Ek Hazaroon mein meri behna hai
Slowly sun show his face in the sky..cool breeze touches her face..Alarm Rings cuckoo cuckoo ..
Jeevika opened her eyes..stretched her arms..then she turned to her sweet sister Mannu (Manvi).. She slowly kissed in her forehead..
Maanvi slightly moved..Jeevika got up suddenly from the bed..she turned to see her sister face and thinks..
Jeevika:
“I WISH I COULD IGNORE U…LIKE U IGNORE ME…BUT I JUST CAN’T!!!”
Flashback begins
Shamini- Manvi Mother
Ishwar- Manvi Father
These couples was so sad becoz they can’t give birth to child..So they Go for the Surrogacy Method..for their child..
After ten months they had beautiful girl child..they named her Jeevika…They brought up her with full of their love, care..Jeevika became world of Ishwar..After 4 years shamini got pregnant..Couples were so happy..Shamini was like in heaven..finally she goin to gave birth to their child..her own child..after conceiving this child she kept distance from jeevika..Ishwar noticed that..but he didn’t ask her..he assumed that she behaving like this becoz of her pregnancy..so he spend more time with jeevika..
Sometimes jeevika ask her dad
Jeevika:Papa..mama not playing with me..is she angry with me?
Papa:no beta..mama having cute sister for u in her stomach..so she was taking rest..so wait for ur sister..u should take care ur sister ..play with her ..love her..teach her..u should be all of her..ok
Jeevika:tk papa..i will take care of my sister..i will love her so much..
But Shamini became to hates Jeevika..she doesn’t want someother child in between them..she thought like Ishwar spending more time with her than them..
So she hated her..she tried to sent her somewhere..but Ishwar doesn’t allow that to happen..
Shamini gave birth to one girl child..they named her Manvi..
Jeevika was so happy to hear this..but Shamini doesn’t allow her to go near Manvi..she always tried to separate them..
Ishwar found this..He tried to convince her..but Shamini never understood anyone of his point..
Shamini brought up Manvi by saying bad about Jeevika..so Manvi hate jeevika..becoz of these..Shamini nd Ishwar begun to fought..Shamini use this..she create a bad thought about jeevika to Manvi..
After some years..Ishwar wanted Jeevika to do her higher studies..so he discuss this with Shamini..but she disagree..somehow Ishwar convince her..then they went to the college for Jeevika higher studies..it was far away from their place..wen coming back..they met with an accident..Shamini died in the spot..Ishwar saved with one leg..
Manvi hates Jeevika..
Manvi thinks that becoz of her higher studies she lost her mother..
But Jeevika loves her so much..she longing for Manvi love in return..
Now Jeevika and Manvi helping to run their family by teaching in the school..
Flashback end
Manvi woke up..she always hates to wake up early..but she needs to get ready..
Nd she also knew that Jeevika make all her things ready..
After shower
Jeevika:suno..heater not workin..i will heat water in stove..
Manvi:i can manage..u do ur work
Breakfast
Jeevika:good morning Papa..
Ishwar:good morning beta..Mannu kahan hai?
Jeevika:coming papa.. u eat now..
Manvi:good mornin..dad
Ishwar:good morning ma
Manvi:Papa..kya hua meri baat..i asked u for bike na?
Ishwar:beta i already said it to u..what need for that..now just go with jeevika..we will buy after sometimes..
Manvi:papa..har waqt..jeevika jeevika ..am i not ur child,,i don like to go with her..infact i don like her.,i.,
Ishwar:bazz..mannu bohat hogaya.,now eat..
Manvi:muje neih chayiye..am goin..
Jeevika:Mannu..aise
Manvi:shut up..
Manvi went out with anger
Jeevika was worried about her.atleast she was happy with these little things like preparing food for her,going with her to the school..
But now she was again upset with her..
Ishwar:beta don worry she wil get alright soon..
Jeevika:papa kuch neih aap ficker math kijiye..i will take care..come i will drop u in the shop..
Ishwar:neih..its getting late for u..u go
Jeevika: bye papa..
