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One of the days in raglak life……. OS

rainaBy rainaDecember 7, 201658 Comments6 Mins Read
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To understand this OS, you all must read my previous OS “one of the days in swasan life…..” those who have not read it, a small recap.
Swara and ragini are sisters who are married to the brothers sanskar and laksh respectively. Swasan are married before eight years and they have a 7 year old kid anjali and raglak are married before few months. It was karwachauth, and ragini was waiting for laksh in her house, it was too late but he did’nt turn up and she was very angry on him. Anjali calls ragini and informs that swara fainted because of weakness as she also kept fast for sanskar but he did’nt come home till now. Though swara and ragini live in different houses, their houses are just a walkable distance that’s why Anjali called ragini. Soon ragini will go there with the doctor and after she goes there only sanskar will come from office (Anjali called him also) there she will scold sanskar for coming late and will also scold laksh. After she goes from there, sanskar will call and inform laksh that ragini is very angry. Now see how laksh is convincing ragini, to see what happened in swasan side, you should read my previous os.
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One of the days in raglak life…….
Laksh was standing at the entrance of his house keeping his index finger on the calling bell, still not ringing it. He remembered his bhai’s words, “lucky, go to ur house fast. Today is karwachauth na, ragini is waiting for u, not actually ragini, a volcano is waiting for you”. He gulped and finally rang the bell, after some time he received a message, “you have the spare key na? then what, come by yourself you idiot”. God! She was so angry. Laksh again gulped and went inside the house by using the key. He searched for her in the hall, she was not there, he went to kitchen and saw her dressed in a beautiful heavy pink sari, she was cutting the apples angrily. He slowly moved towards her, as soon as she felt him. She turned towards him very fastly and showed him the knife, laksh raised both of his hands to protect himself.
Ragini: were you planning to kill me? *asked him by showing the knife*
Laksh: no ragini….(interrupted)

Ragini: I don’t want to listen anything.
And before laksh could say anything, ragini threw the knife, and it fall on a steel vessel making a loud noise, laksh closed his eyes tightly hearing such a noise, while she angrily walked out of the kitchen taking the apples she cutted and moved towards the terrace angrily, while laksh followed her shouting her name. after reaching the terrace, she said, “look I’m very angry. Break my fast soon”. “listen ragini…..”laksh started but he was cutted by ragini, “what listen? This is our first karwachauth, and you don’t even care about me. Leave it, you boys can never understand our pain”. “ragini we boys can also understand” laksh said defending himself. “what you boys can understand?” she asked crossing her arms.

“I also kept fast for you” laksh said turning the other side. Ragini’s jaw dropped and her eyes grew wide, though she was feminist she never expected laksh to keep fast for her, suddenly from no where tears came in her eyes. She was so moved by this gesture of him. Laksh turned on getting no response from her but was shocked seeing her crying, “are you okay ragini?” he rushed toward her and cupped her face. “I’m sorry, I thought you forgot today’s occasion, that’s why I got angry. I’m really sorry” she said holding her ears. Laksh just smiled at her, one second she can be a lioness and the very next second she will be so much innocent. Laksh said taking the hands from her ears, “I’m not angry on you anyways, and one more thing never say that I don’t care about you. I love you so much and I will never let you die till I’m alive. You have to be with me till my last breathe”. Ragini smiled at his words and said,”I love you too” they both stared at each other’s eyes with love.

After some time, “ I’m very hungry. Please break my fast”. He said with puppy eyes, ragini smiled and nodded. They both broke their fast and after having a tasty dinner, laksh said, “ragini, I have some thing for you”. Ragini looked at him confusingly while he took a ring from his pocket and made her wear it. It was tiny but its glow expressed its value. “laksh….” Ragini said surprisingly. Laksh smiled and wrapped his arms around her waist from back and rested his chin on her shoulder and said, “I just thought of getting it for you. Do you like it?” “I love it” saying this she turned and hugged him. For a few days laksh has been very busy with the schedule that he could’nt spend quality time with his wife. And now they both did’nt let this chance go off and hugged each other more tightly and closed their eyes feeling their closeness.

After some time laksh said, “ragini?” “hmm?” ragini replied still enjoying the hug. “when swara fainted, Anjali called sanskar and informed him na. I mean if you faint also there must be someone to inform me, right? So why don’t we also make one baby?” laksh said naughtily while ragini blushed and then she broke the hug and asked him.
Ragini: that means next year also you will make me wait for a very long time that I will faint. Right?
Laksh: no ragini (interrupted)
Ragini: (cutting off laksh) and by the way, how do you know that swara fainted? I did’nt tell you about that till now.
Laksh: sanskar informed me
Ragini: oh! So your bhai would have already informed you that I’m angry, so you brought this ring to convince me, right?

Laksh gulped, while ragini could’nt control her laughter any more and burst out in laughing. Laksh looked at her confused, ragini pinched his cheeks and said, “laksh, you look very cute when you get scared”. Laksh by showing fake anger said, “you are teasing me na ragini, wait now….” Saying this he picked her in bridal style and started walking towards their bed room. Ragini giggled and tried to get down but he did’nt leave her, they both spent some romantic time with each other which they were not able to do for the past few days because of laksh’s hectic schedule. They both dozed off in each other’s embrace peacefully.

