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Home»Fan Fiction»Oh Fish Not Again (twinj) -Chapter 5 ~ by Tara
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Oh Fish Not Again (twinj) -Chapter 5 ~ by Tara

taraBy taraOctober 3, 201646 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hey everyone.. so ur wait ends here… i hope u all enjoy the chappy.. umm as most u like kunj in this ff so i have decided to write it in his voice only.. if needed i will introduce twinkle’s voice later..
Link of my previous chapters:
http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=oh+fish+not+again

Oh Fish Not Again
Chapter 5: ‘A Sweet Surprise’
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“Kunj..kunj..” Sam called out. I was in no condition to face him. He called out for a few more times and went off. The next moment i fell asleep.
“ting tong…..ting tong” someone desperately rang the bell. I woke up; it was 4 in the evening. I realised i had been sleeping for so long.. and didn’t even have my lunch.
“kunj… kunj…” a female voice called out from the other side of the door. i understood it was twinkle.. my anger was still very much alive so i didnt reply..
“kunj.. i know u heard me.. please open the door.. i wanna talk to u..” she said knocking impatiently…, but my heart melts faster than a ice-cream when it comes to girls.
I unlocked the door and she came inside. She sat beside me…we looked into each others eyes for the next few minutes. There was no hint of tears in her eyes and in contrast my eyes had drained buckets of water.

“do u know why i have dressed in white??” she said..
I wagged my head from left to right to signal a big ‘NO’. she giggled. I hate girls when they laugh at time when other person has cried for hours..
“let me explain..Yesterday, when I went home I thought about u all night. However at the crack of dawn we received news about the death of my maternal great grandfather. And when u arrived at my house we were heading for funeral which obliged me to dress in white” she said and went quiet. Charm return to my face in anticipation of a positive reply..
“then what have u decided??” i asked… she gazed at me from top to the bottom…
“to some extent u are okay, but can’t match my standards” she chuckled…”and yes you are also a big fool who cannot read a woman’s heart” she said and ran to the other room. I chased her as she dodged me around. Finally i grabbed her in the drawing room.. she was panting and laughing simultaneously..
I held her hand and lugged her towards me..now she was in my arms..our bodies rubbed against each other at her slightest movement. I don’t know whether she heard or not but my heart was beating like a school bell , loud and clear.
“now tell me ur decision…”
“i have already said I can’t love a fool..” she said..
Now that was beyond my tolerance…i liberated my hands and took a seat on the sofa. She slowly parked herself by my side..
“angry with me??” she said..i didnt say a word..
“I LOVE U.. handsome..” she said… i jumped out of the sofa and hugged her… “I love u too”
A few seconds later, i felt something wet on my shoulder, so i glanced at it from the corner of my eye. A few tears had trickled down her golden eyes..
“why are u crying??” i asked…

“don’t ever leave me else i will die” she said..
“ no.. i wont…” i said nd hugged her again…
This seemed to be the best moment of my life till now…before i heard “kunj..kunj” Sam called out… i would kill this bastard for poking his dirty nose in my love story every time…
I opened the door to find… the full paltan was at my place.. andy, seema and bastard Sam..
They had come to make the list of arrangements for the festival…but they seemed more interested in my room’s stuff. Seema sat on the chair and switched on the PC.
Twinkle signed at me…
“shuuuuk…shuuuuk… kunj..” twinkle whispered. She was trying to convey some message which i failed to understand.
She then came to me and said “ shut down ur computer else she will open the files of ur erotic movies”
“oh.. i have locked them” i said and winked…
“hmm smart boy..” she said and smiled…
I felt like kissing her immediately but couldn’t.
After the discussion was over everyone was leaving… i pulled twinkle’s hand … “kunj.. i have to go…” i didnt really felt like leaving her.. a kiss would have been perfect for starting our relationship ..
“wait i have something for u..” i said
“i know what u r upto…”
“is it what??” i replied..
“u wanna kiss me right??” she said.. girls are very good when it comes to a person’s mind…
“no..not exactly…” i said..
“twinkle… “ seema called her loud..unwillingly i had to free her hand..
“bye” she said… and when she reached near the door she turned around.. “btw.. i won’t have stop you if u had made an attempt to kiss me..” she said and chuckled..before i could grab her she was gone..
A dozed off.. and dreamt about me and twinkle..
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Hey everyone….sorry for the chotu update..bt i guess u all enjoyed it right?? Ok important message.. idk when i will be able to update the next part..probably i will update one more chappy by the end of this week..after which m going for a trip.. so no update for one whole week… sorry once again.. but do comment..and stay tuned…

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    46 Comments

    1. Maggi on October 3, 2016 10:40 pm

      It was superb???
      I mean too cutee and sweet…
      Luvd it ???

