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Home»Fan Fiction»Opposite Attracts part 5
Fan Fiction Swaragini

Opposite Attracts part 5

charmingz25mkwBy charmingz25mkwMarch 29, 201720 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hello
Thanks a lot friends for supporting me and keep supporting me ahead as well
Part 4
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Part 5

An old man came outside to greet Swara

Old man: Namaste Swara baby I am Ramu kaka Caretaker of our haveli

Swara: Namaste Ramu kaka

Ramu: swara where were you your mom is so worried about you after hearing the bus incident.

Swara: i am so sorry kaka you all had to worry about me

Ramu kaka after seeing Swara got shocked Swara wore red color saree with mangalsutar adorning her neck and sindoor (vermilion) in her forehead

Ramu kaka: Swara you are married

Swara: woh kaka first let me call mom she must be getting worried

Swara called Sharmishta and informed everything that happened.
Sharmishta reached village next morning.

Swara along with Sharmishta reached court

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Court

Sanskaar came out of court and saw Swara waving his hand at her he called her

Sanskar: hi swara how are you

Swara: i am fine and yeah meet my mom Sharmishta Bose and mom he is Sanskar

Sharmishta: what did lawyer say about the divorce procedure.

Sanskar: umm actually I came to talk about it only

Swara: yeah what happened

Sanskar(hesitating): actually lawyer said we cannot get divorce before 6 months of our marriage.

Sharmishta: wait let me call some higher authorities they will surely provide you divorce.

Sanskar: its of no use this is the procedure of getting divorce

Sharmishta: so you people have to live together for six months

Sanskar: umm yeah

Sharmishta: ok so you both live in our mansion

Sanskar: no we will live in my house not in your mansion till she is my wife she is my responsibility.

Sharmishta: do you know how Swara have lived her whole life we have kept her like princess.

Sanskar: you can trust me I wont let her have a single scratch

Sharmishta: listen you are not understanding what I am saying

Sanskar: maam I am understanding what you want to say but even I have some respect I cannot stay in my wife’s house. ( no offence)

Sharmishta angrily: have you seen your standard I am sure even our watchman and driver have more salary than you and you want my daughter to live with you now I understood its your cheap trick to trap my daughter and get our property.

Swara was silently observing her mother and husband fighting and when she saw her mother insulting Sanskar she could not stop and angrily:

Swara: Enough is enough will u people stop fighting please and mom Sankar married me for saving my self respect and mom its ok I will live with him

Sharmishta: but beta

Swara: mom please

Sharmishta:  but beta if you have any problem just call me I will come that moment itself ok.

Swara: ok mom just chill if I have any problem I will call you and i will also call you 2 times a day now happy now come on smile i want that beautiful smile on your face now smile

Sharmishta smiled a little: hmm happy now

Sanskar awkwardly : umm you bring your luggage I will be waiting for you in the parking lot

Swara: ok

Sanskar left.

Sharmishta: i will tell driver to bring your luggage.

Swara: hmm mom see the time your flight will leave I think you should leave now

Sharmishta: yeah I think I should leave now but beta remember

Swara interrupting : but beta remember if you have any problem just call me right chill mom I am Swara Bose your strong girl so why are you worrying

Sharmishta: acha nautanki now I will leave now take care and when you reach just call me ok

Swara: ok ok mother india

After Sharmishta left Swara went to parking area

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Parking area

Swara saw Sanskar leaning on bike and talking on phone
She went towards him and tapped his shoulder.

Sanskar cutting the call: han baad mein baat karta hoon so your mother left

Swara without having eye contact: actually i am sorry for the way mom behaved with you actually after our father’s death she became very over protective about us. She is hard from outside but from inside she is very soft

Sanskar holding her shoulder : look here Swara relax and just ignore what happened few minutes ago

Swara: but

Suddenly her words stop because Sanskar kept his finger on her lips. Swara looked up into Sanskar’s eyes and both got lost into each other’s eyes but there eyelock broke because of her driver’s voice both parted away from each other embarrassingly

Driver: maam your luggage came shall i drop you

Sanskar: no need you give us the luggage we will leave

Swara: bhaiya its ok we will leave thank you

Driver: yes maam i will bring your luggage.

Driver bought swara’s luggage and left.

Sankar: so ready mrs Maheshwari to go to my home

Swara: ready mr Maheshwari lets see where I have to live for six months

Sanskar: hmm come now

Sanskar set her luggage on the bike and both of them sat on the bike and left.

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So did you like Sanskar ‘s this shade?

Do you think the way Sharmishta reacted was justified?

How was this part?

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    20 Comments

    1. Vanisha on March 29, 2017 11:03 pm

      Awesome ..post soon

      • charmingz25mkw on March 29, 2017 11:31 pm

        Thank you dear

    2. Sus on March 29, 2017 11:16 pm

      Awesome

      • charmingz25mkw on March 29, 2017 11:32 pm

        Thank you dear

    3. a on March 29, 2017 11:40 pm

      nice..

      • charmingz25mkw on March 30, 2017 12:50 pm

        Thanks dear

    4. charmingz25mkw on March 30, 2017 12:37 am

      Thanks dear

    5. Seebu_s on March 30, 2017 1:12 am

      Nice

      • charmingz25mkw on March 30, 2017 12:51 pm

        Thank you dear

    6. mica on March 30, 2017 9:18 am

      for Sanskar..rule is rule 😀
      Sharmita only a worried mother….awesome part

      • charmingz25mkw on March 30, 2017 12:52 pm

        Thank you dear

    7. Soujanya on March 30, 2017 9:44 am

      Awesome

      • charmingz25mkw on March 30, 2017 12:53 pm

        Thank you dear

    8. SNY on March 30, 2017 11:58 am

      Awesome dr….nxt one soon!!!!

      • charmingz25mkw on March 30, 2017 12:56 pm

        Thank you dear

    9. Simi on March 30, 2017 6:04 pm

      Awesome

    10. Shifa96 on March 30, 2017 7:48 pm

      Awesome

    11. sri on March 31, 2017 12:04 am

      nyc

    12. anu on March 31, 2017 3:13 pm

      nice

    13. vyshu10 on April 8, 2017 6:22 pm

      nice

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