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Home»Fan Fiction»One brahmachari got married… TS (Part-3) b
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One brahmachari got married… TS (Part-3) b

pikachuBy pikachuDecember 22, 201640 Comments9 Mins Read
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Sorry sorry for late… Here enjoy last part of this ts…

Sanskar rolls his eyes looking at his stubborn wife and somewhat frustrated…
Sanskar (calmly) : swara devi ji… For god shake eat this soup… Please…
Swara : no no no… 1st call me swara…
Sanskar (let out a deep sigh) : swara dev…. Swara Please eat this soup…
Swara widen her eyes and jumps in her place…. Grins widely…
Swara : say again please sanskar ???

Sanskar (with irritated voice) : swara please have this soup…
Swara : thank you… Thank you… Thank you soooooo much… I love you sanskar…
Swara was about to hug him… Sanskar moves back… With calm cold face…
Swara gets sad… But again a naughty idea comes in mind so she just smirks…
Sanskar : now please have this…
Swara nodes in no… Vigorously…
Sanskar : now what???
Swara : feed me… ???
Sanskar : what?? ????
Swara : feed me ???
Sanskar : i can’t… Eat by your own hand ???
Swara : no no no… You feed me or else i will not ea…
Before she could complete… Sanskar stands up being frustrated and shouts on her…
Sanskar : ???then don’t eat… Swara devi ji… For god shake stop this nonsense… Why can’t you understand that i can’t be your husband… And you
are literally forcing me in this relationship…1st you marry me on my unconscious state and now you… I was leading a so peaceful life… But you mess up my life… Why can’t you understand i don’t want you in my life…
Saying this Sanskar rushed out of the room being frustrated… Without looking at that innocent soul on whom he brust out his frustration before some minutes ago….
Here swara was sitting all numb… Without blinking eyes… Sanskar’s harsh words were revolving in her mind… A long tear drops from her eyes… She close her eyes… Her head was spinning… She had high fever… She falls unconscious…
It’s evening… Swara slowly open her eyes… She was shivering… As soon as he gets up… Sanskar’s behavior comes in her mind… She breaks down in tears… She was not at all feeling well… She didn’t eat medicine… With shivering hand she takes out a pen and paper….
At night it’s almost 11…

Sanskar press the calling bell… But the door doesn’t open… He again press the bell… But just then his eyes falls on the gate lock… It’s lock from outside and a big lock is hanging…
‘sanskar beta… ‘
Sanskar looks behind and finds one of his neighbor…
Sanskar : arey aunty…
Lady: beta here is your door keys… Wo bahurani gave me at evening and told to give you when you come…
Sanskar takes the key blankly… And looks at the close door… She left??
Think of this question makes a void space in his heart…
Lady: good night beta…

Sanskar Give no answer… He just open the door… And looks at the entire house… It’s empty… Bibhuti kaka went to his village for some daus… He slowly goes to his room… It’s neat and clean… His eyes fall on the side table of the Bed a piece of paper was there… He slowly goes to that and takes the paper… He starts to read…

Dear sanskar…
I am sorry… Really sorry for troubling you this much… That day when you saved me from goons i fell for you… You know what from childhood when i used to listen fairy tells i often try to imagine my prince… That day after coming home when i close my eyes to imagine my prince… I saw you… I was sooo happy… I got my prince… My hero… Superhero… But for my badluck i didn’t ask you… Your name and all… Believe me i didn’t know then that you are brahmachari… I was so upset… I thought i was lost my 1st love… But look at my fortune… I again met you… That day i couldn’t understand that you were drunk… I don’t wanna loose you again that’s why i tied you with me… Then papa told me about your reality… I felt like someone has stabbed my heart… But you know what i never learned to loose hope… I thought to give my fate one chance… It’s like a playing lottery…

I thought i can make you fall for me… For you i change me… I leave nonveg… Leave all kind of western dresses… I thought you will impress… But no… I was wrong… By all this i was just irritating you right?? I know after my leaving you will forget me and this 2 weeks considering its black days of your life… But i will never forget you and these weeks sanskar… I will never forget… And i love you a lot… And will always love you only… I am sorry… I am so Sorry… Please forgive me and forget me…
Yours

