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Home»Fan Fiction»#off air serials #os competition #tashan-e-ishq entry 9
Fan Fiction OS Competition Tashan-e-Ishq

#off air serials #os competition #tashan-e-ishq entry 9

Mystery_MeBy Mystery_MeJune 16, 201743 Comments11 Mins Read
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MAIN PHIR BHI TUMKO CHAHUNGA
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CHARACTER SKETCH

TWINJ are married to eachother as per their parent’s wish leaving their Love Alisha and Uv.. But Fell in Love with Eachother as they overcame the Evil plotting of Alisha and Uv.. Uv turned positive after TWINJ saved his live during almost a Fatal Accident but Alisha is still after Kunj and want him and his Money at any cost.. Whilst Uv apologized and promised TWINJ to never come on between them and even oathedto never let anyone come between TWINJ.. TWINJ to Forgave him..
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Now let’s peep in My story?But with a Smile?
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_DARK ROOM_

A dark Room is Shown Flooded with Happy Couple’s Memories.. Full of Love; Passion; Affection and Gratitude For Eachother?But Know all Grave and Silenced like the Life of the Man standing in the Middle of the Room Facing Main Wall that had a picture of a beautiful couple looking deeply and madly in Love as the Picture Potray..Both Individuals Engulfing Eachother in a Hug.. A back hug pose.. where the woman snuggled into the Man’s Chest.. His Hand’s around her Waist.. The Couple was revealed to be TWINJ?
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The Man looking at the Picture has Some Un-Shed tears in his Eye’s.. Unknown Pain?that could pierce any loving soul.. He was standing all lifeless there.. He was revealed to be Our Hottie.. Our Kunj?
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KUNJ’s POV:
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Why twinkle? Why U left me? I Loved U with whole my heart and Soul but just broke my heart and shattered my soul by saying that I am a betrayer?I betrayed U…
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Really Twinkle was our Love so week that Ur Trust Vanished.. Got broken by those mere Pictures and Proves.. Was my Word’s.. Was My state was all Fake and those Proves that were morphed were True to U?
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Why Twinkle? U broke My Heart! I gathered it’s all broken pieces somehow.. U shattered my Soul Still I Composed it.. I locked all the Emotions I had in a Far Corner of My Heart that no one Can broke Now.. Though I know U are the Only One who Can?
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But I just Can’t agai let U break my Heart once Again?I am scared what if U will leave me Again saying that I am cheater.. I am betrayer?
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No I can’t Forgive U Twinkle?I just can’t cause I know if this Heart Even Once Again got broken by U or Anyone the other time I won’t be able to compose it.. Gather My self ?
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I am Sorry Twinkle I can’t Forgive U?Though I know that U Know the Truth Now.. U was Mis guided that time?But still I can’t ?I just know how I had composed myself in these 5 Yrs with help Leela Maa and Bebe’s Help..
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By Now Kunj was crying?Tears Spilling his beautiful Ocean like Brown Orbs?He Fell on his Knees Crying?All broken and shattered once Again?
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All the beautiful Moment’s and heavenly Memories Savoured with Twinkle came Flooding infront of his Eye’s..
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_FLASHBACK_
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A Couple is Shown running in Whole Room.. A boy is running after a Girl.. Fits of Laughter and Giggles Echoing in the Small yet beautiful Apartment of them..
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KUNJ was running after Twinkle who was dressed in just his white shirt and shorts barely covering her thighs.. Kunj was bare chested..
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K:Siyappa queen Ruk tu.. I won’t leave U once I catch..
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T:Once Catch me SADU SARNA then we will think who will leave or not..
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She said sticking out her Tongue on him.. Giggling and Laughing..
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Finally Kunj caught her winking at her.. Twinkle pouted Cutely?And Kunj chuckled seeing that.. He pecked her Pout..
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A Smile appeared on Twinkle’s Lips..
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K:(Huskily)Ab kon bachaye ga tujhe siyappa queen?
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Kunj said this smirking.. Twinkle’s Mouth Form an ‘0’ but before she can react twinkle was in Kunj’s Arms and he carried her to their bedroom.. They spended an intimate Evening in Eachothers Embrace Laughing and Giggling.. Moaning and Groaning showing their Love and Passion For eachother..
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TWINJ were standing on the Edge of a Cliff in a Back Hug position.. Kunj’s hand’s wrapped around twinkle’s petite frame and twinkle snuggling into him more and more..
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Both watching the setting sun.. Darkness engulfing the Environment yet the beaming rays of Sun giving the message of coming back with a new hope of life for everyone..