Jeevika (thinks):Mannu tu kyun kar rahi hai ye sab..don u understand my feeling..am ur sister Maanu..i want u to be happy..y don’t u understand me..
In school she tried to speak with Manvi..but she avoided her..
Maanvi (thinks)
I don know what to do..i just don’t wany to shout..even i don’t want to complain dhi..jeevika..y iam behaving like these..she was too soft to me..y am behaving with her like these..is this becoz of Mom..does Mom told me wrong..Dhi was not like Mom said..she caring me like mom..pls god don let this happen again..i don’t know i
Can behave well with her..but pls don’t let this happen..
Evening
Jeevika was coming alone from the school..suddenly some Rowdycame there and teasing ..she doesn’t know wat to do..she was stuck..
Rowdy1:hey kya..how u going..r u driving plane..can’t u see?
Jeevika:bhaiya..i am going correctly..u just came in now..
Rowdy2:achha..u complaint us..come lets see who was wrong..
He was holding jeevika hand..
Jeevika:chodo muje..chodo..pls help someone..
Manvi saw this from far..
She came there..
She sprayed the pepper spray on those guys..they leave jeevika hand..
Manvi:oye kya..u teasing the girl..is this spray ok or shall i take any other weapon..
Rowdy1:how dare u?
Manvi:oye..u going to hold my hand too..achha..come ..
Jeevika:Mannu ..pls lets go
Manvi:u shut up dhi..i will take care of them..
Jeevika was shocked to hear this..Manvi called her dhi for first time.,
Manvi:come u wanna hold hand..take it
She hold his hand and bend that from backside and says
Maanvi: agar u do like this with any other girl again.i will kill u..samja..Run
All were ran..they were ran by saying i will never leave you..
Maanvi :haan haan..will see
Jeevika nd Manvi left there
Maanvi:do u have anything..wen u going alone..u must be precautious..kyun papa neih sikaya tume..
Meri maa will say hamesha..be bold..be prepared..
Jeevika: Maa didn’t said me any word..don’t even talk to me..
But thank u ..u called me dhi..
Maanvi realises that now..that she called dhi..
They went to house..
Ishwar:jeevika ..make me some coffee..iam very tired..
Manvi:muje bhi
Ishwar nd Jeevika was so surprised..that she was asking her something for first time..
Jeevika: zaroor Mannu..
Maanvi:don look me like this..nd u know wat iam goin to do ..i am goin to prepare dinner today..
Ishwar & Jeevika: kya?
Jeevika:neih Mannu mae karungi..
Maanvi:neih if i decided no one can stop me..
Before dinner..Maanvi went to kitchen for prepare Roti..
Maanvi:Roti keliye wheat flour, water aur pinch of salt is needed..nd we should prepare a dough..then roti will be done..thats all..Great Maanvi..
Maanvi got a call
Maanvi:haan bolu Virat
Virat – Maanvi lover
Virat:kya bolu..wahi baad hai..did u speak to ur dhi?
Maanvi:mae bhi vahi kehrahi hoon..i will never speak..agar tumari friend ko himath hai..ask him to come nd say to my dhi..ok bye..am busy now
Again to the preparation..
After 1 hr..
Maanvi: why..its too watery..will add some more flour..
Ishwar:Arrey tum..still didn’t on the gas..
Maanvi:papa wait..5 minutes
Jeevika:may i help u
Maanvi: haan tk..small thing u prepare a dough..i will make roti..tk
Jeevika:hmm..waise Mannu ..u did a small mistake..next time add small amount of water first..and then again small amount of water..till u get the soft dough..
Maanvi:wo muje patha hai..thodi confusion..accha i will make it round,,
She tried to make it round..but it came like
Ishwar: wow..Maanvi..kya baad hai..u love our country so much ..i know that..but in Roti too..
Maanvi:kya? Isn’t it Round?
Ishwar:no..india map
Jeevika: papa..aap bhi na..maanu see me first then u do..
Jeevika explain her to make round..nd then Maanvi tries..
Maanvi:hey?? aagayi..
Ishwar was so happy to see this..Maanvi was behaving so nice with Jeevika..
