Close Menu
  • Submit Your Article
  • Featured
  • Activity
  • Members
  • Spoilers
  • News
  • Reviews
  • Poll Zone
  • Fan Fiction
  • Episodic Analysis
  • Humour
Facebook X (Twitter) Instagram
  • Home
  • Contact Us
  • Submit Article
  • Activity
  • Register
  • Login
  • Members
  • Logout, {username}
Facebook X (Twitter) Instagram
Telly UpdatesTelly Updates
  • Home
  • Featured
  • Spoilers
  • News
  • Reviews
  • Poll Zone
  • Fan Fiction
  • Episodic Analysis
  • Humour
Telly UpdatesTelly Updates
Home»Fan Fiction»one more chance to hold you twinj ff part – 5
Fan Fiction Tashan-e-Ishq

one more chance to hold you twinj ff part – 5

AnushaBy AnushaNovember 2, 201719 Comments9 Mins Read
Facebook Twitter Pinterest LinkedIn Tumblr Email
Share
Facebook Twitter LinkedIn Pinterest Email

One more chance to hold you twinj ff part 5

Night @ 3 kunj room
Kush wakes up rubbing his eyes cutely n goes near twinkle crawling n tries to wake her up by pulling her hair n pinching her but no response
Kush – ma..ma du..du. Tapping her chest n he saw here n der n looked at kunj n went to him n stared as his bare chest finding where to get his food n bites him on chest wid his small teeth but didn’t got anything he started to cry hitting kunj cutely kunj sleep got disturbed n tanu’s too she also srmtarted to cry
K – y u r crying kush n ahha baby y u biting my chest
Kush – du..du mum
K – ull not get duddu here beta ur mom can give u milk not me
T &k – ????
K – babies plz don’t cry u both r hungry na? Idea can I bring burger n pizza ll u eat
Tanu -????? mumma mum mum
K – omg how u both can eat it u guys don’t have teeth ryt n dis twinkle can’t feed u now she is sleeping now k come wid me n he lifted dem n went to kitchen he made dem to sit on floor n took feeding bottle
K – c I buyed every necessary things for u guys n filled it wid milk n placed it in babied mouth dey were drinking it cutely kunj smiled at dem n he to sat wid dem looking at der cute faces tanu looked at kunj n offered him milk bottle telling him also to have it
K – no baby I don’t want u have it know took her in his lap kush felt jealous n started to cry n he was hitting kunj n tanu kunj took him also in his lap n started to play wid dem later he took dem in room n placed on bed n made dem to sleep dey both were sleeping peacefully tanu held kunj finger tightly in sleep after sometime kunj made tanu to leave his finger n sleep correctly but her sleep got disturbed she woke up gave him angry look n took his finger in her tiny hand held it tightly n sleeped again kunj eyes filled wid tear remembering something he went to flashback
Fb

Twinj in Mumbai
Twinkle was angry on kunj bcoz he forgotten to take her for lunch n he went for his meeting she is sitting in room wid angry pout
K – oh meri baby gussa hey muj sey
T – ???? don’t talk to me
K – baapre itna gussa I’m sorry twinkle come na ill take u for dinner
T – no I don’t want u r very bad yar u don’t give me time always office ,office ,meeting ,meeting
Kunj back hugged twinkle n held her by waist tightly n kept his chin on her shoulder n kissed her cheeks
K – oye my lovely siyappa queen its not like dat yar I’m working day n night for u only na I want to give u everything u deserve n it was really important meeting twinkle understand me n from next time I’ll not do like dis k now plz don’t be angry on me sweetheart twinkle pushed him n went to sleep
K – I’m hungry twinkle come let’s have something
T – u only eat I’m not hungry n I didn’t prepared dinner for us
K – twinkle don’t be dat stubborn I’ll prepare something come n have
T – no no no n she slept without eating anything later kunj came wid Maggie but she was sleeping so he kept it aside he to didn’t eat anything n slept wid her holding her waist in middle of night twinkle woke up n held her stomach she was hungry
T – kunj oh kunj g kunj g ,g uto screaming
K – wt happened twinkle
T – I’m hungry ???
K – ????dats y I said u to eat but u
T – ???? u eat?
K – no
T – come na vll go out n have something??
K – now huh its 1 at night who ll give u food now I have prepared Maggie mey usko garam kartha hun aavo n he stood up but twinkle was sitting still
K – come na darling
T – I can’t walk take me der kunj smiled st her n lifted her in bridal style twinkle locked her hand around his neck kunj took her to kitchen n dey saw dat Maggie vessel was fallen down
T – oh ho baby Maggie fell down wt ll eat now I’m damn hungry
K – wait when kunj here y to fear I brought chocolates for u n gave her chocolates
Twinkle started eat it like kid n kunj was staring her lovingly twinkle looked at him n offered him chocolate
K – no baby I don’t want u have it u r hungry na?
T – eat na n she feeder him chocolates later dey both were sleeping twinkle held kunj hand while sleeping kunj kissed her hand n was abt to take his hand twinkle got up from sleep n gave him angry glare n took his hand n held it tightly n slept again
End of fb

