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Home»Fan Fiction»#off air serials#os competition#swaragini- swasan entry 3
Fan Fiction OS Competition Swaragini

#off air serials#os competition#swaragini- swasan entry 3

AkshayaBy AkshayaJune 17, 201736 Comments12 Mins Read
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Listening the chirping sound of the birds,a very beautiful girl who was nuzzling in pillow before wakes up yawning and stretching her arms to feel the air coming from a window nearby .she jumps from the bed kisses her Teddy and walks up to calendar.she smiles seeing the date and said happily dancing a lil : finally Swara Gadodia you are twenty .Happy birthday to me
she runs to a a room which was double of her room and was highly furnished and a lady of old fifties was sitting on an armchair sipping black coffee
lady: come dear
Swara runs and hug her : you remember mama you made a promise that when I will be twenty you will allow me to go outside and show me the nature
lady: I remember shona but still it would be difficult for me to send you without your Prince .Your Prince will be coming today than I will make you both marry than you can go outside to see the world

Swara:(disappointedly) but its my dream to see the world I spent the days with so much restlessness and now…
lady: I know shona but I can’t allow you.you are so innocent and the world, it’s so cruel and my bacha you don’t know they will use u crush u under their feet.just wait until your prince come
Swara ( innocently) : OK
lady: I’m going to pick him
Swara: who my Prince
lady: yes Sahil your prince and my nephew .meet him nicely
Swara: ok
Swara then happily went to her room and picks her teddy kisses it and said : you know teddy my prince is coming I’m so happy
saying so she twirls with the teddy
——–
outside the palace
a boy dressed in black checking His phone and watching house no.and said to himself : come Sanskar you reached your dream place now just get the precious necklace and then all will set and you will be rich (actually hero is a lil lazy and wants money for free)
then he saw the lady coming outside the house and locking house and sit in the car and goes
he : now its my turn
he than climbs the pipe coming from the window and jumps inside
now I have to find the necklace ,he said.

wandering whole palace he finally found it in the locker of a big room
he quickly put the necklace inside the bag not before self praising himself
as soon as he turns he found the most beautiful girl standing with a stick which in no time flies and hit him and he fall unconscious
*****
in the car
the lady was driving the car and a boy was sitting on the passenger seat wiping his sweats
boy: aunty this so hot here
lady: have some patience Sahil
Sahil: plz drive fast & on the ac
Lady: so many problem man .you know “TO ACHIEVE SOMETHING ,YOU HAVE TO LOSE SOMETHING ”
Sahil(sarcastically): I know aunty if you have not offered me half property of that girl I wouldn’t be marrying her.I don’t like behenje type girls
lady:I know my boy u just marry her for name sake.after the transformation of property you will be free you can do whatever u want.just give me my share then I want say anything .I raised her with fake love even I hated her cz she is my step daughter if her father had not died at wrong time leaving behind the blo*dy will in which all the property was on her name .you know nothing was left for me so I started the drama of being a good mother .I also stopped her from going out as I feared that she might get some brain .
Sahil: I know I know how much evil you are
both laughed evilly
*******
inside the room
a boy was tied by rope with a chair and was gaining conscious.he blink several times to clear his visiin .in his front the same girl was standing with her big doe eyes.her hands were crossed near her chest .
Swara (raising her brows): who are you ?? what are you doing here ??
Sanskar: WO …WO ..actually ..your mother sent me ..
Swara(happily) : you are my Prince ha na Prince Sahil who will show me the world
Sanskar(finding no way): yes I’m
Swara: then show me .what are you waiting for prince .come let’s go
Sanskar in mind if I will kidnapped her daughter then the lady will give me more money
Sanskar: but first free me naa . How will I show ?

Swara freeing him….
Swara : Opp Sorry prince plz forgive me ( pulling her ear ) Sorry l thought you are a bad person.
Sanskar heart flatters as he saw her cute antics and lost in her.
Swara ( shook him ): Prince ! You forgave me naa .
Sanskar ( cups her face ) :princess you’re so beautiful .no one would be angry to you
Swara blushes as first time someone specially a boy touches her
Swara ( shyly) :let’s go prince
they both seated in his jeep and move forward

in the whole journey Swara keeps asking many things as she was seeing it first time : prince what is that ??
and her prince kept answering her question smilingly like this whole journey passed they reach a small but beautiful house .
Sanskar jumped down and offered her his hand to come down she shyly places her hand in his
Swara; prince this is your house
Sanskar was lost in the glow of her face and twinkling eyes nodded
Swara: so beautiful Prince
Sanskar:let’s go inside
Swara: but prince mama ..

