shivaay kissed her forehead…..Anika begin to sweat badly….Shivaay could he the tension in her face….He lifted her chin….and asked….
Shivaay: Are you ready for this….?
Anika nodded yes…
Shivaay came close to her…Anika closed her eyes….But to her surprise she didn’t feel anything…she opened her eyes…and saw Shivaay looking at her…She was about to say something…But shivaay smached his lips with her…she was shocked by his action…Anika also turned no during this…she also reciprocated the kiss…Shivaay was not able go inside her mouthfully…he breaked the kiss …he looked at anika for approval…she nodded yes…shivaay again kissed her…but this was too hard…Anika’s lips were bleeding…but she did not care…but Shivaay just moisturized it with his lips…they felt the taste of eachother…Anika felt lack of oxygen so she was trying to break the kiss but Shivaay was not ready as …He was enjoying her fully…While kissing his hands were moving around the waist…sending shocks through her spine…now even he felt the lack of oxygen…he breaked the kis…now both were breating heavily…Shivaay was not ready for the long break…he started to kiss her jawline…Anika was now completly under his control…he kissed her neck …the shoulder…but he was not able to futher as her clothes were standing as barriers…but he was even ready to break it…he was completly making her helpless…he pulled her from bed and made her stand…he was kissing her….but his one hand was holding her waist…whereas the other was removing her saree…he heard tearing sound….he looked at himself and found that anika has torn his kurta…
Shivaay: ur so fast?
Anika blushed at his sentence
Shivaay also was not able to wait….he removed her saree in one go …only blouse was there…he was trying to open it bu found it difficult…but his patience didn’t allow him to wait..he torn her blouse…
Anika: Shivaay!…that was gifted by Dadi…
Shivaay: Sorry dear…i can’t control
Shivaay was mesmerized seeing Anika as she was fully naked in front of him
Shivaay: Anika ur hot…
Anika blushed at his words..
but she was feeling uncomfortable because of shivaay’s clothes..shivaay understood this…he undressed himself and begin his work…
He started to kiss her from the forehead till her toes…there was not a sinlge place were he didn’t kiss…while shivaay was kissing her private places…Anika was moaning..hearing her moan..shivaay got to know that she wanted more…he kissed her thighs….while she was moaning”shivaay”…he separated her legs…and begin licking her …She moarned harder…shivaay begin sucking..while his hands were playing with her waist and ass….anika was holding the bed sheet tightly as she was not able to hold the pleasure…Shivaay looked at anika…and saw that she was holding her eyes tightly….
Shivaay: Anika….Im gonna make u mine…r u ready…there’s no going back
Anika moaned: Make me your shivaay
Shivaay entered her..He looked into her eyes and saw tears ..
Shivaay: Anika…r u ok?
Anika: yes Shivaay…its the tear of happiness..
26 Comments
Nice
Thanku
Sorry for persnol qaustion but are you married superb write because i am married so just ask dont take me wrong next post soon you all writer doing great job hatss off ???????
No im not married…and thanku for the compliment
Hi. I really like your writings, but still this was quite inappropriate, as a fanfiction. Like, even if you had previously mentioned it containing mature content, still, because most of the readers over here are of around 13 to 15. And, you never know if there’s someone below that too. Not all are above 18, obviously. You’re free to describe such intimation scenes, but using terms like licking d*** seems extremely unsuitable, and awkward too, if the reader’s not much into all these stuff. I being 18 years old myself, would just suggest you that please avoid using such open words. THANKYOU!
Sorry for that …actually while writing we decided to add the heading it contain 18+ content,but in a hurry Shanaya forgot to add…next time we will be careful about it…Sorry for the inconvenience caused..
I’m so glad you took this positively. Nothing like inconvenience dear, just some inappropriate stuff, so mentioned. Hope to see you back soon, with your writings. God bless!
superb dear……..
post asap……
Thanku dr
Nice… but wasn’t it a little tooo much… but thnx for updating…
Sorry for that it was stricly meant for 18+ but while writing we forgot to add…Pls maaf kar do
Sorry for that …actually while writing we decided to add the heading it contain 18+ content,but in a hurry Shanaya forgot to add…next time we will be careful about it…Sorry for the inconvenience caused..
Nice ….but i think it’s little too much
Sorry to say that…
Hye ….i am silent reader but today i couldn’t control myself to comment here
Thanku for commenting…yeah it was indeed to much…was only meant for 18+ but forgot to mention while typing
Awesome
Thanku shuklarashi
#Shanaya
It is nice and hot
Thanku nitika
#shanaya
It’s was an nice episode. but ittiri koodipoyille ennu thonunnu .
Yes ittiri alla kurach adikam kudipoyi…next tym we will look into it
Saramilla ttoh…next tym careful aayal madhi…??
nice episode dr
Romantic part
Awesome dear don’t think of negative, I think you should explain the intimation scenes more openly. I loved it the word licking and sucking was also appropriate there.
When will u upload next part?