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TWINJ cherished this beautiful momemt in Eachothers Embrace.. Savouring the Moment in the Album of their beautiful memories??
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Twinkle was on bed cutely arguing Kunj who was trying to make twinkle drink the vegetable soup as she was ill.. But Twinkle was adamant to not drink that ‘YUCK’ tasted Soup..
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She asked Kunj for a Sweet after it but Kunj refused and Twinkle being stubborn continued her tantrum when something struck Kunj’s mind and he smirked and agreed to Twinkle’s Condition stating that he will gave her.. Her most Favourite Desert..
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Twinkle was more than Happy and quickly drank Soup from Kunj’s Hand.. After finishing she asked for her dessert to Kunj.. To which Kunj leaned forward and kissed twinkle.. Twinkle was caught up in suprise but reciprocated equally..
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After breaking the Kiss Kunj whispered in her ears:Ur Most Favourite Sweet?My Kiss..
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Saying this he bit her Earlobe and Twinkle blushed Hard..
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Twinkle spend next two day’s almost in Kunj’s Embrace.. Kunj taking care of her.. She didn’t wanted Kunj to go away from her even for a minute.. She just behaved like a Kid and Kunj treated her like a Kid too.. His Lovely and Cute Kid??
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Everything was going well until the Villians Entered there life or U can Say make a comeback.. But this time Alisha and Anita teamed up against TWINJ and even succeeded in their evil plotting separating TWINJ..
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Alisha came back in their lives claiming that Kunj still loves her and offenly meet her now.. They Even shared Intimate relationship and now she is Pregnant with Kunj’s Child..
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TWINJ were shocked at first.. Twinkle refused to believe her when Anita made an Entry stating she had proves..
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At that time Bebe.. Leela and TWINJ’s other Family Member’s were also present there as they were here to meet TWINJ..
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Anita showed them morphed pictures and unclear video’s that was of Kunj with Alisha..
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Twinkle was shattered and Kunj was shocked.. It wasn’t True.. He can’t cheat his Love.. His Twinkle..
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He expected her to believe him.. But what she said shattered him??Broke his Heart into Zillion of pieces that were un repairable??
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T:Kunj How can U do this to me? U are a betrayer.. A cheater.. I Hate U Kunj..
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K:(Shocked)Twinkle TRUST me.. It’s all Fake a plotting against Us..
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T:TRUST (Mocking)Really TRUST Kunj… U broke that TRUST Kunj.. U broke that.. I Hate U.. I Hate U Kunj..
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By saying this Twinkle left the house.. His own Family.. His Mother.. Father.. Brother and Sister Even didn’t believe him?
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But two person’s never left his Side.. His Bebe.. And His Mother-in-law.. his Leela Maa.. More than a Mother to him..
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She trusted him and even tried to make twinkle understand but all in vain?She refused to even listen his Name?
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After she left his family member’s to left leaving Alisha.. Anita.. Kunj.. Bebe.. Leela and Uv back..
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Uv who came back just now to meet TWINJ was shocked seeing the scenario.. Kunj pleading to believe him and his So Called Mother Anita and Alisha spitting the Oil on already burstedFire showing Fake tears and consolence word’s..
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The thing which shocked him more was twinkle’s reaction..
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After Twinkle and Sarna Family left.. Alisha came toward’s lifeless Kunj and said:
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A:Aww Kunj baby?Ur Love don’t Trust U.. She hates U?I said na Baby no one can love U more than me.. Now look what happened?I said na Uare only mine..
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K:(jerking Alisha off him) No.. I can Never be Urs.. Never means Never Ever.. I will Always love twinkle and be hers..
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A:Tuch.. Tuch.. Tuch baby.. But ur love don’t believe U..
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Leela came and slapped Alishaand throw rd both Anita and Alisha Out of the House..
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Kunj was resting his head on Bebe’s Lap having tears sitting on Floor.. Babe was caressing his hairs and silently crying on his broken and shattered state..
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K:Bebe (Lifelessly)Bebe U be live me na.. U trust me na..
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B:Haan puttar I trust.. Nd I am always with U.. Not only me but Leela Ji and Uv too..
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Kunj hummed in response.. This was witnessed by Teary Eyed Leela and Uv?Feeling bad for the poor innocent soul?
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Bebe asked kunj to have dinner but he refused stating he wasn’t hungry..