K – tanu is just like my twinkle same innocence ,same behaviour n everything is same my little siyappa queen I can’t leave without dem now I missed u so much twinkle kaishe bathavu tuje tera bin mujpe kya guzara I was like life less body without u twinkle I was dying in guilt I know I did very wrong wid u listening to dat women that is my so called mom n u gave me punishment by going away from me n u kept my babies also away from me twinkle but I want to spend time wid dem n I want u back u punish me n hit me but plz don’t leave me plz n he to slept wid dem
At morning twinkle opened her eyes n rubbed it cutely yawning
T – good morning babies n today I had good sleep n u…n got shocked looking at kunj who is sleeping wid dem twinkle rubbed her eyes again n again n looked at him twinkle saw her surrounding n got shocked it is not her room n she looked at kunj angrily her babies also woke up n went to twinkle
T – how v came here babies n wt dis beast doing here I know he only did it he ll not leave us to live our life peacefully look at him he is sleeping peacefully wait n she lifted babies n placed dem on couch n she went to kunj
T – oye Mr.beast get up loudly but no response as kunj slept late at night twinkle looked here n der n took jug full of water n she threw it off on kunj ,kunj woke up wid jerk
K – what d hell n looked at twinkle who is looking at him angrily kunj gulp in fear looking at her angry face
T – what d hell is dis Mr.sarna
K – vo….vo ..t…win…kle vo.na….what..wh .aa..t happened now stammering
T – oh acha now I should tell u wt u did huh?? tumne take kyu leke aayr muje aur mere babies ko .
K – its our babies twinkle n twinkle happy b’day n hugged her twinkle pushed him wid force kunj fell on floor wid thud
K – ahha twinkle
T – how dare u to touch me n I don’t want ur wish for my b’day got it.
K – twinkle???? crying plz forgive me I’m sorry twinkle n cupped her face twinkle jerked his hands
T -stop ur drama Mr.sarna I don’t believe ur crocodile tears now
K – no twinkle I’m really sorry plz give me one more chance
T – oh u r asking chance to kill me again ryt last time u didn’t got succeeded in killing me so by taking one more chance u want to kill me n my babies
K – stop it twinkle just stop it I didn’t tried to kill u twinkle believe me plz
T – no I’ll not believe u again n how dare u to bring me here I’m going now
K – twinkle u can’t go without cutting cake u have to celebrate ur b’day wid me like before
T – oh really Mr.kunj sarna u think I’ll cut cake wid u n feed u no no it is never going to happen
K – it ll happen okay den listen to me if u don’t cut cake u can’t go from here
T – dhamki dey rahe ho kya?
K – no twinkle plz yar plz I was waiting for dis day plz twinkle cut cake wid me plz
T – no I’m going wid my babies now
K – I said na u can’t go I locked d door u can’t go out d door have passwords
T – what d hell wt u want now
K – I want u to cut cake wid me like before I’ll prepare ur favourite pastry

To be continued

( sorry for short update guys I’m hell busy wid studies n tq guys for those who commented on my previous episodes n wt happened on day when twinkle was going to tell him abt her pregnancy y its worst day I’ll tell in next episode love u all bye)

Share. Facebook Twitter Pinterest LinkedIn Tumblr Email
Previous ArticleKUCH TO HUA HAI ~TWINJ episode 70 (Happy birthday aamu and advance happy wala bday to purvi)
Next Article Tring Tring-1 (KRPKAB)(Ishqbaaz)
Anusha

    19 Comments

    1. Kiya1234 on November 3, 2017 1:45 am

      Superb episode and Babies ? was too good and comdey part to???milk ??lol epic yaar.. felt bad plz show flash back what happened in past with twinkle when she get pregnant ? plz this time post soon