      • tara on October 4, 2016 8:46 am

        aww tysm dear..
        ??
        love u too

    2. panchiii on October 3, 2016 10:48 pm

      Awesome,superb epi tara, my silk…. hehe……. d epi was jst superb……loved it…… wtng fr nxt one……. love u ?????????

      • tara on October 4, 2016 8:48 am

        thanks a ton… softie…
        next one?? umm lets see..
        love toooooo ????????

    3. R. S. H. H. P on October 3, 2016 10:51 pm

      Awesome episode tara I’m in love with kunj in this ff loved each n every part of it waiting for next episode hope I’m first one to comment ???????????????????? love you dear

      • tara on October 4, 2016 8:53 am

        awwwwwww ??????
        thank u thank u thank u so much….
        love u too sweetheart

    4. Chandra(chanu) on October 3, 2016 11:14 pm

      nice epi . gussa maat hona . janti hu bohot din se cmnt nehi kiya .

      • tara on October 4, 2016 8:56 am

        lol.. mein itni jaldi gussa nhi hoti..
        bt m happy u cmnted..
        thank u for that

    5. shreya098 on October 3, 2016 11:19 pm

      Tara.. Love u for this??

      Thank god the white dress was for someone’s death

      Twinj??..

      I looved her last dialogue…??
      Naughty girl???

      • tara on October 4, 2016 8:57 am

        hahaha..
        u love only for this?? 😛
        thank u so much dear
        hehe ikr.. naughty girl.. 😉
        love ya

    6. Fan on October 3, 2016 11:29 pm

      Awesome epi tara!

      • tara on October 4, 2016 8:59 am

        hey thanks a lot ..
        sorry i couldnt reply to ur cmmnt.. i mean ur first ever long cmnt.. haha
        i will be very glad to make new frnds..particularly u..
        and yeah i knw u were a silent reader as i saw ur cmmnt b4 registration also..

    7. Payal .... on October 4, 2016 12:04 am

      Maza aagaya
      enjoyed it a lot

      • tara on October 4, 2016 8:59 am

        thanks payal…
        glad u enjoyed

    8. paavu on October 4, 2016 12:49 am

      Oh tara meri jaan it was so much lovely epi just cute lik u lovd it lovely muaah

      • tara on October 4, 2016 9:00 am

        aww ????
        tysm…
        love u too dear..

    9. Simiyy on October 4, 2016 3:08 am

      It was so cute

      • tara on October 4, 2016 9:01 am

        hey..thanks a lot..
        ur name reminded me of someone…

    10. Ramya on October 4, 2016 6:00 am

      Hey Tara dear
      Super episode
      Loved it
      Plss asap dear.love u

      • tara on October 4, 2016 9:02 am

        thanks a lot ramya..
        love ya
        i feel like i have heard or seen ur name earlier..
        are u new in TU.. dont mind.. mein thodi bhullakar hu..

      • Ramya on October 4, 2016 6:56 pm

        Hey Tara
        Maine ek os likha hai
        I think u heard der
        N Mai bhi bulakad hu.
        ?????

      • tara on October 4, 2016 7:14 pm

        oh hahahaha…
        i thot u r someone else..

    11. twinjfan.tamanna on October 4, 2016 8:02 am

      so so cute epi sara….plz post asap…

      love u..