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After that day though Kunj didn’t changed nor his Loving and selfless Nature but surely his Heart Forget to beat and his lips Forget to Smile…

Somehow Kunj composed himself.. He beared Twinkle’s Ignorance.. Twinkle Ignored him like he never Exist.. She never left a chance to hurt him.. Though his shattered Condition pierced her Heart but her anger for his betrayal Overpowered her Love..
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She left for London for Four Yrs.. Even when she came back she ignored him.. Never tried to find out the Truth..
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Leela many times tried to make her understand saying she will regret one day for what she is doing.. But it didn’t effected Twinkle..
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It was when Twinkle heard self confession from Alisha and Anita shattering her.. Making reality hit her that what she did to Kunj.. She was crying on knowing what she did.. Leela’s word’s came hitting her hard..
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L:U will regret one day Twinkle puttar for doing this Kunj
(These word’s were continuously ringing in her Ears whilst her journey during to Kunj’s Office)
She just ran toward’s his cabin to found him reading a File.. Kunj looked up to find Twinkle.. He was shocked at seeing her state.. She was crying badly.. Her Kajal Smudged.. Her Eye’s Swollen.. Her Nose Red.. How much ever he maybe hurt he can never see his twinkle hurt.. He walked upto her with teary Eyed himself?
As Soon as Kunj reached her Twinkle jumped in his Arm’s crying her Heart out.. Kunj wanted to hug her back but can’t.. He wanted to calm her know the reason for her this state but composed himself and broke the hug..
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K:(Sternly)Yes Ms Taneja.. How can I help U..
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Twinkle again hugged him sobbing and said stammering..

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T:Kkk… kkkunnnjjj.. Kunj.. I… I I I.. I am So.. Sorry.. I should have belived U.. I am Sorry..
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K:(Sternly)It’s Ok.. It doesn’t matters now..
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T:(Unbelievable Voice)Kkunj..
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Kunj looked at her repeated the same word’s and left the cabin leaving crying twinkle and crying himself too??
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He can’t let his emotions overcome again whom he locked in a room in his Heart five yrs ago?
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_FLASHBACK ENDS_
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By now Kunj was crying hard.. Sitting on his Knees on Floor.. He told everything that happened in office to Leela; Bebe and Uv.. they said they will support him in whatever decision he takes..
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He was blessed to always have them on his side..
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K:’I WISH I COULD IGNORE U… LIKE U IGNORED ME… BUT I JUST CAN’T!!! ‘
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Saying this he wiped his Tears and ran downstairs to meet his twinkle.. Bebe and Leela asked the reason.. Uv too.. He just replied Twinkle and trio smiled knowing that how much ever this Soul try to be Rude or Harsh to Anyone or Try to Hurt someone but just can’t…
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Kunj came outside SARNA MANSION and saw twinkle walking lifeless on Road going toward’s TANEJA MANSION.. which was opposite to SARNA MANSION..
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But what he saw next scared him to hell.. A truck was approaching her and she was un aware of it..
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He ran toward’s her.. pushed herm.. they both rolled to other side of road..
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As they stood up kunj started scolding twinkle. She was listening him head bowed..
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K:Twinkle what were u upto Haan.. Kidhar gum hai.. Did U think what could have happen? Did U thought what would happen to me if U will be Hurt?
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Twinkle looked at him teary eye’s and said:(Innocently) But U said it didn’t matters U anymore?
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Kunj smiled at her innocence and hugged her tight.. And Said..
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K: ‘I WISH I COULD IGNORE U… JUST LIKE U IGNORED ME… BUT I JUST CAN’T!!! ‘ ‘I CAN’T HURT U… IT MATTERS TO ME CAUSE I ARE MY LIFE.. U R MY SOUL.. U R MY LOVE’
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SCREEN FREEZES ON TWINJ HUGGING AND KUNJ SAYING THESE WORD’S..
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____☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆____
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Huff!!! The End?Hope U all will like
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Love U all???
Bye bye My lovelies??