Finally Maanvi agrees Jeevika to prepare dinner tonight with one condition..that she will prepare for rest of the day..
Next Morning..
Maanvi:papa bye..
Ishwar:kahan? Aaj sunday na..
Maanvi:yes,.u take rest..me nd dhi going out..
Ishwar:achha..kahan?
Maanvi:hang out..bye old man..dhi come..
Jeevika:kahan?
Maanvi:u both daughter nd father same piece..old piece..sunday yaar..outing tho jaana padega..i will say that in a way..come..
They first went to temple..
Maanvi:dhi may i ask u something?
Jeevika:poocho
Maanvi:what did u ask?
Jeevika:i was very happy now..my mannu was speaking with me ..i love her so much ..keep her happy always..i love my mom too..but u took away her..she didn’t accept me till her last breath..i am missing her so much..but no problem..all my wish for now is make my papa, mannu live long happily..
Maanvi:don’t u ask me, what i pray?
Jeevika:bolo
Maanvi:muje maaf kijiye..i don know that meri dhi loves me this much..from my childhood i was assumed that my dhi separate me nd Mama from dad..but now i realised that was wrong..so now pls god u make my mama understand my dhi was very kind..she was caring me like u ..even more than u …i want rest of my life to be with my dhi..happily..nd lastly i want to die in ur lap ..
Jeevika:mannu..
Maanvi:haan dhi..i love u ..i love u so much..i had to confess this before.. that day i came to know that u saving ur money for my dream..that i want to go to America..actually that was not my dream ..i just want to escape from..i don’t want to be here ..with u..i want to leave here..but i was wrong..i don’t get any other best place than this..sometimes u will get more worry than papa..if i had choti se fever..i realised ur love for me.lekin i was in confusion..that my.. neih neih our mama brought up me by saying against u..but now am clear..i know how much u love me..muje patha hai..our mama now see us from the sky..nd bless us..henna dhi..
Jeevika:definitely
She kissed in her forehead
Come lets go nd see papa
Maanvi:zaroor..lekin now we going to celebrate our day..
They went for pani puri..Bangles shop..etc
They were enjoying their day..they both don’t want to end this day
That Rowdy gang was following them..
Boy1: u behaved very bad to me Manvi..now see wat am goin to do ur sister
He planned to murder Jeevika..for taking revenge..
Maanvi saw the car from far..it was coming fastly..she felt that something was going to happen..she suddenly noted that..the car coming near to Jeevika..she was shocked..didn’t know wat to do..
Maanvi:Dhi…
Maanvi push jeevika that side..her slipper was stick into something..she can’t move..car crashed her..she was threw in the air..
Maanvi:dhiii
Jeevika:Mannuuuu..
Maanvi head got injured..blood was bleeding continuously..she can’t able to breathe ..
Jeevika came there..put her in lap..
Jeevika:Mannu..Mannu..utona..tume kuch neih hoga,,soneone call the ambulance..pls.,
Maanvi:dhi..god took my prayer seriously..see i am going to die in ur lap,.so our mom happily seeing us henna?
Jeevika:Mannu aise kuch neih hoga,.kuch neih hone doongi ..someone pls call the ambulance..
Maanvi:muje bhi marna neih chathithi dhi..i want to live with u dhi..muje bachavo na pls..
Jeevika take her to the hospital
Jeevika:doctor pls save my sister..she is bleeding..she ..
Maanvi:dhi hath math chodiye..don leave my hand dhi..
Jeevika:neih mannu..i will never leave ur hand see,,
Doctor:mam..u can’t come after this..pls
Jeevika:neih,,pls allow me too
Doctor:mam understand..u can’t..pls allow us to do our work..
Maanvi:dhhhiii..
Doctor took Maanvi into ICU..
Jeevika can’t able to think wat to..then he called her and inform him about accident..
Jeevika went to pray..
Jeevika:what should i do now..u gave me this happiness..how can u do this to me…first u took my mom..now pls don’t do this to my sister again..i can’t afford to lose her..pls save her..
Ishwar cane there..
Jeevika:papa..mannu..save her papa..she told me many things..she too loves me papa..she want to live with us happily..u know she don’t want to leave us,.she loves us papa..love me..papa..mannu ..save her papa..