Swara… No no… Swara devi ji…
Sanskar can see the tear drops in the later as the ink has scattered where where it falls… He looks at the paper… He was breathing heavily yet slowly and press his both lips for stopping the loud cry which is coming from his heart… It wants to cry out loudly but his mind… He himself is stoppin it… No why should i cry… I… I just want this only na… I just… Just want this only…
He makes a ball of the paper and about to throw it out but his hands stops… He again open the crunching paper and press it by hand to make it as old… He quickly keeps it in his drawer and left the room…
He goes to other room and sleeps on bed… He clutch the pillow to control his tears… He himself don’t know why the hell he wants to cry…
At morning…
Sanskar was still awake… He can’t sleep.. whole night he was restless… He can’t sleep… He was indirectly thinking about swara… (confused right?? What the meaning of this indirectly… Let me clear… His thoughts??

1)why i am feeling like crying
2)why i am not getting sleep
3)hmm i think i am habitual with couch
4)why i am sleeping here not in my room
This all are indirectly attached with swara right)
Sanskar hears door bell…
He gets up immediately and unknowingly murmur ‘swara’…
He runs to open the door… But his disappointment… Bibhuti kaka was standing there…
Sanskar’s smiles fade away…
Kaka: sanskar baba..What happened…

Sanskar nodes in no and left…
Sanskar’s pov…
I am sad?? I was expecting swara devi ji ?? But why…
Wait wait wait… She was ill… She was having high fever… Her soups and medicine??
Sanskar pov end
He goes to his room and finds medicine as it is… Is she alright… His heart and mind yelled at the same time…
Sanskar : i… I should check…
Sanskar rush out from the house… He takes his car keys and goes to gadodia mansion… It’s quite far… He reached… He was thinking how to enter… How could he face everyone… He sees a doctor and shekhar is coming out from house… Sanskar hides behind a tree…
Doctor : she is not so well mr gadodia… Her fever is very high… Take care of her… And han make a chart of her temperature…
Shekhar just nodes…
After doctor left Shekhar was about to enter in the house… Sanskar can’t stop himself and calls Shekhar…

Sanskar : sir…
Sanskar never accept this marriage that’s why he never consider Shekhar as papa… He always call him sir
Shekhar turns…
Sanskar : sir wo…
Shekhar (calmly): i am happy she realize her mistake… Don’t worry mr maheshwary… She will never ever trouble you… You are free now… And thank you for taking care of her for this 2 weeks…
Giving a professional smile shekhar left…
Sanskar left the place feeling dejected…
Sanskar comes to house and stands in front of bajrangbali…
Sanskar : bajrangbali… I should be happy right?? But why i am not… She left me… I wanted that only… But she is coming in my mind… The more i want to remove her from my mind the more she is tighting her grip… Please help me bajrangbali… It’s all because of you… Why you didn’t stopped me… I fill her mang in front of you but you didn’t stop… Why… Now why this heart is paining this much… Now it’s want to cry out loudly… Why it’s not listening… Why it wants to see her for once… Why…
He cries miserably…

After half an hour… He stops somehow..
Sanskar (wipes his tears) : no no… I am a brahmachari… It’s a sin if i think about any girl… I just can’t think of her… Who was she?? No one… A guest of two weeks… Nothing… Nothing else… Forget it sanskar… Just forget about her…
He tries to convince himself but her letter comes in his mind… He again cries…
Then somehow he stops and determined that he will not think about her…

But… It’s heart right… If we tell him stop my blood circulation will he stop?? No na?? Same way if we tell don’t think about her or his… Will he stop thinking???

6 months letter…
A bajrangbali temple… A guy in white shirt and black jeans standing in front of the idol… With closing eyes and folding hand… A priest came and draw a tilak on his forehead…
He opens his eyes and takes the puja thal from his hand… The guys face reviled…
Priest : don’t worry beta your wish will come true one day…
He smiles… Then again looks at the Idol…
He comes out And looks around… Same place but many things has changed,..
‘supppeeeeerrrrr heeeerooooo’…. The guy turned quickly….
Yes the guy is sanskar…

TO BE CONTINUED…

GUYS DON’T WORRY I WILL POST TODAY NIGHT… PROMISE ????????