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    43 Comments

    1. Cheena2001Cp on June 16, 2017 11:29 pm

      God!! It was terrificly ???….but kunj’s state and the way twinkle behaved with him made me hell angry on twinkle??
      I am voting –9/10

    2. Cheena2001Cp on June 16, 2017 11:30 pm

      God!! It was terrificly Amazinggg???….but kunj’s state and the way twinkle behaved with him made me hell angry on twinkle??
      I am voting –9/10

    3. Ariya on June 16, 2017 11:49 pm

      I vote for it
      10/10

    4. Aveesha on June 17, 2017 12:25 am

      I am Voting
      10/10
      It’s Amazing?Emotions were very well potrayed??U made me cry??

    5. maha on June 17, 2017 12:40 am

      amazing marvalous
      10/10

    6. Diya on June 17, 2017 1:35 am

      I am Voting for it. 10/10

    7. Sneha on June 17, 2017 2:21 am

      Hey
      I am a Silent reader.
      I vote it
      9. 5/10

    8. Kriya on June 17, 2017 2:55 am

      ‘I Vote it’
      9/10

    9. Loving Angel on June 17, 2017 3:21 am

      Awesome ! I like the story ! Excellent ! I vote for it 10/10

    10. Afreen on June 17, 2017 4:33 am

      I vote for it 9/10.

    11. Samaria on June 17, 2017 4:49 am

      Fantastic
      Marvellous
      Amazing
      Loved it
      I am voting
      9.5/10

    12. Mysterious_girl_ on June 17, 2017 5:04 am

      Awesome one! So Emotional! but Twinkle should have suffered a bit. I would have given 10 as this os deserved that but I wanted to see Twinkle suffered.
      I m voting for it, so I would be giving 9.5/10. But this OS was fabulous! Loved it!

      With Love,
      Urs Tamanna

    13. Preshs on June 17, 2017 5:15 am

      Awesome..
      O vote for it..
      10/10

      • Presha on June 17, 2017 5:22 am

        Presha**

        Spelling mistake

    14. Ramya on June 17, 2017 5:40 am

      It’s aweSome
      I vote for it
      9/10

    15. Sakshi on June 17, 2017 6:48 am

      I vote for it
      10/10
      Its Heart wrenching OS?
      All the Emotions, Sentiments there dialogues were perfectly shown and written.just in love with this OS?
      Amazing

    16. Misha on June 17, 2017 6:54 am

      Silent Reader but can’t stop myself from Voting. This Os is Emotional.loves it.Who ever wrote this have wrote with ocean of emotions cause while reading literally I was having the feel of each word.
      I am Voting
      10/10

    17. Neha_13 on June 17, 2017 6:58 am

      ‘I vote for it’
      9/10

    18. Asna on June 17, 2017 9:30 am

      I vote for it
      8/10

    19. Sia on June 17, 2017 11:15 am

      I am Voting
      10/10

    20. Sofia on June 17, 2017 11:17 am

      I am Voting for it
      9/10

    21. Twinj on June 17, 2017 12:03 pm

      I vote for it…9/10…

    22. Mahira on June 17, 2017 2:33 pm

      “I am Voting”
      10/10

    23. Anu on June 17, 2017 2:35 pm

      I am Voting..
      10/10

    24. Mahi on June 17, 2017 2:39 pm

      I VOTE FOR IT
      9. 5/10
      I wanted to give 10/10 but wanted to see twinkle suffer as how much she hurted kunj.But still I wasn’t able to deduct much. Emotional??