Sanskar: I will tell her
they both went inside .Swara lost in the beauty of the simple house in which everything was neatly placed.
Sanskar: I think princess you should rest for a while till then I make something to eat
Swara ( smiles) : prince you know cooking
Sanskar: a lil
Swara smiles : you are so good
########

the lady & sahil reached home but couldn’t find Swara and worried for their plan that it would not flop
lady: Swara herself couldn’t go somebody would have forced her.I have filled her mind against the world that she could not dare to go alone
sahil(frustrated) : now what to do ??
lady: we should report a missing complaint

sahil: and give her pic also with some reward in newspaper .it will help in finding her
lady:but reward ??
Sahil: (taunting) : someone herself had said TO ACHIEVE SOMETHING YOU HAVE TO LOSE SOMETHING
lady: OK I understand your taunt just one time she come than you will see what I do
sahil: huh

@@@@@@@

on the other side
Swara walked up to the hall and see her prince talking & laughing with some boy
Sanskar ( saw her from corner of his eyes): come princess meet my friend Laksh
Swara(smiles ): hello but what is friend,prince??
Sanskar : like you have your Teddy with whom you share your secrets (actually she told him all about herself in journey )
laksh (flirting): hello beautiful want some company
Sanskar ( jealous): behave laksh don’t start your flirting here (to Swara) he already have a gf
Swara : means
Sanskar: he is engaged
Swara ; oh say hello to Bhabhi

laksh coughs hearing Bhabhi
Sanskar giggles
laksh pushes cushion towards Sanskar and then Sanskar pushes it towards him laksh chases Sanskar and he hides behind Swara giggles and laugh whole heartedly Sanskar gets lost in her suddenly a cushion lends upon him breaking his dreams
the whole day passed in happiness

next day
Sanskar was worried as he saw her picture in the newspaper with reward of 20 lac and laksh was happy
Laksh: OMG I didn’t know that her mother would take an action so quickly.now our dreams are inches apart. give them their daughter and take our money.
Sanskar was numb
laksh shook him : what happened

Sanskar:(angry) what are you saying .have you hitten your head somewhere
laksh : what happened suddenly to u. you don’t want to give them their daughter
Sanskar: I don’t know
Laksh: Sanky don’t waste time try to understand you kidnapped her for money naa it’s time to take money….
a glass was broken and when they turned they saw Swara crying thrre
Swara: what ??? prince is he saying true …

Sanskar was numb
laksh : unfortunately he is not prince and tells her whole story
Sanskar (takes her hand in his) : princess see I know I did wrong but plz I don’t have any option …
Swara (teary eyes): you kidnapped me for money…
Sanskar (tears in his eyes): sorry Im regretting forgive me princess
Swara ( jerling his hand): my mother was right people are cruel they will only take advantage of me you used me
her words were piercing his heart
Swara ( wiping her tears ): now you need money &I want to go home .take me to my mother I can’t stay here for a second
Sanskar : OK
after giving painful look to eo they left in jeep
in the whole journey both were stealing glaces from eo background music thori der or thair jaa (listen this song it’s amazing)

They reach her house .Swara runs cryingly towards her house following Sanskar
Swara hugs her mother and cries
Lady :shhhshh shona now you are now safe tell me if he kidnapped you I will….
Swara : mama he saved me give him reward plz
Lady: ohh
Sanskar: no I don’t need it .good bye princess take care
He went not before giving her a painful look
Swara runs from there and locked the door of her room and cried guard remincing him and saw him sitting in his jeep .he saw upward and saw her stroller than smiled sadly and whispered sorry princess your prince is a thief
########
Lady: Swara now I can’t wait more you marriage will take place tomorrow only meet your prince Sahil .
Sahil: hey !! Shona
and tried to kiss her hand .Swara felt disgust and freed her hand immediately
Lady : be ready I don’t want further drama now so don’t complain
Sahil: and also we don’t know that you are pure or not
Swara looked with tears in her eyes towards the merciless lady who was not matching eyes now
@@@@
Sanskar was missing her badly .all her cute antics were haunting him and her beautiful face with tears in her eyes hovering over his mind
Sanskar mumbles: plz forgive me princess plz
He slept remincing her
Swara was pleading to save her : prince where are you old come here plz I’m afraid its all dark here plz
Sanskar : princess wait I’m coming don’t get afraid
Swara : plz save me plz
There was all dark and a shriek if Swara come which led Sanskar to break his dream.he was sweating badly

$$$$$
Next morning

She waked up late as she was weeping whole night hugging her teddy in her fate .she than went to greet her mother morning when her feet suddenly froze when she hears her mother saying
Lady : Sahil my son it’s just a matter of few days than you can go to meet your girlfriends I won’t stop you.just wait until the property get transferred
Sahil: I’m not listening to your talks as your step daughter is not allowing me to go close to her and I can’t wait I’m going
Swara world turns upside down hearing their plan( in mind how could her mother no she was her step mother do it with her how could ) she ran from there but till when she will run from her fate
She was crying whole day pleading God to save her .she Aldo realizes her love for Sanskar also
At that time a knock was hearted on the window and Sanskar jumped inside a painful eyelock took place between them
Sanskar seeing her swollen eyes became worried and cupped her face : Princess…are you fine ???
Swara : I’m fine

