev:I too had a lil crush on her!!!
Sona:LIL???
Dev:puppy face☺️
Sona leaves!!dev too follows her
Dev:but now I love u Shona!!!!babu!!!???
Sona comes and sits with other!!and Dev sits beside her!!lara comes and sits beside Dev(Dev babu ladkiyan mein Phass gye???) Sona takes a novel!!!
Elena:let’s play a game guys!!
Sona:I don’t want to play!!
Bunty:Sona don’t be a spoil sport!!
Sona:ok fine!!
They play truth,dare or situation!!First chance Sona!!
Sona:Truth!!
Dev:Phatu(coward)
Sona:what did u say??
Dev:Phatu!!!

Sona:dare!! ?
Elena:kiss Dev on his cheek!!
As Sona was angry she said no!!
Vicky:Sona he is ur boyfriend!!
Lara:BOYFRIEND???
Sona:YES!!!any problem??he is MY boyfriend!!!i love him!!!(and kisses him)
Dev☺️(blushes and laughs at Sona’s behaviour)
Second chance Dev!
Dev:situation

Sona:Now who’s the Phatu(coward)
Dev:yes I am Phatu but remember ma’am u said that u love this Phatu!!
Sona:aukmun(blabbers anything)
Vicky:If Sona and Lara are drowning!!who will u save!?only one of them!!
Sona?Dev?Lara? Us ???
Dev:can I choose something else!!
Vicky:ok fine!!
Dev:truth!!
Elena:so in this situation who will u save!!??(phir Phass gye)
Dev:Dare!!

Bunty:propose Sonakshi!!
So now Sonakshi is standing and Dev is kneeling down!!
Dev:so……….Na…..I…!!!
Sona:DEVVV!!!
Dev:I lo…..!!!
Sona:tumse Na Ho paayega dev(u can’t Dev)
Sona is about to go when Dev holds his hands and turns her
Dev:Ms.sonakshi Bose!! I LOVE U!!!ONLY U!!(points towards his heart)ITS ONLY U HERE!!i had a lil crush on Lara!!lil only!!but she was my crush!!u r my love!!my life!! U complete me Ms.bose oh sorry Dr.bose
Sona:it’s Sona for u!!
Dev:she was my past!!u r present and my future!!Ms Bose will u be Mrs Dixit??
Sona:no I will be Dr.dixit from dr.bose!!
Dev:Sona?
Dev stands up but before he could hug Sona he gets a slap??by Lara(ofc yaar ek ladki ke samne uski Itni bezti???)
Lara:tumhe pata bhi tha ki main Yahi hoon!!??

Saying so she leaves!!and Sona starts laughing????
Dev:this is not done Sona!!ek toh tumhari vajah se Mujhe Thappad pada woh bhi itna Zordar and u r laughing!!!theek hai main Lara ke pass ja raha hoon?
Sona:sorry sorry sorry I LOVE U!!mr Laal gaal
Dev:Sona!!!
Sona:??Acha baba sorry!!
And hugs Dev!! ??

Ok so this is it!!result tha Aaj?CGPA 9??
If u like it will come with other such stories
Tried to make it funny with ayushi touch
Love u all
And next ff hi hoga pakka wala promise??
Ayushi❤️

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Manya

    Ranbirian!viratian!devakshian! Krpkabian!shaheer's birdie!love to make people laugh or smile?!

    45 Comments

    1. Rekhadhir on April 6, 2017 11:46 pm

      superb.. awesome…

      • Manya on April 6, 2017 11:56 pm

        Thanks❤️❤️And did u read Happy DEVAKSHI happy family??if not do read?

      • Manya on April 7, 2017 12:04 am

        Here’s the link
        http://www.tellyupdates.com/devakshi-oshappy-devakshihappy-family/

    2. ShrutiP on April 7, 2017 12:02 am

      Awesome ayushi…loved it as always…
      Ranbir tha waha yjhd mein aur yaha Dev babu…bechari Deepika aur Sona….????
      Love you

      • Manya on April 7, 2017 1:43 am

        Ohh toh tumne guess Kar liya??
        Thanks Shruti?

    3. priya12 on April 7, 2017 12:15 am

      Ayushi, awesomee…nice…
      Jwalamukhi phatne wala hai…
      I luved this line so much dr..
      And last slap superbb dr…
      But dev’s cheeks would be red r8..so sad..haha
      Waiting for ur works..Post asap

      • Manya on April 7, 2017 2:29 am

        Thanks Priya??
        Will post the ff tomorrow?

    4. Vaishaali on April 7, 2017 12:33 am

      Oyyeee hooyyeee…..9 CGPA.?.. CONGRATS dear…!!???
      The OS was awesomeeeee and hillarious as well…how cute….
      LARA was such a spice….???
      Lappad bhi pad gaya dev babu ko…bechaare…????

      Very very nice OS….keep the fab work coming….??

      LOVE LOVE..??

      • Vaishaali on April 7, 2017 12:35 am

        Haa and in your words…
        Dev babu ki toh LANKA lag gayi….right..??!????????

      • Manya on April 7, 2017 2:29 am

        Thanks?
        Yes Dev babu ki Lanka lag gyi??
        Love love❤️

      • Manya on April 7, 2017 2:30 am

        Maine 2OS aur daala the!!
        Pade??

      • Vaishaali on April 7, 2017 3:02 am

        Ha padhe the…but sorry wo comment nai kar paai…was stuck in some work..?

      • Manya on April 7, 2017 4:36 pm

        Arey it’s okay bas Bata Rahi thi?

