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Home»Fan Fiction»Oh my mata (Surprise OS)
Fan Fiction Ishqbaaz

Oh my mata (Surprise OS)

Charms22By Charms22August 6, 201725 Comments4 Mins Read
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Hello guys my Twistinians, this is a surprise OS for you guys.

Important note
Before you guys read this story, please don’t kick me, it’s only for entertaiment and nothing else and you may have guessed on which couples it is. It is on all Ishqbaaz couple except for one and that’s MaRi(Om’s twin brother Mahi and Gauri).
End of the note and have fun reading this crazy story?

It was a fine morning in OM, before the crazy, jealous and angry storm was coming.

In Shivika’s room
Anika was pacing around her room lost in thoughts(you guys are thinking that she is in thoughts of Shivaay, you are wrong). “Mujhe khidhki todh pyaar ho gaya hai Omkara Singh Oberoi se(I have fallen in love with Omkara Singh Oberoi).” This was overheard by our con girl Ishana, who was smirking evilly and went to her room.

In IshKara’s room
Ishana went to her room and she smiled, while thinking about ta tanan…
“Mane pyaar tai gyu che Rudra Singh Oberoi na saate(I’m in love with Rudra Singh Oberoi).” Our sweet RJ Love Angel Saumya heard that, then she smillingly went to her room.

In Rumya’s room
Saumya was in her room and thinking about a new advice as the Love Angel. “Main Mahi Jeeju se pyaar karti hoon(I love my brother-in-law Mahi).”Our sanskari(religious) Gauri heard Saumya talking to herself, then she went to her room.

In MaRi’s room
Our sweet sanskari ladki(religious girl) became bold ansanskari ladki(unreligious girl) and said: “I’m falling in love with Shivaay Singh Oberoi!” Everything she said was overheard by Pinky, who went to her room.

In Shinky’s room
Pinky in her room was thinking about her feelings and then she said: “Oh my mata, I can’t hide my feelings anymore, I love Tej Singh Oberoi.” Jhanvi wanted to come into Shinky’s room, but after hearing what Pinky said, she decided to go to her room.

In TejVi’s room
Jhanvi was adament in telling everyone: “I love Shakti Singh Oberoi!” This was overheard by dadi, but fortunatly she was saved by an minor heartattack(jokes aside), the whole world slipped out from her feet.

All the Oberoi men heard, whatever they wives said, so they naturally got angry, jealous and were shooting daggers at eachother. So there was ShivRu. VS MahiKara respectively Tej. VS Shakti.

Scene between ShivRu and MahiKara
“My wife Anika loves you Om!” Shivaay said, while he was shooting daggers at Om and vice versa. “My Ishana loves this Dumbell Singh Oberoi.” “Oye, mujhe Dumbell mat bulao, Mr. That Has Stolen My Superwoman From My Superman(Oye don’t call me Dumbell, Mr. That Has Stolen My Superwoman From my Superman).” “What about my Gauri, she loves Mr. Stone Singh Oberoi.” Mahi angrilly said. “Hahhaha, we pranked you all stupid Oberoi men.” AnIshSauRi(Anika, Ishana, Saumya and Gauri) said. “What?” The OBros shouted and the girls replied back: “yeah, we wanted to see what our husbands would do, when they get to know that their wives love someone else and now we know that you are ready to fight for us!”
End of their scene

Scene between Tej and Shakti
Tej and Shakti were fighting and it looked like World War 3 is going to start. “I hate you Tej Bhaiya, my wife loves you and not me!” “Yeah, what about my wife she loves you!”What the hell!” “Shut up both of you!” Pinky and Jhanvi shouted. “Why should we?” they asked and the wives answered back: “because we pranked you!” All Oberoi women shouted: “We won the game!” “Not yet!” The Oberoi men shouted, while they pushed their wives into the pool and dadi laughed at it wholeheartedly.
End of their scene

The End!

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    25 Comments

    1. fati on August 6, 2017 12:33 am

      This is was little but I tell u it’s epic and light hearted and cute❤

      • AMkideewani on August 6, 2017 12:26 pm

        Thanks a lot dear??

    2. Shrusvri on August 6, 2017 12:36 am

      Trust me bahut bekar tha??????????sorry to say this but its true

      • AMkideewani on August 6, 2017 12:35 pm

        Hello you don’t have to like it and why did you comment, id find it bekaar? For every author their work is something special:)

    3. Aarti on August 6, 2017 4:36 am

      Its ok… only if u have added more feelings and details , it would have been much better…

      • AMkideewani on August 6, 2017 12:32 pm

        Thanks a lot, next time I read trough it again:)

    4. Jerry_36 on August 6, 2017 8:35 am

      Hey dear ! Its awesome, I enjoyed every bit of it. Loved it, take care❤

      • AMkideewani on August 6, 2017 12:29 pm

        Thanks a lot Jerru❤️❤️❤️

    5. Richa19 on August 6, 2017 12:46 pm

      omg sam! !!! tune toh sach mein o my mata kar di saare o bros ki ????? loved it sooo much! !!!! keep going…… n happy friendship day! !!!?????

      • AMkideewani on August 6, 2017 1:59 pm

        Aww thanks a lot Richu and happy friendship day to you too yaar❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

    6. Nita D on August 6, 2017 1:46 pm

      Hilarious…!

      • AMkideewani on August 6, 2017 1:59 pm

        Thank you so much???

    7. Akshaya on August 6, 2017 2:01 pm

      Awesome. But I felt tejanvi and shinky where hilarious

      • AMkideewani on August 6, 2017 7:57 pm

        Thanks a lot dear and yeah they were hilarious????

    8. Archisha on August 6, 2017 2:04 pm

      Lol ???. After reading every new couple I was like, “phail gaya rayta”. I knew it has to be a joke. Well, for fun purpose it was awesome and I hope you keep coming with OS and further with FF.

      • AMkideewani on August 6, 2017 7:59 pm

        Thanks a lot dear, do read Loving you was a mistake, In love with my stalker both versions

    9. Prajkta on August 6, 2017 4:24 pm

      It is epic… Really oh my mata hi kardi… Loved it

      • AMkideewani on August 6, 2017 8:00 pm

        Thanks a lot dear???

    10. UF on August 6, 2017 4:47 pm

      AWESOME EXCELLENT FANTASTIC INTERSTING SUPERB ??????

      Dear AMkideewani
      Main Tho Read Kar Ke Aisa Hua”Ye Ho Kya Raha Hai”?Kya Shocking Papu Banaya Obros Ka???O Bros Ko Ek Dusre Pe Jealous Hotha Dekh Kar Tho Hassi Aaya?O Bahus Rocked? O Bros Shocked?

      Take Care And Stay Safe?

      • AMkideewani on August 6, 2017 8:00 pm

        Thank you very much UF, for liking it????

    11. alekhika20 on August 6, 2017 7:33 pm

      Lovely os

      • AMkideewani on August 6, 2017 8:43 pm

        Thanks a lot dear❤️❤️

    12. Shivika on August 6, 2017 9:53 pm

      Lovely OS….
      It was too hilarious…

      • AMkideewani on August 7, 2017 12:27 am

        Thanks a lot Shivika??????❤️❤️❤️???

    13. AMkideewani on August 14, 2017 11:41 am

      What the hell, you just can’t share my work in other websites, because this story belongs to me and the others as welll

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