      • tara on October 4, 2016 9:32 am

        aww.. aaj toh sabhi cute wala cmnt kar rhe hain..
        thanks a ton..
        love u too

    12. dreamer...arundhati on October 4, 2016 10:28 am

      Tara darlo i m ur jabra fan now.. Superb

      • tara on October 4, 2016 10:52 am

        awww thanks dear..
        means a lot to me

    13. SidMin on October 4, 2016 11:17 am

      Tara sorry for commenting Late but the problem was That I was’t active on TU On Monday and Tuesday when I switched on my Lappy I was busy reading it and forgot to comment so Its now that I am finally commenting Loved it 🙂 Twinkle accepted the proposal I felt so happy and the Last part where Twinkle said she would not have stopped Kunj if he would have kissed her was so sweet 🙂 Post soon 🙂 All the best for you papers 🙂

      • tara on October 4, 2016 11:19 am

        aww shruti..
        thanks a lot dear…
        m shoo happy u liked it..
        btw mmy papers are getting over.. tmrw is the last one..
        thanks for ur wishes..
        love ya

    14. LovieAasni on October 4, 2016 11:31 am

      Love it soo much…
      But ek problem ho gyi ..sorry I by mistake blocked you and donno how to unblock.. If u know plz tell…
      ?

      • tara on October 4, 2016 11:45 am

        thanks Aashu..
        bt wait u blocked me like how??
        wait lemme see..

      • tara on October 4, 2016 11:50 am

        HE I ALSO BLOCKED U BY MISTAKE.. LOL..
        i hve sent Tu a msg lets see

    15. Ruchi on October 4, 2016 1:08 pm

      Hey ‘Ta’
      firstly a big wala Sorry as i didn’t commented on the previous epi’s of ur ff… nd the reason is my browser… it always log out my account …
      but u know na tha i love ur ff’s…
      It was amazing…
      u nailed it…
      post soon…
      Lots of Love…
      Ru… 🙂

      • tara on October 4, 2016 1:11 pm

        awwwww ????
        ru.. ur cmnt made my day.. m sooooooooo happy..
        thank u sweetie.. muahhh

    16. aamu on October 4, 2016 2:29 pm

      tara…!!
      c m again here to irritate u………………..yeaaaaaahhhhhhhh
      t was just amazing…
      no words…but with dis all…a big CONFUSION as i had not read…n i cant readall d chappy…
      i had taken permission from my parents for a half hour a day to tu….so i cant read…
      can u pls giv a short summary till now in next…
      n yaa cnfession was outstanding…
      do cont…!
      n will miss u next week

      • tara on October 4, 2016 4:44 pm

        omg!!
        is this true?/ aamu…
        oh m so happy..
        can’t express.. thank u dear…
        sure anything for u.. i will post a summary for u and a promo as i wont be updating this any further…for a week..
        love stay blessed..

      • aamu on October 4, 2016 8:11 pm

        thankie…………………..do soon
        waiting…………..

    17. Sana(sanu) on October 4, 2016 3:42 pm

      Awesome

      • tara on October 4, 2016 4:45 pm

        thanks sana

    18. Purnima.agrawal30 on October 4, 2016 4:32 pm

      awesome amazing fabulous cute funny marvelous lovely epi

      • tara on October 4, 2016 4:45 pm

        thanks a lot dear…

    19. sanjanaagrawal on October 4, 2016 6:32 pm

      Awesome …. and l love ur profile pic … my cute shradhha …. and I will miss u come back soon …

      • tara on October 4, 2016 6:51 pm

        thank dear sanju..
        ikr u love shraddha.. and varun right??
        miss u too

    20. SidVee on October 4, 2016 7:56 pm

      Sorry sorry sorry for late comment.. actually navratri has started so am busy with that.. the epi was fabulous.. aww twinkle accepted kunj’s proposal ?? finally kunj got cheered up.. enjoy ur trip 🙂

      • tara on October 4, 2016 10:41 pm

        hahaha.. i was waiting for comment..
        thanks a lot..
        its ok.. i knw navaratri has started.. even durga puja is gonna start.. superb excited..
        thanks for ur wises..
        love ya

    21. Romaisha on October 5, 2016 7:14 am

      For a moment i was scared but then i saw her “i love you” and relaxed ???
      Just enjoyed it throughout! Loved it to the core di!

      • tara on October 5, 2016 9:20 am

        hahaha..
        thanks a lot romu…
        love ya
        TC

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