    5. akshita on April 7, 2017 12:44 am

      Loved it manya ??? abh plzzz ff b post krdo yr nd congratulations for the result ☺

      • Manya on April 7, 2017 2:30 am

        Thanks Akshita??
        Will definitely post the ff tomorrow?

    6. Ritika on April 7, 2017 2:05 am

      awesome. write another os. and post ur ff soon…

      • Manya on April 7, 2017 2:31 am

        Thanks and I have written 2OS before!!do check and read them

      • Ritika on April 7, 2017 2:53 am

        i have read them. sorry i could not comment. i am very busy these days. i can not comment on ffs too. b coz i am always in hurry. and i am very depressed b coz of devakshi fights in the show. i hope u understand. love u. bye….

      • Manya on April 7, 2017 7:15 pm

        Perfectly OK??
        I just wanted u to read them?

    7. Aarti32 on April 7, 2017 6:24 am

      Lara wara shara????
      Tumhare posts padh k humesha main 2-2 ghante tak hasti hu..Aur phir usi baat ko yaad kr kr k phir hasti hu..
      It was so comical n At d end it became romantic..
      Do write more OSs like dis..

      • Manya on April 7, 2017 12:07 pm

        Thanks???
        Will surely try?

    8. darshana on April 7, 2017 9:36 am

      Hey firstly congratulations for ur results..
      try get even more better the next time!..?????..
      the os was awesome?????…????????????
      but next time promise me that u will post ur ff’s next episode….
      love u??

      • Manya on April 7, 2017 12:08 pm

        Thanks Darshana??
        Yes I will try harder as they are boards this time??
        And I will post the ff today?
        Love u too

    9. rj12 on April 7, 2017 10:46 am

      Amazing
      If Dev Babu plays with girls feelings then chata hi milega ??????????????

      • Manya on April 7, 2017 12:09 pm

        Isliye toh padva diya??
        Thanks?

    10. Riti1107 on April 7, 2017 12:05 pm

      This was so cute ❤❤❤
      Thoda bahut yjhd ki yaad dilane wala OS tha
      But Ayushi ho nd RK ka zikr na ho ye to ho nahi sakta na
      Loved it
      Nd that slap in the end
      You nailed it???

      • Manya on April 7, 2017 3:13 pm

        Hmmm…Sahi kaha!!?
        Thanks a lot riti??

    11. V.V.harshita on April 7, 2017 12:50 pm

      Hey ayushi awsome dude????????

      • Manya on April 7, 2017 3:13 pm

        Thanks??

    12. priya9876 on April 7, 2017 1:01 pm

      Nice one…
      Babu..?? baby..????
      Nd jor ka thappad…??

      Jaldi jaldi FF post kar…

      • Manya on April 7, 2017 3:14 pm

        Thanks a lot Di??
        Going to post the ff!!shaam tak aa jaayega

    13. Heshine on April 7, 2017 5:13 pm

      Wow….this was such an amazing os dear…! Perfect plot..???❤❤❤
      Lovely and cute u know…! Do come up with more like this..!
      Their T/D game was…?????????
      Lara’s slap..????
      Amazing…awesome…
      And post ur ff soon dear…!

      • Manya on April 7, 2017 7:13 pm

        Thanks a lot heshnie????
        Posted the ff Dear?

    14. nikkita0194 on April 7, 2017 6:20 pm

      Same pinch for .9CGPA
      Congo bongo
      I mean congratss
      Cho chweet of u n this ff
      U know what u r original and what ever dialogue is used is referred 2 your day2day life I appreciate your writing
      Love u love u love u a loooooooooooot
      ?☺?☺??muuuaaahhhh
      What a gr8 n creative writer deserves
      ???

      • Manya on April 7, 2017 7:12 pm

        Thanks Niks?????????
        Love u more❤️❤️❤️❤️
        Gr8??

    15. fuggysona on April 7, 2017 7:46 pm

      ayushi it is splindid of fun
      i loved it and lara..???
      ohhh how dare she is to slap dev…
      i am gonna kill her
      and propose is wow
      and sona kiss dev oooooo……

      • Manya on April 7, 2017 8:11 pm

        Thanks a lot??
        Main tumhe Uska address doon????

      • fuggysona on April 7, 2017 8:52 pm

        yes fast…i will

    16. aamu on April 7, 2017 10:40 pm

      Hey….
      Ye ekdm phadu tha…
      Bole to jhakkkaaas…
      N muje lagta hai tum kuch zyada hi ranbir ki fan ho…
      Mene notice kiya…bohot baar
      Yjhd ka scene….
      But anyway..it was amazing..?

      • Manya on April 7, 2017 11:21 pm

        Woh sirf star nhi Duniya hai Meri
        I am his jabrafan!!woh bhi Badi wali jabra fan??bole toh jabrest fan????
        Thanks a lot???

      • aamu on April 8, 2017 12:04 am

        Hehe..
        Jabrest fan..nice haa.!
        Now i’ll call u miss jabrest fan/randirian…
        ??
        Meri duniya varun dhwn hai..
        ????.n ofcourse sk…salman khan

    17. Niki645 on April 8, 2017 10:15 am

      Omg, it was so cute!
      So much fun! Loved it!
      Especially the truth, dare situation..

      Pls post more like these!
      Love

      • Manya on April 12, 2017 2:40 pm

        Thanks a lot niki❤️❤️❤️❤️
        Love?

    18. Muthash on April 12, 2017 2:21 pm

      Lovely….:)

      • Manya on April 12, 2017 2:40 pm

        Thanks?

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