Sanskar: no you are not I can no anyone can guess seeing your face that you are not you are pure like water .your every emotions flows from your face
Swara cried aloud as the tears she was holding from long now didn’t listen her
Swara : you know what prince “SOMETIMES WHEN I SAYI AM OK I WANT U TO LOOK IN MY EYES AND HUGS ME TIGHT ,AND SAY I KNIW U ARE NOT ……”
Sanskar :what happened ??
Swara: I can’t live here more plz take me to your world and told him everything which she listen their
Sanskar: princess I love you

Swara : I loved you from every corner of my heart
They hugged for long time
Sanskar: it’s payback time now we will not rum but face the situation
They both hug assuring eo
They went hand in hand towards the hall where guests were present .Lady and sahil were shocked above their heads
Lady : shona what is this ??
Swara: I will only marry my prince
Lady ,: but suddenly
Swara :I realized I love him
Lady went near her and twisted her arms: I said na you didn’t know the world they will use you .you are now marrying a thief and a kidnapper .what did you think that if you didn’t tell than I don’t get that …

Swara (frees herself ) : no one use me but u you yourself used me for your evil plans you want my property right that’s why you didn’t allow me to go outside and meet anyone right and secondly the one who you are saying thief has stollen nothing but my heart and kidnapper nah he didn’t kidnapped me but free me from your prison understand
Sahil angrily goes and the lady helplessly looked towards them who were getting ready for marriage
After marriage Swara transferred her whole property on the name of orphans and SwaSan goes to live in Sanskar’s house

They live happily ever after
LOVE SOMETIMES DONT NEED SEVARAL HOURS OR DAYS IT JUST NEED SOME MOMENTS TOGETHER WRITTEN BY FATE

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    36 Comments

    1. Naina on June 17, 2017 1:33 am

      it’s like a fairy tale
      loved it to the core
      I vote for it 10/10

    2. angels on June 17, 2017 1:36 am

      amazing dear
      fantastic mind blowing loved it
      I will give 10/10

    3. Sus on June 17, 2017 1:36 am

      its quite lovly os

      • Sus on June 17, 2017 8:41 pm

        i vote for it. 9/10

    4. Soujanya on June 17, 2017 7:10 am

      Awesome…

      • sumayyah on June 18, 2017 2:05 pm

        Soujanya dear you didn’t rate it
        rate or else vote will be discarded

    5. Suma on June 17, 2017 7:35 am

      Nice one

    6. anu on June 17, 2017 9:14 am

      nice

    7. Kakali on June 17, 2017 11:40 am

      I vote for it. 9/10.

    8. Remi on June 17, 2017 1:53 pm

      Loved it..I vote it 10/10

    9. scooby on June 17, 2017 2:49 pm

      I vote for it 9/10

    10. neeti on June 17, 2017 2:59 pm

      I vote for it…
      10/10

    11. s on June 17, 2017 3:02 pm

      i give 9 points

    12. Areeba Moin on June 17, 2017 4:19 pm

      fabulous story…
      I give u 10/10

    13. vyshu10 on June 17, 2017 4:25 pm

      nice…i love Entangled movie…thanks for writing it on swasan dear

      • Shreeyu on June 17, 2017 9:15 pm

        Even I loved that movie di

      • sumayyah on June 17, 2017 11:19 pm

        I also loved entangled

      • sumayyah on June 18, 2017 2:04 pm

        Vyshu dear you didn’t rate it

      • Arshaanya on June 18, 2017 5:39 pm

        Arey y saying sorry… i toh jus cleared it dat it was tangled…?

      • Arshaanya on June 18, 2017 2:48 pm

        Its tangled vyshu ??

      • sumayyah on June 18, 2017 5:32 pm

        you’re right arsa we did mistake sorry

      • vyshu10 on June 18, 2017 11:39 pm

        oh yeah???

      • vyshu10 on June 18, 2017 11:39 pm

        i vote for it..8/10

      • vyshu10 on June 18, 2017 11:42 pm

        sorry…my mistake…voting is closed already…but all the best

    14. Stg on June 17, 2017 4:33 pm

      I vote for it.8.5/10

    15. kumu on June 17, 2017 5:08 pm

      i vote for it.9/10

    16. Shreeyu on June 17, 2017 9:14 pm

      I vote for it 9/10

    17. jenny on June 18, 2017 6:06 am

      i vote for it. 9/10

    18. Simi on June 18, 2017 10:50 am

      I vote for it.. 9/10

    19. sumayyah on June 18, 2017 2:03 pm

      I vote for it 10/10

    20. ARJSisback on June 18, 2017 2:21 pm

      I rate it 9.5 /10

    21. Mars on June 18, 2017 2:43 pm

      Amazing…. I vote for it 10/10

    22. Arshaanya on June 18, 2017 2:48 pm

      I vote for it 9/10

    23. Neptune on June 18, 2017 2:51 pm

      i vote for it. 10/10

    24. fanandfunclub on June 18, 2017 4:17 pm

      voting closed

    25. Shifa96 on June 18, 2017 8:34 pm

      Awesome..all the best.

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