    2. SS on November 3, 2017 3:05 am

      Amazing episode as always

    3. SidMin23 on November 3, 2017 4:44 am

      Nice and do show flash back

    4. Presha on November 3, 2017 5:28 am

      Awesome
      Loved it

    5. Riya on November 3, 2017 5:44 am

      Amazing episode

    6. rayna on November 3, 2017 6:23 am

      Superb episode dear..
      loved it very much…
      loved kunj and babies scene…
      and that milk part was very funny….Babies finding milk on kunj’s chest…lol…..
      loved it to the core
      plzz post soon and ur other ffs also
      love u loads

    7. msmahi on November 3, 2017 2:09 pm

      Amazing fantastic fabulous episode dear
      kunj & babies scene cute & funny

      plzzz post soon dear ab twinkle kya kregi …..
      luv u dear

    8. msmahi on November 3, 2017 2:11 pm

      Amazing fantastic fabulous episode dear
      kunj & babies scene soo cute &funny
      plzzz post soon dear
      luv u

    9. Unheard-of on November 3, 2017 2:49 pm

      Superb episode… ?
      Loved it!

    10. Sia on November 3, 2017 3:53 pm

      Pls tell waiting from so many days plss next episode tell what happened that day

    11. yashika on November 3, 2017 4:07 pm

      super duper hit epi!
      luved it
      twinkle is doing right with kunj because jb kunj ko twinkle pr trust krna chaiye tah tb toh usne kiya ni ab twinkle kese kr skti h uspr trust !
      luv ur writing
      keep writing
      keep smiling
      thanks for posting
      luv u

    12. Marrie on November 3, 2017 7:47 pm

      Lovely epi ?
      Post soon

    13. parul on November 3, 2017 7:47 pm

      i was waiting 4 ur story awesome epi dr just dont make kunj forgived easily by twinkle

    14. Twinj2000 on November 3, 2017 10:14 pm

      That was so amazing ❤️❤️
      Babies finding milk on kunjs chest was so funny ??
      Well Kunj cannot be forgiven so easily
      He shouldn’t be
      Post soon??
      waiting ??

    15. Ayesha51 on November 4, 2017 12:00 am

      amzng
      luvd it
      post asap
      love u ♥♥♥♥

    16. Mariam on November 4, 2017 3:28 pm

      Awsm episode dear and funny too..
      Loved it very much
      Plzz post soon and sajna ve also…

    17. Waiza on November 4, 2017 3:29 pm

      Superb episode
      Loved it as always??
      Do post soon..

    18. Ananya_DSK on November 4, 2017 4:33 pm

      AWESOME!!!!! Absolutely loved it!!
      Amazing yaar.. Seriously!! Such a perfect blend of everything nice…
      I’m anxious for the next part now…

    19. Ramya on November 8, 2017 5:55 am

      Awesome amazing
      Superb

    Sponsor
    Latest Posts

    Mangal Lakshmi 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Mangal Is Disqualified, Then Given a Tough Second Chance

    November 29, 2025

    Manpasand Ki Shaadi 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Arohi Receives Love While Kanika Grows Jealous

    November 29, 2025

    Advocate Anjali Awasthi 27th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Anjali Accused of Theft While Padma Goes Missing

    November 29, 2025

    Shiv Shakti (Colors) 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Mahadev Stops Ravan and Declares His Second Test Failed

    November 29, 2025

    Advocate Anjali Awasthi 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Kavya Misuses Mehek’s Jewelry

    November 29, 2025
    Sponsor
    Latest Comments
    • NRI on Anupama 29th November 2025 Written Episode Update: A New Alliance and Uncovered Deceptions
    • Subha on Anupama 29th November 2025 Written Episode Update: A New Alliance and Uncovered Deceptions
    • Subha on Anupama 29th November 2025 Written Episode Update: A New Alliance and Uncovered Deceptions
    • Subha on Anupama 29th November 2025 Written Episode Update: A New Alliance and Uncovered Deceptions
    • Subha on Anupama 29th November 2025 Written Episode Update: A New Alliance and Uncovered Deceptions
    • Subha on Anupama 29th November 2025 Written Episode Update: A New Alliance and Uncovered Deceptions
    • Anon on Mangal Lakshmi 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Mangal Is Disqualified, Then Given a Tough Second Chance
    • Anonymous on Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 27th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Intrigues and Secrets in Virani Family Wedding Plans
    © 2025 TellyUpdates - All Rights Reserved. Privacy Policy | Terms

    Type above and press Enter to search. Press Esc to cancel.