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    40 Comments

    1. Rakiba on December 22, 2016 10:37 pm

      Missing it so much..
      .

    2. sneha on December 22, 2016 10:40 pm

      awesome soooooo nice loved it post the next part soon

    3. Sus on December 22, 2016 10:46 pm

      Nyc

    4. Kaur Daljeet on December 22, 2016 10:47 pm

      Awesome

    5. asa on December 22, 2016 10:47 pm

      awesome part. I love u r ff so much

    6. Tamil on December 22, 2016 10:49 pm

      Superb

    7. Stg on December 22, 2016 10:49 pm

      Awesome?

    8. Febi on December 22, 2016 10:56 pm

      Awesome dear……..

    9. Anu Rathore on December 22, 2016 11:03 pm

      Amazing…

    10. Ifza on December 22, 2016 11:12 pm

      Awesome

    11. Swarna01 on December 22, 2016 11:14 pm

      Yaar so much emotional. Upld next part of dis ff n life partner

    12. mou on December 22, 2016 11:18 pm

      superb

    13. aami on December 22, 2016 11:19 pm

      Aww god was waiting for infinity plz waiting post post today

    14. niku on December 22, 2016 11:19 pm

      Awesome…..n pls. Now update it on time…

    15. aami on December 22, 2016 11:22 pm

      plz waiting post today

    16. Milestone on December 22, 2016 11:24 pm

      Superb…..

    17. aamias on December 22, 2016 11:26 pm

      plz keep ur promise post today

    18. Deeksha gupta on December 22, 2016 11:26 pm

      Awsm ..superb ….

    19. Simin on December 22, 2016 11:33 pm

      Lovely
      Hope this dumbhead realises his feelings

    20. shinchan1205 on December 22, 2016 11:35 pm

      Awesome..

    21. tani on December 22, 2016 11:36 pm

      Fantastic

    22. mariyajap on December 22, 2016 11:44 pm

      Awesome missed it

    23. s on December 22, 2016 11:45 pm

      nice..

    24. Abdul hafiz(Uma) on December 22, 2016 11:50 pm

      Superrrr.. Next part post soon.. Otherwise?????✂

    25. deeksha on December 23, 2016 12:01 am

      Awesome dear…. Continue soon

    26. aamias on December 23, 2016 12:18 am

      Waiting for u to upload

    27. Arshaanya on December 23, 2016 12:31 am

      Nice

    28. DA on December 23, 2016 1:42 am

      Finally u posted it…was missing it….
      Well coming to the chappie it was awsm…? but eagerly waiting to see what solution you have in store for dis brahmchari sanskari sanskar……till den waiting for the update

    29. SwaSanFan.Goldie on December 23, 2016 5:52 am

      Awsum…loved it…read da whole ss tilll here in one go n i jstoved it..srsly amzing…plzz.continue soon..cnt wait to knw da Further story..plzz.continue soon.

    30. Nagamanasa on December 23, 2016 6:46 am

      Awesome dear…next one soon…

    31. SNY on December 23, 2016 7:43 am

      Amazing dr…!!!
      Plz nxt one soon…

    32. Soujanya on December 23, 2016 9:36 am

      Awesome…. Post soon…??

    33. mica on December 23, 2016 10:32 am

      waaa..crying crying crying

    34. vyshu10 on December 23, 2016 11:01 am

      Awesome…..very emotional. Whats d matter with everyone today….all r posting such emotional stories and i m crying continuously. I somehow controlled before reading this ep….and now again i started crying

    35. pooja26 on December 23, 2016 11:23 am

      haww
      meeet swasan soon…..
      m crying… 🙁
      post soon…..

    36. anu on December 23, 2016 11:32 am

      nyc

    37. aamias on December 23, 2016 11:34 am

      No update cheating yaar

    38. Simi on December 23, 2016 12:20 pm

      Awesome

    39. praju on December 23, 2016 2:56 pm

      nice

    40. hadi on December 23, 2016 8:04 pm

      Zbrdast post soon

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