Doctor came from ICU
After a week
Jeevika:Mannu..take this tablet..
Maanvi:dhi..my stomach was full of tablet..i can’t eat anymore..
Ishwar:achha..then how will u get alright?
Maanvi:i had someother idea for that..
Jeevika:kya meri behan?
Maanvi smiles and calls
Maanvi:Virat
Ishwar:ye Virat koun?
Jeevika:muje patha..Mannu ..this ur idea huh?
Ishwar:whats going on here?
Jeevika:papa..Maanvi loves him..that why she called him here..
Virat:haan
Maanvi:Arrey kya Haan..why i called u here?
Virat:sorry sorry ..sorry uncle..sorry jeevika..i came here for love proposal..
Maanvi:kya?
Virat:sorry sorry..he came for love proposal..
Ishwar:koun?
Virat:Viren
Jeevika:kya?
Virat: arrey yaar ..kya kya?
Jeevika:Viren ji..
Maanvi:haan
Jeevika:Mannu ..is dis ur idea?
Maanvi:exactly
Jeevika:how can u do this?without asking me
Ishwar:can anyone say wats going on here?
Maanvi:mae bathathi hoon papa..
Is story ka hero viren..sorry meri jiju..
Jeevika:chup
Maanvi:heroine meri dhi..
U know what papa..they didn’t told their love to one another..Viren ji was trying trying trying..to propose..but nothing worked..atlast Virat ask Viren ji try me for his love..but love story was not supposed to be like this na?..so i called him for love proposal to dhi..papa viren ji well educated, well settled, ..do u want something else..
Ishwar:u can’t do this Maanvi
Maanvi and Jeevika was shocked
Maanvi:papa..mae tho
Jeevika:papa sorry..wo
Ishwar: how can i decide my son-in-law without seeing him..arrey atleast ask him to show his face.
Virat:arrey..Viren u still outside..come na..
Viren enter into the room..
Jeevika face turned into red..
Maanvi:papa..tume patha..dhi tho kammi neih..she was waiting him to propose..
Jeevika:neih neih papa..i will marry if u say yes..
Maanvi:acchaa.,par papa neih bola tho
Jeevika:tho..tho..mae neih karungi shaadi..
Viren:Kya?
Virat:Arrey..phir kya?
Ishwar:Maanvi..u did the best work..u had made my work less…i am ok with this lekin..i am not ok with something..
All were shocked..
Maanvi:kya hua?
Ishwar:Arrey..he still didn’t propose my daughter..nd she still didn’t say anything..how can i say ok?
Virat:waa!!
Maanvi:Arrey..pls atleast say now..
Viren:wo jeevika ji..i fell in love with u wen i saw u at first..then i tried so many times to say this..but i can’t..now this is my last chance..will u marry me?
Maanvi:waa!!kya dialogue hai..seeko meri jiju se..
Virat:oye..i am phd in this..
Maanvi:chup..dhi answer dho..
Jeevika:wo ..wo..
Maanvi:kya wo wo..teek se bolo..
Jeevika:ji..mae bhi aapse pyat karthi hoon..
Maanvi:heeeyyyyy!☺☺☺☺☺
My sister going to marry..i don need this tablet hereafter..heyyy!!
Jeevika:Mannu..
Maanvi:papa..u ok with this na?
Ishwar:i only want both of ur happiness..what else i want?
Maanvi:☺☺☺ jiju i have some conditions..my dhi bohut dek chukiye..hereafter i want her only to be happy..i want her always to be smile,.agar something happens to her smile..i don know..wat i will do to u,,nd don separate my dhi from me..i give a lot of problems to her..so i want to give happiness..pls don’t separate us..pls..
Viren:mae vadha kartha hoon..u both sister always be like this forever even after marriage..
Virat:mae bhi kartha hoon..
Maanvi:i don’t ask u for that..if u want me to marry..u will do this automatically..
Virat:its my pleasure dear..
Ishwar:ahem! Ahem! Ur dad was still here beta..
And they were all lived happily…☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺
THE END!