    25. Saira on June 17, 2017 2:53 pm

      I am Voting
      10/10

    26. Piyali_Sharma on June 17, 2017 3:09 pm

      I am Voting
      10/10

    27. Aamna_2690 on June 17, 2017 5:33 pm

      ‘I AM VOTING’
      10/10

    28. Sameera on June 17, 2017 7:26 pm

      I am voting
      10/10 ….
      ???????

    29. Zoya9 on June 17, 2017 7:29 pm

      I am voting
      10/10

    30. jenny on June 18, 2017 6:17 am

      i am voting. 10/10

    31. virat_ki_adeeba on June 18, 2017 7:52 am

      I m voting
      6/10

    32. Siya on June 18, 2017 12:53 pm

      I am Crying??It’s So emotional??I was crying while reading Kunj’s State:-( His Pov though?Twinkle should have believed him?Atleast once she should have given him chance to explain?
      I am Voting
      10/10

    33. Sneha15 on June 18, 2017 12:55 pm

      I am Voting
      10/10

    34. Shalini on June 18, 2017 12:59 pm

      I am voting
      9/10
      I would have given 10 if twinkle would have been shown suffering?Still the rest outdid that emptiness?Great Work done by the writer

    35. anah on June 18, 2017 3:29 pm

      voting closed

    36. Purvi128 on June 18, 2017 3:53 pm

      Hey!!!
      That was really wonderful..
      A master piece..
      I just loved it so much….
      I had tears while reading!
      I just got hell angry when Twinkle didn’t trusted him..
      She should had given him a chance to explain…
      That was really awesome..
      The emotions were described beautifully.
      Kunj’s condition was heart breaking..!!
      I think u r Aamna?? Well waiting for the results to know if u r Aamna or not…
      I m voting..
      8/10
      I wanted to see Twinkle suffering as many of the readers mentioned before..!!!

      • anah on June 18, 2017 11:37 pm

        hey dr …
        don’t give such a guesses..!!!
        like try to reveal writers at all…bcoz of these kind of comments we suspect that Os writer gave any hint to identify her os if its true then we will strictly disqualify that os entry

      • Purvi128 on June 19, 2017 12:43 am

        I just guessed it becuz we TEI frnd knw each other so well!!!
        Nd don’t worry no one gave any hint…!!
        Its just that we all can recognize eo by their writing styles…!

      • baby on June 19, 2017 1:20 pm

        anah trust me we all r soo mch into eo dat guess by d writing styles no hints………♥
        los of love……..♥

    37. baby on June 19, 2017 1:18 pm

      shreyooo…….♥
      I knw its u hainaaaaa……♥
      srsly marveleous speechless loved it……♥
      tu aisaaa hi mast likhti hai………♥
      kher schi maza aagya loved it soo mch……..♥
      marveloeus speechless loved it………♥
      I VOTE…..♥
      10/10…….♥
      loved it…..♥

      • Mystery_Me on June 19, 2017 6:51 pm

        hey don’t reval the name bcz of u entry can be discaulify we hide name for a reason so plz don’t do this

      • baby on June 21, 2017 11:28 am

        okk bt I donno by whom its written its jst a guess dear soo chill….n d guess is made by me bcoz merko lag rha hai kunki mei tu ke har rtr ki writings se bhott attached hun.sooo m nt sure its rrtn by her or nt…….sooooo disqualify mat krna plsssss………
        n neither she gave any hint for ur info.
        thanks…..♥

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