One day was finished. One happy day was finished. It was filled with happiness because they both were with their love, their life partner, their soul mate. They both drifted to sleep happily hoping for one more happy day, one more new sunrise………..
THE END
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sorry if it is boring

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raina

    I love music... the rescuer of my stress and boredom!... I make a wish and blow candles every year on 23rd of November an ardent swasan lover.. currently obsessed with riansh

    58 Comments

    1. lovely on December 7, 2016 12:58 pm

      Amazing

      • raina on December 7, 2016 8:44 pm

        thank u

    2. nikky on December 7, 2016 1:24 pm

      nice amazing next part soon

      • raina on December 7, 2016 8:45 pm

        thanks and this is an os not a ff. will try to come with some story in my holidays

    3. praju on December 7, 2016 2:11 pm

      nice

      • raina on December 7, 2016 8:45 pm

        thank u

    4. mica on December 7, 2016 2:11 pm

      today i make an exception .. i read raglak story.. omg… uughh soo cute

      • raina on December 7, 2016 8:46 pm

        aww! mica that so sweet of u, you made an exception for me. thanks a lot and love u sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much.

    5. Sindhura on December 7, 2016 2:13 pm

      Awesome

      • raina on December 7, 2016 8:46 pm

        thank u

    6. Arjuna on December 7, 2016 2:21 pm

      superb

      • raina on December 7, 2016 8:47 pm

        thank you

    7. shalini on December 7, 2016 3:00 pm

      Very nice ??

      • raina on December 7, 2016 8:47 pm

        thanks

    8. abi on December 7, 2016 3:02 pm

      It’s not boring
      It’s awesome

      • raina on December 7, 2016 8:47 pm

        thank you so much

    9. Priyashini on December 7, 2016 3:42 pm

      Its very nice… I hope there should come one more day also….keep smiling take care

      • raina on December 7, 2016 8:49 pm

        thank you and i will love to write, but my exams are going to start. so will try to come with some new story in my holidays. and about smiling, i will laugh heartily and be very happy once my exams are finished

    10. Jessica on December 7, 2016 4:01 pm

      Aww so cute

      • raina on December 7, 2016 8:49 pm

        thank you

    11. mynalove on December 7, 2016 4:21 pm

      only one word
      beautiful

      • raina on December 7, 2016 8:50 pm

        thanks dear

    12. deeksha on December 7, 2016 4:40 pm

      Nice dear….

      • raina on December 7, 2016 8:50 pm

        thanks a lot

    13. Simi on December 7, 2016 5:07 pm

      Nice

      • raina on December 7, 2016 8:51 pm

        thank you so much

      • raina on December 7, 2016 10:23 pm

        how are you?

      • Simi on December 8, 2016 10:51 am

        I’m good.. 🙂

      • Simi on December 8, 2016 10:52 am

        Best wishes for ur exam..
        Do well

    14. Raglakholic on December 7, 2016 6:31 pm

      Awesome it’s simply outstanding os
      Totally enjoyed
      Please do write on raglak

      • raina on December 7, 2016 8:51 pm

        thank you and i will definitely try come with one new story after my exams that is after 23rd december

    15. Ammu on December 7, 2016 6:47 pm

      Awesome dear

      • raina on December 7, 2016 8:52 pm

        thank you

    16. asra on December 7, 2016 7:59 pm

      awesome dear….loved it…

      • raina on December 7, 2016 8:52 pm

        thanks

    17. Nagamanasa on December 7, 2016 8:53 pm

      Awesome dear…Sry for the late comment actually I thought I commented but in reality I forgot yesterday even i did the same thing so sry but both the os r really awesome dear…Even ur ff

      • Nagamanasa on December 7, 2016 8:56 pm

        Ur ff is jst amazing dear…all the best for ur exams even

      • raina on December 7, 2016 10:16 pm

        thanks again. uff exams!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its not that i don’t like it, but kinda nervous

      • raina on December 7, 2016 10:14 pm

        thank you so much, no need of sorry. it absolutely fine

    18. Malu on December 7, 2016 9:19 pm

      Superb

      • raina on December 7, 2016 10:13 pm

        thanks

    19. Anju on December 7, 2016 9:28 pm

      Superb

      • raina on December 7, 2016 10:13 pm

        thank u

    20. jazzy on December 7, 2016 10:26 pm

      sooooo sweet

      • raina on December 8, 2016 9:52 am

        thank you

    21. Sreevijayan on December 7, 2016 11:44 pm

      Very sweet os dear..loved it…..

      • raina on December 8, 2016 9:52 am

        thanks

    22. Fats on December 8, 2016 2:07 am

      Great OS. Aww, RagLak were the cutest. I loved how they kept on teasing one another. Thank you for writing this OS. I had a nice time reading it ?

      • raina on December 8, 2016 9:52 am

        thanks a lot

    23. Vk on December 8, 2016 3:35 pm

      Awesome

      • raina on December 8, 2016 7:07 pm

        thank you

    24. Asw on December 8, 2016 3:35 pm

      Nice

      • raina on December 8, 2016 7:08 pm

        thanks

    25. chandu on December 9, 2016 7:01 pm

      It’ s even as amazing as swasan’s one…!!loved it…!!

      • raina on December 9, 2016 8:01 pm

        thanks

    26. Ragz_teju on December 9, 2016 9:41 pm

      superb

      • raina on December 9, 2016 10:44 pm

        thanks dear. its been a long time, how are you?

    27. hemalattha on December 14, 2016 10:13 am

      awesome

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