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Home»Fan Fiction»Opposite Attracts part 6
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Opposite Attracts part 6

charmingz25mkwBy charmingz25mkwMarch 30, 201716 Comments5 Mins Read
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Part 5
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Part6:

Sanskar’s house

Sanskar: so this is my house i know its much smaller than your house

Swara: its ok man just chill

Sanskar: so lets enter

Swara: yeah come

As soon as Swara entered the house she got shocked because the whole house was upside down cushions were on the floor and two boys were running behind each other with cushions in there hands suddenly one of them throw the cushion it fell near Swara’s feet

Swara shocked face: this is your house i thought you were the person who likes total perfection.

Sanskar (interrupting her): one minute

Swara: ok

Sanskar (loudly): Adi Lucky what is happening over here

Swara Pov

After listening Sanskar’s voice the boys stopped fighting and stood infront of him
I herd small whispering sound and saw one of them he looked about my age  whispering ” I told you right the hitler will be coming soon” and then I saw anothere boy he looked liked the age of Ayush ” I am sorry yaar but now think what to do” after hearing there whisper i could not help and burst out laughing actually i totally agree with them this inspector is a hitler only i mean i haven’t seen him smiling once also even with me also he didn’t smile properly. Anyway after hearing me laughing the boys started looking at me with confused faces. Then atlast inspector got some sense and thought to introduce us.

Sankar: so adi lucky this your bhabhi Swara she will stay with us for 6 months

After hearing that i didnt know why but i felt some sort of pain in my heart but anyway i ignored it so now i saw those boys giving me there introduction.

Lucky aheading his hand: hi bhabhi I am Laksh Maheshwari you are devar you can call me lucky as well.

I really like him i mean he is like me cheerful not sadu like his brother i think i am going to have good friendship with him.

Swara: hi Lucky nice to meet you

Adi hesitating: hi i am Aaditya Maheshwari you can call me adi

I don’t know why but he looks too uncomfortable around me. I hope ahead i will be able to do friendship with him .

Swara: hi adi.

Suddenly I heard a voice of a baby I turned around and saw a lady carrying a small baby boy i guess according to its clothes he looks so cute i couldn’t control myself and took him in my arms actually i love babies a lot they are so sweet and according to me they are angels send by god on earth but one minute whoes baby is this

Swara: umm inspector whoes baby is this.

Sanskar: actually Swara its my baby wait you sit over there i will tell you everything

After listening Sanskar i got completely shocked actually i never thought he whould be married let alone have a child wait have i come in between Sanskar and his wife.

Sanskar: Swara sit on the couch i will explain you

Swara worridly : yeah please tell me have i come between you and your wife

Sanskar: listen to me Swara first actually i have been married before but things didn’t work out between us so i took divorce from her and this is my child.

Swara: but shouldn’t the child be with mother i mean small children are usually are with mother

Sanskar (irritated): she didn’t want to keep the child so and please just stop this topic now

I looked at the baby he is soo cute i can’t believe his mothere didn’t want him

Swara: what is his name

Sanskar: Sanskrit

The baby is so cute i just cuddled him closer to me i still i cant believe his mother didn’t want him ohh the baby slept in my arms he is looking so adorable but right now I am confused I don’t know what to do I think I should talk to dida about this.

Swara: the baby slept where should I put him

Sanskar: come I will show the room.

I went inside the room and kept the baby in cradle.

Sanskar: Swara you sleep over here and I will sleep in the living room

Swara: why you don’t have any other room

Sanskar: no actually we have one guest room but its not clean so

Swara: ohk what about baby it will stay here

Sanskar  (hesitating): if you don’t have any problem actually outside there are mosquitoes so

Swara (cheerfully): no problem infact i will be happy actually I love kids so

Sanskar: ok so good night

Swara: wait Sanskar there is no one else in the house

Sanskar: yeah only we 5 are there

Swara: oh god it looks like I came in boys hostel.

Sanskar: yeah anything else now

Swara: umm your parents sister

Sanskar: we dont have any sister and our parents died in a accident 14 years ago. Then we stayed in our relatives house and after I got job we shifted here.

Swara: ok good night.

Sanskar: good night

I think I should talk to dida now I am so confused I don’t know how am I suppose to adjust overe here there isn’t any woman also in this house did i do any mistake of coming over here even ma was not happy with me staying over here now only one person can help me dida.

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    16 Comments

    1. Crystal on March 30, 2017 6:32 pm

      superb

    2. independent on March 30, 2017 7:34 pm

      Awesome dear

    3. sanu on March 30, 2017 8:16 pm

      cawesome dear…. update next sooon

    4. Simi on March 30, 2017 8:29 pm

      Superb…
      Sanskar have a baby ???

    5. SNY on March 30, 2017 10:10 pm

      Awesome dr…..loved it♡♡♡

    6. kat on March 30, 2017 10:16 pm

      nyc

    7. a on March 30, 2017 10:20 pm

      nice..

    8. ankita Gaude on March 30, 2017 10:42 pm

      Awesome next part soon

    9. Sus on March 31, 2017 1:00 am

      Nyc

    10. xshreyax on March 31, 2017 9:52 am

      Awesome dear…..

    11. Soujanya on March 31, 2017 10:43 am

      Awesome

    12. mica on March 31, 2017 11:56 am

      omg!!! Swara was rite… she comes to boys hostel 😀 😀 continue soon

    13. anu on March 31, 2017 3:00 pm

      nyc

    14. Vanisha on April 1, 2017 12:29 am

      Awesome

    15. Shifa96 on April 1, 2017 11:38 am

      Awesome..

    16. vyshu10 on April 9, 2017 2:21 pm

      superb

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